[CJ] Creeping into that bosom...
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Lili-Chwan
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Because my genjutsu prowess far exceeds my current limit. Perhaps it's about that time that my limit be increased to accommodate my genjutsu proficiency, or at least I think so lol xD.
Maybe this would be reason enough for you to teach me:
This Illusion is not only most beautiful but its affects is really, really scary. It's an illusion that leaves pain(in terms of releasing the illusion) very much useless. Due to the illusion being actually based off an element of the users choice, it has to be released through means of an elemental full body surge as well. This technique literally and/or physically creates an immature form of an insect(larvae or parasite etc), that feasts on the opponent's brain. This causes them intense pain and gradually eliminates the senses. What I like about this illusion besides its beauty and power is the fact that there is no certainty within it. There is a variety of different means and ways of making the opponent experience the illusion, depending on the element of choice. However, the end result would still be to cause excruciating pain in order to overwhelm the target to the point where even molding chakra would seem more or less impossible. In my opinion, a genjutsu "master" would be easily capable of ridding himself from the parasitic entity, however, depending on the affects forced upon the opponent through the illusions experienced, this might prove rather troublesome as well. So I'd say this illusion should only be used by genjutsu "masters" themselves, failure to form a near perfect illusion would result in this technique losing its effectiveness. Due to the fact that it's an S-rank, the opponent's only chance would be to make use of the elemental advantage. And again, a genjutsu "master" should be capable of extinguising even that little bit of hope relatively easily with a well layered illusion.
I'd like to elaborate more on the part about the senses being eliminated. As I have come to understand, at the moment of the genjutsu being cast, this feature would start affecting the first of the five senses, of the user's choice. Therefore exactly in the following turn if the illusion is not dispelled, the target would be completely robbed of that sense and the larvae would proceed to feed upon the next sense and so on...until all senses have been eliminated and death follows in the final turn of the illusion's process.
Regarding the basic elements and its features within the illusion along with possibilities one could implement within the illusions for each element. I'd like to add the following;
- Fire Release: With a larvae based on the Fire Release element, illusions could be implemented where the target literally sees himself being physically on fire. Skin being roasted as a result and further burning through muscle and tendons etc. All could be added within the illusion to make its affects much more gruesome. Other than that, effects where the target's entire body would feel enflamed or extremely heated, both inside and out would also be very much overwhelming. With regards to the terrain being affected as a result of the illusion and/or within the illusion as it's being experienced by the opponent. One could add effects like the terrain being literally covered in flames or physically on fire. Other aspects include having heating ash to substitute the flames with the same desiring affects.
- Water Release: With a larvae based on the Water Release element, the user could make the opponent feel as if his body is taking on the properties of water, more specifically the flow that water has. Meaning the opponent would feel as though he has no control over his body and the proper movement of limbs etc, would prove rather hard under these circumstances. Any option would be to make the target feel as though he is drowning, where water could be physically brought into the equation and feel as though the water within his body is drowning him from the inside, due to the body being composed of a lot of water(Can't remember the exact amount), this would prove possible. Or instead the user could also allow for the illusion to have the exact opposite effect, instead the water could feel as though its being forcefully extracted from the body, dehydrating the target. This would effectively lead to loss of consciousness and/or death.
- Earth Release: With a larvae based on the Earth Release element, the target could be made to feel as though his entire body is taking on the properties of earth or stone, resulting in the target being incapable of moving his body at all, in others words, he'd be immobilized. As per the terrain being affected, there might just be a variety of things the user could implement into the illusion. Such as, allow the target to see himself being buried alive within the earth, spikes could be formed to seem as though it skewers the target's body and vital organs etc.
- Wind Release: For a wind based larvae and the illusions it could cause, I actually have no idea how or what to do to affect the target's body. Maybe make the target feel as though a constant strong with is blowing into his/her breathing passageways, which would result in failure to the releasing of Carbon Dioxide and an overdose of oxygen. Effects of this could include loss of consciousness. As for the terrain, the user could form hurricane's covering the terrain as well as slashing gusts of wind around the targets immediate area, slashing the body apart etc. This doesn't seem all that brutal, but I cannot think of anything more interesting at the moment
- Lightning Release: With a larvae based on the Lightning Release element, the target could be made to experience the actual effects of electricity, being numbness of the entire body, partial shocks on multiple parts of the body etc. Or physically be electrocuted, whereas instead the target takes the full brunt of the power of lightning and feel as though he is being completely electrocuted. For the target it would feel as though he is dying and in reality be knocked unconscious and fall to the ground helplessly as a result of this affect.
