[Photoshop] Crysis

NarutoGoku

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omg, ill wake up this setion:D

lets see... colors look good. the purple is kind of overpowering. in the bottom left, those sparks (i assume you used a displacement map) are very choppy. do smtn about that. the tag overall is off-balance. the text on the right helps, but not too well. either add more to the right, or crop it out. the thing that dosnt make sense is the bg. it is all blurred and wavy. aside from the colors, it dosnt seem to fit the render. also the text needs to be changed. you should not put text at low opacities like that. either have solid text, or no text.

and you need to get new fonts. this does not fit the tag at all:p

It also seems that all your recent tags are the same exact thing. its getting boring. you need to break out of that shell ;)
 

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omg, ill wake up this setion:D

lets see... colors look good. the purple is kind of overpowering. in the bottom left, those sparks (i assume you used a displacement map) are very choppy. do smtn about that. the tag overall is off-balance. the text on the right helps, but not too well. either add more to the right, or crop it out. the thing that dosnt make sense is the bg. it is all blurred and wavy. aside from the colors, it dosnt seem to fit the render. also the text needs to be changed. you should not put text at low opacities like that. either have solid text, or no text.

and you need to get new fonts. this does not fit the tag at all:p

It also seems that all your recent tags are the same exact thing. its getting boring. you need to break out of that shell ;)
ty for CnCYah, they were pretty the same, this one is a bit different.
Help me to break out of that shell..lol...i got no inspiration..no ideas..and if i search for tuts, i get nooby ones, and i can do 100x times better than the sig in the tut..
Well..idk if ur the right person, since u were using your smudge style over and over.. :)
 

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ty for CnCYah, they were pretty the same, this one is a bit different.
Help me to break out of that shell..lol...i got no inspiration..no ideas..and if i search for tuts, i get nooby ones, and i can do 100x times better than the sig in the tut..
Well..idk if ur the right person, since u were using your smudge style over and over.. :)
na, i only did that a few times. but i suggest looking in the graphics critique section on PR. i learn a lot, and get insperation by looking at other ppls work ;)
 

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The colours are a little bold in this piece Ali. It could probably do with a gradient map or two. I don't mind the red lines coming from the mask as someone else pointed out. It doesn't exactly detract from the sig. However, there are two lines that come from the right shoulder which don't really fit with the flow. The depth in awesome in this sig.

As always, I wish it was smaller, but I guess that is still up to personal opinion.
 
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