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Am sorry about that.. i wanted to prove to you that posting two jutsus at once does not necessarily mean that you dont learn those jutus. I think it depends on that if you write the template on your own. I am a person who's really passionate about role playing. Your opinion on that posting two would ruin my understanding of them is greatly flawed because I cannot phantom what stops me from understanding them. Its like in school we learn like almost 7 subjects a day and yet at the end we end up knowing all of them. With you posting one jutsu pr post I think you are needlessly elongating the training session. I thought the student opinions did matter in this RP, but oh well if you are gonna be like that lets continue sensei *_*. Now on to this jutsu.

One/three advantages:
  • 1. A great jutsu to use on elemental combinations.
  • 2. There is no range limitation hence is useful at short and long range.
  • 3. I can attack opponent from any direction as long as I am in contact with the ground.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. Requires user to have contact with the earth.
  • 2. Looking at that it uses earth to create those spheres the jutsu then should take time to be performed.
  • 3. Can be avoided when enemy sees me slamming the ground.
How you would use it in battle:
I would use it like how the ANBU used it. Meaning I would use it in a combo because I think alone it cannot do much because I feel that you have to bind the enemy somehow before you can use it. Like how they used that wind jutsu to cut off its legs to make it unable to move. So I would use combos like that and finally I can also use it as a distraction since the basic and natural way I think most people can avoid this jutsu. it would be by going up. Then I would send another jutsu to attack them when they are airborne.

How you would counter it:
A simple D rank doton jutsu to propel myself away from where the jutsu is created using an earth made pillar. Another way to avoid this jutsu is that by the time the opponent slams or sends their lighting chakra to the ground, it is that you also would do the same. Meaning where the jutsu is suppose to from they will be more than required lightning below meaning the jutsu will fail because of a large supply of lightning.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
Naori moves after hearing words from her sensei and quickly brings her hands together and then manipulates the lightning based chakra to form crackle of lightning around her hand. After enough amount of chakra has been gathered. She slams her hands on the ground and releases the lightning through the ground. The lightning travels through the ground towards her opponent, she then splits it into multiple tendrils (typically, four in this cases) and attacks her opponent from four different direction, to shock the clone sensei made and make him go poof.

Question: So this jutsu is it safe to say that it can be used from any limb of the body that is in contact with the ground? Because he jutsu itself doesn't specify, so are legs and hands usable to send chakra through the ground to perform this jutsu?
 
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Am sorry about that.. i wanted to prove to you that posting two jutsus at once does not necessarily mean that you dont learn those jutus. I think it depends on that if you write the template on your own. I am a person who's really passionate about role playing. Your opinion on that posting two would ruin my understanding of them is greatly flawed because I cannot phantom what stops me from understanding them. Its like in school we learn like almost 7 subjects a day and yet at the end we end up knowing all of them. With you posting one jutsu pr post I think you are needlessly elongating the training session. I thought the student opinions did matter in this RP, but oh well if you are gonna be like that lets continue sensei *_*. Now on to this jutsu.

One/three advantages:
  • 1. A great jutsu to use on elemental combinations.
  • 2. There is no range limitation hence is useful at short and long range.
  • 3. I can attack opponent from any direction as long as I am in contact with the ground.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. Requires user to have contact with the earth.
  • 2. Looking at that it uses earth to create those spheres the jutsu then should take time to be performed.
  • 3. Can be avoided when enemy sees me slamming the ground.
How you would use it in battle:
I would use it like how the ANBU used it. Meaning I would use it in a combo because I think alone it cannot do much because I feel that you have to bind the enemy somehow before you can use it. Like how they used that wind jutsu to cut off its legs to make it unable to move. So I would use combos like that and finally I can also use it as a distraction since the basic and natural way I think most people can avoid this jutsu. it would be by going up. Then I would send another jutsu to attack them when they are airborne.

How you would counter it:
A simple D rank doton jutsu to propel myself away from where the jutsu is created using an earth made pillar. Another way to avoid this jutsu is that by the time the opponent slams or sends their lighting chakra to the ground, it is that you also would do the same. Meaning where the jutsu is suppose to from they will be more than required lightning below meaning the jutsu will fail because of a large supply of lightning.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
Naori moves after hearing words from her sensei and quickly brings her hands together and then manipulates the lightning based chakra to form crackle of lightning around her hand. After enough amount of chakra has been gathered. She slams her hands on the ground and releases the lightning through the ground. The lightning travels through the ground towards her opponent, she then splits it into multiple tendrils (typically, four in this cases) and attacks her opponent from four different direction, to shock the clone sensei made and make him go poof.

