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guys i have rewritten the entire chapter once more as i felt the last one was not upto the mark hope you enjoy this one more.. and please give your reviews
Jiriaya: no you are not going anywhere. Until I Jiriaya the toad sage the ever young and pervert (striking a pose) am finished with you
(Kakuzu looks bewildered.)
He lashed at the other guy but a black threaded hand blocked his path
Jiriaya: what the
Kakuzu: I will be your opponent sage Jiriaya. Ukito take out the kyuubi kid as fast as possible
Jiriaya: so be it (making hand seals) “fire style: flame bullet jutsu”
The fire bullet jutsu went past Kakuzu to hit the stranger but the fire was grasped by the hand of Kakuzu coming from underground. Suddenly Kakuzu was hit with a rasengan coming from behind.
Kakuzu was sent crashing along the ground,
Jiriaya: what happened finished already but then I am the great Jiriaya the legendary senin (striking another pose)
Kakuzu (standing up): shut up you fool, I don’t know why Itachi was afraid to go against you but you don’t scare me old man, you simply bore me.
Jiriaya: (smiling) then I won’t bore you anymore. In fact I won’t let you breath anymore, “fire release: fire stream jutsu”
A wave of fire went straight at Kakuzu and hit him.
Jiriaya: wait he did not defend himself why that means he is way stronger than he is letting know.
Suddenly a black threaded hand caught Jiriaya’s ankle from the underground.
Kakuzu: you really thought such a weak attack would be enough to take me out.
Jiriaya: (smiling) no I didn’t I merely wanted to test you.
A rasengan hit Kakuzu in the abdomen as Jiriaya erupted from the underground.
The clone held by Kakuzu’s hand went away in smoke.
Kakuzu: so you substituted yourself by the clone while you lurked underground I like this, really will be worth my time.
He tore away his akatsuki cloak and threw it onto the ground.
Kakuzu: now I can finally begin.
Black threads issued from his arm tying Jiriaya and throwing him away as Jiriaya landed on the ground a powerful punch came at him,
Jiriaya: you will need to do better than that akatsuki,
The punch was blocked at ease. Kakuzu aimed a kick at his head which Jiriaya ducked and kicked Kakuzu in the stomach.
Jiriaya: you are fast but not fast enough.
Kakuzu: we will see about that “earth release: impaling ground”
The spikes of rock erupted from the ground trying to impale Jiriaya.
Jiriaya: you still need to do better “needle jizo”
The hair around him grew and covered him the spikes hit the hair but broke upon contact.
Jiriaya: this technique allows me to block almost any piercing attacks but let’s see if you can block this attack “hell needles”
Hair as strong and sharp as metallic needles attacked Kakuzu but broke upon contact
Kakuzu: “earth release: earth spear” you are strong sage Jiriaya but you are forgetting I worked with orochimaru. Your pitiful techniques cannot defeat me. This time you see and learn to fear the might of akatsuki.
Four masks began emerging from his back.
Jiriaya: so this is the true form of you disgusting, to sink so low to use “earth grudge fear”. (Its time I get serious about this fight)
By now Kakuzu is seen surrounded by four ragdoll type structures each with a unique mask.
Kakuzu: it’s time to end your misery old fool.
The fire mask: fire release: great fire ball jutsu.
Jiriaya: fool using fire to counter a shinobi of land of fire making 3 hand seals in fast pace “fire release: fire dragon charge” a flaming dragon went straight at the fireball devouring it and growing in size.
Water mask: water release: hydro canon
A stream of high speed water hit the dragon there was an explosion.
Jiriaya: so he stopped my fire attack with an equally powerful water style jutsu. This fight is going to be messy.
At the same time the rest of the masks opened their mouth.
Wind mask: wind release: devastating pressure.
Lightning mask: lightning release: false darkness.
As Jiriaya dodged the heavily compressed ball of wind he was in the line of the lightning attack. To spears of lightning charged at him and there was a flash of light
Kakuzu: fu fu no one can escape that attack now to collect your heart.
But as the word finished his eyes widened in amazement as he saw Jiriaya lunging with a huge orb of spiraling chakra in end.
Jiriaya: odama rasengan.
The lightning mask: lightning release: false darkness.
The lightning hit the rasengan but was negated by its power it crashed straight into the mask shattering it in million pieces.
Kakuzu: (yelled) no!!! You bastard you destroyed one of my hearts.
Jiriaya: (while rising up to stand) I will destroy them all enough of fun this time you will learn to fear me.
