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I basically already did this with my make your own mangekyou sharingan thread lol.

Here it is.

Here you can make your own Sharingan concept, design, techniques, story and all.

Mine is a pentagram. The story for it goes that I was born with a twin sister and we both unlocked the mangekyou. She unlocked hers after her fiance was killed protecting her while I unlocked mine when my best friend and rival was killed in battle. Stricken from her grief, she went mad with her mangekyou on prisoners of war and finally her own troops and I was forced to combat and kill her. We both possessed identical mangekyous, thus the points for mine increased from five to ten when I took hers as a momento and to do good to make up for her sins. Hers went diagonally clockwise as a result of the fusion.

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Pentagrams in eastern and western cultures mostly symbolize the five elements and are used to ward off evil.

Techniques

1) Raijin
-As many I'm sure know, Raijin is the Shinto god of thunder and lightning. This technique is a combination of the sharingan's genjutsu and a ninjutsu. What it does is at the speed of sound and with a clear sight, the mangekyou injects the opponent with my chakra, however, instead of afflicting a genjutsu, the chakra is lightning elemental and amplifies the electrical synapses in the brain and body, causing unending electrical agony throughout both. My equivalent to Tsukuyomi.

2) Raiden
-Raiden is the chinese and japanese word for thunder and lighting. It is also another name for the aforementioned thunder god. This technique is the fastest and most powerful lightning technique, as it condenses all the chakra of Raijin into a plume that shoots from the eye at the speed of light, just like flying thunder god. It is so fast and sharp however that it does not electrocute, but instead completely incinerates or maims in an instant. My equivalent to
Amaterasu.

3) Fujin
-The Shinto god of wind. Combing my Raijin with my wind element, I create a movement technique that exceeds lightning flicker and engulfs me in lightning and wind, shocking and blowing away anything I come into contact with.

4) Base susano'o
-Takes the form of Kali, the Hindu goddess with four to six arms representing time and death and the consort to Shiva. It's color would be black with a white aura. One set of arms bears scimitars and the other tridents that can be thrown, causing large electrical explosions or storms that are so hot, they turn anything they come into contact with into brittle, razor sharp glass.

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5) Perfect Susano'o
-Takes the form of Durga, the omniscient form of the high mother goddess of Hinduism Shakti. She is known as the "inaccessible" and "the invincible" with ten arms, each with a different weapon. A trident, bow and arrow, lasso, scimitar, mace, a thunderbolt, a snake, an axe, a hammer, a goblet, a vajra, a shield, a bell, a lotus, yadda yadda yadda, she's got everything lols. Her tiger or lion she rides emits a sonic boom growl and the color of the susano'o would be a bright white with a black aura.

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6) Amatsu-Mikaboshi (Shinto god of the stars)
-mixing the water from the goblet and the wind from the lasso with the lightning of a trident, I hurl the trident into the clouds to distort the atmospheric pressure and create a gigantic comet of flame and ice hurling fast to the earth.

7) Magatama beads
-explosive like the other magatama, except that these leave a blinding flash of light that burn the eyes and keep them blurred for a long time.
 

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Well as long as everyone has an equal amount of points to spend, I doubt someone could become that much more powerful than the other. Everything would be balanced. Make it at least 1500 points or so, so that people can get closer to the character they REALLY want? Meh...

And fine, I will replace Itachis MS with the Byakugan... Meaning I have 20 extra points to spend... And I will use them on some Ninja Tools, the Sword and Shurikens.

But regardless, you have to admit bro, the Ninja I created is dope. He has the flair.. No Sage-Mode, No Clan, no OP Dojutsu techniques like Susanoo, but rather an arsenal full out of skill sets.. Think about it though, using Bringer of Darkness followed by 64 Palm.. Damn..
 

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Great thread.
This looks like fun.
The amount of points, 1300, seems to be a fair amount.

Here is my character:

Name:
Uzumaki Meowaziru.

Clan:
Uzumaki Clan.

Sage mode:
Toad sage mode-300.

Chakra nature:
Lightning-100.
Fire-100.

Jutsu:
FTG-100.
Shadow clone-70.
Chidori (All Variants)-90.
Lightning Beast Running-70.
Fire Dragon Flame Bullet-70.
Phoenix Sage Fire-60.

Summoning contract:
Toads-200.

Ninja tools:
Chakra blades-50.

