[Closed] Attempt No.2
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HP - 100
Chakra - 1000
Tracking - 40
Speed - 20
Chakra - 1000
Tracking - 40
Speed - 20
Kiko's Mistake
Kiko Who had been staying in Thousand Needles, within the Air Nation, had been hearing some commotion for a while, in the lands close to her she had been hearing rumour's of a strange young man nearby, seemingly arguing with himself, he was getting awfully close to the Air Nation, Knowing this Kiko had set out to check the situation, and low and behold here was a man not far from her now which seemed to meet descriptions.. she could not be fully sure however so she was on her guard.
Kiko passively activated her sensory technique, making sure not to get too close towards her target whiles Leraje walked behind her, Kiko could sense the mass of chakra that was the boy, it seemed almost ominous and frightful.
Kiko took an audible gulp and remained as quiet as she could, whiles she proceeded to bend down to take off her leg weights.. she had a feeling she would be needing these off this time..
Phew~ Now with the added weight gone she stood back up before looking over towards the strange man
She could sense this man was a monster and she couldn't afford to let him run free, she immediately took out an explosive tagged Kunai from her pouch, infusing it with her own bakuton Chakra as she sent it hurdling towards the strange man, as it approached short range of him she would perform a single hand-seal, causing the explosive tag to erupt with power letting out a large explosion, the explosion would cause severe burns and internal damage to whoever was nearby from the shockwave
Kiko Who had been staying in Thousand Needles, within the Air Nation, had been hearing some commotion for a while, in the lands close to her she had been hearing rumour's of a strange young man nearby, seemingly arguing with himself, he was getting awfully close to the Air Nation, Knowing this Kiko had set out to check the situation, and low and behold here was a man not far from her now which seemed to meet descriptions.. she could not be fully sure however so she was on her guard.
Kiko passively activated her sensory technique, making sure not to get too close towards her target whiles Leraje walked behind her, Kiko could sense the mass of chakra that was the boy, it seemed almost ominous and frightful.
Kiko took an audible gulp and remained as quiet as she could, whiles she proceeded to bend down to take off her leg weights.. she had a feeling she would be needing these off this time..
Phew~ Now with the added weight gone she stood back up before looking over towards the strange man
She could sense this man was a monster and she couldn't afford to let him run free, she immediately took out an explosive tagged Kunai from her pouch, infusing it with her own bakuton Chakra as she sent it hurdling towards the strange man, as it approached short range of him she would perform a single hand-seal, causing the explosive tag to erupt with power letting out a large explosion, the explosion would cause severe burns and internal damage to whoever was nearby from the shockwave
Sin looked on at his new arrival, not quite sure what to think about this. He'd tried hiding in the remote lands in the land of wind, avoiding people where possible as he learned to come to terms with shit. Though it wasn't gonna be that simple, as he looked on he saw the weights being removed. Oh great, just what he wanted, another fight. He watched as the weights hit the ground with a thunderous impact. With a quick hand gesture, Sin softens the ground below his foe as he drops the weights causing his feet to sink into the ground as their body is lowered, preventing them from moving.
Calm down their chief.... lets talk....
( Gokuamaisou ) - Sand Prison Burial
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user loosens the dirt around the targets feet causing the target to sink deep in to the ground.The pressure at the targets depth immobilizes the target.
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user loosens the dirt around the targets feet causing the target to sink deep in to the ground.The pressure at the targets depth immobilizes the target.
Chakra: 2600 - 15 = 2585
Health: 200
Tracking: 30
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Kiko's Mistake
Kiko was simply taking off her weights, then before she knew it the sand beneath her softened and she began to sink downwards, she quickly focused wind chakra into her legs, releasing it, the wind forced Kiko upwards and dispersed the sand beneath, she performed a backflip, the wind doing most of the work, as she performed her arcing motion, the wind trail which was left in its place shot off forwards, towards the lad at a great speed.
As she performed the backflip she didn't stop there, trying to immobilise her target she would gather her earth chakra into the mouth, spitting out a globule of mud aimed at the lads feet aiming to stick his feet to the ground and cause some damage whiles she was at it.. like stubbing his toe..
Kiko was simply taking off her weights, then before she knew it the sand beneath her softened and she began to sink downwards, she quickly focused wind chakra into her legs, releasing it, the wind forced Kiko upwards and dispersed the sand beneath, she performed a backflip, the wind doing most of the work, as she performed her arcing motion, the wind trail which was left in its place shot off forwards, towards the lad at a great speed.
