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Alright then. Explain each and every ability of the CW and the technique related to it. Pros/cons etc. to make sure you know how everything works.

Hyourinmaru – Ice Ring
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A sword that has been passed down through Yuki clan for ages. It was broken before, in the war where the Yuki Clan almost became extinct. The sword is said to be made out of the heart of a special meteor that fell in the village. The meteor was as cold as ice, and had all the properties of ice. The Yuki Clan took the meteor, and forged a sword out of the core of this heavenly rock. As the sword was formed, it gleamed heavily and continued to send out a soft blue light. The user of this sword gets a +5 damage point boost on every Ice Release jutsu used, as well as slowly freezing anything it comes in contact with. Of course not the wielder, considering it must be one of the Yuki Clan to wield this. The sword also comes with a most secret technique. Once per battle, the user can channel Hyouton chakra through the sword and let a spear extend from it, up till mid range (much like Chidori Eiso). The second way to channel Hyouton chakra through it gives the user the ability to send out a wave of ice from the tip of the sword. (The same as Hitsugaya when he swings his sword in Bleach) This wave can be used as a shield from incoming jutsus.

Note: The spear is formed as rapidly as Chidori Eiso, but can only be used once per battle.
Note: The "Wave of Ice" can only be used twice and defend up to A-rank attacks.
Note: The "Wave of Ice" counts as on of the 3 jutsus used per turn.
Note: Only one of the Yuki clan can wear this sword (especially Wesobi).

(Hyouton: Daiguren Hyōrinmaru)Ice Release: Grand Crimson Lotus Ice Ring

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (-5 for every turn active)
Damage Points: +5 to Ice, Water, Wind and -5 to all other elements(-5 DP per turn for the user)
Description: The user does a chain of 5 hand seals (Snake – Rabbit – Rooster – Dragon – Ox) and releases a large amount of Hyouton chakra. The outburst of Chakra manifests as an orb of thick ice around the user for a one second, and then breaks. The outburst causes ice splinters to fly everywhere, but this is not the main function. The user goes into an enhanced state after leaving the encased ice, having grown wings of ice as well as a tail of ice, and if the user is wielding Hyourinmaru it is also encased in ice. This gives him the ability to fly in the air, as well as greatly increasing his speed (as fast as rock lee without gates). Next to this ability, the user gains incredible strength (as strong as Tsunade in her prime). While in this form, his ice techniques require considerable less amount of time to use, and the damage points of his attacks are increased by 5.
Note: This form lasts for 4 turns.
Note: Due to the strain of this on the body, the user will not be able to use any S-rank and above attacks after this mode wears off for 2 turns while being extremely exhausted, having difficulty to move.
Note: The user will not be able to use Ice, Water or Wind for the next 2 turns after this mode wears off.
Note: The user must have Hyourinmaru in possession if he wishes to use this attack.
Note: The user can only use Ice, Water and Wind techniques in this form.
 

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Hm, first the actual sword; Hyorinmaru. From my understanding, it has a constant blue glow from the sword, making it look badass during the battle. Every Ice release techniques used while the user wields Hyorinmaru gets a boost of +5 damage, and anything that comes in contact with the sword freezes, except the wielder. Facing the sword towards a target, you can create a spear of ice, similar to chidori spear in terms of speed and effects. (If it's like chidori spear, i take it it is also A-rank, or what?) And, twice per battle, the user can wave the sword horizontally to create a wave of ice that is capable of defending A-rank or lower techniques.

One question about this one; the "freezing everything in touches", how does that work exactly? IF you touch the blade of another person's katana, would it freeze making it easier to cut through it? Or, if you touch the ground, would the area the ground is on create like, a chunk of ice or ice on that area, making it look cool? xD Pros for this one would be how amazingly cool it looks with the constant soft blue, the wave of ice it produces that is capable of defending from A-ranks, and it passively freezes things it touches. Cons: Cons are hard to think of for a CW, but a con would be that it is not indestructible.

