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COPY NINJA OF KONOHA PART 4
Kakashi stood there stunned and almost frozen in fear, the hissing sound was coming from Saban but he didn’t seemed to be himself .suddenly he grasped the broken blade by the hilt a black chakra engulfed the blade.
Kakashi: (thinking) damn this guy is going to finish me now. Right now I am almost at my limit.
Saban dashed at him the blade gleaming in the dark black chakra but it was stopped before it could touch Kakashi. The blade had gone through Rin’s shoulder she was looking at Kakashi smiling.
Rin: once you and Obito saved me, this time I pay you back. Farewell my friend.
A scream tried to come out of Kakashi’s lungs as he saw Rin’s life slipping away just before his eyes.
Saban undaunted was preparing to strike again but this time his blade was blocked by Asuma’s chakra blade.
Asuma: Kakashi get up, you and Etsui try to formulate a plan while I try to hold this guy at bay.
The hissing voice: hold me off, I am really insulted you facing a power that has n bound you are facing the black elements. This is the power behind the tailed beasts menace. The negative energy gives rise to this power I can sense your fear and its making me stronger. Long ago in the time when the world of ninja’s didn’t even begin us, the elementals existed. But humans your greed and hatred corrupted us giving rise to the black elements our powers fused together to form the jubbi. (at this point Etsui and Asuma looked panicked but Kakashi seemed distant as if he wasn’t there)the hissing voice continued but then the good counter parts of our own retaliated they feared we would grasp power and destroy humanity, bah why should we care for them in the first place. You humans are worthless piece of vermin’s its due to you we got sealed by that brat, but his eyes it was something our brethren planted they named it “RINNENGAN”.
Asuma: what the hell they fought the sage of six paths himself and they formed jubbi. It doesn’t make sense
Etsui: no I believe it perfectly makes sense, the tailed beasts are full of menace hatred and chaos all the negative emotions, their elements are also more powerful than ours was there when the nine tails attacked our village it used wind and fire as its weapons but the wind felt heavy and accursed.
Asuma: but in spite of your insight we are f**ked here.
Etsui: no I guess not remember the sharingan of the uchicha’s.it is said to descend from the jubbi himself, that’s why a very strong uchicha say of the likes of itachi can control the black elements by some degree.
Asuma’s mind flashes back to his encounter with itachi.
Asuma: well itachi surely did some kind of jutsu that made Kakashi collapse.
Etsui: that must be tsyukomy meaning the power of torture or as far Jiriaya Sama’s report say the amaterasu the power of hatred. But the problem is without Sauske we are doomed unless Kakashi can somehow awaken his mangekyo.
Meanwhile in Kakashi’s mind………
“It’s so dark in here, I feel afraid, father, I don’t want to go I want to go back home.” A young Kakashi says to his father tugging at his hand the scene looked like its riverside where Kakashi used to do his trainings. Sakumo is seen walking beside his son, he kneels down beside his son looks into his eye,” remember son, never be afraid of darkness, light and darkness are all inside our own heart. Even I feel afraid sometimes but then I stand up and conquer the fear. You are the son of the white fang and one day you will inherit my powers and surpass me. You are named Hatake Kakashi after the strongest shinobi ever born in this clan. Though now none of us remain but today I want to take you to a very special place the graveyard of our fallen comrades.” The father led his son to a clearing in the konoha forest a place where many tombs were placed in the ground Sakumo showed them to Kakashi, ” see son this place is the graveyard of all of our ancestors the hatake blood line.” Young Kakashi stood amazed as he saw wolves appearing out of the forest and coming to them Sakumo caught his son’s eye “these are the guardians of our family graveyard. One day my grave will be here too and then you will carry on our legacy. Remember these words son when in doubt look in your heart seek for light in the darkness.”