As she performed the backflip she didn't stop there, trying to immobilise her target she would gather her earth chakra into the mouth, spitting out a globule of mud aimed at the lads feet aiming to stick his feet to the ground and cause some damage whiles she was at it.. like stubbing his toe..
It was just one thing after another. She couldn't even both to reply to him, instead doing some backflip and oh crap she was attacking him. The hell was wrong with this chick? He swing his hand up causing a wall of sand to rise blocking the wind with ease before thrusting his hand forwards causing the wall of sand to push forwards flying into his foe.
Seriously, what the hell is wrong with you... tell me what you want and you wont get hurt!
( Kyosei Suna no Jutsu ) - Greater Sand Technique
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60+20
Description: The will manipulate sand from either his gourd or call it forth from the ground, using hand gestures if to control it as he shapes it and uses it to his needs. Other Sand users besides Gaara will need to form a handseal. The user can use it to restrain enemies, defend from incoming techniques, produce simple constructs of sand (which lose their shape if control is released), sand waves, etc. If he uses the sand from his gourd, the technique is both faster and stronger, gaining a rank in strength, this only applies to Gaara.
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60+20
Description: The will manipulate sand from either his gourd or call it forth from the ground, using hand gestures if to control it as he shapes it and uses it to his needs. Other Sand users besides Gaara will need to form a handseal. The user can use it to restrain enemies, defend from incoming techniques, produce simple constructs of sand (which lose their shape if control is released), sand waves, etc. If he uses the sand from his gourd, the technique is both faster and stronger, gaining a rank in strength, this only applies to Gaara.
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Kiko's Mistake
Kiko was just gathering her chakra when her wind technique was blocked by what seemed like a wall of sand, and then quickly in the next instant it was heading towards her! what rotten luck
"Tch" she tutted
I must protect the Air Nation she thought, at this point not really hearing what the young lad was saying, it truly was a great mistake..
Kiko with great strength, utilised her previous momentum whiles in the air to perform a spinning kick, the kick generated a large gust shaping it into that of a dragon, the technique hurdled towards the sand that came towards her, cancelling it out.
"Phew! He really is a monster, with just some sand he was able to meet my attack blow for blow.."
Kiko landed on the floor safely behind Leraje still in mid range, As soon as her foot touched the ground, she pushed off once again, dashing forwards at great speed, as she passed by Leraje, she placed her hand on her shoulder, Leraje transformed into her weapon form, The Adamantine Scythe, as she transformed Kiko Swung the scythe round extending the weapon with great speed towards the young man aiming to slash straight through him whiles still in mid range.
Kiko was just gathering her chakra when her wind technique was blocked by what seemed like a wall of sand, and then quickly in the next instant it was heading towards her! what rotten luck
"Tch" she tutted
I must protect the Air Nation she thought, at this point not really hearing what the young lad was saying, it truly was a great mistake..
Kiko with great strength, utilised her previous momentum whiles in the air to perform a spinning kick, the kick generated a large gust shaping it into that of a dragon, the technique hurdled towards the sand that came towards her, cancelling it out.
"Phew! He really is a monster, with just some sand he was able to meet my attack blow for blow.."
Kiko landed on the floor safely behind Leraje still in mid range, As soon as her foot touched the ground, she pushed off once again, dashing forwards at great speed, as she passed by Leraje, she placed her hand on her shoulder, Leraje transformed into her weapon form, The Adamantine Scythe, as she transformed Kiko Swung the scythe round extending the weapon with great speed towards the young man aiming to slash straight through him whiles still in mid range.
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It was impressive how the girl was able to deal with his sand. It seemed she was proficient in the art of taijutsu. He thought of his weapon on his waste, but that was a simple blade. He wasn't really the kind of close combat fighter. To be fair, the power he held now was only because of the beast that cursed him, though it did not interfere in this current fight. He could feel the weight of the beast as it looked on. Instead he would use the power at his disposal.
He reached out with his hand making a grasping motion at the air itself, with this he would use his Embodiment of Shukaku, the beast within, to create an arm from the ground to reach out grabbing his foe as they reached for their blade changing it. This sand would be compact and easily gripping the girl preventing her from moving, lifting her from the air in the process.
Will you just stop for one damn minute... damn girl. Just calm the **** down and tell me what you want!