His clothes half torn cuts and bruises here and there hands still full of blood form the clash but eyes burning with hate.
Suddenly a huge roar was heard from the hut.
Jiriaya: Naruto.
Kakuzu: looks like their fight has begun as well.
Jiriaya: good thing because you are going down.
Wiping the blood of his hand he placed his hand on the ground and roared “summoning jutsu”
Meanwhile with Naruto in the cottage
A frozen spike went through the clone of Jiriaya that stood there only to make it vanish.
Naruto: huh what just happened?
He turned around to face a stranger with blue eyes and bluish hair he was wearing a black cloak with red clouds on it.
Naruto: akatsuki so you came to get me huh but this time I will make you pay.
The chakra of kyuubi formed like a coat around him his eyes changed to that of the fox his canines sharpened.
Ukito: finally things get interesting,
In an instant Naruto appeared before him and dealt him a powerful punch.
Naruto: I will kill you bastard.
The chakra was growing in a fierce rate Ukito tried to block the punch but the punch was way faster than him.
He was sent crashing in the cottage.
Ukito: “ice release: frost cleaver slash”
A slash of icy chakra hit Naruto. His arms were frozen.
Ukito: what done already.
Naruto snarled as the chakra blasted the ice of his hands he came at Ukito with a terrible speed.
Ukito (barely dodging his punch): what his speed increased suddenly. It’s not good at all, I need to be careful.
He made several hand signs and roared “frost release: ice prison.”
Dozens of ice spikes came up from ground completely covering Naruto.
Ukito: you were good kid but too bad you were pitted against a person known as ice demon.
Naruto: “rasengan”
The ice prison was shattered as Naruto dashed out of it with a terrible speed a red shining orb in his hand a tail behind him chakra bubbling around as if boiling in rage
Ukito: very well, “frost release: frost dagger”
The moisture around his hand froze to from a dagger in both hands.
He lunged at Naruto but the dagger in his right hand shattered upon contact with the rasengan but the left dagger made a gash upon the chakra coat. Shockingly his blade melted upon contact
Naruto’s chakra shroud released a fierce shock wave that destroyed the stone statues in the courtyard in pieces as the rasengan smashed into Ukito’s shoulder crushing the bones in his that part.
Ukito: damn you bastard “frost release: fist of the ice demon”
He punched Naruto in the chest freezing the entire torso in the process.
Ukito: this is my signature attack I didn’t except a kid like you will push me to use my jutsu.
Naruto: why is this ice not breaking?
Ukito: this ice can endure the combined power of 10 Jounín ranked shinobi you are not a much to this power. It’s time to end this fight host of kyuubi.” Frost release: dragon lance.”
A lance with exquisite marking formed in his hand made of hard ice.
But before it could pierce Naruto and deal the finishing blow the ice in Naruto’s torso exploded.
A huge chakra was surrounding Naruto as if storm the ground in his feet began melting as the third tail appear out of the chakra shroud Naruto’s eyes turned red. He slashed his hand in a terrible speed which by then resembled a claw of kyuubi. The massive chakra destroyed the lance in to nothingness while a deep gash appeared in Ukito’s chest.
Ukito: damn the third tail he is going on a rampage I can’t hold him off.
Naruto roared a sonic roar. The roared sent Ukito flying in the house which was blown apart by the force Naruto’s roar. A crater showed the pat of the roar. Ukito rose from the rubble, staggering.
Ukito: I need Kakuzu’s help to defeat this brat, till then I better stop him. “Frost release: ultimate ice barrier.”
7 layers of huge ice glaciers rose from the ground separating Naruto from Ukito.
In the mean time in Konoha:
Kakashi is seen standing in front of the Uchicha temple. He was panting.
Kakashi: so my mangekyo power is unlocked by the deepest will to protect something, unbelievable the heritage of the uchicha, no doubt sharingan is the strongest of the konoha blood line limits.
A silhouette of a man limping is seen in the shadow of the trees ahead after a while Danzo came in to view.
Danzo: brilliant Kakashi, you have managed to pass the test of sharingan which many uchicha before you failed to do. It seems you skill with sharingan exceeds many of the uchicha clan members. But to the ultimate test mangekyo sharingan requires mental powers as much as the physical stamina. So it’s time to build up your mental strength.
