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El Alucard

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Note: Made changes as instructed. Reference technique for Selenium Effects : [x]



Serenton: Darude Sunaarashi | Selenium Dust: Darude Sandstorm
Type:
Offensive
Rank: B-S
Chakra: 20-40 (-10 per turn active)
Range: Mid-Long
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs three handseals to create a fierce sandstorm of selenium dust that sweeps across the battlefield. This storm lowers visibility and continually exposes anyone caught in it to the harmful effects of selenium dust which are dependent on the rank to which they are exposed. At B-Rank: The storm covers up to the 10m of the battlefield and applies B-Rank effects. A-Rank: The storm still spreads up to the 15m of the battlefield, but becomes denser, meaning the visibility is reduced to 5m within the storm. S-Rank: The storm covers the entire battlefield. Visibility shrinks to 1m within the storm, as the dust density reaches its peak. It also applies on the S-rank effects of Selenium dust poisoning.
Note:
Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: S-rank can only be used twice per battle
Note: No S-rank or above Selenium techniques within the same turn or the next turn after S-rank usage
Note: The storm lasts 3 turns

± Declined. I'm gonna need stronger restrictions than not being able to S rank and above Selenium techniques, and limited to usages per rank. For example, S rank usage only once but more usage from the B rank variant. Also, clarification - does it spawn from the user or just emanate on the battlefield (You say sweep across the field, will I, as the opponent, see it coming, etc). ±
Resubmitting:
Change log: Rewrote the whole thing to have all the information.
Link to Selenium Poisoning Effects: [
X]


Serenton: Darude Sunaarashi | Selenium Dust: Darude Sandstorm
Type
: Offensive
Rank: B-S
Chakra: 20-40 (-10 per turn active)
Range: Mid-Long
Damage: N/A
Description: The user causes a whirlwind of selenium dust to materialize at their location, gradually spreading across the battlefield throughout the turn. Anyone trapped within the storm has their vision and senses hindered and suffers from ongoing exposure to selenium dust poisoning at the level corresponding to the rank at which the storm was created.

  • B-Rank: Requires 1 handseal. The storm extends to a radius of 15 meters from the caster, achieving mid-range coverage by the end of the turn. Visibility within the storm decreases to 7 meters and the storm inflicts B-Rank selenium poisoning effects.

  • A-Rank: Requires 2 handseals. The storm expands to cover a distance of 20 meters, reaching long-range coverage by the end of the turn. Visibility inside the storm is reduced to 5 meters, and the storm inflicts A-Rank selenium poisoning effects.

  • S-Rank: Requires 3 handseals. The storm envelops the entire battlefield by the end of the turn. Visibility within the storm is cut down to just 1 meter, and the storm inflicts S-Rank selenium poisoning effects.
Note: Storm lasts 3 turns.
Note: B-Rank usable 3 times per battle. 1 turn cooldown.
Note: A-Rank usable 2 times per battle. 2 turn cooldown, & no A-rank or above selenium techniques in the same turn.
Note: S-Rank usable once per battle. No A-rank and above Selenium techniques for 3 turns.
 
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