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whos gonna be the leader o_O
Please save the spot of the leader
I have an interesting character for it but still not completed my thoughts for it, so I will post the bio and the story later.

I have not decided yet, he can be like pain or madar(tobi) but his ambition and method will be totally different from naruto series.

Pray I get time for writing about this legend.
 

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Name: Iro Rokujo
Nickname: Is called "Prince" his real name is never used. "The prince of the Akatsuki" is his title.
Age: 19
Village: Waterfall
Appearance: Brown hair and green eyes is a Rokujo trademark, yet Prince instead has brown hair & pure blue eyes, his brown hair is short and neatly combed and although his expression is normally that of an angry or blood-thirsty one who looks like he could've been a very handsome man, had he not taken up bloodshed. Very well-groomed & clean. Average height, weight. Is dressed in very smart formal wear underneath his Akatsuki robe he wears undone at the front. He has a bandage across one of his eyes as a result of his intense first fight with Kakuzu, an event that almost killed him.

History: Brought up by an old war veteran who had retired to the Hidden Waterfall Village, Prince was abandoned by his mother & father who needed a female child to carry on their legacy. Their family kekkai genkai is a age-old contract to a god-like demon named the Konjaku Gazu Hyakki, who due to a curse placed on them centuries ago, can adapt their body and use some of the Hyakki's powers in exchange for their family to never be loved, it was thought only females of their family could bear this power. Prince was a ill child and a the age of 5 was abandoned by their parents when a female heir to their family name was born. Prince's clan are a criminal wanted clan for their use in forbidden jutsu and their slaughtering of citizens.

Prince was taught basic fire and water jutsu by the old leaf shinobi whose hut he shared with him, so that Prince could protect himself when the Anbu Black Ops came for him, the remnant of the Rokujo clan, to assassinate him. The old war veteran had grown quite close to the boy, so he had planned an escape decoy to help Prince escape. Instead of the plan going ahead, when Anbu showed up a month later- Prince suddenly had a very bipolar moment and his Rokujo blood tempted him to return to the hut. It was then that Prince had awakened a kekkai genkai of his very own, a crazed, blood-thirsty version of his sister's powers. The chakra around his hand was shaped into the power of a giant, almighty fist which then he formed into the shape of a spear.

Prince Rokujo slaughtered everyone there- even the leaf war veteran who was planning to help him escape the ANBU. Prince then saw no going back and at the age of 17 seeked out the Akatsuki. Upon coming across Kakuzu and his past associate, Prince tested himself and challenged Kakuzu immediately. The fight was very evenly matched, until Kakuzu's killer instinct struck. Young Prince was pounded into the ground but continued to try and fight, grabbing Kakuzu's leg as he walked off. Prince then lost conciousness & Kakuzu decided to take him back to the Akatsuki. The organisation laughed at Kakuzu for bringing back such a weak, beaten-up child. Pain himself realised his potential and developed his powers, treating him like his own student. Hates the leaf and the structure of the 5 Great Nations and especially wanted to hunt down the Rokujo clan. He was paired with both Kakuzu and Konan on certain missions. Shared a little bit of mutual respect with Kakuzu but ultimately was killed when he hunted down his younger sister who had been gifted from birth was miraculous regenerating abilities and full control of the Hyakki's power. Both were killed in the end strike and Kakuzu buried the bodies in order for no ninja to discover his kekkai genkai and stole his fire element heart for his own benefit.

Abilities: Better-than-average control of both water and fire jutsu (his element being fire) and likes to combine these jutsu for disastrous results. He can use the kage bunshin no Jutsu to create up to 5 copies of himself, but his main power comes from the kekkai genkai that eminates from his left hand. His Rokujo blood could also be considered an ability, giving him a relentless thirst for blood that only a true hunter would know.

Goal: Death to the Rokujo clan & whatever his master Pain desires.
 
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Please save the spot of the leader
I have an interesting character for it but still not completed my thoughts for it, so I will post the bio and the story later.

I have not decided yet, he can be like pain or madar(tobi) but his ambition and method will be totally different from naruto series.