(Shukaku no Jesshi Keitai) - Embodiment of Shukaku
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B-S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20 - 40
Damage Points: 40 - 80+20=100
Description: The technique is based on Sand Attack Heaven Burial, and is a much more advanced variation of the original technique. It allows the user to create constructs anywhere on the field upto Mid-Range from the user, matching a specific part of the users body, such as the creation of a large arm or a leg. By compressing and hardening the sand to withstand damage whilst carrying a lot of force, it allows the user to easily utilize the technique for offensive or defensive purposes.. The structure created using the sand carries the ability to perform the exact same action as the user performs, thus a fist created from sand would deliver a punch only when the user himself performs a punch. The physical strength and size of the technique however depends on the chakra focused on each construct, thus making it very possible for one construct to be weaker than the other.
Note: To explain the size per rank, a B Rank construct would be 4m in length and width, an A Ranked construct would be 8m in length and width whilst an S Ranked construct would be 12m in length and width.
Note: The S Rank version can only be used thrice per battle, with a 1 turn break between each use. Moreover, the user may not use above S Rank and above Sand techniques in the next turn if the S Rank version is used.
Note: Only one construct can be created per usage, and it disperses in the next turn following its usage.
Note: Can only be taught by pop123 and used by Sand users.
Rank: B-S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20 - 40
Damage Points: 40 - 80+20=100
Description: The technique is based on Sand Attack Heaven Burial, and is a much more advanced variation of the original technique. It allows the user to create constructs anywhere on the field upto Mid-Range from the user, matching a specific part of the users body, such as the creation of a large arm or a leg. By compressing and hardening the sand to withstand damage whilst carrying a lot of force, it allows the user to easily utilize the technique for offensive or defensive purposes.. The structure created using the sand carries the ability to perform the exact same action as the user performs, thus a fist created from sand would deliver a punch only when the user himself performs a punch. The physical strength and size of the technique however depends on the chakra focused on each construct, thus making it very possible for one construct to be weaker than the other.
Note: To explain the size per rank, a B Rank construct would be 4m in length and width, an A Ranked construct would be 8m in length and width whilst an S Ranked construct would be 12m in length and width.
Note: The S Rank version can only be used thrice per battle, with a 1 turn break between each use. Moreover, the user may not use above S Rank and above Sand techniques in the next turn if the S Rank version is used.
Note: Only one construct can be created per usage, and it disperses in the next turn following its usage.
Note: Can only be taught by pop123 and used by Sand users.
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Kiko's Mistake
Kiko could sense the mass of chakra underneath the ground, and low and behold here it came, a large hand of sand came her way, she was already prepared, as the hand of sand came at Kiko, She would speed up towards it, performing a single hand-seal, her chakra would spread through her body, her muscles would become limber and elasticated, her muscle mass and density would increase, along with a sizeable increase to her strength, her muscles would become much more toned however not noticeable unless she was to remove her clothing and reveal her body.
During this action, Kiko would aim a powerful knee strike into the solid palm of sand, the shockwave would ripple through the hand, causing it to halt in place and crumble, whiles Kiko's momentum would be halted by the powerful sand, neither one gaining a leg up on the other
"I want you to leave my Home alone! Graaaah!"
Kiko would shout as she struck
Kiko could sense the mass of chakra underneath the ground, and low and behold here it came, a large hand of sand came her way, she was already prepared, as the hand of sand came at Kiko, She would speed up towards it, performing a single hand-seal, her chakra would spread through her body, her muscles would become limber and elasticated, her muscle mass and density would increase, along with a sizeable increase to her strength, her muscles would become much more toned however not noticeable unless she was to remove her clothing and reveal her body.
During this action, Kiko would aim a powerful knee strike into the solid palm of sand, the shockwave would ripple through the hand, causing it to halt in place and crumble, whiles Kiko's momentum would be halted by the powerful sand, neither one gaining a leg up on the other
"I want you to leave my Home alone! Graaaah!"
Kiko would shout as she struck
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He'd tried some of his strongest methods to try and bind the girl to find out why the hell she was assaulting him constantly. He was thinking of trying illusions next, he had a few up his sleeve he could try. Before he started he felt the beast looking on through his eyes. Then the voice came with his mind, "kill her". He shook it off trying ignore the beast but the commands came quicker and quicker, louder and louder, echoing through his mind. The bloodlust of the beast resonating in every word. He held his head trying to shake it off. He screamed in his mind for the beast to stop, but it was unrelenting. It became too much until he gave in...
