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Bleeding Edge Armor
Rank: N/a
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: N/a
Damage: N/a
Description: Using the advancements in technology, Tony Stark designed a full body suit formed of Nano bots allowing him to form it when needed. The user will have the nano bots stored within a piece of technology on their person and at the cost of a move per turn, can activate the Nano bots to take the form of a full body suit around the user. This can be done in the same time frame as another jutsu. This suit is controlled by the user moving with them reacting to their brain signals a chip is fitted behind their ear, relaying the motions. Although seeming simple in application this suit has an AI within it by the name of J.A.R.V.I.S. Allowing for nanobots around the user to pick up on movements all around and relay the information to the user, notifying them of what's going on around them while being able to scan for heat signatures along with the motion sensors on the suit. The suit forms around the body creating a separate atmosphere within as the suit supplies the Cyborg with filtered oxygen and the nanobot armor vibrates on different frequencies as to not allow anyone to phase through or enter it from the outside. This suit can tank up to A rank damage though it's weak to lightning above C rank. The nanobots take a unique form on the users palms and soles of the feet taking the form of unique turbines. The user at the cost of a move per turn can release their chakra into the these turbines to create one of two effects. The first effect is to create currents of chakraless wind that pushes out. This wind is like a strong natural wind with no chakra that can either be used to push stuff away from the user in a quick pulse or even sustained so the user can use it to push them, using it as a stream, moving their arms and legs to control the direction of the flight. If used for pushing another object it can reach up to mid range and has A rank in power/damage. The second use of the turbine can apply the same effect but instead of wind it will be chakraless fire for the same effects and damage. This suit can be combined with any other technology on the users body to make use of it, for example, the suit can form around a kote or absorption arm integrating it into the suit to not hinder the user ability to use his other technology.

Should the users body take damage, they can use the additional nanobots within their body (similar to aburame bugs) to reform their body. Reforming costs one of the users three moves per turn, reformation can be done twice per battle however does not heal the user's health pool. The defence is considered to be C rank, being immune to C ranks and below and health wise reduces C rank damage from all interactions.

Note: Use of the turbines can be used once per turn.

Declined: There are somethings here that need to be clarified, mainly with the defenses and healing aspect of the armor. You say that it's weak to C rank Lightning techniques then later on in the technique say it's immune to C rank and below techniques. I most likely won't allow this armor to shave -30 damage off of technique interactions especially since you want "all interactions" either pick physical or energy based and when you do tone down the damage reduction. Also describe what kind of injuries the nanobots can repair. In this technique it's vague on what type of injuries the nanobots are capable of fixing, is it fatal injuries, minor cuts/burns etc, severed body parts? Put a cooldown on this ability as well. Also note that the chakraless Wind and Fire abilities are only protecting you against B rank and below techniques. - Daemon
Bleeding Edge Armor
Rank: N/a
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: N/a
Damage: N/a
Description: Using the advancements in technology, Tony Stark designed a full body suit formed of Nano bots allowing him to form it when needed. The user will have the nano bots stored within a piece of technology on their person and at the cost of a move per turn, can activate the Nano bots to take the form of a full body suit around the user. This can be done in the same time frame as another jutsu. This suit is controlled by the user moving with them reacting to their brain signals a chip is fitted behind their ear, relaying the motions. Although seeming simple in application this suit has an AI within it by the name of J.A.R.V.I.S. Allowing for nanobots around the user to pick up on movements all around and relay the information to the user, notifying them of what's going on around them while being able to scan for heat signatures along with the motion sensors on the suit. The suit forms around the body creating a separate atmosphere within as the suit supplies the Cyborg with filtered oxygen and the nanobot armor vibrates on different frequencies as to not allow anyone to phase through or enter it from the outside. The nanobots take a unique form on the users palms and soles of the feet taking the form of unique turbines. The user at the cost of a move per turn can release their chakra into the these turbines to create one of two effects. The first effect is to create currents of chakraless wind that pushes out. This wind is like a strong natural wind with no chakra that can either be used to push stuff away from the user in a quick pulse or even sustained so the user can use it to push them, using it as a stream, moving their arms and legs to control the direction of the flight. If used for pushing another object it can reach up to mid range and has A rank in power/damage. The second use of the turbine can apply the same effect but instead of wind it will be chakraless fire for the same effects and damage. This suit can be combined with any other technology on the users body to make use of it, for example, the suit can form around a kote or absorption arm integrating it into the suit to not hinder the user ability to use his other technology.

Should the users body take damage, they can use the additional nanobots within their body (similar to aburame bugs) to reform their body. Reforming costs one of the users three moves per turn, reformation can be done twice per battle however does not heal the user's health pool. The defence is considered to be C rank, and is capable of reforming minor cuts, burns, and even reform body parts. Additionally, it is capable of reforming or "stitching together" injured internal organs, allowing them to continue to function until a person can get healing.

Note:
Use of the turbines can be used once per turn.
Note: The chakraless winds and fires only protect the user against B-rank techniques.
Note: The nanobot reformation of the body has a two turn cooldown between use.

- Removed the "This suit can tank up to A rank damage though it's weak to lightning above C rank".
 
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(Satetsu No Kugutsu) Iron Sand Puppet
Rank: N/A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: This puppet is used by Shinki during battle. It's mostly seperated into pieces and hidden in his cloak of iron sand. By reattaching the pieces he is able to use it in battle. Through his use of his Kekkei Genkai, Magnet Release, he can use his Iron Sand to use the control the puppet instead of Chakra strings. Shinki can also use the Iron Sand to form weapons for the puppet. The puppet is usually always protected by the Iron Sand controlling it. It can be broken if it is hit in an unprotected spot. By deploying his puppet, he can usually defeat an enemy, just by having the puppet fight with weapons made of Iron Sand.
 

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Arashimanto | Stormcloak
Type:
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Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: N/A (-20 to activate the ground-storm ability)
Damage: N/A (-20 to attacks to the upper body.)
Description: The Stormcloak is a chakra-infused fabric mantle purpose-woven for Azuma. It has the appearance of a light grey overcoat, and he wears it almost everywhere he goes. First and foremost, the Cloak was stitched together with a thin chakra-steel thread, fortifying the mantle and reducing the damage from any hit Azuma takes to his upper body by twenty. Secondly, the Stormcloak gets its name for its infusion with Ameton-nature chakra. If the user funnels their chakra into the cloak around them, it will begin to release rain clouds up to long-range around the user, save for the fact that these clouds form at ground level, around the height of the user's head. These clouds can be used as a source for Ameton techniques, but due to their artificial nature, they can be dispersed with the usage of an A-Rank or higher Fuuton technique. Finally, because of it's Ameton infusion, the Stormcloak can be used to repel Katon techniques of up to A-Rank once every three turns. As such, the Stormcloak is always slightly wet to the touch from the outside.
Notes:
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The Cloud-Forming ability can be used twice per battle.
- The Flame-Retardant ability can be used three times per battle with three turns in between uses.
- The Stormcloak will be rendered unusable after taking the brunt of an S-Rank or higher technique.
 
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