[Fantasy] Daniel The Dimension Guardian

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Daniel Guardian of the Realms (Idea my Manga)

Summary of Daniel Guardian of the Realms


In the 8 dimension. The only energy they have are nature and machines. The have low energy but some monks called it Chakra but some other monks called it Ki but in this dimension they called it Chaki. Chaki is a 4 part system. 1. Chaki is blue is your your emotion stated, 2. Chaki is purple which is your life force, 3. Chaki is pink; it's your soul and 4 Chaki is Physical.

Join the Daniel Butz the last Human in his dimension but unbeknownst to him. That his journey is just about to beginning to his fate of become The Greatest Dimension Guardian Ever. He have to survive different dimensions. Due to an evil troll group put DNAs of the creatures of Fantasy and more into him. Now Daniel can change into the any of the creatures that he was injected with. The only problem is that he'd can't control it. He also becomes the Most Dimensional Wanted in every dimensions. He's wanted for two reasons. One reasons is for his death and the other reason is ask him to help them. Cause he's cunning, creativity and Imagination. Few other reasons as well like being force to be married to someone.


Author's note: What do you guys think this idea?
 
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U might wanna focus on his world a bit more. U are kinda hyping the MC a bit too much. Strong doesn't always =good story. Besides just like in Naruto it's the journey a character takes to get stronger that endears him to the reader. Having the MC at a disadvantage and having to use that cunning to get himself out of scrapes could be good.

Or u can make him like old Naruto. Dumb, but unpredictable, and pulling through with just guts.
 

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Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian (Idea my Manga)

Summary of Daniel: The Guardian


In the 8 dimension. The only energy they have are nature and machines. The have low energy but some monks called it Chakra but some other monks called it Ki but in this dimension they called it Chaki. Chaki is a 4 part system. 1. Chaki is blue is your your emotion stated, 2. Chaki is purple which is your life force, 3. Chaki is pink; it's your soul and 4 Chaki is Physical.

Join the Daniel Butz the last Human in his dimension but unbeknownst to him. That his journey is just about to beginning to his fate of become The Greatest Dimension Guardian Ever. He have to survive different dimensions. Due to an evil troll group put DNAs of the creatures of Fantasy and more into him. Now Daniel can change into the any of the creatures that he was injected with. The only problem is that he'd can't control it. He also becomes the Most Dimensional Wanted in every dimensions. He's wanted for two reasons. One reasons is for his death and the other reason is ask him to help them. Cause he's cunning, creativity and Imagination. Few other reasons as well like being force to be married to someone.


Author's note: What do you guys think this idea?

hm... well it sounds both weird and fun. idk, for some reason it seems like the plot is too...shallow. like i cant imagine any actual and deep going plot... on the other hand it does seem like a well thought world/verse, where many things could happen.
i have mixed feelings about this. it definitly needs more (main)characters with some interaction.
 

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Daniel Guardian of the Realms:



The Main character's name is Daniel Butz. He's just turned 30 years old. He's naturally skinny with a short haircut which is darkish brownish. It makes people argue about either black or dark brown. He has rich dark chocolate color eyes and his skin color is kinda peach color; he reaches the height of five feet -three inches. He have small torso and longer legs. He have big family on his mom's side of the family but on his dad's side is small family. His mom is one of nine kids while his dad is one of three kids. Daniel have no sisters execpt for his Sister-in-law but he have one younger brother. His name is Nathaniel Butz, his the opposite of his brother both mentally and psychically; his hair color is slightly light brown and his eye color are light chocolate color. While Daniel is more a cunning, strategy and imagination type guy. Nathaniel is more into sports and choir at their church. They are both right handed.

Anyway Daniel just got back home after is one day job at The DEN Extreme Entrainment. Where he picks up the trash and take out it as well. He been there for three years now. He was getting close to one of the tech manger who was promoted to General Manager. He was and kind but his name was Steven Grant. His Fiancée Liz Cage who was a floor manager and who got him the job. They was few weeks away from their wedding but Liz found out about his cheating with a minor. She was heartbroken. So the owner of the DEN had to fire all three of them.

Daniel feels sorrow for her cause he started to consider Liz as a sister figure. Daniel have tons of ideas for businesses but he's not rich one bit. One of his dreams is to build his dream house which has eight sided with eight floors but comes with a basement. Daniel want to either own a restaurant that his friends could hangout without alcohol or own a romantic restaurant or a sport owner or a Promoter of a professional wrestling. Daniel likes to play pranks on his father since his brother got married and move out of the state but his dad's name is Wesley Butz. They have prank wars sometimes against each other. Nothing harmful pranks. His mother name was Anne Butz who does Sunday School class and sings in the choir.

Unbeknownst to the world called Earth and the habitants on that planet will change suddenly quick. While Daniel was asleep he felt a rumble like an earthquake and that cause him to opened his eyes to see was going on. When he opened his eyes fully. He was stunned to see angels was guarding him using a light force field dome. One of the angel spoke to Daniel by saying, " You are the last human in this dimension or realm. Strange creatures came from other realm to take over this dimension due to a prophecy that was spread around all of the other realms."

