what does everyone think of the following jutsu's(individually)?
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(kuchyose: taiyou taka)~Summoning: Sun falcon
Type:summoning
Rank:A(S if summoning sukai)
Chakra:30 for a normal sun falcon & 50 to summon the Sun falcon King(sukai)
Effect:summon's a Sun falcon which can carry human and be used for battle.
Description/abilities:a normal falcon width including the wing's is 3 meter's and is 5 meter's in length.Sun falcon King(sukai) has a width of 6 meter's including the wing's and is 12 meter's in length
although these are part of the same jutsu can you approve each ability listed below individually?
-A second eyelid lense which protects against the glare of the sun(also protects against jutsu's that work by blinding the opponent)
-speed(because falcon's are very fast) can go from long-distance to short-distance in about 2-3 second's
-telescopic eyes allow the falcon to see prey a long distance away on the ground or near the ground while the falcon is high up flying, very good for hunting etc.
-warm layer of feather's protect against the cold at high altitudes(protects up to S rank freezing jutsu's(or A if you think it's overpowered).
-advanced lung's and extra hemoglobin(stuff which carries oxygen through the body) allow it to breathe the thin air at the stratosphere
-Ability to attack and defend themselves with wind and fire abilities(jutsu's seperate)
Note:This is just a random animal variant I have created based off the falcon's. It doesn't exist in real life, but it can exist in the Naruto world(just like Frog's the size of mountains exist in the Naruto world.
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(kasai: taka kasai tama)~Fire: Falcon fire bullet
rank:B(A if done by sukai)
Range:Long
chakra:20/30(if done by sukai)(preformed by sun falcon summoning)
Damage:40(60 if done by sukai)
Effect: a 1 meter fire bullet(2 meter's if done by sukai)
Description: a sun falcon summoning spit's a fire bullet made up of condensed fire chakra.
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3
(kaze: taka kaze nagare)~Wind: Falcon wind stream
Rank:A(S if done by sukai)
Long:Long
Rank:A(S if done by sukai
chakra:30/40(if done by sukai)(preformed by sun falcon summoning)
Damage:60(80 if done by sukai)
Effect: a long narrow stream of focused wind that last's as long as 4 second's
Description: A sun falcon summoning create's a long narrow stream of focused wind out of it's mouth that last's 4 seconds and can be used to enhance fire jutsu's. It can cut even cut through rock.
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(kaze: taiyou dei)~Wind: Sunny day
Rank:S
chakra:40
Range:long
Description:the user create's very powerful wind's that can quickly blow away any and all cloud's in the area allowing the sun to shine brightly down.
Note: only work's when there is a source of a huge amount of light(generally day)
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(kasai/kaze: mayonaka taiyou)~Fire/Wind: Midnight Sun
Rank:S
chakra:40
Range:Area of effect(entire location)
Description:The user use's wind chakra to gather alot of air and flammable gas's to a small area, then ignite's it to create a sun. the Sun is very bright and and can make it seem like it's day even if it is night
Note: last's 5 turn's cause after 5 turn's the feul is completely used up. Also the user must first use a jutsu to create the flammable gas's.
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(houshasen atsusa tate)~Radiation Heat shield
Type

efence
Rank:B
Range:short, around the user.
chakra:25
Effect

rotection from heat and light
Description:The user creates barrier that absorbs heat and radiation from outside the barrier, protecting the user from radiated heat, and other forms of radiation(such as focused light etc). Most jutsu including fire jutsu will go through this shield as it only protects against heat and light. Useful up in high altitudes where there are lot's of light that come down on you and can burn you(sun burn's) and to protect against jutsu's that can blind you.
Note:Only work's against pure form's of heat and radiation.
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7
(kyousei houshasen atsusa tate)~Ultimate Radiation Heat shield
Type

efense
Rank:Forbidden
Range:cover's the user, and can also cover any summon's
Chakra:60
Effect

rotection from Heat, and radiation.
Description: This jutsu is a more powerful version of radiation heat shield. It protects from all form's of radiation, and heat. It can protect against heat's as high as 100 million degree's celcius, as well as lazer's and other concentrated forms of radiation. It protects against jutsu's that can blind you. Most jutsu's including fire jutsu will go through it as it only protects against heat and light. Also because of the large amount's of chakra being channeled through this jutsu, the user will burn their chakra network, and after 4 use's, the user's chakra network will have been too damaged to use chakra.
Note:10 damage to user with each use due to chakra burn. If it is used 4 time's, the user can no longer use chakra. Only work's against pure form's of heat and radiation.
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8
(kitai karada)~Gas Body
Rank:forbidden
Range:work's on self
Chakra

reduce's max chakra by 500
Description: The user create's a body made out of air that has the user's soul infused into it. The body can still hear, smell, and see because the specific tissue's required for them has still been preserved in the body(it still has the eyes, still has a mock nose, and some ear's, although the ear's and nose can't be seen). The body cannot disperse or the user will die, and in order to keep the body held together, this jutsu requires an extremely large amount of chakra. The body can still be seen because the large amount of chakra going throughout the body create's a sort of glow.
all fire jutsu's are super effective(plus 20 damage), immunity to lightning jutsu's up to A and S rank's, and all small solid projectiles will go through this body. because of the low boiling point of the gas's, freezing jutsu's don't have much effect.all other jutsu's have normal effect.
Note: this jutsu is irreversible and once it is preformed is in effect forever and all match's, can only be used by a legendary ninja, cannot disperse the body, cannot be used on other people, reduce's the number of jutsu usable per battle by 5 because of the amount of chakra required, and it reduce's the user's hp by 15
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