Next chapter ending to the battle
part 7:
part 6:
chapter 5:
chapter 4:
chapter 3:
chapter 2:
chapter 1:
blood:gift of kiyoshi:
blood: gift of kiyoshi part 2:
COPY NINJA OF KONOHA CHAPTER 8
Kakuzu turned to face Jiriaya at the same time ordering his companion to go after Naruto.Jiriaya: no you are not going anywhere. Until I Jiriaya the toad sage the ever young and pervert (striking a pose) am finished with you
(Kakuzu looks bewildered.)
He lashed at the other guy but a black threaded hand blocked his path
Jiriaya: what the
Kakuzu: I will be your opponent sage Jiriaya. Ukito take out the kyuubi kid as fast as possible
Jiriaya: so be it (making hand seals) “fire style: flame bullet jutsu”
The fire bullet jutsu went past Kakuzu to hit the stranger but the fire was grasped by the hand of Kakuzu coming from underground. Suddenly Kakuzu was hit with a rasengan coming from behind.
Kakuzu was sent crashing along the ground,
Jiriaya: what happened finished already but then I am the great Jiriaya the legendary senin (striking another pose)
Kakuzu (standing up): shut up you fool, I don’t know why Itachi was afraid to go against you but you don’t scare me old man, you simply bore me.
Jiriaya: (smiling) then I won’t bore you anymore. In fact I won’t let you breath anymore, “fire release: fire stream jutsu”
A wave of fire went straight at Kakuzu and hit him.
Jiriaya: wait he did not defend himself why that means he is way stronger than he is letting know.
Suddenly a black threaded hand caught Jiriaya’s ankle from the underground.
Kakuzu: you really thought such a weak attack would be enough to take me out.
Jiriaya: (smiling) no I didn’t I merely wanted to test you.
A rasengan hit Kakuzu in the abdomen as Jiriaya erupted from the underground.
The clone held by Kakuzu’s hand went away in smoke.
Kakuzu: so you substituted yourself by the clone while you lurked underground I like this, really will be worth my time.
He tore away his akatsuki cloak and threw it onto the ground.
Kakuzu: now I can finally begin.
Black threads issued from his arm tying Jiriaya and throwing him away as Jiriaya landed on the ground a powerful punch came at him,
Jiriaya: you will need to do better than that akatsuki,
The punch was blocked at ease. Kakuzu aimed a kick at his head which Jiriaya ducked and kicked Kakuzu in the stomach.
Jiriaya: you are fast but not fast enough.
Kakuzu: we will see about that “earth release: impaling ground”
The spikes of rock erupted from the ground trying to impale Jiriaya.
Jiriaya: you still need to do better “needle jizo”
The hair around him grew and covered him the spikes hit the hair but broke upon contact.
Jiriaya: this technique allows me to block almost any piercing attacks but let’s see if you can block this attack “hell needles”
Hair as strong and sharp as metallic needles attacked Kakuzu but broke upon contact
Kakuzu: “earth release: earth spear” you are strong sage Jiriaya but you are forgetting I worked with orochimaru. Your pitiful techniques cannot defeat me. This time you see and learn to fear the might of akatsuki.
Four masks began emerging from his back.
Jiriaya: so this is the true form of you disgusting, to sink so low to use “earth grudge fear”. (Its time I get serious about this fight)
By now Kakuzu is seen surrounded by four ragdoll type structures each with a unique mask.
Kakuzu: it’s time to end your misery old fool.
The fire mask: fire release: great fire ball jutsu.
Jiriaya: fool using fire to counter a shinobi of land of fire making 3 hand seals in fast pace “fire release: fire dragon charge” a flaming dragon went straight at the fireball devouring it and growing in size.
Water mask: water release: hydro canon
A stream of high speed water hit the dragon there was an explosion.
Jiriaya: so he stopped my fire attack with an equally powerful water style jutsu. This fight is going to be messy.
At the same time the rest of the masks opened their mouth.
Wind mask: wind release: devastating pressure.
Lightning mask: lightning release: false darkness.
As Jiriaya dodged the heavily compressed ball of wind he was in the line of the lightning attack. To spears of lightning charged at him and there was a flash of light
Kakuzu: fu fu no one can escape that attack now to collect your heart.
But as the word finished his eyes widened in amazement as he saw Jiriaya lunging with a huge orb of spiraling chakra in end.
Jiriaya: odama rasengan.
The lightning mask: lightning release: false darkness.
The lightning hit the rasengan but was negated by its power it crashed straight into the mask shattering it in million pieces.