…………….scene changes back to konoha academy the day of the chunin exam………
A shinobi was declaring the winner as Sakumo sat amongst the crowd. The academy shinobi,”this year only one genin has managed to pass the chunin exam and that too in an age so young that this might as well be a record. The winner is none other than Hatake Kakashi.”Kakashi came forward despite of the mask his pride and happiness was visible Sakumo showed him a thumbs up the third hokage rose from his chair and moved towards Kakashi and said holding his hands,” another generation has began the new leaves are growing soon they will replace the old ones. This day marks the beginning of a new era.” Kakashi proud and happy ran back to Minato and his team “sensei I did it. Now I am a chunin and soon I will be a Jounín too.” Minato said,”of course you will also out do me. For this day I will teach you a new jutsu I developed myself it is the strongest jutsu for a close combat but it’s not complete yet but may be you can complete this jutsu for me, I call it rasengan.”
………..scene change back to konoha market…………
Kakashi is seen waiting near the north gate thinking, “this is strange dad was supposed to come by now. He is never late for practice.” suddenly he heard people talking, “have you heard white fang has failed to assassinate the captain of the kumogakure’s army.” The other man replied,” yes it was such cowardly act and now konoha will have to pay for his cowardice. The raikage has ordered the assault already. May be white fang has betrayed us.” Kakashi yelled in rage,” shut up you bustards my dad will never betray our village.” But the question burned in his mind too “why dad abandoned the mission. Are they right is my dad a coward? No never “suddenly he heard a thud from the inside of the room he ran inside and saw his dad lying in a pool of blood he had committed suicide beside him lay a note that said
“Son, I don’t expect you to understand me now, but I want you to know that your father is not a coward nor is he a traitor, I am only guilty to you to desert you like this but you are strong I know you will make me proud, I am not coward if I had attacked that day then none of my comrade’s would have lived. So I did what I felt was right for me saving your comrades come first. Please forgive me and if you still believe it your loving father.”
…………..scene changed to the day Obito died……
“Remember Kakashi I will watch through you. My eye will watch over you always.” Obito said before taking his last breath.
……..scene changed to the day Minato died……..
Kakashi standing with baby Naruto in his arms, “I Hatake Kakashi promise you sensei. I will never let anything happen to your son.”
The memories faded Kakashi was seen sitting on his knees in a dark place he was crying,” I failed you I failed you all.” Another voice came from the darkness, “ no you haven’t my friend its time you open my eye to the true light your comrades are dying out there they cannot stop that monster on their own. Go save them redeem yourself.” Kakashi yelled, “Obito where are you?” the voice changed a deep brass voice said,” remember son always search for the light inside the darkness.” Then to Minato’s voice,” I entrust my will of fire to you Kakashi.” Rin’s voice came sweet and soothing,” Kakashi you haven’t failed us, you saved me many times it is time that I save you.”
Kakashi snapped awake he saw a huge black chakra was forming around Saban the chakra was taking the form of a dragon he saw Asuma lying on the ground his shoulder stained with blood Etsui panting rapidly the air was tense and full of malice as Saban released the chakra dragon Kakashi placed himself before the attack .And something happened the dragon began wrapping away and the black chakra was being pulled out of Saban’s body. As the entire black chakra was sucked out and wrapped Kakashi sank down his head whirling, “what was the power I just used it felt so ominous is it the true power of Obito’s eye.” Etsui shocked looked at Kakashi and notice the sharingan was now different instead of the usual three tomaoes it now showed three curved lines bent and joined in the centre he realized what it was. It was the MANGEKYO SHARINGAN the legendary eye power of the Uchicha clan.
Saban: what the hell happened? My chakra what happened to it? It’s gone, but what power can defeat the black elements of the underworld?
Etsui: this is the power of the mangekyo sharingan the true power of the Uchicha.
But Kakashi wasn’t listening his head was bursting with pain as his sharingan reverted back to normal three tomaoe state.
Kakashi: thank you Obito once again you saved me, but the rest I will take care myself
He pulled his headband over his right eye. And called out to saban
Kakashi: saban its time to end this fight in a true shinobi way no more power ups no more playing around just one final charge may the best man win.
Saban: bring it on brat I will show you that inspite of the similarity in looks you are a disgrace to family name to your father.