These are just the basics but due to the ambiguity within the illusion's description, there are a variety of ways to make this illusion a literal living hell, especially with advanced elements, such as Decay and Mushroom or Ice and Scorch etc.
I hope that I covered everything. If this does not impress you my lady, I do not deserve your Carrion Illusion.
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If you'd like some ideas for the Wind release, I suggest you read my battle with Nathan, in the Ninja World. He died from a Wind Larvae.
Very good analysis either way, very thorough
How many custom elements do you have?
Very good analysis either way, very thorough
How many custom elements do you have?
I'll make sure I take the time to check it out xD.
At the moment, I have no approved CE's.
Edit: Have I learned the Carrion Illusion? ._.
Second Edit: It looks like they removed that fight from the NW, so I cannot check it out
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Oh what a shame. Alright, then make an illusion for Ice. Describe the Trail and possible illusions for the 5 senses.
Performing a simple yet important offensive palm strike to his opponent's forehead, Jack, upon contact initiated on his opponent's forehead, released a globule of Ice chakra within the target's head and into the brain. This chakra in the form of a larvae isn't something that is felt like a physical attack but rather as if Jack were releasing his chakra into their opponent for a genjutsu. With the globule of Ice chakra now inside the target the elemental larvae begins to act as a parasite and starts feeding upon their brain, producing a freezing trail of illusions as well as affecting his/her five senses putting them under an insanely powerful and gruesome illusion. The illusion begins by affecting the target's sense of touch as follows; shortly after the contact is made with Jack's palm thrust, a feeling of excruciating pain and a freezing Ice cold and numbing sensation is felt all throughout the body from head to toe. Literally every fiber of his/her being would feel like it's being engulfed in Ice and/or frost; all layers of the skin feels as though it's literally being affected by severe frostbite, including the tissues that lie below. Tendons, muscles and bones feel frozen and as if it's incapable of moving. The target would find himself paralyzed or at the very least severely impaired, leaving fluid continuation of his/her movements virtually impossible.
During the following turn, albeit, surviving the first would be highly unlikely - the temperature would heighten in attempt to heat the body up and thus causing the second stage of frostbite to kick in where it begins to form large black blisters across the entire body, eliminating all sense of touch whilst still leaving the target paralyzed and under severe/intense pain. The parasitic entity would then proceed to feed upon the next sense being the target's sense of smell, within this stage ice crystals would form upon the nose and seep within it. The freezing cold temperature as well as ice crystal structure would block the nose entirely. Frostbite and its beginning stage of effects would then severely kick in once again, targeting the nose entirely, at first the nose would turn red, then blue and end up being completely black as the skin would generally start heating up. Once the nose has turned black, it loses all sense of smell entirely. Leaving the parasite to start feasting on the next best sense.
That sense being the target's sense of taste, ice crystals and/or snow particles would then seem to seep into the target's mouth as per the illusion. Following the same process, basically, the ice would freeze up the tongue, numbing the mouth entirely, eliminating both proper speech as well as the sense of taste. At this point, despite the illusion possibly being released, the target' body and mind would take heavy damage, leaving the target affected in real life rather severely. An attempt at proper movement and thinking would prove futile. However, I don't suppose survival would be the case after these gruesome affects of the illusions.
Following the elimination of the target's sense of taste, the larvae would then begin feasting upon the target's sense of hearing. Clumps of ice would form from particles and cover both the ears, its icy cold temperature would affect the ear drum in such a way that it becomes ruptured and the sense of hearing is forcefully robbed of the target, couple with the fact that the ice would cover the ears entirely eliminating all sense of hearing for the opponent. At first the natural sounds of the wind in the surrounding area blowing through trees or the grass etc. Or perhaps the sounds made by birds in the trees or in the sky, would slowly but surely start to vanish until the target would not be able to hear anything at all. All that by in the mind of the target is the thought of meeting his gruesome end in a rather gruesome way, indeed.
