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Getting to the battlefield and seeing the boy,kakuzu immediately spits a lightning spear aimed to pierce shino's belly killing him immediately.
As the spear leaves his mouth,he creates a fairly powerful jet of water from his hands.
(Suiton: Suihachi) – Water Release: Hand of waves
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: the user will produce a fairly powerful jet of water from the user's hand

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
 

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Seeing the approaching lightning spear of lightning, shino quickly switches position with a dead log of wood(that is 5 metres to his right) then he quickly uses the bugs on his body to form a replica of himself that runs towards kakuzu.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. The technique is a mix between high speed movement and the use of the transformation technique but has its limits.
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(Mushi Bunshin) - Bug Clone
Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:Creates a clone of the user out of bugs.
NOTE:Must be a bug user to use this jutsu.
 

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Immediately as the kid replaces to his new position,kakuzu simply increases the number of spears by branching them from the main spear,coupled with sheer lightning speed, 5 spears emits from the main spears aimed at the boy in his new position to pierce and electrocute his whole body,killing him
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CHECKING THIS !!!!
 

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As shino sees the spear release 5 more, quickly makes an handseal and makes a wall of lightning in front of himself which cancels the only one spear coming in his direction then he later controls the bugs in his body to form a replica of himself that runs towards kakuzu.
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(Raiton: Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Release Wall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.
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(Mushi Bunshin) - Bug Clone
Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:Creates a clone of the user out of bugs.
NOTE:Must be a bug user to use this jutsu.
 

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S rank attack to B rank defense, i think its impossible
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As the kid makes the wall of lightning,kakuzu simply discharges lightning into the sky as he lifts his hands and makes lightning strike shino immediately without hesistation,electrocuting him without stress.
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(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.
 

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Hey, the s-rank splitted into 6 making each of them c-rank.
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As shino sees kakuzu pointing the sky, shino quickly leaps to the back(3 metres to the back)(escaping the lightning) spitting 3 fire balls in mid-air that moves towards kakuzu and forms geyser of fire that burns kakuzu. And as shino lands(the fireballs are 4 metres away from kakuzu) shino makes the required handseals, making 4 pillars to erect around kakuzu, release a barrage of ligtning to strike kakuzu then shino says "just because we are both in the same costume doesn't mean that ill have mercy on you"
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( Katon: Gōenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.
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(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.
 

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You should learn to read : i said immediately you made the wall of lightning,i strike you with kiba. The spliting of the spear is passive as it does not count as one of my move
 

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Hey, the s-rank splitted into 6 making each of them c-rank.
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As shino sees kakuzu pointing the sky, shino quickly leaps to the back(3 metres to the back)(escaping the lightning) spitting 3 fire balls in mid-air that moves towards kakuzu and forms geyser of fire that burns kakuzu. And as shino lands(the fireballs are 4 metres away from kakuzu) shino makes the required handseals, making 4 pillars to erect around kakuzu, release a barrage of ligtning to strike kakuzu then shino says "just because we are both in the same costume doesn't mean that ill have mercy on you"
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( Katon: Gōenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.
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(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.
You just died.
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Your jutsu states thus : "THE USER JUMPS IN THE AIR and shoots three giant bullet of fire"
While my lightning jutsu comes from above ( sky ).
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The kiba continues and as you jump up into the air, lightning strikes you back to the ground before you release your bullets of fire.
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Try reading descriptions correctly next time.
 

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The description says jumps to the air, not specifying that i have to jump up in a straight line so by leaping backwards, i still jump into the air(escaping the lightning strike).
Bros read properly with your eyes before jumping into conclusion.
 

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Do you even know RP or even NARUTO. "How dumb can you be"
A jutsu states that the user jumps in the air and shoots bullets of fire. And you are saying that you dont have to jump in the air since you choose to leap back wards.
Do you remember the episode where itachi and nagato were fighting killer bee and naruto. The particular fire jutsu that itachi did by jumping up is specifically the one you did. "Argh, why do you have to be this 000B
 
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