[Closed & Official] Revenge

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The terrain is a plain field with a small cluster of trees to the left (your right) and a large river to the right.(your left)
Killing/Stealing is on

This is for leaving Suna, Good Luck.

Mangetsu: Nothing like the smell of a traitor in the morning, I'll allow you to make the 1st move if you wish to delay the inevitable. :devil:

To all: This is an official fight so please don't spam.
 

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"You would like me to go first? I'd be happy to oblige..."

-As the last word leaves his mouth, Killua causes the earth to start shaking around you. It throws you off damage and does some damage. It also leaves you distracted, while that happens Killua Causes two sections of rock to rise up on your left and right side. They do no damage, but they do inhibit your movement extremely. Finally, Killua causes spikes to protrude from the seemingly harmless sections of rock which impale you all over your body killing you instantly.-

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.



(Doton: Dāchiganshō) - Earth Release: Ground Bedrock
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: After forming the necessary seal Snake, the user creates two walls of earth and traps their target in between them.



(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target

 

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"You would like me to go first? I'd be happy to oblige..."

-As the last word leaves his mouth, Killua causes the earth to start shaking around you. It throws you off damage and does some damage. It also leaves you distracted, while that happens Killua Causes two sections of rock to rise up on your left and right side. They do no damage, but they do inhibit your movement extremely. Finally, Killua causes spikes to protrude from the seemingly harmless sections of rock which impale you all over your body killing you instantly.-

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.



(Doton: Dāchiganshō) - Earth Release: Ground Bedrock
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: After forming the necessary seal Snake, the user creates two walls of earth and traps their target in between them.



(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target

Sorry I took a while, I was busy with School work and village stuff.


Knowing his opponents a Nara, Mangetsu keeps an eye on his opponent's shadow at all times. As the ground underneath him starts to shake, making him lose his balance, Mangetsu activates his clan's signature jutsu to turn his body into liquid. This jutsu required no hand-seals and is almost instantaneous. Therefore it can be activated during the shaking. It prevents Mangetsu from getting hurt by the shaking and allows him to keep his balance since his fluid body feels the vibrations a lot less. Afterwards a wall of earth appears from each of Mangetsu's sides. Due to his liquid from Mangetsu walks forwards and squeezes between the 2 earth walls, escaping the binding. He has gotten a bit closer to you but is still in mid-range.

(Suiton: Suika no Jutsu) – Water Release: Hydrification Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to liquefy the whole body at will, this technique makes it impossible to receive damage from physical attacks. From a single hair to the skin and muscles, everything can be liquefied and solidified at will. Be it to evade an enemy's attack during a short range battle, to infiltrate a structure, or to launch a surprise attack in a liquefied state, this technique boasts a high strategic value. Using this, the user can also re-shape their body parts for suitable situations. The only way to contain a user of this technique is to lock them up in an airtight container so they cannot move about. When the user passes out, they turn into a jelly-like state. As this technique turns the body into water, the user is vulnerable to lightning techniques. The Second Mizukage when using this technique has a more oily state allowing it to into Gaara's sand element and nullify the techniques. (this oily ability can only be used by the Second Mizukage).
Note: Can only be used by members of the Hozuki Clan.



After escaping the earth walls Mangetsu strings togather a few hand-seals and slams his hand to the ground. Suddenly small pieces of earth underneath you glow a bright blue. 1 of the pieces immediately shoots up and makes a flesh wound on your leg, drawing some blood and coming back to Mangetsu. The other pieces wait ready to attack in-case the initial one misses. You may still do the Earth spikes but they'll harmlessly pass through my liquid body.

Earth Style: Small Cutters(Doton: Kogata kattā)
Rank: A
Range: All at the same time
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: near nothing
Description: The user does 3 hand-seals and slams his hand into the ground. His chakra quickly travels through the surface of the earth and covers the entire field. Then the user makes small pieces of earth come out of the ground(4cm^3). They glow blue because of the users chakra infused within the earth. One attacks the opponent making a small flesh wound on his/her skin(deals as little damage as a bee sting). Then the small piece of earth with the opponents blood comes back to the user's hand. The user can create multiple earth pieces come and hit multiple opponents, no more then 1 piece can hit 1 target. The user can make pieces all around the opponent to hit him/her if he/she tries to escape. The main reason for this attack would be to draw out blood and get a sample so a summon with a sensitive nose can track the opponent. Also the user can use this on his/herself to inflict pain and escape weak genjutsu. (only D-rank)
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*The attack doesn't disperse clones
*Hidan bios and bios with blood CE can't use this jutsu



Mangetsu quickly follows by making a gigantic hand of water rise up from your side of the lake. The hand comes down from above like a hammer and slam into you into the ground. For reference, the hand is about 5m big. Thanks to Mangetsu's affinity in water the hand happens right after the earth cutters with no delay.