And for the Bankai- I mean Grand crimson lotus ice ring; With the use of a string of handseals, you can create an orb of ice chakra around you, and afterwards, burst omnidirectionally to create ice splinters to fly everywhere. This is insanely useful because it strengthens the Ice techniques, water, and wind by 5, but every other element is decreased by 5. You grow wings of ice, that gives you the ability to fly, and a tail as well. Hyorinmaru is also covered in ice after bankai is used. U_U This gives you the ability to become as strong as Tsunade, (taijutsu wise) in her prime, and can run as fast as lee w/o gates. (I take it as without leg weights? or just normal lee?) Ice techniques are also performed much faster, which is a pro for those ice techniques that require handseals.

No questions. Pros: Damage boost to my favorite elements, flight, speed equivalent to Lee, and taijutsu equivalent to prime tsunade. Con would be the side-effects, but that is expected from a Forbidden rank.




(Gōrudo Sutaffu No Enel) ψ Gold Staves of Enel ψ
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Gold Staff of Enel is told to be forged in the skies where the heavens are located. The staff is told to be the property of an almighty and powerful god of lightning, Enel. Although these were all myths, the two staff proved to be a relic, a symbol of the God's power. The story about the dual staff is a legend, nothing but a myth but it is a fascinating one. The staffs, according to tales, originated from a mysterious city above the clouds, often known as the heavens. The god who ruled during that time went by the name of Enel, a superior lightning shinobi that was described as a god from his powers and skills of the lightning element. Enel acquired the throne to the kingdom by defeating the previous leader at that time, and proclaimed himself as god. The past workers and peacekeepers that once worked for the previous god was forced to physical labor, giving up their lives to the god. The soldiers worked to build an ultimate weapon, a weapon so strong that it had the power to obliterate a whole country on its own. Needless to say, the Enel we speak of is described as a power hungry tyrant, and despite the title he gave himself, he was no where near the ethics of a god. The plan would have succeeded, and if it did, the shinobi world would, more or less be under hos control. No soldiers or villagers had the guts nor the strength to oppose him, and every spark of rebellion was to be taken care of by lightning, in other words, death. Before his plan was set in motion, he was defeated by an unknown shinobi. Legend has it that the man was defeated by a wanderer, and the god descended from his golden thrown in the city of gods to the floors of the deepest seas. Although his body was told to be irretrievable due to the amount of pressure under the sea, the only remembrance the "God" left behind is the two brightly-yellow staffs. The staffs are made entirely of gold. Although they look like plain and simple staffs, the abilities of the staffs are what intrigues modern-day historians who seek power in the world of the Shinobi. Although they were just myths, the two staffs left behind in the land of the ninja world would be a powerful tool, if given to the right shinobi. The only reason people believe and repeatedly hear the myth is because every once a while, the villagers under the Moon country would hear the ringing of bells from the sky. A truly majestic sound that soothed every man, woman, and children yet remain unknown up to this day. The only visible relic is the two staffs, currently wielded by Ace and those who he think is worthy. The story, however, has yet to be proven. This, however, is simply a tale that is most often told to children and is not real whatsoever. Though the relic (weapons) found near the location of the area is the sole reason many argue that such a city exists.

The weapon is a dual staff, including two staffs made of pure gold. It is about three meters tall and two inches in diameter. Despite the composition of the staff's, it is unexpectedly light. This is because of its fairly hollow insides, allowing the user to be able to channel chakra throughout the staff, enabling themselves to perform or activate certain abilities that correspond with the staff's. Because of its light weight, it can be hung behind the back and is easily accessible during battle. The staff itself, even when on your back, will make no difference towards the physical performance of the wielder. The user of the dual staffs will run, punch, kick, walk, move, etc as easy as they would without the staff's on their back. This, of course would have an effect on difficult and complex moves, like backflips, front flips, etc where the body needs to move in a manner that would cause the staff's to hit a solid object, like the floor. This does not mean that it is impossible, but more difficult to perform complex moves such as the ones described above. The physical attributes (height in general) of the user would also come into play whether or not a body movement, like flips, would be slowed down by the dual staffs.

The staff he is holding, but two of them.

