[Closed] Mox vs. McRazy

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Terrain: Forest with a lake in between the both of us, essentially separating us.
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> Sloan Kiyoshi <, post your bio and I will start. May the best shinobi win!
 

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Ngl Kiana is such a dope looking character. I wish I could just make OC like you. Or even if you didn't make it, edit like you lol.



Sloan approached the pale woman, where only a lake would stand between them. And in the ninja world, that wasn't much... "So... I assume we proceed with violence?.." Sloan asked the pale lady. One of them had to go. And Sloan was not sure which... Not wasting much time, Sloan jumped into the air and waved her hand beneath her, creating a platform of energy that would allow her to float into the air, taking the high ground against the pale character however not high enough to induce damage shall she fell or need to jump off and back to the ground.

(Kiyoshipou: Fuhenteki Kanshou)- Kiyoshi Art: Universal Song
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A (D-A)
Range: Long-Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: Depends
Description: The universal technique known to all Kiyoshi Clan members that have received training. This technique can activate immediately when the battle begins or whenever the user wishes. The user accesses their chakra, making energy and pure chakra so that they can manipulate it for many uses, even outside of battle (making a cloud of energy to ride on; making a key out of energy to pick a lock). The amount of energy and the power of the energy depends on the user’s rank in the Kiyoshi Clan (Novices will have extremely weak energy while Sages will have extremely powerful energy). The color of the energy can change with the user’s mood, but only when they have learned to become in tune with the energy. Color is insignificant for this technique; it just gives everyone’s own technique its uniqueness.
~Must be at least a Kiyoshi Novice to use.

She would then inhale deeply and exhale while weaving a seal. In turn, an extending and rather thick spear of volcanic storm release would stem from her mouth, aiming to pierce and burst all over the pale lady.

(Kazan Arashi: Ikari no Orinposu)Volcanic Storm Release: Wrath of Olimpos
Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: D-S (B)
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:10-40
Damage:20-80
Description:Volcanic Storm release: Wrath of Olimpos is the basic usage technique of the Element. The user will channel their chakra, weaving the necessary hand seals for each rank, and produce various constructs, waves, blasts ect of Volcanic storm, either from their hands/body, from pre-existing Volcanic Storm entities, or through the ground. The shape and size of these various constructs can be anything you user imagines, so long as the necessary requirements have been produced.

Notes:
A-rank constructs can be created four times per battle, and S-rank constructs can be created thrice
-B rank requires 1 Handseal, A rank 2 handseals, and S rank 3 Handseals.
-S rank constructs require One turn cooldown between usages
-Constructs Cannot exceed a 10x10m overall size.
 

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Ngl Kiana is such a dope looking character. I wish I could just make OC like you. Or even if you didn't make it, edit like you lol.



Sloan approached the pale woman, where only a lake would stand between them. And in the ninja world, that wasn't much... "So... I assume we proceed with violence?.." Sloan asked the pale lady. One of them had to go. And Sloan was not sure which... Not wasting much time, Sloan jumped into the air and waved her hand beneath her, creating a platform of energy that would allow her to float into the air, taking the high ground against the pale character however not high enough to induce damage shall she fell or need to jump off and back to the ground.

(Kiyoshipou: Fuhenteki Kanshou)- Kiyoshi Art: Universal Song
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A (D-A)
Range: Long-Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: Depends
Description: The universal technique known to all Kiyoshi Clan members that have received training. This technique can activate immediately when the battle begins or whenever the user wishes. The user accesses their chakra, making energy and pure chakra so that they can manipulate it for many uses, even outside of battle (making a cloud of energy to ride on; making a key out of energy to pick a lock). The amount of energy and the power of the energy depends on the user’s rank in the Kiyoshi Clan (Novices will have extremely weak energy while Sages will have extremely powerful energy). The color of the energy can change with the user’s mood, but only when they have learned to become in tune with the energy. Color is insignificant for this technique; it just gives everyone’s own technique its uniqueness.
~Must be at least a Kiyoshi Novice to use.

