(Ryuishi) - Dragon Orbs(Ryukokkaku) - Dragonbone
Type: Armor
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: (-5 chakra per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Dragonbone is a gray advanced armor composed entirely from a portion of a bone from one of the great Watasumi Dragons. The outer padding is light gray while the under layer consists of a more muscle fiber-esque design with a darker hue of gray. Throughout the upper part of the armor are green orbs. These green orbs have the ability to distribute chakra throughout the suit, reinforcing and enhancing the metal. This grants enhanced defensive capabilities, allowing the user to reduce 25 points from physical damage. The visor prevents the user from being blinded from enemy ninjutsu and or tools, and does so without hindering the user's vision in any way shape or form, in fact these visors enhance the user's vision enabling them to see through chakra infused mist, smoke screens etc and other field effects that would otherwise hinder their vision up to mid-range. There are also other portions of this armor allowing for external attachments enabling the user to attach tools to the armor (much like the Dragon Orbs that supplement Genji's Sage Mode and his sensory capabilities). As for it's additionally ability, through the users knowledge of medjutsu, and the new technology in the ninja world Genji became capable of producing a simple automated system built into this skin tight armor capable of restoring and repairing damage caused to the user, by siphoning off chakra from the user in order to heal their wounds. This process is fully automated and doesn't require any conscious input from the user and is all utilized by drawing chakra from the user in order to passively heal himself (-15 chakra per usage). The skin tight suit is capable of detecting blood, burns and inflammation as well as any damage the user sustains during battle and is capable of repairing said damage. The armor isn't capable of restoring severe damage and or regenerating limbs and can only repair a maximum of 30 health per turn passively. Lastly this unique armor despite its usual green/grey appearance can have it's color, accents and glow changed to whatever the user wishes, this however is entirely a cosmetic ability.
Declined; Simply changing the word exoskeleton to armor doesn't remove the fact that armors/exoskeletons are reserved for Cyborgs and Mandalore. Rework this techniqueo to be something else.
(Ryuishi) - Dragon Orbs
Type: Tool
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The Dragon Orbs is a unique tool based off the special chakra nodes utilized by the Sixth Paths of Pein. While those chakra nodes/rods enabled Nagato to utilize his chakra to control entities from extended ranges, these unique orbs focus entirely on the sensory capabilities of the nodes, these specific nodes are capable of reacting to spikes of chakra within the area up to long range (one landmark) as well as being able to sense the presence and location of chakra on the field. Enabling the user to surmise that the enemy is about to launch a technique however this in no way enables the user to have any detailed knowledge of what the opponent might be doing without additional information. This isn't the extent of the chakra orbs sensory capabilities, these chakra nodes are also fully equipped with sensory programming enabling them to detect heat signatures and motion enabling the user to become aware of any movement and heat within a five meter radius of their person. These orbs being in contact with the users body enable them to be instantly aware of any disturbances in their vicinity. The Dragon Orbs also have an additional ability, directly tied to the user's ability to enter sage mode. After extensive research in Ryuchi's Cave, Genji had discovered a way to heighten his affinity for sage mode through these unique chakra orbs, created from the bones of dragons in Ryuchi's Cave and infused with Genji's own essence, these orbs heighten the users affinity for sage mode passively, enabling them to convert an additional 20% of their chakra. These nodes are orb shaped and are attached to the user's armor.
Declined; The armor part still has to be removed from the description. Just for your sake to save you another resubmission after this, the Senjutsu aspect of the Orbs will only apply to ISM and not PSM.
Type: Tool
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The Dragon Orbs is a unique tool based off the special chakra nodes utilized by the Sixth Paths of Pein. While those chakra nodes/rods enabled Nagato to utilize his chakra to control entities from extended ranges, these unique orbs focus entirely on the sensory capabilities of the nodes, these specific nodes are capable of reacting to spikes of chakra within the area up to long range (one landmark) as well as being able to sense the presence and location of chakra on the field. Enabling the user to surmise that the enemy is about to launch a technique however this in no way enables the user to have any detailed knowledge of what the opponent might be doing without additional information. This isn't the extent of the chakra orbs sensory capabilities, these chakra nodes are also fully equipped with sensory programming enabling them to detect heat signatures and motion enabling the user to become aware of any movement and heat within a five meter radius of their person. These orbs being in contact with the users body enable them to be instantly aware of any disturbances in their vicinity. The Dragon Orbs also have an additional ability, directly tied to the user's ability to enter sage mode. After extensive research in Ryuchi's Cave, Genji had discovered a way to heighten his affinity for sage mode through these unique chakra orbs, created from the bones of dragons in Ryuchi's Cave and infused with Genji's own essence, these orbs heighten the users affinity for sage mode passively, enabling them to increase the healing properties of Sage Mode by twenty, and the damage negation properties by fifteen. These nodes are orb shaped and are attached to the user's body.
Declined: I like the sensory portion, but I don’t really think that the bolder portion fits in with the rest of the Orbs’ abilities. In addition to the specifications being too powerful, improving those specific tenacity/healing aspects of SM through a Tool in this manner doesn’t make sense. This will also need a chakra cost and some general restrictions.
-Inch
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