Crutch Kaguya Trains Zero (Again)

[ZK]

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This is my Sensei thread, i'm aware of some of the errors.
BTW, check out my Naruto test.

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[Crutch Kaguya]

World Shaking isn't strong enough to make you fall, it's mainly meant as a distraction from other moves by messing with your senses. The chakra was a precaution to falling down, but your physical senses are still effected. But it wasn't such a big deal. Your first move was pretty good.

Second move, the wind should get a boost from the kunai but it definitely wouldn't have been enough from you to turn earth into lava. Why didn't you use the fire+wind blast to start with, it would have made it easier and turned the earth into lava. Your third jutsu was okay from this move. You added a wild card sneak attack that could either work, fail, or at least change his strategy. I think it made him change his strategy.

What are your thoughts on your own move, and what I have said. How do you think it could have been made better, even though it somewhat worked.

 

[ZK]

World Shaking isn't strong enough to make you fall, it's mainly meant as a distraction from other moves by messing with your senses. The chakra was a precaution to falling down, but your physical senses are still effected. But it wasn't such a big deal. Your first move was pretty good.

Second move, the wind should get a boost from the kunai but it definitely wouldn't have been enough from you to turn earth into lava. Why didn't you use the fire+wind blast to start with, it would have made it easier and turned the earth into lava. Your third jutsu was okay from this move. You added a wild card sneak attack that could either work, fail, or at least change his strategy. I think it made him change his strategy.

What are your thoughts on your own move, and what I have said. How do you think it could have been made better, even though it somewhat worked.

The only real bummer i'm ashamed of, is the one where i try to turn stone into lava with explosive tags.
The idea was used by Nero, and i actually thought it was legit.
It just wasn't.

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

The only real bummer i'm ashamed of, is the one where i try to turn stone into lava with explosive tags.
The idea was used by Nero, and i actually thought it was legit.
It just wasn't.

No it isn't. ~_~

Your next move is where you made your biggest mistake.
Earth Minefield is a A-rank technique, earth armor is only B-rank. Since you attempted to take the full blast of Minefield with only the armor you should have been blasted to bits and your armor would've been destroyed easily. When two jutsu of the same rank go against each other it is all based on rank and description, and his description and rank win. Your second used was messed up by your first jutsu I'm not going to say anything.

Btw, if you had some sort of sensory or occular technique you could have seen the mines and simply used Nagashi or another lightning jutsu similar to cancel the mines out like Sasuke did with Deidara.

 

[ZK]

No it isn't. ~_~

Your next move is where you made your biggest mistake.
Earth Minefield is a A-rank technique, earth armor is only B-rank. Since you attempted to take the full blast of Minefield with only the armor you should have been blasted to bits and your armor would've been destroyed easily. When two jutsu of the same rank go against each other it is all based on rank and description, and his description and rank win. Your second used was messed up by your first jutsu I'm not going to say anything.

Btw, if you had some sort of sensory or occular technique you could have seen the mines and simply used Nagashi or another lightning jutsu similar to cancel the mines out like Sasuke did with Deidara.

I had no sensory skills.
And the earth technique specifically states that it can resist up to A-ranked attacks o.o

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

I had no sensory skills.
And the earth technique specifically states that it can resist up to A-ranked attacks o.o

It also specifies that it only resists A-rank NORMAL ninjutsu, not elemental.

The rest of the fight didn't have any major issues.

 

[ZK]

It also specifies that it only resists A-rank NORMAL ninjutsu, not elemental.

The rest of the fight didn't have any major issues.

So, what now? <.<