Updating CW, which was originally approved in old thread here:
https://animebase.me/threads/custom-jutsu-submission-iii.711213/post-21714640
Hattori Hanzo
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short (Long)
Chakra: N/A (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
Hattori Hanzo is the name of the armour that has been passed down for generations between ninja. This armour set has been word for centuries, each ninja upgrading and perfecting the armour until the armour itself became a weapon that was able to be used in battle. Originally crafted and created by a Samurai named Hattori Hanzo, the actual name of the armour has been lost long ago, after it was stolen and claimed by a ninja, who proceeded to pass it down. They say the spirit of the Samurai who made it still dwells within the armour, watching over who ever may wear it protecting them. (simply cosmetic, doesnt actually give the user any sensing or any abilities)
Hattori Hanzo is a dress armour with unique properties of being both offensive and defensive. While comprised of lightweight leather underneath, on top of the armour actually are slots for ninja tools that may be stacked on top of each other, forming a scale like pattern on top of the leather, but underneath the cloth design cover that is on top (fig. 1). By simply flicking the dress one can fire out a ninja tool in the chosen direction as it comes loose from the dress, travelling at the same speed as if being thrown. These ninja tools are specially made by the current wearer to be custom made chakra metal ninja tools, able to conduct chakra. The advantage of the battle dress firstly is that while all the ninja tools are stacked like scales. they provide the user a reduction of 30 damage from techniques that are physical in nature (Earth, Steel, etc) in one instance of damage. The armor can resist a total of S-Rank (80) damage in total before shattering. Each ninja tool is capable of being taken from the dress by the user and held or thrown. Several of these shuriken are custom made to be larger shuriken (fig. 2) again able to conduct the chakra of what ever element the user is currently using at the cost of an extra 20 chakra dealing 60 damage. Within the same timeframe once per turn, the user can channel the same elemental chakra along side the current attack they are doing, and do a pirouette spinning on the spot sending out a barrage of these elementally enhanced shuriken, at the cost of 40 chakra and dealing 80 damage; this can only be used twice per battle.
Approved. Made edits.
Updating CW ArmourSubete no mono | All thing connected
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A (+10)
Damage: N/A
Description:
By taking advantage of the current rain falling down, the user is able to use the conductivity of the water to increase the range of their Raiton/Lightning release techniques by one extra range. Should the user be able to use rain release as well, they are able to manipulate the clouds as a source of Raiton, creating their Raiton jutsu to be performed from the clouds.
Declined. This doesn't really make too much sense; if you use the rain drops to conduct lightning through, you run the risk of shocking yourself. Secondary to this issue is that manipulation of the clouds themselves, as well as using them for Lightning is very close to Storm Release.
Ameton: Jinsokuna rakka | Rain Release: Swift Falling
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (+10)
Damage: 60
Description:
With the users rain coming down and performing a single seal, they will infuse their raiton/lightning chakra within the rain, causing the rain to be filled with lightning chakra. Effectively, this causes two benefits to the user. The first being that with the rain falling down, this obscures vision for sharingan users while the second becomes the main benefit. With the rain now falling with the users lightning chakra embedded, any forgein bodies touched by the non users chakra becomes shocked and paralyzed. By constantly funnelling chakra into the rain, the user can keep the lightning rain active.
Notes:
-While active, user cannot use any other lightning jutsu
-Can only be used 3 times per battle
-Paralyzation lasts 1 turn
Declined by Sasori: Explain why this obscures Sharingan user's vision. Explain why you aren't affected by this. Also, if you're constantly funneling lightning chakra into this it makes more sense for you not to be able to use any jutsu besides lightning unless you want to give this a one time affect and not keep funneling it.