Next chapter Kakashi vs saban the final fight
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Kakashi stood there stunned and almost frozen in fear, the hissing sound was coming from Saban but he didn’t seemed to be himself .suddenly he grasped the broken blade by the hilt a black chakra engulfed the blade.
Kakashi: (thinking) damn this guy is going to finish me now. Right now I am almost at my limit.
Saban dashed at him the blade gleaming in the dark black chakra but it was stopped before it could touch Kakashi. The blade had gone through Rin’s shoulder she was looking at Kakashi smiling.
Rin: once you and Obito saved me, this time I pay you back. Farewell my friend.
A scream tried to come out of Kakashi’s lungs as he saw Rin’s life slipping away just before his eyes.
Saban undaunted was preparing to strike again but this time his blade was blocked by Asuma’s chakra blade.
Asuma: Kakashi get up, you and Etsui try to formulate a plan while I try to hold this guy at bay.
The hissing voice: hold me off, I am really insulted you facing a power that has n bound you are facing the black elements. This is the power behind the tailed beasts menace. The negative energy gives rise to this power I can sense your fear and its making me stronger. Long ago in the time when the world of ninja’s didn’t even begin us, the elementals existed. But humans your greed and hatred corrupted us giving rise to the black elements our powers fused together to form the jubbi. (at this point Etsui and Asuma looked panicked but Kakashi seemed distant as if he wasn’t there)the hissing voice continued but then the good counter parts of our own retaliated they feared we would grasp power and destroy humanity, bah why should we care for them in the first place. You humans are worthless piece of vermin’s its due to you we got sealed by that brat, but his eyes it was something our brethren planted they named it “RINNENGAN”.
Asuma: what the hell they fought the sage of six paths himself and they formed jubbi. It doesn’t make sense
Etsui: no I believe it perfectly makes sense, the tailed beasts are full of menace hatred and chaos all the negative emotions, their elements are also more powerful than ours was there when the nine tails attacked our village it used wind and fire as its weapons but the wind felt heavy and accursed.
Asuma: but in spite of your insight we are f**ked here.
Etsui: no I guess not remember the sharingan of the uchicha’s.it is said to descend from the jubbi himself, that’s why a very strong uchicha say of the likes of itachi can control the black elements by some degree.
Asuma’s mind flashes back to his encounter with itachi.
Asuma: well itachi surely did some kind of jutsu that made Kakashi collapse.
Etsui: that must be tsyukomy meaning the power of torture or as far Jiriaya Sama’s report say the amaterasu the power of hatred. But the problem is without Sauske we are doomed unless Kakashi can somehow awaken his mangekyo.
Meanwhile in Kakashi’s mind………
“It’s so dark in here, I feel afraid, father, I don’t want to go I want to go back home.” A young Kakashi says to his father tugging at his hand the scene looked like its riverside where Kakashi used to do his trainings. Sakumo is seen walking beside his son, he kneels down beside his son looks into his eye,” remember son, never be afraid of darkness, light and darkness are all inside our own heart. Even I feel afraid sometimes but then I stand up and conquer the fear. You are the son of the white fang and one day you will inherit my powers and surpass me. You are named Hatake Kakashi after the strongest shinobi ever born in this clan. Though now none of us remain but today I want to take you to a very special place the graveyard of our fallen comrades.” The father led his son to a clearing in the konoha forest a place where many tombs were placed in the ground Sakumo showed them to Kakashi, ” see son this place is the graveyard of all of our ancestors the hatake blood line.” Young Kakashi stood amazed as he saw wolves appearing out of the forest and coming to them Sakumo caught his son’s eye “these are the guardians of our family graveyard. One day my grave will be here too and then you will carry on our legacy. Remember these words son when in doubt look in your heart seek for light in the darkness.”