Stats:
Taijutsu-10
Ninjutsu-10
Genjutsu-10.
Bukijutsu-10.
Intelligence-10
Speed-10.
Strength-10.
Stamina-10.
HandSeals-10.
Total stats-90.

Total:
1300 exactly.

My reasons for choosing these abilities for my character:
-I tryed to make an allround well balanced character with the 1300 points that I could spend.
The character has elemental attacks of both Lighting and Fire natures and has various other jutsus.

-Sage Mode increases all stats by +1 (bringing the stats to the max).
-I have ranged and close range jutsus.
-Speed and survivability (speed stats, FTG, Shadow clones and Sage mode).
-Sensing abilities for both offensive and defensive use (Sage mode).
-The toads as chosen summoning, allows me to have them as teammates assisting me in my fights.
-The FTG ability to teleport myself, other targets and attacks (gives extra versatility to the character).
-Chakra blades bring extra flavour to the character.

What do you think of my character?
 

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Well as long as everyone has an equal amount of points to spend, I doubt someone could become that much more powerful than the other. Everything would be balanced. Make it at least 1500 points or so, so that people can get closer to the character they REALLY want? Meh...

And fine, I will replace Itachis MS with the Byakugan... Meaning I have 20 extra points to spend... And I will use them on some Ninja Tools, the Sword and Shurikens.

But regardless, you have to admit bro, the Ninja I created is dope. He has the flair.. No Sage-Mode, No Clan, no OP Dojutsu techniques like Susanoo, but rather an arsenal full out of skill sets.. Think about it though, using Bringer of Darkness followed by 64 Palm.. Damn..
We are creating shinobi, not gods. Making it 1500 would make every character created rival current Naruto and Sasuke.
I might increase it it to 1500 by increasing the Base Stats cap limit to 30 and possibly add sensing as a skill.
My Guy is still better lol.
 

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Great thread.
This looks like fun.
The amount of points, 1300, seems to be a fair amount.

Here is my character:

Name:
Uzumaki Meowaziru.

Clan:
Uzumaki Clan.

Sage mode:
Toad sage mode-300.

Chakra nature:
Lightning-100.
Fire-100.

Jutsu:
FTG-100.
Shadow clone-70.
Chidori (All Variants)-90.
Lightning Beast Running-70.
Fire Dragon Flame Bullet-70.
Phoenix Sage Fire-60.

Summoning contract:
Toads-200.

Ninja tools:
Chakra blades-50.

Stats:
Taijutsu-10
Ninjutsu-10
Genjutsu-10.
Bukijutsu-10.
Intelligence-10
Speed-10.
Strength-10.
Stamina-10.
HandSeals-10.
Total stats-90.

Total:
1300 exactly.

My reasons for choosing these abilities for my character:
-I tryed to make an allround well balanced character with the 1300 points that I could spend.
The character has elemental attacks of both Lighting and Fire natures and has various other jutsus.

-Sage Mode increases all stats by +1 (bringing the stats to the max).
-I have ranged and close range jutsus.
-Speed and survivability (speed stats, FTG, Shadow clones and Sage mode).
-Sensing abilities for both offensive and defensive use (Sage mode).
-The toads as chosen summoning, allows me to have them as teammates assisting me in my fights.
-The FTG ability to teleport myself, other targets and attacks (gives extra versatility to the character).
-Chakra blades bring extra flavour to the character.

What do you think of my character?
Your characters very cool and OP lol.
 

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Making it 1500 would not make every character rival current Naruto and Sasuke at all. Not with your options, lol.
So it is definitely justified for it to be 1500 dude.

And man, my characters flair is unmatched. You see it? This Ninja flying in the air, cutting and bypassing countless rocks thrown at him by slicing them and rotating them away with the Byakugan, using Bringer of Darkness followed by a surprise 64 Palm... Using a Kunai to solo in Sword battles, all stats 10. And if pushed, the shiny Dust-release has unique resort.

If I had 1500 I would also add the Kusanagi Blade to the mix & FTG! Man, the flair and style of fighting would be unmatched. The design would be spot on.

#Bragging #Justified
 

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Making it 1500 would not make every character rival current Naruto and Sasuke at all. Not with your options, lol.
So it is definitely justified for it to be 1500 dude.

And man, my characters flair is unmatched. You see it? This Ninja flying in the air, cutting and bypassing countless rocks thrown at him by slicing them and rotating them away with the Byakugan, using Bringer of Darkness followed by a surprise 64 Palm... Using a Kunai to solo in Sword battles, all stats 10. And if pushed, the shiny Dust-release has unique resort.