She would then inhale deeply and exhale while weaving a seal. In turn, an extending and rather thick spear of volcanic storm release would stem from her mouth, aiming to pierce and burst all over the pale lady.

(Kazan Arashi: Ikari no Orinposu)Volcanic Storm Release: Wrath of Olimpos
Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: D-S (B)
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:10-40
Damage:20-80
Description:Volcanic Storm release: Wrath of Olimpos is the basic usage technique of the Element. The user will channel their chakra, weaving the necessary hand seals for each rank, and produce various constructs, waves, blasts ect of Volcanic storm, either from their hands/body, from pre-existing Volcanic Storm entities, or through the ground. The shape and size of these various constructs can be anything you user imagines, so long as the necessary requirements have been produced.

Notes:
A-rank constructs can be created four times per battle, and S-rank constructs can be created thrice
-B rank requires 1 Handseal, A rank 2 handseals, and S rank 3 Handseals.
-S rank constructs require One turn cooldown between usages
-Constructs Cannot exceed a 10x10m overall size.
I, uhm... Cough... Stole it... Cough
But I've edited some things so thank you :)
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What a waste of a move, thought Kiana to herself. If she kept a top 10 list of worst battle openers this one would rank high. She had high hopes for this kunoichi from the moment she laid eyes on her prettiness, but this was an unpleasant surprise. Not only did this move not serve any offensive purpose giving Kiana an opening and advantage for her own, but it also immediately revealed the ace up her sleeve, her Clans ability. Having fought many Kiyoshi in her lifetime, Kiana was able to recognize that energy which would ultimately help her in assembling her battle strategy going forward. Since her Byakugan was passively always active, Kiana saw her opponent channel chakra which she at first assumed would be an offensive action like any normal ninja would do so she instinctively reacted to it. It was only after she performed her own technique that she realized how her opponent wasted her move. This line of thought brought her to the obvious conclusion that the next opponents technique would have to be an assault and Kianas technique would have at best a 50% chance of success, so it wasn't much to lose but a lot to gain.

With a single handseal of her own, acting on her opponents action of gathering chakra, jumping and then the hand movement, Kiana placed her opponent in an illusion where her opponents next technique could possibly backfire if the requirements were met. With a bit of stupid luck, if you will, her opponent did just that. The volcanic stream would be spewed outwards and would immediately backfire, burning the opponent on her beautiful lips, scorching the thick lipstick and liquefying those expensive fillers. This would be possible due to the illusion tricking the opponents mind into exaggerating her own technique, spewing too much of the volcanic storm at once. By seeing the amount of chakra gathered with her Byakugan, Kiana could assume that the damage sustained wouldn't be much but it would at least serve as a distraction which allowed Kiana to follow up with a proper assault of her own.

(Dōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All Seeing White Eye (Passive)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15 (+5 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description: The kekkei genkai intrinsic to both the Hyūga and Ōtsutsuki clans—descendants of Kaguya Ōtsutsuki. Those who possess this dōjutsu have it manifested as eyes with featureless white irides and no visible pupils. And when activated, the pupils become more distinct and the veins near their temples bulge. To activate the dōjutsu, Hyuga but not Ōtsutsuki clan members are initially obliged to use a rather long and specific sequence of handseals: Horse → Tiger → Boar → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar → Snake. But once activated, the dōjutsu user is endowed with a range of skills.

To start, an activated Byakugan gives the user a near 360º diameter field of vision bar one blind spot at the back of the neck, above the first thoracic vertebra. Its vision can penetrate through any solid objects or obstructions, and likewise remains unaffected by blinding interferences. But that being said, certain barriers and the like may distort its perception. In addition, it is able to follow high-speed movements, which enables those with this dōjutsu to analyze their foes' actions and better react to them. The Byakugan is also able to see chakra to a higher degree than the Sharingan and ergo, identify where a person's chakra signature originates from. Beyond that, it can discern certain types of clones from the real person. And its ability to see chakra is in fact so acute that those who possess this dōjutsu are even able to see the chakra pathway system and the 361 tenketsu that comprise it. The Hyūga clan has gone so far as to develop their unique Gentle Fist style in order to capitalize on this particular ability.