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Abilities:
  • Transformation; Both the staffs are capable of transforming the physical appearance of the weapons. The transformation can only be applied onto the top part of the staffs, and only about 1 meter of the top of the staff can be modified. The user can change the shape of the top part of the staff by channeling lightning chakra into the gold, and turning it into lightning. They will re-shapen the lightning with the use of shape manipulation and shape it to the shape they desire the weapon to be. With further chakra manipulation, the user will solidify the lightning and turn it back to normal gold, with a different physical property. This can only be done to the specific weapons because of its mysterious composition of the two staffs. Each staff can be transformed twice, equalling four times and each time will cost 15 Chakra points and a jutsu slot. There is also a one turn wait to each time a staff can transform. Furthermore, the transformation is limited to the original size. You cannot transform it into a weapon that is longer then the original. Things that would work would be transforming it into a sharp-edged sword, able to perform kenjutsu techniques or a trident, and of course, up to the users imagination. It, however, cannot be used to create larger weapons, only weapons that would still fit in the staffs.Also, once the new tip of the staff impales an opponent/target, it can be heated and burn organs from the inside. This counts as a separate turn and does not count as a limit to the heating. Heating from the inside can only be done once.
  • Heating: Another ability that comes with the staffs. The user can channel lightning chakra into the insides of the staff and have it shape around the walls of the staff. (Keep in mind that the staff is fairly hollow inside.) By doing so, the user can heat up the gold of the staff, so hot that it could melt through B-rank steel release techniques without melting the staffs. The purpose of this is to attack when it is extremely hot and potentially cause severe burns to a target. This can only be done once per staff, equaling two times together. The actual heating of the staffs do not take that long, a second or two would suffice for the time it takes to reach such a warm temperature. Furthermore, the damage it deals is equivalent to an A-rank fire technique. This counts as a jutsu and costs 15 chakra
  • Lightning Strike: The user will channel lightning chakra into both of the staves and join them together, having them connect at the top part of the staves. They will release the lightning a few inches away from the two staves, floating in mid-air. It creates a ball of lightning, much like the shape of a Rasengan and can be released with great force, electrocuting any target. This lightning strike counts as a move and is equivalent to an S-rank lightning technique (40 chakra, 80 damage). It has a limit of three uses. Once per battle the user can sacrifice the abilities of the staffs by focusing an immense amount of lightning and unleashing a forbidden rank attack (50 chakra, 90 damage). However, he will be unable to use the staffs abiliites for the rest of the match and will face electrical damage to his hands, rendering his muscles numb for 1 turn.

Restrictions:
Note 1: Despite it being two staffs, you can only perform the abilities of the staffs one staff at a time, excluding the transformation ones (Meaning you can't create two whips at the same time, or heat up the staffs at the same time. You can, however, do it one turn at a time, in accordance to time frame.) Each ability used counts as a move.
Note 2: Can only be wielded by Ace. and those he allow.
Note 3: In NW, this can only be used by one person at a time.
Note 4: Heating and transformation is obviously short-range.
Note 5: The weapon can transform back to its original form an unlimited amount of time.
Note 6: It is indestructible.

Describe to me the weapons abilities, (3) and give me pros and cons for each :p
 

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Hm, first the actual sword; Hyorinmaru. From my understanding, it has a constant blue glow from the sword, making it look badass during the battle. Every Ice release techniques used while the user wields Hyorinmaru gets a boost of +5 damage, and anything that comes in contact with the sword freezes, except the wielder. Facing the sword towards a target, you can create a spear of ice, similar to chidori spear in terms of speed and effects. (If it's like chidori spear, i take it it is also A-rank, or what?) And, twice per battle, the user can wave the sword horizontally to create a wave of ice that is capable of defending A-rank or lower techniques.

One question about this one; the "freezing everything in touches", how does that work exactly? IF you touch the blade of another person's katana, would it freeze making it easier to cut through it? Or, if you touch the ground, would the area the ground is on create like, a chunk of ice or ice on that area, making it look cool? xD Pros for this one would be how amazingly cool it looks with the constant soft blue, the wave of ice it produces that is capable of defending from A-ranks, and it passively freezes things it touches. Cons: Cons are hard to think of for a CW, but a con would be that it is not indestructible.

And for the Bankai- I mean Grand crimson lotus ice ring; With the use of a string of handseals, you can create an orb of ice chakra around you, and afterwards, burst omnidirectionally to create ice splinters to fly everywhere. This is insanely useful because it strengthens the Ice techniques, water, and wind by 5, but every other element is decreased by 5. You grow wings of ice, that gives you the ability to fly, and a tail as well. Hyorinmaru is also covered in ice after bankai is used. U_U This gives you the ability to become as strong as Tsunade, (taijutsu wise) in her prime, and can run as fast as lee w/o gates. (I take it as without leg weights? or just normal lee?) Ice techniques are also performed much faster, which is a pro for those ice techniques that require handseals.