Finally, the parasite targets the final sense, being the target's sense of sight. Feasting upon the last sense is done gradually, allowing the affects of the illusions produced to be much worse in the case of the target surviving until now. As the illusions would be produced, the target would see layers of frost and/or ice, start to cover the eyes, preventing any movement of it entirely as well as forcing frostbite in the skin tissue surrounding the eye ball, like the eye lids and inner tissue etc. This would cause the skin around the eye to harden and change color, first red for a mere moment, then blue/purplish to a dark black color once the body attempts to heat up the skin, only worsening the affects in this case but it's only natural. The eyes would then appear widened and bulged, black blisters forming around the eyes as it would be forced shut, upon the target's life slowly fleeing from his/her helpless body.
Following in the next turn is the end of the illusion's process and with the end to the opponent's life.
During the following turn, albeit, surviving the first would be highly unlikely - the temperature would heighten in attempt to heat the body up and thus causing the second stage of frostbite to kick in where it begins to form large black blisters across the entire body, eliminating all sense of touch whilst still leaving the target paralyzed and under severe/intense pain. The parasitic entity would then proceed to feed upon the next sense being the target's sense of smell, within this stage ice crystals would form upon the nose and seep within it. The freezing cold temperature as well as ice crystal structure would block the nose entirely. Frostbite and its beginning stage of effects would then severely kick in once again, targeting the nose entirely, at first the nose would turn red, then blue and end up being completely black as the skin would generally start heating up. Once the nose has turned black, it loses all sense of smell entirely. Leaving the parasite to start feasting on the next best sense.
That sense being the target's sense of taste, ice crystals and/or snow particles would then seem to seep into the target's mouth as per the illusion. Following the same process, basically, the ice would freeze up the tongue, numbing the mouth entirely, eliminating both proper speech as well as the sense of taste. At this point, despite the illusion possibly being released, the target' body and mind would take heavy damage, leaving the target affected in real life rather severely. An attempt at proper movement and thinking would prove futile. However, I don't suppose survival would be the case after these gruesome affects of the illusions.
Following the elimination of the target's sense of taste, the larvae would then begin feasting upon the target's sense of hearing. Clumps of ice would form from particles and cover both the ears, its icy cold temperature would affect the ear drum in such a way that it becomes ruptured and the sense of hearing is forcefully robbed of the target, couple with the fact that the ice would cover the ears entirely eliminating all sense of hearing for the opponent. At first the natural sounds of the wind in the surrounding area blowing through trees or the grass etc. Or perhaps the sounds made by birds in the trees or in the sky, would slowly but surely start to vanish until the target would not be able to hear anything at all. All that by in the mind of the target is the thought of meeting his gruesome end in a rather gruesome way, indeed.
Finally, the parasite targets the final sense, being the target's sense of sight. Feasting upon the last sense is done gradually, allowing the affects of the illusions produced to be much worse in the case of the target surviving until now. As the illusions would be produced, the target would see layers of frost and/or ice, start to cover the eyes, preventing any movement of it entirely as well as forcing frostbite in the skin tissue surrounding the eye ball, like the eye lids and inner tissue etc. This would cause the skin around the eye to harden and change color, first red for a mere moment, then blue/purplish to a dark black color once the body attempts to heat up the skin, only worsening the affects in this case but it's only natural. The eyes would then appear widened and bulged, black blisters forming around the eyes as it would be forced shut, upon the target's life slowly fleeing from his/her helpless body.
Following in the next turn is the end of the illusion's process and with the end to the opponent's life.
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Alright, very nice descriptions, now a few corrections:
1. Although the target loses the sense in reality, it doesn't mean you can't continue to manipulate it the illusion. You can go by what you described, or you can keep on adding other visual aspects, or other sense aspects to continue the overwhelming sensation
2. Make a clear distinction between the senses you're manipulating. You can say the nose turns black, but how does that feel in relation to the smell sense? There's a lack of adjectives describing the less common sensations, most of what you wrote is tactual and visual xD. "I could sense the cold on my tongue, the taste of blizzard, like a cruel ice cream growing on my throat, clogging my mouth, and as I took my final fleeting breaths, there was unmistakably the flavour of cherry, on top of my gelid asphyxiation." Synaesthesia is the key to the Carrion Illusion.
Otherwise, seems great! You learned it. Use caution when performing this technique.