Water: Giant Hand (suiton:kyojin hando)
Type:Attack/Supplemantry
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60(+5 with lightning)
Description:The user creates a giant hand out of water that can be hard for a punch or sharp to act as a claw it can also be used to grab the enemy. Can be mixed with lightning techniques to make it stronger.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan



Mangetsu: You wasted your only chance to get me, now try your best to defend as I take on the offensive.
 

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-As the earth glows blue, Killua knows that something is coming. Not knowing what, when the earth cuts his leg as a reflex he causes an un focused stream of lightning to flow around his body protecting him, and at the same time destroying your other earth spikes along with the one with my blood on it. Then, seeing the water Killua quickly creates a dome of earth to block the water.While in the dome and unknown to you, Killua creates a puddle of water underneath you (you would not notice it being in your liquid state). I then cause raiton to erupt from the puddle and zap you, electrocuting and killing you instantly.

"Hmm pity we were friends in Suna..."

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

(Doton: Iwa Enchou no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth Dome Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user creates a dome of earth, which protects them from external attacks. The domes shape is in a similar fashion to wood release: wood locking walls. That creates a half face dome.

(Raiton: Horyu Raika no Jutsu) – Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.
 

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sorry for spam but shouldn't this be in ninja world mate?
There are lots of spammers in the NW and also you need to travel and stuff, this is much simpler and serves the same purpose.

-As the earth glows blue, Killua knows that something is coming. Not knowing what, when the earth cuts his leg as a reflex he causes an un focused stream of lightning to flow around his body protecting him, and at the same time destroying your other earth spikes along with the one with my blood on it. Then, seeing the water Killua quickly creates a dome of earth to block the water.While in the dome and unknown to you, Killua creates a puddle of water underneath you (you would not notice it being in your liquid state). I then cause raiton to erupt from the puddle and zap you, electrocuting and killing you instantly.

"Hmm pity we were friends in Suna..."

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

(Doton: Iwa Enchou no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth Dome Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user creates a dome of earth, which protects them from external attacks. The domes shape is in a similar fashion to wood release: wood locking walls. That creates a half face dome.

(Raiton: Horyu Raika no Jutsu) – Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.
Note: I looked into the Discharge Calamity, according to both the Narutopedia and a video of the jutsu the lightning still has to travel from you to me as an attack, it doesn't just appear under me.


After the creation of the dome Mangetsu sees a current of lightning, which breaks the weakened earth dome, traveling through the ground from you to him. He notices the current fairly quickly since he was constantly looking at the ground to keep tabs on your shadow. (the lightning travels above ground but on the ground) His quick notice of the lightning allows him to easily respond before the lightning can reach the water underneath him.(he doesn't know about the water) With a single hand-seal, Mangetsu takes a deep breath and exhales a large blast of fire which destroys the lightning and continues on to you.

(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.



AS your vision is blocked by the fire and you can't see him, Mangetsu jumps diagonally back to the left(your right) into long range. While you still can't see him, Mangetsu slams his foot to the ground and makes a single hand-seal. Later on he breaths fire to the ground, which has formed a tunnel by now and makes Lava appear under your last known location. Burning you to crisps, if you weren't already burned by the previous fire jutsu.

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.



Finally Mangetsu makes a quick "+" hand-seal and makes 3 clones: MC1, MC2 and MC3. MC1 charges at you with a curved path from the right. He runs on the lake on his way to you. Meanwhile MC2 runs at you in a semi-circle from the left, through the trees. MC3 stands under Mangetsu's real body who is on MC3's shoulders with his feet.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.



Mangetsu: This is getting exciting, you may be worthy pray after all.
 

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There are lots of spammers in the NW and also you need to travel and stuff, this is much simpler and serves the same purpose.


Note: I looked into the Discharge Calamity, according to both the Narutopedia and a video of the jutsu the lightning still has to travel from you to me as an attack, it doesn't just appear under me.