Note: Hyuga clan bios of at least Sannin rank become able to passively activate their dōjutsu upon one month having passed since Gentle Fist training concluded. Ōtsutsuki bios never need to expend a move in order to activate it.
Note: While traversing the NW, bios with activated Byakugan are able to see up to two 2 adjacent landmarks away while those of sage rank can see as far as three away, but this doesn't extend beyond an ocean landmark.
(Genjutsu: Saru no Sobaeru) Illusion Technique: Prankster Monkey
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user preforms 1 handseal, casting a genjutsu that affects the opponents' brain, making him loose control over his own techniques, by exaggerating on the proportions of said technique. For example, if the person goes to spit a fireball, the stream that is spat is bigger than usual, burning the face and anything near it. Or when the person runs electricity through his the body, loss of control makes it short-circuit and shock the body. Or when the user encases him/herself in earth, the earth constricts around the body, harming and preventing breathing. This does not serve to augment the damage of the technique, if the opponent manages to fulfill the technique, it just makes it backfire. This genjutsu doesn't work on every technique nor on every situation, the user must balance the usage of this technique with situations where increasing the technique would make it backfire. Only one jutsu is affected by the technique, the following ones will not be.
*The genjutsu will only affect people from the same rank and bellow. Sharingan users or other Genjutsu specialists will be able to affect one rank above*
With the kunoichi revealing her ability, Kiana was able to still keep her own a secret for now, albeit her pale skin and deadly white eyes could give it away to anyone that can put 2+2 together. Nevertheless, Kiana wouldn't hold back. In fact, she read the situation and clapped her hands together followed by a stomp. The ground opened in multiple cracks and from it, waxy Capsaicin shot out like geysers all across the battlefield. As it was Kianas doing, she had the ability to control how the cracks appeared and as such she managed to control the geysers around her opponent to aim at her in various angles and directions so that they would cover the opponent completely as well as cover all escape routes, should she use the flying saucer to escape like a coward. The reality became agonizing quickly.

"Indeed, violence is it, pretty." she said hoping to hear a scream in response.

Kapusaichinton: Keisan Sa Reta Wareme | Capsaicin Release: Canny Crevices
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short to Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Canny Crevices is a justu based on the main release of Capsaicin. Specifically, on the high SHU variant that is used to harm enemies. To execute the jutsu the user claps his hands together while releasing his Capsaicin chakra into the ground and using the present earth beneath the surface to mold it into the sticky and waxy substance of Capsaicin. A brief moment later the user stomps his foot on the ground, forcing the Capsaicin to build up and crack the surface of the earth due to the pressure, causing the Capsaicin to blast through the cracks and shoot onto the battlefield like geysers. With care and control the user can direct the bursts as well as control the cracks in order to optimize the Capsaicin release from beneath the surface and stay away from direct harm. If the opponent would be caught by the Capsaicin, the substance would stick to him and penetrate his clothing. The Capsaicin would cripple the opponent by overwhelming his nerves and due to it sticking even to his clothes it would present itself as a trouble for removing the Capsaicin. An affected opponent would quickly fall into agony which would very soon be his demise due to the agressive nature of Capsaicin. Thanks to its sticky and burning properties it would momentarily start spreading the burning sensation through the opponents body. The reacting neurons would start firing calcium ions at the brain uncontrollably, overwhelming the opponents brain with signals of agonyzing pain. When a target is bound by this, due to the pain their reaction times are reduced by 2 ranks, losing a rank per turn if they don't release themselves.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
 
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