Pray I get time for writing about this legend.
Sadly i think the leader has been decided and its Salem frm the 1st page. Your character can be a kage or some weirdo who just wants to fight???
 
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Name: Chiyoko Uchiha
Nickname: Defective Hime
Age: 16
Village: N/A
Abilities: Defective Sharingan
Goal: To search for Madara Uchiha

History of the Defective Uchiha Clan:

During the war between Uchiha and Senju the Uchiha members started to produce defective ninja. These ninja could not possess the sharingan nor any talent for a shinobi. Their DNA of an Uchiha was somehow destroyed from their bodies. Now outcasts, these people left the shinobi world, and died from war, except for one ninja. The last defective Uchiha. He survived the war and was orphaned. Found by Madara, he lived to see another day. He was then able to produce a daughter at a late age. Except his daughter possessed the Sharingan.​


History of the Defective Hime:

Born with the Sharingan her father felt no hope for her as a shinobi. But in reality, he was jealous of her power. Obtaining her power meant he could become a powerful ninja. Killing her was his only option in obtaining her sharingan. Unfortunately, that wasn't the case. After countless attacks he learned she did not obtain the Sharingan but the Mangekyō Sharingan. She transferred him to another dimension unwillingly. And she became to be known as the; Defective Hime.

Strengthening her powers, she became a full fledge ninja in the Land of Waves. But she never used the Mangekyō Sharingan ever since the death of her father. She knew only one person could help her; Madara Uchiha. She needed at least someone who could help her to control her gift. Then one day she heard a boy named Sasuke Uchiha killed a rouge shinobi in her village. Desperate to see this Uchiha she escaped her village and became a rougue ninja.

Traveling to the Land of Fire she found Sasuke. Confronting him on his training with a man named, Kakashi Hatake. She yelled out to him:
"Are you Uchiha Sasuke?" She said with a quiver.

"Who are you? Actually, I don't care. Get lost, your interrupting my training," he said with a harsh tone.

"I'm an Uchiha too! Please help me!" She pleaded. In an immediate attack, Sasuke rushes up to her with a chidori but she completely dodges it, using her Mangekyō Sharingan. Sasuke turned around to attack her but saw her eyes. He wanted to kill her.

Later that day after defeating Sasuke, she had all the Anbu Black Ops and skilled Jonin tracking her. They too wanted to see her dead. After escaping them to a village. A village of snakes.

History of Orochimaru:

In the Village of Sound, she restarted her life as a slave to Lord Orochimaru. He did not know she possessed a special kekkei genkai but realized her potential. But he was too involved with power that he tossed her aside. She tracked him and he lead her to the Akatsuki, for he was on the search for a man named, Itachi Uchiha.​

History of the Akatsuki and Uchiha Itachi:

Battling Itachi to prove she was an Uchiha, she failed. Itachi beat her in a power of the Mangekyō Sharingan. But he took her under his wing, for she reminded him of Sasuke. Trained under the knowledge of Itaci she became an S-Rank criminal, and a spy for the Akatsuki.
 

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Name Kneegrowman
Age: 20
Village of the hidden sound
Normal upbringing, 2 loving parents. became average jonin.
with one exception.
He has an amazing ability, to sneak into ur house and steal ur T.V, refrigerator or any other electrical device no matter how heavy. If you want to ward him off have a recording of a chainsaw or a chainsaw running, as the sound of "RUNIGANIGA" will scare him off. Avoid having cool aid, fried chicken or watermelon in your house if you have any expensive items.
 