1. Although the target loses the sense in reality, it doesn't mean you can't continue to manipulate it the illusion. You can go by what you described, or you can keep on adding other visual aspects, or other sense aspects to continue the overwhelming sensation
2. Make a clear distinction between the senses you're manipulating. You can say the nose turns black, but how does that feel in relation to the smell sense? There's a lack of adjectives describing the less common sensations, most of what you wrote is tactual and visual xD. "I could sense the cold on my tongue, the taste of blizzard, like a cruel ice cream growing on my throat, clogging my mouth, and as I took my final fleeting breaths, there was unmistakably the flavour of cherry, on top of my gelid asphyxiation." Synaesthesia is the key to the Carrion Illusion.
Otherwise, seems great! You learned it. Use caution when performing this technique.
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(Genjutsu: Sen'i No Akumu) - Illusionary Arts: Fiber Nightmare
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a sequence of three (3) hand seals whilst focusing their chakra into the mind of their target. By making mention of the word "Retract", the genjutsu is activated, causing the target to start seeing and believing that suddenly all their clothing starts retracting/pulling inward and sucking their entire body sort of into a dark vortex, but more like the fiber within the clothing starts to retract and reshape into a tiny ball of cotton or wool, consuming the target's entire body. At first it feels as though the clothing is only getting tighter, however, not long thereafter or almost immediately thereafter, the clothing starts to completely squeeze the body, sucking violently inward and compressing the target's body into a small, hand sized ball of fiber. It consumes the flesh then moves to the bones, crushing the bones and compressing the entirety of the targets body into one small ball of fiber. The whole experience delivers excruciating pain to the opponent due to him believing what is actually happening to him. Should the fiber be allowed to completely retract, the target would completely lose his senses of sight and hearing, as the world around him darkens entirely with the target appearing to have been absorbed into a dark vortex from his point of view. With the fiber retracting, the target is subdued by the excruciating pain of having his entire body crushed and consumed with extreme force. At first, movement does not prove impossible whilst the clothes only starts pulling tight, hand seal performances and body arts are all possible. However, at the moment of the body being completely engulfed, movement is completely hindered to the point where hand seals cannot be performed and bodily movements completely restricted.
Note - Can only be used twice per battle.
Note - No genjutsu during the same turn nor the one thereafter.
Note - Can only be taught by Yashiro.
Alrighty then...Analyze, perform and provide possible ways to counter as well as advantages and disadvantages.
Lol, I'm just kidding xD. Any questions?
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a sequence of three (3) hand seals whilst focusing their chakra into the mind of their target. By making mention of the word "Retract", the genjutsu is activated, causing the target to start seeing and believing that suddenly all their clothing starts retracting/pulling inward and sucking their entire body sort of into a dark vortex, but more like the fiber within the clothing starts to retract and reshape into a tiny ball of cotton or wool, consuming the target's entire body. At first it feels as though the clothing is only getting tighter, however, not long thereafter or almost immediately thereafter, the clothing starts to completely squeeze the body, sucking violently inward and compressing the target's body into a small, hand sized ball of fiber. It consumes the flesh then moves to the bones, crushing the bones and compressing the entirety of the targets body into one small ball of fiber. The whole experience delivers excruciating pain to the opponent due to him believing what is actually happening to him. Should the fiber be allowed to completely retract, the target would completely lose his senses of sight and hearing, as the world around him darkens entirely with the target appearing to have been absorbed into a dark vortex from his point of view. With the fiber retracting, the target is subdued by the excruciating pain of having his entire body crushed and consumed with extreme force. At first, movement does not prove impossible whilst the clothes only starts pulling tight, hand seal performances and body arts are all possible. However, at the moment of the body being completely engulfed, movement is completely hindered to the point where hand seals cannot be performed and bodily movements completely restricted.
Note - Can only be used twice per battle.
Note - No genjutsu during the same turn nor the one thereafter.
Note - Can only be taught by Yashiro.
Alrighty then...Analyze, perform and provide possible ways to counter as well as advantages and disadvantages.
Lol, I'm just kidding xD. Any questions?
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Nope, no questions. It's a shame that it has such heavy restriction. Well, it's heavy on someone who bases their battle around Genjutsu at least. Still, it's a very very interesting technique. Would you like to analyse mine now? post it here
Yeah, It was S-Rank at first and I forgot to lower the restriction when I made it an A-rank. There is always room for an update at a alter stage xD.
Which one you speaking about now? You said prankster is full and Myriad was for our next exchange....
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