[CFS] Custom Style Trade

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The chop hanging rippling fist is a style that was created in relation to that of the Hyuga Clan’s Jyuken, where as they insert chakra into the chakra stream of the target and force close and open the tenketsus in the body of the target. In Chop Hanging Rippling Fist it does the same thing except that it used to attack along the surface of the skin than the actual chakra stream.
 

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Okay, good enough.

Now here is the basic stance of the style:

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The hips are the most important aspect of your movements, so lets get some practice.

*tosses you a hula hoop*

Do tha hula!
 

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Grabbing the hola hoop, Ishiro places it around his waist, though it feels slightly...off...no matter, he starts swerving his hips around and around and around until the hola hoop bursts into flames due to the speed of the hoop going around and around and around like a ****ing mad man
 

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Well done! Those hips don't lie, it would seem.

Now, train the mind!

*tosses you a sack of rocks*

Go sit at the end of that pier and toss the rocks into the lake one by one and observe the ripples they make on the lake and meditate on it.
 

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As told by the man, I grab the sack filled with useless rocks and proceed to take a seat on the pier nearby. As i took a rock, I simply tossed it along the surface of the water, paying keen attention to the skipping stones. As they broke the surface of the water, creating a short ripple along the surface of te water, it can be seen that...well that the ripples are wild...
 

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a small wave or series of waves on the surface of water, especially as caused by a slight breeze or an object dropping into it.

In the cfs the ripples would be the waves of chakra that is inflicted into the skin of the target's body
 

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Okay good. ^^

Your mind and body are now prepared, we shall learn the first techniques!

Do this in great detail:

(Hikasazanami-Ken Genjutsu: Hi-hirate kuresshendo) | Chop Hanging Rippling Fist Illusion Technique: Hidden Palm Crescendo
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: For this technique the practitioner will form two hand seals and then slowly assume the basic stance of the Chop-Hanging Fist style. This activates the illusion portion of the technique. The opponent will see the user slowly lower their body, leaving brief after images. Once the stance has been reached the opponent sees the user disappear in a swirl of wind. In reality the user will have been focusing large amounts of chakra to their legs and will burst forwards once the illusion activates, closing distance at high speeds and unleashes a barrage of eight palms strikes in the blink of an eye, never stopping their forwards movement. The strikes and the damage from them will break the opponent out of the genjutsu (should they still be in it) by the time of which the user will have moves past them by about three meters.
-Can be used three times per battle.

In action:

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*makes a clone*

Give it a try!


Make sure you're very descriptive. I want to see your understanding of the style and the basic stance.
 

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Doing as shown after performing teo handseals, I quickly slide my left forward, slowly lowering my stance, and at the same time crossing my hands. I then stretch my right leg back and putting the weight all on my left leg, spreading my arms out to the back of me. Dashing off my let leg, I quickly close the distance between me and the clone, taking my left hand; I channel chakra into it, while your caught in the genjutsu, I disappeared in a swirl of wind, I quickly strike your body in eight random places, the pain being enough to knock you out of the illusion, I quickly appear behind you as I nothing happened dusting myself off
 

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Good. ^^

Now lucky you, we just got another approved technique!


(Hikasazanami-Ken: Hyoro Darumadoru Kyuushuu) - Chop Hanging Rippling Fist: Swaying Daruma Doll Revenge
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique is used to counter strikes towards the upper torso or head of the practitioner. Using careful chakra control they'll momentarily reinforce the point of impact to minimize damage while allowing their upper body to move with the strike by swaying their hips. They'll then use their hips to convert the momentum of their body and rebound towards the opponent at high speeds while striking out with both palms releasing a ripple through the opponent's body that can encompass their entire torso.
-Can defend A-rank and below taijutsu.
-Can be used three times per battle.

With this technique you allow your opponent to hit you with a taijutsu attack towards your upper body. Go with the flow of their attack and allow your body to sway at the hips, letting your upper body recoil with the force of the blow. Once your upper body has recoiled back, bring it back up while striking up with a double palm strike to your opponent's torso, releasing ripples that spread throughout their torso.

*makes a clone*

Try it out on this clone.


The clone charges at you and cocks back his fist. He punches forward at your chest driving his fist into your sternum.

(Gangeki) - Rock Attack
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 10
Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest
 

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As the clone, attempts to drive his fist into my chest,using my better chakra control, i channel it into my chest, reducing the damage taaken from the punch, doing so, I sway my lowr body, from my hips down, I then rebound my body forward and unleash a two palm barrage on the chest of the clone, sending a ripple through his body
 

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Oi, whats with all the commas? o_O

9 commas and no periods. xD


Your description seems off. Your lower body is actually staying still, its your upper body that sways. You get punched in the chest and allow your upper body to go with the punch and lean backwards while keeping your legs still. When your upper body goes as far back as it would, it recoils back at the enemy who you hit with the palm strikes.

Got it?
 
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