After the creation of the dome Mangetsu sees a current of lightning, which breaks the weakened earth dome, traveling through the ground from you to him. He notices the current fairly quickly since he was constantly looking at the ground to keep tabs on your shadow. (the lightning travels above ground but on the ground) His quick notice of the lightning allows him to easily respond before the lightning can reach the water underneath him.(he doesn't know about the water) With a single hand-seal, Mangetsu takes a deep breath and exhales a large blast of fire which destroys the lightning and continues on to you.

(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.



AS your vision is blocked by the fire and you can't see him, Mangetsu jumps diagonally back to the left(your right) into long range. While you still can't see him, Mangetsu slams his foot to the ground and makes a single hand-seal. Later on he breaths fire to the ground, which has formed a tunnel by now and makes Lava appear under your last known location. Burning you to crisps, if you weren't already burned by the previous fire jutsu.

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.



Finally Mangetsu makes a quick "+" hand-seal and makes 3 clones: MC1, MC2 and MC3. MC1 charges at you with a curved path from the right. He runs on the lake on his way to you. Meanwhile MC2 runs at you in a semi-circle from the left, through the trees. MC3 stands under Mangetsu's real body who is on MC3's shoulders with his feet.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.



Mangetsu: This is getting exciting, you may be worthy pray after all.
-As the fire comes closer, Killua's eyes become empty. He now wants nothing more than to kill this man. Killua forms a chidori in his arm, and causes it to spread from his outwards neutralizing the fire. He then sees you blowing fire into the ground, thinking quickly he channels wind chakra into his arm and punches the ground, but he does it with his left so that he launches himself back into long range. He then sees the clones, and as he does he spins his head around launching several blades of wind that strike each clone.-

(Can't link the jutsu)
 
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-As the fire comes closer, Killua's eyes become empty. He now wants nothing more than to kill this man. Killua forms a chidori in his arm, and causes it to spread from his outwards neutralizing the fire. He then sees you blowing fire into the ground, thinking quickly he channels wind chakra into his arm and punches the ground, but he does it with his left so that he launches himself back into long range. He then sees the clones, and as he does he spins his head around launching several blades of wind that strike each clone.-

(Can't link the jutsu)
I'm assuming you used these jutsus, correct?
(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

(Fūton: Shinkū Renpa) – Wind Release: Serial Waves
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing a the required hand seals Rat → Snake → Horse → Dog theuser takes a deep breath and exhales several blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. The power of this technique can be dramatically enhanced when utilised in conjunction with the effects of extreme suction, such as that generated by the Baku, where the augmented attack proved effective enough to even slice through the defences of a complete Susanoo.


The blades of wind pass through MC1 and MC2's bodies without any harm thanks to the hydrification jutsu. They continue running at you while creating their attacks. MC1 makes a few hand-seals thanks to his specialty with water jutsu and creates a giant dragon that rises from the river he's running on. The water dragon attacks you from your left(my right) and deals quite a damage.

(Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.
Note: Requires a water source to use.



At the same time as MC1, MC2 also makes a single tiger hand-seal and spews out 3 large dragons of fire. 1 of these dragons attack you from the right side (my left). The other one attacks you from behind to prevent you from running back like last turn. The final dragon comes from above leaving you with nowhere to run.

(Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.




Meanwhile Mangetsu's original body jumps of the shoulder MC3 and slams his hands to the ground. This creates a very large swamp underneath you, trapping you as you get hit by the Water and Fire dragons.


(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.



Mangetsu: That should do it.

Sorry for grammar/spelling mistakes and lack of RP or tactics. I had to make this in a hurry.
 

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-As the clones continue to surround him, a small smirk shows itself upon Killua's face. Everything was going according to plan. As the clones surround me, they each begin to use a jutsu. As the fire and water close in, Killua knows that you can't see him for a brief instant as one of the fires is on the same side as the water and he is surrounded. This leaves nowhere to go but down. He goes down into the ground extremely silently and quickly. This happens less than a second before the jutsu collide. As he is underground, the fire and water hit eachother creating a very thick steam, which you cannot see through. The other mangetsu clone then makes his swamp somewhere behind Killua. Killua realizes that you and your clones would be extremely focused on the clearing steam, to confirm that your jutsu hit. He uses that moment, emerging silently behind the real mangetsu he causes a chidori to extend from his hand piercing the hozuki through the skull, killing mangetsu before he even knows what happened. This would also cause his clones to disperse.-

(Doton: Dochū Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.



(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

 
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