Kill her...
With that serpents formed around him from his arms taking the from of sand snakes, the true beasts of the desert. As they formed they launched an unrelenting barrage on his foe. The serpents pinning the arms of the girl down as the third struck her stomach with an intense impact. He went to strike again before stopping at the last second.... was he really... gonna kill this girl...become as evil as the beast within....
(Yoton: Yamata no Orochi) Yang Release: 8 Branched Giant Snake
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 100/110 for Yin-Yang chakra
Damage: 100/120 w/ Elemental or Yin-Yang chakra +20=140
Description: This technique sees the creation of the mythical serpent, the Yamata no Orochi. The user begins by gathering their Yang chakra into their arms and creating three branching streams of white chakra from each of them as well as coating both arms in chakra. The user’s arms and streams of chakra will take the form of serpents with flaming amber eyes. Due to the nature of this technique utilizing one’s Yang chakra, these serpents are not simple manifestations of chakra, but actual sentient creatures. The serpents can sense entities like ordinary snakes and they share a telepathic link to the user, allowing them to communicate with each other. They act like chakra arms and can be used for a variety of purposes. In the base form of this technique, the 8 branches are simple ethereal constructs of sentient Yang chakra. In their second form, users can add nature release to the branches to increase their power, including AE and CE the user knows. In their third and final form, the user can add Yin Release chakra and give the branches physical bodies. The addition of the Yin Release also gives the branches unique venom which drains the physical vitality of the victim. The bite from each snake lowers a victim’s physical speed, reaction, and ability to use high ranked physical techniques.
Note: Form 1 is usable by all users of Yang Release, Form 2 is usable by Yang Release Specialists and Yin-Yang users. Form 3, also known as Yin-Yang Release: Yamata no Orochi is only usable by Yin-Yang Users.
Note: The vitality degenerating venom is capable by all branches of this technique, however there is only enough for 3 usages. The vitality degeneration venom becomes worse with every bite. If a victim is bitten once their base reaction/tracking is reduced by half, twice and their base speed and physical damage is reduced by half, and thrice they will lose the ability to use any form of tai or kenjutsu techniques and will be rendered completely paralyzed 2 turns after the third bite if not healed. The victim will be unable to do anything short of breathing, including using their chakra. Users bitten once also become incapable of using physical elevating techniques such as Sage Mode or EIG.
Note: Medical ninja or other Yang Release users can rid themselves of the poison through means of medical techniques or vitality boosting techniques such as power of the sun.
Note: Technique can only be used once per battle and requires 50 chakra points to maintain (60 above the first form). While this technique is in use, the user cannot use any non-elemental ninjutsu, Yin Release, or Yin-Yang techniques (other than this technique’s advanced variation).
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 100/110 for Yin-Yang chakra
Damage: 100/120 w/ Elemental or Yin-Yang chakra +20=140
Description: This technique sees the creation of the mythical serpent, the Yamata no Orochi. The user begins by gathering their Yang chakra into their arms and creating three branching streams of white chakra from each of them as well as coating both arms in chakra. The user’s arms and streams of chakra will take the form of serpents with flaming amber eyes. Due to the nature of this technique utilizing one’s Yang chakra, these serpents are not simple manifestations of chakra, but actual sentient creatures. The serpents can sense entities like ordinary snakes and they share a telepathic link to the user, allowing them to communicate with each other. They act like chakra arms and can be used for a variety of purposes. In the base form of this technique, the 8 branches are simple ethereal constructs of sentient Yang chakra. In their second form, users can add nature release to the branches to increase their power, including AE and CE the user knows. In their third and final form, the user can add Yin Release chakra and give the branches physical bodies. The addition of the Yin Release also gives the branches unique venom which drains the physical vitality of the victim. The bite from each snake lowers a victim’s physical speed, reaction, and ability to use high ranked physical techniques.
Note: Form 1 is usable by all users of Yang Release, Form 2 is usable by Yang Release Specialists and Yin-Yang users. Form 3, also known as Yin-Yang Release: Yamata no Orochi is only usable by Yin-Yang Users.