No questions. Pros: Damage boost to my favorite elements, flight, speed equivalent to Lee, and taijutsu equivalent to prime tsunade. Con would be the side-effects, but that is expected from a Forbidden rank.




(Gōrudo Sutaffu No Enel) ψ Gold Staves of Enel ψ
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Gold Staff of Enel is told to be forged in the skies where the heavens are located. The staff is told to be the property of an almighty and powerful god of lightning, Enel. Although these were all myths, the two staff proved to be a relic, a symbol of the God's power. The story about the dual staff is a legend, nothing but a myth but it is a fascinating one. The staffs, according to tales, originated from a mysterious city above the clouds, often known as the heavens. The god who ruled during that time went by the name of Enel, a superior lightning shinobi that was described as a god from his powers and skills of the lightning element. Enel acquired the throne to the kingdom by defeating the previous leader at that time, and proclaimed himself as god. The past workers and peacekeepers that once worked for the previous god was forced to physical labor, giving up their lives to the god. The soldiers worked to build an ultimate weapon, a weapon so strong that it had the power to obliterate a whole country on its own. Needless to say, the Enel we speak of is described as a power hungry tyrant, and despite the title he gave himself, he was no where near the ethics of a god. The plan would have succeeded, and if it did, the shinobi world would, more or less be under hos control. No soldiers or villagers had the guts nor the strength to oppose him, and every spark of rebellion was to be taken care of by lightning, in other words, death. Before his plan was set in motion, he was defeated by an unknown shinobi. Legend has it that the man was defeated by a wanderer, and the god descended from his golden thrown in the city of gods to the floors of the deepest seas. Although his body was told to be irretrievable due to the amount of pressure under the sea, the only remembrance the "God" left behind is the two brightly-yellow staffs. The staffs are made entirely of gold. Although they look like plain and simple staffs, the abilities of the staffs are what intrigues modern-day historians who seek power in the world of the Shinobi. Although they were just myths, the two staffs left behind in the land of the ninja world would be a powerful tool, if given to the right shinobi. The only reason people believe and repeatedly hear the myth is because every once a while, the villagers under the Moon country would hear the ringing of bells from the sky. A truly majestic sound that soothed every man, woman, and children yet remain unknown up to this day. The only visible relic is the two staffs, currently wielded by Ace and those who he think is worthy. The story, however, has yet to be proven. This, however, is simply a tale that is most often told to children and is not real whatsoever. Though the relic (weapons) found near the location of the area is the sole reason many argue that such a city exists.

The weapon is a dual staff, including two staffs made of pure gold. It is about three meters tall and two inches in diameter. Despite the composition of the staff's, it is unexpectedly light. This is because of its fairly hollow insides, allowing the user to be able to channel chakra throughout the staff, enabling themselves to perform or activate certain abilities that correspond with the staff's. Because of its light weight, it can be hung behind the back and is easily accessible during battle. The staff itself, even when on your back, will make no difference towards the physical performance of the wielder. The user of the dual staffs will run, punch, kick, walk, move, etc as easy as they would without the staff's on their back. This, of course would have an effect on difficult and complex moves, like backflips, front flips, etc where the body needs to move in a manner that would cause the staff's to hit a solid object, like the floor. This does not mean that it is impossible, but more difficult to perform complex moves such as the ones described above. The physical attributes (height in general) of the user would also come into play whether or not a body movement, like flips, would be slowed down by the dual staffs.

The staff he is holding, but two of them.