Kakuzu: (yelled) no!!! You bastard you destroyed one of my hearts.
Jiriaya: (while rising up to stand) I will destroy them all enough of fun this time you will learn to fear me.
His clothes half torn cuts and bruises here and there hands still full of blood form the clash but eyes burning with hate.
Suddenly a huge roar was heard from the hut.
Jiriaya: Naruto.
Kakuzu: looks like their fight has begun as well.
Jiriaya: good thing because you are going down.
Wiping the blood of his hand he placed his hand on the ground and roared “summoning jutsu”
Meanwhile with Naruto in the cottage
A frozen spike went through the clone of Jiriaya that stood there only to make it vanish.
Naruto: huh what just happened?
He turned around to face a stranger with blue eyes and bluish hair he was wearing a black cloak with red clouds on it.
Naruto: akatsuki so you came to get me huh but this time I will make you pay.
The chakra of kyuubi formed like a coat around him his eyes changed to that of the fox his canines sharpened.
Ukito: finally things get interesting,
In an instant Naruto appeared before him and dealt him a powerful punch.
Naruto: I will kill you bastard.
The chakra was growing in a fierce rate Ukito tried to block the punch but the punch was way faster than him.
He was sent crashing in the cottage.
Ukito: “ice release: frost cleaver slash”
A slash of icy chakra hit Naruto. His arms were frozen.
Ukito: what done already.
Naruto snarled as the chakra blasted the ice of his hands he came at Ukito with a terrible speed.
Ukito (barely dodging his punch): what his speed increased suddenly. It’s not good at all, I need to be careful.
He made several hand signs and roared “frost release: ice prison.”
Dozens of ice spikes came up from ground completely covering Naruto.
Ukito: you were good kid but too bad you were pitted against a person known as ice demon.
Naruto: “rasengan”
The ice prison was shattered as Naruto dashed out of it with a terrible speed a red shining orb in his hand a tail behind him chakra bubbling around as if boiling in rage
Ukito: very well, “frost release: frost dagger”
The moisture around his hand froze to from a dagger in both hands.
He lunged at Naruto but the dagger in his right hand shattered upon contact with the rasengan but the left dagger made a gash upon the chakra coat. Shockingly his blade melted upon contact
Naruto’s chakra shroud released a fierce shock wave that destroyed the stone statues in the courtyard in pieces as the rasengan smashed into Ukito’s shoulder crushing the bones in his that part.
Ukito: damn you bastard “frost release: fist of the ice demon”
He punched Naruto in the chest freezing the entire torso in the process.
Ukito: this is my signature attack I didn’t except a kid like you will push me to use my jutsu.
Naruto: why is this ice not breaking?
Ukito: this ice can endure the combined power of 10 Jounín ranked shinobi you are not a much to this power. It’s time to end this fight host of kyuubi.” Frost release: dragon lance.”
A lance with exquisite marking formed in his hand made of hard ice.
But before it could pierce Naruto and deal the finishing blow the ice in Naruto’s torso exploded.
A huge chakra was surrounding Naruto as if storm the ground in his feet began melting as the third tail appear out of the chakra shroud Naruto’s eyes turned red. He slashed his hand in a terrible speed which by then resembled a claw of kyuubi. The massive chakra destroyed the lance in to nothingness while a deep gash appeared in Ukito’s chest.
Ukito: damn the third tail he is going on a rampage I can’t hold him off.
Naruto roared a sonic roar. The roared sent Ukito flying in the house which was blown apart by the force Naruto’s roar. A crater showed the pat of the roar. Ukito rose from the rubble, staggering.
Ukito: I need Kakuzu’s help to defeat this brat, till then I better stop him. “Frost release: ultimate ice barrier.”
7 layers of huge ice glaciers rose from the ground separating Naruto from Ukito.
In the mean time in Konoha:
Kakashi is seen standing in front of the Uchicha temple. He was panting.
Kakashi: so my mangekyo power is unlocked by the deepest will to protect something, unbelievable the heritage of the uchicha, no doubt sharingan is the strongest of the konoha blood line limits.
A silhouette of a man limping is seen in the shadow of the trees ahead after a while Danzo came in to view.
Danzo: brilliant Kakashi, you have managed to pass the test of sharingan which many uchicha before you failed to do. It seems you skill with sharingan exceeds many of the uchicha clan members. But to the ultimate test mangekyo sharingan requires mental powers as much as the physical stamina. So it’s time to build up your mental strength.
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