Note: The vitality degenerating venom is capable by all branches of this technique, however there is only enough for 3 usages. The vitality degeneration venom becomes worse with every bite. If a victim is bitten once their base reaction/tracking is reduced by half, twice and their base speed and physical damage is reduced by half, and thrice they will lose the ability to use any form of tai or kenjutsu techniques and will be rendered completely paralyzed 2 turns after the third bite if not healed. The victim will be unable to do anything short of breathing, including using their chakra. Users bitten once also become incapable of using physical elevating techniques such as Sage Mode or EIG.
Note: Medical ninja or other Yang Release users can rid themselves of the poison through means of medical techniques or vitality boosting techniques such as power of the sun.
Note: Technique can only be used once per battle and requires 50 chakra points to maintain (60 above the first form). While this technique is in use, the user cannot use any non-elemental ninjutsu, Yin Release, or Yin-Yang techniques (other than this technique’s advanced variation).
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Kiko could sense the sheer mass of chakra coming at him, the snakes slithered quickly and were obviously powerful,
"Tch!"
Kiko knew this was not something she could currently combat head on, she quickly moulded her earth chakra through her body and spreading it out into the land below, turning it into an even softer version of sand, she quickly vanished beneath the ground, closing the distance between her and her adversary, she would appear behind her target, spikes of earth shooting upwards in order to pierce him through.
Kiko would then reveal herself behind him, shooting out of the ground, as she shot out of the ground she would aim a knee strike into the back of her opponent, the strength it contained was not weak by any means.. but she was unsure whether this would be enough to put him down at this time, if she was capable of striking she would follow it up with a downwards elbow strike towards the back of the lads head in an attempt to knock him out..
Kiko could sense the sheer mass of chakra coming at him, the snakes slithered quickly and were obviously powerful,
"Tch!"
Kiko knew this was not something she could currently combat head on, she quickly moulded her earth chakra through her body and spreading it out into the land below, turning it into an even softer version of sand, she quickly vanished beneath the ground, closing the distance between her and her adversary, she would appear behind her target, spikes of earth shooting upwards in order to pierce him through.
Kiko would then reveal herself behind him, shooting out of the ground, as she shot out of the ground she would aim a knee strike into the back of her opponent, the strength it contained was not weak by any means.. but she was unsure whether this would be enough to put him down at this time, if she was capable of striking she would follow it up with a downwards elbow strike towards the back of the lads head in an attempt to knock him out..
His foe tried to escape, she really didn't give up, but she made a fatal error, hiding in the ground against a sand user. Sin slammed his hands on the ground converting the ground below up and up to long range to sand and compacting it to trap anyone under it in the process. This would stop his foe completely and bind them. He wouldn't stop here. If there was no body, it didn't matter who this girl was, she was here alone. He'd release a mass pulse through the ground crushing everything below him and around him up to long range.
( Kyosei Suna no Jutsu ) - Greater Sand Technique
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60+20
Description: The will manipulate sand from either his gourd or call it forth from the ground, using hand gestures if to control it as he shapes it and uses it to his needs. Other Sand users besides Gaara will need to form a handseal. The user can use it to restrain enemies, defend from incoming techniques, produce simple constructs of sand (which lose their shape if control is released), sand waves, etc. If he uses the sand from his gourd, the technique is both faster and stronger, gaining a rank in strength, this only applies to Gaara.
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60+20
Description: The will manipulate sand from either his gourd or call it forth from the ground, using hand gestures if to control it as he shapes it and uses it to his needs. Other Sand users besides Gaara will need to form a handseal. The user can use it to restrain enemies, defend from incoming techniques, produce simple constructs of sand (which lose their shape if control is released), sand waves, etc. If he uses the sand from his gourd, the technique is both faster and stronger, gaining a rank in strength, this only applies to Gaara.
( Messaba Kusou ) - Destroying Desert Burial
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80+20=100
Description: A huge variation of Imperial Sand Burial that crushes with such force that it leaves behind only a giant crater
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80+20=100
Description: A huge variation of Imperial Sand Burial that crushes with such force that it leaves behind only a giant crater
And again was asked to check this lol. Anyway, I liked the Taijutsu usage from Kiri to combat the Sand stuff, you tried to stick to a few fields that suit your character when it would've been easier to jump to something like Water ( idk if you have it on your bio ), and Dan as well for sticking with Sand, so props to y'all for that. But ultimately it came down to the final moves again, going underground against a Sand user when in clear view was a costly mistake. So unfortunately I'll have to award the win to Sinthorus based on that.