Question: So this jutsu is it safe to say that it can be used from any limb of the body that is in contact with the ground? Because he jutsu itself doesn't specify, so are legs and hands usable to send chakra through the ground to perform this jutsu?
Students opinion is welcome. More then welcome, and are respected. But it is nice for that in return, respect. I'm not getting that from you, and it makes me feel shitty. I have said why I don't want to do your way, and I believe I explained it fine. I still don't understand why it is a big deal, but whatever.

Leaning seven subjects in a day? Yes. But remembering them all? No. If you can do that personally good on you, but others can't more so I can't, and I finished two years ago, only some subjects stick others don't.

Making the training going longer then it should be, how long should it be? I teach how I teach, I understand I could make it easier for myself, and the student (seems like that you want fast training then I don't know why you wanted to be trained by me)

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@Question: Yeah that is correct. But to be on the safe side. I would just say slam your hands on the ground, but cause it doesn't say to use your hands, I suppose you could use your feet.
 
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From looking at most of the training threads amongst the Training Area it seems like the average time one finish training its about 2 - 4 months. And the pages of the threads are usually 3 - 4. Looking at that I am on page 3 with you and still on B ranks I would say 3 more pages max and I'll be finished if nothing goes wrong. Anyway thanks for answering my question, it appeas to be clear to me now. now can we continue sensei with your current training method that is :dead:
 

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Two - four months isn't even long. It took me two years to complete water.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

So bring your hands together while channelling lighting chakra through them, once you have done that. Slam your hands on the ground releasing the chakra in the form of a current of lighting that will race though the earth, cracking it about, etc... You can also make it split into more then one current to take more then one person, or attack the same person from all different angles.
 

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Well water I get you there. The number of C ranks in water is annoying even I am having trouble with it lol

One/three advantages:
  • 1. With it I can attack my opponent from all possible direction and hence it isn't easy technique to escape.
  • 2. No limitation in range so useful in both long and short range.
  • 3. It goes through the ground thus it can nullify some earth jutsus while running through the ground.
  • 4. Can attack multiple opponents at once which acts as a suprise attack because I think the user can choose when to create those multiple tendrils.. well that is if I'm correct, sensei please correct me here.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. It requires contact with the ground.
  • 2. Its movement gives it out because when user slams the ground they give away their jutsu attack attributes.
  • 3. It cannot be used in water I think...
How you would use it in battle:
I would use it to create an opening for another attack. I think because its a type of an attack that can be launched in any range it would be best to use it to control the enemy. Control things like the way they would react, because I expect the enemy to use a jutsu that would make them go upwards. Thus doing that maybe an advantage or disadvantage but nonetheless I think since you were the one who initiated the attack, the odds should be in your favour. Other than that I dont think its easy to use this one in a combo because it uses a lot of body movement.

How you would counter it:
Increase the ground level from me and my opponent via earth jutsu. Create a big hole in the ground be tween me and my enemy. I can do this without wasting any moves my simply hurling a mouthful amount of kunais which at their ends paper tag bombs are attached. If I aim there between us the explosion would surely disrupt the jutsu.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
Naori thinking back of the knowledge she has on lightning jutsu so far because of him. Looking at his clone, she hurls shurikens at sensei's clone. luckily sensei's clone doesn't simply dodge them but uses his tainto to block them. Naori takes this time and begins to merge her spiritual and physical energy to create raw chakara. She takes the raw chakara and transforms it to lightning by using shape and elemental manipulation. She then concentrates the chakara on both here hands. She further leans forward and slams the ground thus creating an electrocution of the ground aimed at your location. When it reaches you it makes the ground crumble while also it makes you get paralysed and your body patially submerged to the ground. Which leads to the conclusion of your clone going #poof
 

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(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Rod
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air, charging lightning. He will then unleash the lightning energy at the enemy target in the form of a lightning bolt.

With this one I want you to raise your hands up into the air, once up in the air send lighting chakra to them. Then release it the lighting chakra should form into a lighting bolt as soon as released, and it will make its way towards your target.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. Accuracy of the jutsu. Since its connected to my hand via chakra, I can easily adjust it's direction and make it attack the opponent accurately.
  • 2. Its power is more concentrated so it can cut through defenses on a single point.
  • 3. It doesn't just shock my opponent but it will also send them a distance back while their insides will be burned.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. Has to charge before use, seems like its not an instant jutsu
  • 2. Has wasted movement like when raising the hands in the sky.
  • 3. Is just a one strike jutsu if you miss well... might as well try again.
How you would use it in battle:
The best way to use this jutsu is using it via a lightning shadow clone while using a decent Taijutsu Combo. Which I can use this technique when I am attacking my opponent from other direction. I can also use it to bring my opponent in the range of my next technique, where I will attack him when I have opening. But besides that using it from a high place like a cliff or ontop of a dome would be cooler... Just for show lol.