Hattori Hanzo
Type: Weapon
Rank: F
Range: Short (Long)
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A (-5hp to user per transformation)
Description:
Hattori Hanzo is the name of the armour that has been passed down for generations between ninja. This armour set has been word for centuries, each ninja upgrading and perfecting the armour until the armour itself became a weapon that was able to be used in battle. Originally crafted and created by a Samurai named Hattori Hanzo, the actual name of the armour has been lost long ago, after it was stolen and claimed by a ninja, who proceeded to pass it down. They say the spirit of the Samurai who made it still dwells within the armour, watching over who ever may wear it protecting them. Infused with Yang chakra along lines of the Change into Hell technique, this armour has been given sentience and control over itself. Capable of manipulating itself via taking hp from the host instead of chakra, it can change its form to be what ever it or its user desires. It can manipulate its fabrics and steel to form any type of armour, or any other forms it may think of, such as wings, a cape, a shield etc.
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Declined: You say the CW can take HP instead of chakra to change forms or whatever but you dont assign how much health this would actually cost? Also I advice against this taking out of your HP pool and just have it work on chakra. I probably wouldn't allow HP usage like this for this CW. - Daemon
Subete no mono | All thing connected
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A (+10)
Damage: N/A
Description:
By taking advantage of the current rain falling down, the user is able to use the conductivity of the water to increase the range of their Raiton/Lightning release techniques by one extra range. Similarly to releasing Nagashi from the users body or something like Chidori/Raikiri where the users body is coating in their own lightning release, the have no risk at shocking or harming themselves via shape manipulating to control where the chakra is going. Should the user be able to use rain release as well, they are able to perform Raiton from the clouds, similar to the process of the B rank technique Fangs of Lightning.
Declined: Alright so, you aren't gonna be able to use any lightning technique from the sky with this technique. Secondly, what kind of technique is this anyway is it passive, active or what? Do you use it in the same time frame as another technique? This technique is very weirdly worded. Also no restrictions? - Daemon
Ameton: Jinsokuna rakka | Rain Release: Swift Falling
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (+10)
Damage: 60
Description:
With the users rain coming down and performing a single seal, they will infuse their raiton/lightning chakra within the rain, causing the rain to be filled with lightning chakra. This causes two effects to hamper enemies while benefiting the user. Using shape manipulation, they are able to bend the light by manipulating the raindrops by chaning the shapes of each drop falling to be convex, angling the light generated from the lightning towards the opponents causing blindness. By each raindrop refracting light from another, this effectively creates an endless loop of light being reflected from old rain that is currently falling to new rain that falls. Additionally, due to the heavy rain that is filled with chakra, this effectively creates a wall of chakra that the sharingan and rinnegan see's. However due to the amount of rain falling, it would be like several thousand walls of chakra between an opponent and the user.
Notes:
-While active, user cannot use any other lightning jutsu
-Can only be used 3 times per battle
Declined: That light refraction part is a REACH. You didn't finish explaining the sharingan and rinnegan part, all you said is that they see the chakra. I assume you meant it makes it hard to see through the rain but I doubt you'd need lightning infusion to do this. I feel like this is something you can do fundamentally with a canon rain technique that causes it to rain. Please develop this idea more. - Daemon
Ameton: Arashi no Kuro | Rain Release: Black Storm
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 140
Damage: N/A
Description:
A powerful rain release technique that summons forth jet black clouds that cover the battlefield, producing a fierce storm and rain. They create powerful winds comparable to gales and tornado's, although lack any damage capabilities. However, due to the severity and power of the rain falling combined with the powerful winds blowing, it reduces all fire/heat based elements and wind/wind based elements techniques from both the user and the opponents by -20 damage. The reason being that the rain falling begins cooling and dousing all fire, while the sheer power from the winds begins to miss shape and redirect all winds. Additionally, this makes any ranged ninja tools B rank and below rendered useless.
Notes:
-Can only be used twice
-Negetive debuff affects both user and opponent.
Declined. I'm not necessarily declining this because it doesn't make sense, or anything like that. But I just want to say, you don't need an S-Rank custom that costs 140 chakra to debuff an opponent by 20 damage lol. Rework this a bit and reduce the chakra cost.
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