…………….scene changes back to konoha academy the day of the chunin exam………
A shinobi was declaring the winner as Sakumo sat amongst the crowd. The academy shinobi,”this year only one genin has managed to pass the chunin exam and that too in an age so young that this might as well be a record. The winner is none other than Hatake Kakashi.”Kakashi came forward despite of the mask his pride and happiness was visible Sakumo showed him a thumbs up the third hokage rose from his chair and moved towards Kakashi and said holding his hands,” another generation has began the new leaves are growing soon they will replace the old ones. This day marks the beginning of a new era.” Kakashi proud and happy ran back to Minato and his team “sensei I did it. Now I am a chunin and soon I will be a Jounín too.” Minato said,”of course you will also out do me. For this day I will teach you a new jutsu I developed myself it is the strongest jutsu for a close combat but it’s not complete yet but may be you can complete this jutsu for me, I call it rasengan.”
………..scene change back to konoha market…………
Kakashi is seen waiting near the north gate thinking, “this is strange dad was supposed to come by now. He is never late for practice.” suddenly he heard people talking, “have you heard white fang has failed to assassinate the captain of the kumogakure’s army.” The other man replied,” yes it was such cowardly act and now konoha will have to pay for his cowardice. The raikage has ordered the assault already. May be white fang has betrayed us.” Kakashi yelled in rage,” shut up you bustards my dad will never betray our village.” But the question burned in his mind too “why dad abandoned the mission. Are they right is my dad a coward? No never “suddenly he heard a thud from the inside of the room he ran inside and saw his dad lying in a pool of blood he had committed suicide beside him lay a note that said
“Son, I don’t expect you to understand me now, but I want you to know that your father is not a coward nor is he a traitor, I am only guilty to you to desert you like this but you are strong I know you will make me proud, I am not coward if I had attacked that day then none of my comrade’s would have lived. So I did what I felt was right for me saving your comrades come first. Please forgive me and if you still believe it your loving father.”
…………..scene changed to the day Obito died……
“Remember Kakashi I will watch through you. My eye will watch over you always.” Obito said before taking his last breath.
……..scene changed to the day Minato died……..
Kakashi standing with baby Naruto in his arms, “I Hatake Kakashi promise you sensei. I will never let anything happen to your son.”
The memories faded Kakashi was seen sitting on his knees in a dark place he was crying,” I failed you I failed you all.” Another voice came from the darkness, “ no you haven’t my friend its time you open my eye to the true light your comrades are dying out there they cannot stop that monster on their own. Go save them redeem yourself.” Kakashi yelled, “Obito where are you?” the voice changed a deep brass voice said,” remember son always search for the light inside the darkness.” Then to Minato’s voice,” I entrust my will of fire to you Kakashi.” Rin’s voice came sweet and soothing,” Kakashi you haven’t failed us, you saved me many times it is time that I save you.”
Kakashi snapped awake he saw a huge black chakra was forming around Saban the chakra was taking the form of a dragon he saw Asuma lying on the ground his shoulder stained with blood Etsui panting rapidly the air was tense and full of malice as Saban released the chakra dragon Kakashi placed himself before the attack .And something happened the dragon began wrapping away and the black chakra was being pulled out of Saban’s body. As the entire black chakra was sucked out and wrapped Kakashi sank down his head whirling, “what was the power I just used it felt so ominous is it the true power of Obito’s eye.” Etsui shocked looked at Kakashi and notice the sharingan was now different instead of the usual three tomaoes it now showed three curved lines bent and joined in the centre he realized what it was. It was the MANGEKYO SHARINGAN the legendary eye power of the Uchicha clan.
Saban: what the hell happened? My chakra what happened to it? It’s gone, but what power can defeat the black elements of the underworld?
Etsui: this is the power of the mangekyo sharingan the true power of the Uchicha.
But Kakashi wasn’t listening his head was bursting with pain as his sharingan reverted back to normal three tomaoe state.
Kakashi: thank you Obito once again you saved me, but the rest I will take care myself
He pulled his headband over his right eye. And called out to saban
Kakashi: saban its time to end this fight in a true shinobi way no more power ups no more playing around just one final charge may the best man win.
Saban: bring it on brat I will show you that inspite of the similarity in looks you are a disgrace to family name to your father.
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