How you would counter it:
Use the same jutsu as above to neutralize it. If that is even possible. Another thing would be to use a wide range wind jutsu that would spread and deflect the aim of the jutsu while also weakening the attack strike of the lightning. Other than that I dunno any other way...

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
Naori starts by gathering her chakra. She merges her spiritual and physical energies and the raw chakra is born. She channels it into her hands then lifts the both to the sky. She releases this lightning chakra into the air above him. She uses advanced shape manipulation and creates lightning around her hands. The lightning charges up and when enough has accumulated she aims at the wooden dummy which stood some meters away. The strike was simultaneous hitting the dummy in almost no time. Thus leading to the dummy to melt and get severely distorted due to lightning's nature.
 

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iight iight. Nicely done!. We don't have to do templates. I will just ask you to perform the technique and might ask some questions in between. I will do similar jutsus in the same post and for other jutsus I will do two per post. We shall continue once you are ready for this! ^^
 

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Good good! :D

Alright! Now I need you to close your eyes and picture yourself in your mind!. Now as you do that, I need you to concentrate your Lightning chakra and create an exact copy of yours made up of pure lightning!. Yes, That will be the lightning shadow clone!. This Lightning shadow clone will be an extremely versatile ally during the battles!. Why is that? When get hit, It will disperse into pure lightning rather than just getting poofed!. It can even use upto B rank lightning techniques on its own!. Awesome rite?

"Now, Make a lightning clone to your left!"

*Creates a clone and sends it to Mid range!*

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself but made from lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefore is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.


Now, For the next two technique, I need you to generate lightning chakra in your palm and create a lightning rope from it!. With that, I need you to whip that lightning around my clone and try to impale it!. yes! My clone will try to counter it!. But now, you are going to get some help from your clone too!. Make your clone to channel lightning chakra in it's hand and produce a Hound made up of lightning that stays attached to it's hand!. Make him control the path of the lightning hound and attack my clone!.

"See, Attacking simultaneously! Come on! Give it a try and make my clone Poof!."

*Creates another clone!*

"After you poof that clone, Try attacking my other clone with your lightning clone!. But this time, Go near the clone Disperse the lightning clone so that it electrocutes my clone!. just a small token of surprise to my clone!. Try that!. "


(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting and rampages towards his target.

(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning

Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra between his/her palms forming what appears to be a lightning "rope". The user can then whip that lightning around as if its a true whip, hitting his target.
 

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Looks >_>.... <_< ....>_> at your reply.... O__O what is with this wall of text? Btw I like your training method its very spontaneous is not boring as to what I was doing previously. Getting to the task:

(a) Certainly you are right its very useful in battle plus it doesn't have the limit range like the water clone that if you move a certain distance from it like from short range then you cant manipulate the clone. Also that simultaneous attacking is pretty good it doesn't limit you in range like the water clone jutsu.

For the first time Naori is about to mold her lightning chakra after a while not doing so. She combines he spiritual and physical energy together and thus brings forth raw chakra. Which she molds and changes it nature to lightning due means of lightning element manipulation. She then focuses the lightning chakra through her whole body and concentrates it on her left side out of her body. Through means of shape manipulation she changes the form and shape of the lightning that started to come out of her and shapes it into a person which is her clone actually.

(b) Great jutsu to use when wanting to capture something especially if its something that moves a lot. So because of this when user has caught the target in this rope it does not only capture it but it also shocks them with electricity making him unable to move too so a plus plus :p

Naori then repeats the same process of harnessing her lightning chakra but this time she concentrates her chakra on her hand. She creates an orb from her hand and uses shape manipulation to change it into a rope that sends towards Clone 1 that is at mid range. As clone 1 tries to evade it Naori's lightning clone was prepared to attack as because she was channeling her lightning chakra as well to a beast the exact moment the original was doing that jutsu. So before she does the jutsu she channels her lightning chakra and uses elemental manipulation to create an orb on her hand. She further uses shape manipulation to shape it into a hound that roars as it quickly approaches clone 1. They successfully destroy clone 1.