Daniel was about to say something but someone interrupt him by saying, "I'll tell you about the prophecy since I was once prophecy." Daniel turned around and saw a orangish yellowish ball of light. Daniel could tell the ball was a male due to the voice but with heavy Japanese accent. Daniel kinda knows what Japanese people's accent due to the working at the DEN since a lot of different culture people coming in for parties and just wants to play some games. The ball of light said, "You can called me Norio Shiro. I'm going give you my Chaki which will give you the powers of intangibility, invisibility, Magnetism manipulation, Weather Manipulation and teleportation"

One of the Angel said, "Our Alpha King wants us to give you the power of regeneration for traveling through other realms, Clothing Manipulation, Crystal Manipulation, shape shifting, Talking to babies and Animals in their own language as well. Norio Shiro will trained you in mastering your new powers. Alpha King wants you to be his wrath on those who killed your family, friends and foes alike. "

Daniel Butz said, "Sure. I'll do it and when my mission is done. I'll give all of my powers back to you Norio and this Alpha King."
Angel and Norio was shock to heard this from a human. Angel laughed a bit and said, "You kinda remind me of King Solomon with that statement." Daniel nodded.

A portal was created by a watching Angel and the angel that laughed said, "OH. There is a female human in a other realm and that number is….." The portal had closed before the Angel could finish his sentence.

Norio Shiro merge into Daniel's body to create a new system in his Daniel's body. Norio combined both his and the Alpha King's gifts into one system network inside of Daniel's body. After that merging. Daniel awoke in creepy forest or jungle due to the vines hanging reached to the ground.

Norio said, "I promised you that I'll tell you about the prophecy of the Dimensional Guardian. The prophecy goes like this {Some one from the 8th realm will become wrath. Eighth-titian will get powers that never been seen in other dimensions. When the 8th dimensional traveler finished his/her quest. He/she will mark a new DAWN of untiling the realms into a group called, The Dimensional Guardians} That's the prophecy. Let's get started on your training. Let's begging with your Teleportation power. Daniel tried to use his teleportation power but he disappear from the spot.

Daniel appeared inside of the cell that's was in a dungeon. He heard cough and turned around. He saw a female troll named, 'Rabenda Shai' chained up in a cell. Rabenda Shai's appearances is super ugly but Daniel Butz was raise by honorable parents who taught him to help others.

One of the Mage's guardians. This guard mades Daniel laughed cause to him he look like Dangerous-Man's side kick named Dawn-wing's old costume when he use to be called 'Star-Sparrow '.

Norio said, "Daniel Focus on your first mission is to save that female troll. From those Hobgoblins. Later I'll train you on how to use your new Chaki system. Okay?" Daniel replied softy 'Yes!"

So Daniel actually magically appear in the cell of a ugly princess whose have a lavender color in the shape of a duck's butt hair style and her eyes were red. Daniel isn't able to break her chains because of it's protective magic'
Then Sawyer comes in all like: "Well, well pretty-faced, stealing my ugly prisoner, huh? Sorry can't let you do that!" He shoots a hot beam of water from his palm, but Daniel evades it. Then he is suddenly hit by Sawyer, who uses air magic to fly. Sawyer grabs Daniel and flying at high speed, he wants to crush Daniel to the wall. When grabbing he says: "Well well pretty-faced, you're gonna die painfully, aren't you?" Daniel replies: "You'll swallow those words". Sawyer laughs: "Well, I know what will you be swallowing tonight" with a smirked on his face while rocks floating around him

Daniel then teleports out of his arms to in front of him, and since Sawyer is flying at high speed, he can't avoid Daniel's kick that he gives. Sawyer flies a few meters back, but then charges at Daniel with full speed. Daniel uses intangibility and Sawyer crashes to the ground. When Sawyer gets up and recovers from the crash, Daniel is nowhere to be seen. Then something invisible starts hitting Sawyer. Sawyer causes a small earthquake so Daniel trips and falls. Sawyer starts shooting fireballs at him, asking: "Why is he doing all this for a little princess?" Daniel answersed, " Because it's a right thing to do." Then jumps on Sawyer and punches him. With his right hand he grabs Sawyer's neck and tries to suffocate him. That's when they heard rustling in the woods.

Were-bears, Were-wolves, Were-cats and other were-animals came to feed on those who was fighting.

Daniel asked, "You probably don't want to died yet right..What's your name?"
Sawyer said, "My name is Sawyer the Mage. Your's pretty-faced name would be?"
Daniel replied, "My name is Daniel Butz."
Rabenda Shai asked, "Why don't you leaving that kidnapper to die by those ugly animals?"
Daniel replied, "First off I know all of three of us have a better chance getting out of this situation together. Or are you going just sit there and being crybaby?"
Rabenda Shai didn't know the word crybaby but to the tone of Daniel's voice. She knows it's a type of a insult from 8th realm . She replied, "Fine I'm not.. uh what you called me,"
Daniel mischief smirked and said, "Then show me how well a fighter you are?"
Rabenda Shai use her animal spirit powers to offense from her Lavender eyes. and she yelled, Eye of Lion. While Daniel use his abilities to escape and help his comrades. At the same time Sawyer use his elemental powers against them. A few hours went by.
The Were-Animals got triedand ran off. Sawyer got tried from fighting both Daniel and the were-animals.
 
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