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Abilities:
  • Transformation; Both the staffs are capable of transforming the physical appearance of the weapons. The transformation can only be applied onto the top part of the staffs, and only about 1 meter of the top of the staff can be modified. The user can change the shape of the top part of the staff by channeling lightning chakra into the gold, and turning it into lightning. They will re-shapen the lightning with the use of shape manipulation and shape it to the shape they desire the weapon to be. With further chakra manipulation, the user will solidify the lightning and turn it back to normal gold, with a different physical property. This can only be done to the specific weapons because of its mysterious composition of the two staffs. Each staff can be transformed twice, equalling four times and each time will cost 15 Chakra points and a jutsu slot. There is also a one turn wait to each time a staff can transform. Furthermore, the transformation is limited to the original size. You cannot transform it into a weapon that is longer then the original. Things that would work would be transforming it into a sharp-edged sword, able to perform kenjutsu techniques or a trident, and of course, up to the users imagination. It, however, cannot be used to create larger weapons, only weapons that would still fit in the staffs.Also, once the new tip of the staff impales an opponent/target, it can be heated and burn organs from the inside. This counts as a separate turn and does not count as a limit to the heating. Heating from the inside can only be done once.
  • Heating: Another ability that comes with the staffs. The user can channel lightning chakra into the insides of the staff and have it shape around the walls of the staff. (Keep in mind that the staff is fairly hollow inside.) By doing so, the user can heat up the gold of the staff, so hot that it could melt through B-rank steel release techniques without melting the staffs. The purpose of this is to attack when it is extremely hot and potentially cause severe burns to a target. This can only be done once per staff, equaling two times together. The actual heating of the staffs do not take that long, a second or two would suffice for the time it takes to reach such a warm temperature. Furthermore, the damage it deals is equivalent to an A-rank fire technique. This counts as a jutsu and costs 15 chakra
  • Lightning Strike: The user will channel lightning chakra into both of the staves and join them together, having them connect at the top part of the staves. They will release the lightning a few inches away from the two staves, floating in mid-air. It creates a ball of lightning, much like the shape of a Rasengan and can be released with great force, electrocuting any target. This lightning strike counts as a move and is equivalent to an S-rank lightning technique (40 chakra, 80 damage). It has a limit of three uses. Once per battle the user can sacrifice the abilities of the staffs by focusing an immense amount of lightning and unleashing a forbidden rank attack (50 chakra, 90 damage). However, he will be unable to use the staffs abiliites for the rest of the match and will face electrical damage to his hands, rendering his muscles numb for 1 turn.

Restrictions:
Note 1: Despite it being two staffs, you can only perform the abilities of the staffs one staff at a time, excluding the transformation ones (Meaning you can't create two whips at the same time, or heat up the staffs at the same time. You can, however, do it one turn at a time, in accordance to time frame.) Each ability used counts as a move.
Note 2: Can only be wielded by Ace. and those he allow.
Note 3: In NW, this can only be used by one person at a time.
Note 4: Heating and transformation is obviously short-range.
Note 5: The weapon can transform back to its original form an unlimited amount of time.
Note 6: It is indestructible.

Describe to me the weapons abilities, (3) and give me pros and cons for each :p
-Yeah, I guess so.

-It slowly freezes anything. Meaning if you clash swords, it wouldn't instantly freeze the blade. The swords would probably have to stay attached for a few seconds in order to freeze it. About the earth, yeah I suppose so. It's an interesting idea to create a source of ice.

-Rock lee without weights. This is his normal speed, which is reduced when wearing the weights.


Also, in the bankai form, you can only use water, wind and ice techniques.

___________

Now to your CW. First of all Kudos on the story very well done ^^ I suppose you don't want me to re-tell it in my own words so moving on. xD So we have two staffs, each of whom is 3 meters in length. They are made of gold, making them look expensive and awesome. The staffs are hollow inside, allowing one to channel chakra through it and use its' abilities. This also makes it extremely light, which is great because it doesn't slow down the user, nor his movements. A con would be that it might get in the way of some specific movements like flips etc. One of the staffs' abilities is Trasnformation. The user can transform the top 1 meter of the staff into anything (pro) but can not increase their length (con) xD Anyways the user can also heat it from the outside to burn people's insides. The other ability of the staff is that it could be heated from the inside and melt through B rank steel release techniques etc. It counts as a move, the damage is equivalent to an A rank technique (30 chakra cost, 60 damage points) The last ability is lightning. By connecting the two staffs, a small ball of lightning is formed like the rasengan which then releases an outburst of lightning, equivalent to S rank. (40 chakra cost, 80 damage) The user can also use a Forbidden rank version of this attack but will not be able to use the staffs' abilities afterwards and his hands will be numbed for a turn. The restrictions are pretty much self-explenatory.