If I had 1500 I would also add the Kusanagi Blade to the mix & FTG! Man, the flair and style of fighting would be unmatched. The design would be spot on.

#Bragging #Justified
I summon my demonic ice mirrors and activate my MS. I will appear in every mirror at once. You will have no choice but to look into my eyes at some point and be KO by my Tsukyomi...
 

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Hopefully in the upcomming days more people will create a shinobi.
It is fun to read what other people come up with and to see lots of different shinobi made in this thread.

Your characters very cool and OP lol.
Thanks.
I dunno if my character is OverPowered. It is pretty powerful for sure though.
It is roughly around Sage mode Naruto's lvl that he was vs Pain I guess.
My character doesnt have Fuuton Rasen Shuriken and Kurama like Naruto did, but I have 2 elements, Chidori instead of Rasengans, I can fuse with the sage toads (Naruto couldnt do that due to Kurama at that time) and I have FTG.

Making it 1500 would not make every character rival current Naruto and Sasuke at all. Not with your options, lol.
So it is definitely justified for it to be 1500 dude.

And man, my characters flair is unmatched. You see it? This Ninja flying in the air, cutting and bypassing countless rocks thrown at him by slicing them and rotating them away with the Byakugan, using Bringer of Darkness followed by a surprise 64 Palm... Using a Kunai to solo in Sword battles, all stats 10. And if pushed, the shiny Dust-release has unique resort.

If I had 1500 I would also add the Kusanagi Blade to the mix & FTG! Man, the flair and style of fighting would be unmatched. The design would be spot on.

#Bragging #Justified
I would prefer if the cap says at 1300.
With the cap at 1300, some really powerful characters can already be made, so it is high enough.
It is better that one has to choose for variation, like multiple jutsus, elements etc. and low on the amount of Kekkei Genkai abilities, or high on the amount of Kekkei Genkai abilities and little variation in terms of multiple jutsus, elements etc. It is good if there wont be ''can have it all'' options. I prefer if made characters wont turn out super hax and that the cap stays at 1300.

I summon my demonic ice mirrors and activate my MS. I will appear in every mirror at once. You will have no choice but to look into my eyes at some point and be KO by my Tsukyomi...
Look to the ground or fight with closed eyes :)?
Need Gai lvl taijutsu with looking at feet, Zabuza silent killing or sensing abilities like for example sage mode for this though.
 
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Hopefully in the upcomming days more people will create a shinobi.
It is fun to read what other people come up with and to see lots of different shinobi made in this thread.
Ill try and spread the word about this thread. I just changed some things tho so im going to have to make another character to see how it works. I might have to increase the cap just slightly.
 

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Ill try and spread the word about this thread. I just changed some things tho so im going to have to make another character to see how it works. I might have to increase the cap just slightly.
Maybe announce in the opening post too (or by PM) which changes you made, so people who have already posted a Shinobi know and than they can decide to make another character or to modify the one they have.
 

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Shinobi Name- Kenshin

No Specific Clan

Doujutsu- Byakugan 80

Kekkei Genkai- Shikotsumyaku 400

Nature Type- Lightning 100

Jutsu- FTG 100, Shadow Clone 70, Lightning Amour 80, Body Flicker 50, Lariat 80

Summoning Contract- Ninken 80

Tools- Kunai 30

Taijutsu-25
Ninjutsu-21
Genjutsu-18
Bukijutsu-20
Intelligence-19
Speed-23
Strength-24
Stamina-24
HandSeals-15
Sensing-21
Total Everything- 1300
 

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Name - Minato Namikaze
Dojutsu :-
Obito MS - 100
Sage Mode - None
Kekkei Genkai - Kamui ( Obito ) - 500
Chakra Nature - Lightning Release - 100
Jutsu - Chidori ( All Variants ) - 90 , Kirin - 100 , Lariat - 80
Summoning - Hawk - 80
Ninja Tools - Sword of Kusanagi - 100
Stats -
Taijutsu - 15
Ninjutsu - 15
Genjutsu - 15
Bukijutsu - 15
Intelligence - 15
Sensing - 15
Speed - 15
Strength - 15
Stamina - 15
Hand Seals - 15
Total = 1300
Btw since I have Obito's MS will I get his teleporting ability too?
 
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