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I read the first pg and it seems rly cool, but i don’t want to go through and read alll the pgs tho. sooo ill try and create one idk if u guys r still looking for ones

Name: Dolth Ulf
Nickname: san
Age: 25
Village: snow

History... Dolth grew up in a wealthy house hold but was pushed around, nothing going his way. His parents, even his 2 older siblings wanted nothing to do with him. The only person that understood was him was his best friend and only friend, Roxy. She was an orphan that had nothing except these 3 connected rings that she inherited from her parents which she wore on a chain around her neck. Both Dolth and Roxy attended the academy, were Roxy excelled Dloth fell short. Roxy spent time teaching and training Dolth in their free time, eventually Dolth was to par with Roxy where they were the top of their class. Dolth was happy when he was with Roxy, she was his life, and he hers.
Years later…
During a snow storm, while walking back to the village from a mission, Dolth and Roxy’s squad was attacked, they were outnumbered; ratio was 5:1. The 15 enemies were ninja from an undetermined village. The 3rd member of the squad was disposed of with ease for the attacking force. Roxy and Dolth had been fighting alongside each other for their whole life’s and put up a momentous fight but were no match for the opposing ninja. Roxy was struck down with a sickle charged with chakra; she was nearly ripped in half. Seeing Roxy nearly torn apart, Dolth felt something explode inside on him, his eyes turned purple and it seemed there were icicles hanging down from inside his eyelids, making a purple and white “z-ish” pattern. Dolth felt cold-hearted, he made the snow come down in heavy sleets, and nothing could be seen. Dolth felt his eyes manifest something strange in his hand; a large sphere of extreme dark purple appeared in his hands (about the size of a soccer ball). He can feel its willingness to take any shape he wants it to. Dolth changes it to cover his arm to a full arm sword with this he obliterates the remaining ninja. Dolth than went to Roxy’s side, barely alive, Roxy poured her remaining chakra into her 3-ring necklace and gave it to Dolth and died. Dolth travelled to the village the ninja were from and killed everyone. Dloth never returned to his village.
Years later…
After years of rigorous training with his new found technic, which Dolth called misto. Dolth was able to control this mass amount of power only with his new eyes. He could push misto away from him in many forms (ninja tools, animals, (i.e. pack of wolfs, dragon etc.) beam of it, and others). But misto was mainly a close combat jutsu; favorite form is a sword-ish thing. It length from the wrist is about 5 feet, and it covers the entire forearm and sticks out about a foot and a half from the elbow. It’s constantly moving, making it look like dark purple water. Dolth can control misto all over his body, multiply places at once, and full body although he cannot do full body for extended periods of time. As wells as a good offensive move, misto is a strong defensive one as well.

Abilities: strong snow technics (ice and snow Jutsu), strong earth and water. Eyes allow for stronger snow technics and misto (the dark purple thing).
Note: rings that Roxy gave him give him extra chakra boost. VERY reckless, needs partner that is smart. “3” is favorite number because of the 3-ring necklace
Motive: find a way to bring back Roxy.
apperance: 5' 9", dark browm hair that covers one eye which are light blue. wears a winter hat with markings of the snow and ninja headband is inlayed in it.

message me if i get a part :)
 
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Name: Sanshouo Terumi
Nickname: Cold Flame
Age: 23
Village: Kirigakure

History: Sanshouo was into the 5th Mizukage's clan. He was raised with love and care. He was personally taught by Mei, and quickly mastered Lava Release. He created several personal jutsus under her care, and quickly rose through the village's ranks. Throughout this, he was treated with love, but he gave none back. It seemed obvious that he cared for the village, as he did his very best, and never failed on a mission, risking his life severely for his comrades repeatedly. He was entered into the anbu. He was ordered on several mission to kill his friends and innocents. He did so without remark. But secretly he was harboring a hatred for all villages that made their ninja do such cruel things. One day he snapped. He killed the leader of the anbu and decimated the rest, and stole Kubikiribōchō. He then left, wandering across the land, killing village shinobi. Soon, he was wanted in all villages. But he killed all the anbu that came for him. Akatsuki soon noticed his strength, and offered a position. He joined, seeing Pain's ideals. He liked parts of it, but hiddenly planned to destroy them and harness the juubi's power to kill all villages, and start anew.
Abilities: Lava Release: all lava release abilities.
Salamander summoning
Advanced taijutsu, genjutsu, and ninjutsu
Elements: Fire, Earth, Lava
Personal Jutsus
Fire Release: Gun( makes bullets from fire and manipulates them masterfully into devastating attacks)
Earth Release: Can make powerfully armor that no blade can break through.
Weilds Kubikiribōchō

message me if i get a part
 

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I'm still thinking about mine but yeah we gotta do a look description too. My ultimate plan is to get all fan fic writers and people with ideas on this and then also get all of the artis and fan drawers on this site to help draw our characters too! it could be something epic if enough people work on it, and the best part is the more people that contrinute to this then the the less each one of us would have to work so it wouldnt be so time consuming of course if we do get to the point of forming a solid story around this we would have to take votes and polls to decide on conflicting ideas. It may sound messy but I believe we could make it work.
So, before I say anything, I'd like to explain my reasoning on how I happened upon this forum.