Questions:

1. Can I shape the top 1 meter part like a boomerang. I suppose I can but would it have the properties of the boomerang, like when I throw it, do you think it would come back? :D

2. Does this count as a jutsu, meaning does it take one of my 3 jutsu spots for turn.

3. Can I use this, to cut through let's say B rank erbium release, or any other kind of metal CE, or even Doton? I suppose I can use this to heat mud and turn it to lava?

4. Does this mean that the S and F ranked versions of the lightning and the lightning are also mid range?

5. Does this counts as a turn?
 

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Thanks; I was inspired by Enel from One piece.
To answer your questions:
1- I don't think so, since one part of it will be longer than the other. But, the transformation ability of the staves was implemented so i can use the giant-fan exclusive jutsus, since you can transform the upper half into a giant fan. xD
2- No
3- If it's metal based, then yes.
4- Yes, they both reach up to mid-range
5- Nope :p
 

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Ninja arts: Spirt Arts = Ninpou: Supiritto Gijutsu

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: short-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will concentrate his elemental chakra and will create a spirit of the certain element. This spirit represents some kind of animal with the size from average person to the size of Gamabunta. It is naturaly made from the ceratin element (e.g made of fire, water wind etc.). It has the ability to use techniques from the certain element without any hand seals much more faster than usuall, and it applys the normal elemental weaknesses. However if made of fire the spirit will be extremly vulnerable from water attacks and even 2 ranks lower techniques of the elemental weakness of the spirit, would be able to destroy it. Also the spirit can only perform techniqes that does not require hand seals. *

*Last for 3 turns
*Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
*No taijutsu and genjutsu while the spirit is on the field
*Ryuji is the co-creator of this and all spirit arts.

You just want me to ask questions? Alright, can you please elaborate more on its strenghts and weaknesses? So if it is earth chakra, does that mean it can be destroyed by a C-rank lightning tech (since it is two rank lower?) and also, how do these animals look like? say a tiger made of water chakra, will it be a water tiger?
 

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The strengths are that you can make the spirit as big as a summoning or as small as a clone, depending on what your needs are. The spirit can only perform techniques that don't originally need hand seals for, though he can perform them faster. The shape is entirely up to your imagination, it can be any kind of animal. I usually go for Wolverines since this is my summoning, but that's just me. If you make an earth tiger, the spirit will be a tiger made of earth, same goes for every other element. I like to use the wind one, as I can make it appear around me, so does the water. I also like the water and earth spirit since I can make them appear bellow me, lifting me up and "riding" them like a summoning. I don't think I have ever used the fire and lightning spirit, nor have I ever used the S rank version of it (fire). If a wind spirit for example is hit by C rank fire technique, it will be destroyed. You can make the spirits, not only with the basic 5 elements, but with any element you like, like ice or lava, considering you have the appropriate bio; likewise you can make it from a Custom element and the spirit will gain on it's properties. Lili used it in a cool way in her fight with Madara Uchiha in the ninja world so you might wanna check this out. Also, the spirit can only appear short range of you, meaning you can't make it appear behind an opponent and attack him from point blank range; Pervy Sage (Dan) tried that in a tourney fight and was not allowed. You can't use genjutsu while the spirit is on the field and taijutsu, which is a stupid restriction that I made in my noobie days.

That's about it. If you have any more questions, feel free to ask.
 

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Genjutsu: Kuroi Shin'en) - Illusion technique: Black Abyss

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will cause the target to fall into an illusion where black shadows envelop the target from their feet and encase in complete darkness but then they fall into a endless pit. This technique is primarily used for the user to distract the opponent from the reality of the situation setting them up for a surprise attack on the target.
~ Only twice per battle

Alright, from what i see, its a technique that creates black shadows from where the target stands, and they would be enveloped in darkness similar to bringer of darkness? And once the darkness completely takes over, they fall into the darkness into a seemingly never ending pit?

Just one question, what would happen in reality? Would they stop moving due to them believing to be falling in the illusion?
 

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Yes they would. I like to use this technique while the opponent is in mid air, making him lose control over his body and fall on the ground. It's all about timing, using it when the time is right. That's why I use it while they are in mid air, they fall on the ground where an attack is coming from to destroy them.
 
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