I'm a starving artist, to put it simply. I dabble in most all forms of art. My next high-priorty project: create a Naruto fan-based Omake. To put it simply, I'm going to make a manga based off of the Naruto universe with new characters. I was searching the web for ideas, and came upon this forum. I read a bit, and liked what I saw. So I immediately made an account for posting.

Of course, I also plan on rp'ing, provided you guys (and girls?) are okay with it, I just wanted to get that out of the way.

So, you said you needed FF Authors and artists? I happen to be one, and I'd like to help in any way possible.

So, there's my proposal. I don't want anything but to roleplay with you guys. I'll be posting a character in a moment.
 

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They've assembled all of their rp/fan fiction members and have stopped accepting participants. Right now they're probably just checking these posts to see if they want to use any of the characters. Pretty sure they have what they need, but other groups have been popping up too so they might use your creations as well. I think it's safe to say these guys probably aren't actively considering submissions at this time. (Just my guess though since they haven't replied in awhile).
 

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Well, i was also thinking about writing a fan fiction about naruto that happens after the main series. But since i was a little too late to join, too bad...
 

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Name: Tai FuGin
Nickname: Water And Fire Master.
Age: 23
Village: Hidden in the Mist
History:Lived in The Village Hidden in The Mist For About 10 years
And Has Hide HimSelf from the great Ninja War 1 and 2..
Abilities: Water And Fire Type Jutsu,very fast and strong good with TaiJutsu,Ninjutsu.
Skilled With Weapons,Tools,Smart.
Note: none
Goal: To Become A Sage With that Only Knows Best Of Water And Fire Typed Jutsu.
And To Be The Best Sage there is.
 

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Name:Dra Cu
NickName: One That Knows
Age23
Village:Rain
History:Killed 75 Leaf Ninja's Wanted For Murder From The Leaf Village.
Abilities: Master At Hand to Hand Combat,Expert In Ninja Tools.
And know's Lightning Blade,Copy Jutsu,Silent Homicide Technique,Hidden Mist Technique,
Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors
Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death,Water Clone Technique,
Water Prison Technique,Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique,Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique,He also posses the Mangekyo Sharingan,Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet,Lightning Release Shadow Clone.
Note: Very Little know about him all there is to know that he killed 75 Leaf Ninja's he is smart and strong,look very pale,has black hair.
Goal:To Destroy the Copy Ninja And Take over Village Hidden in the leaf.
 

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Name:Dra Cu
NickName: One That Knows
Age23
Village:Rain
History:Killed 75 Leaf Ninja's Wanted For Murder From The Leaf Village.
Abilities: Master At Hand to Hand Combat,Expert In Ninja Tools.
And know's Lightning Blade,Copy Jutsu,Silent Homicide Technique,Hidden Mist Technique,
Demonic Ice Crystal Mirrors
Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death,Water Clone Technique,
Water Prison Technique,Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique,Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique,He also posses the Mangekyo Sharingan,Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet,Lightning Release Shadow Clone.
Note: Very Little know about him all there is to know that he killed 75 Leaf Ninja's he is smart and strong,look very pale,has black hair.
Goal:To Destroy the Copy Ninja And Take over Village Hidden in the leaf.


You brought up a month old Thread from November around Feburary First.
.-. Against the rules
Anyways since this was bumped>_>
My Character is a S-Class(Kage Level) Turtle.
He has the ability to kill anyone even the S06P, hence hes powerful.
He dies in the end by a unknown death.
The End.
 
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