With clone 2 left her lightning clone was going forward closing in towards both the clones as it was attacking with that hound. So it engages the clone 2 senpai has created, they engage in hand to hand combat fighting and accidentally my clone gets stabbed in the stomach by your clone which used a kunai. Her clone reverts back to lightning and electrocutes your clone resulting in it going poof!

Question 1:
How much damage does the clone produce when it reverts back and electrocutes the target?
 

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Nicely done! :D. And since the rank of the clone is B, It will do 40 damage along with Paralysing effect on the opponent!.



Now, the next two technique are almost similar to each other!. One is a weaker version whilst other one is a stronger version!.

For the first one, I need you to concentrate your Raiton chakra in your mouth and emit a spear of lightning from there!. Now, if in case you are attacking a single opponent you can send it directly! But, if you are engaging more than one opponent, You can branch the spear and make it attack different opponents!. Though Branching will decrease the rank of the technique too!. I would actually prefer using this technique whilst am in short range from the opponent so that it will be difficult for him to dodge it!.

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

This next one is almost similar to the last one, But you need to perform a single hand seal before emitting the lightning spear!. The lightning spear here can be emitted from both mouth and hands making it more versatile in the battle!. Equally powered techniques like Raikiri can easily cancel out this technique!. The speed of the technique is extremely fast! That is what makes this one special!. I would normally use the B ranked one is Close quarters! But's that's just me!. It's also a very effective one to destroy high range earth and wood stuffs!.

*Creates a clone and makes it to create a S ranked Earth Golem!*

"Now, Destroy the Golem with the S ranked version and then attack the clone with the B ranked version! Try it!"

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
 

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:Omg: That makes sense actually :p thanks for answering.

(a) Okay this is intense... a lightning jutsu that I think even Hiruzen maybe did when he fought the Spiral Zetsu. But nonetheless if its not it has a good reputation on Narutoverse and mostly importantly it doesn't require a hand seal meaning a person can do it very fast. I think large scale water jutsus like great colliding wave would be the undoing of this jutsu if the water is released at mid range from the opponent they might have a chance because of the sudden medium the electricity would have to travel through.

Okay getting to the cool part, As Naori and the clone get close to mid range, after exchanging a lot of kunai and shuriken attacks starting from when they were in long range. She molds her lightning chakra. She concentrates most of it in her chest then moves it all to her mouth where there she creates a small orb of lightning, then by using advanced shape and nature manipulation she creates a spear of lightning that she launches towards the clone which she pierces through their torso making it feel the pain and the electric shock just seconds it goes poof.

(b) Naori goes into a state of Awe as you create the S rank earth golem. Without hesitating as she is in long range from the golem, making sure she is far away as possible. She throws a smoke bomb to the golem making both of us to not to be able to see each other. So Naori takes advantage of this since you are a big target and she knows where you were she lauches her attack by first molding her lightning chakra and releasing the same manner like he did last time. Although this time she uses the one that makes the spear to have multiple branches which hit the golem on its vital points like on the knee, neck and the arms joints.

Question:
Both these jutsus, is it allowed that you would create a singular spear and say that to your opponent; But then when the jutsu is about to reach them even when they have provided a counter, then make it that instance produce multiple spears of lighting?
 
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That's a nice question!. Actually you can branch the spear at any time but, the speed is extremely fast and also, you can't make the branched one to change it's path! i.e. if you release it forward towards your opponent and the opponent successfully evades it, you cannot branch it turn back it's path and attack the opponent!.

Also, regarding the counter you mentioned for the Spear, You cannot use the exploding colliding wave to counter that. Why? See, that technique is a water stream technique. Meaning, you will continuously spew out water from your mouth!. So, when the opponent uses the Lightning technique and when your water comes in contact with it, due to the water being a very good conductor of electricity, you ll be shocked by the lightning and most prolly paralysed!. So, it is always good to avoid water stream technique to counter Lightning techniques!.

Now, This next technique is my personal favourite technique because I like Kenjutsu stuffs!. I hope you know the fact that channelling lightning through a sword will increase it's cutting power drastically! sometimes even more than the wind element!. This particular technique is mainly for that!. I need you to take your sword from your holster and channel it with lightning chakra!. One doing so, the vibrational frequency will be drastically increased which will increase the overall cutting strength of the sword!. By doing so, your Kenjutsu attacks will gain a +15 damage bonus! Which is soo damn awesome!.

*Creates 4 earth pillars to erupt and surround you!*

"Now, channel your lightning chakra through the swords and cut down these pillars in once slash!"

(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.

Next one is pretty much same as the technique which you have learnt already!. Perform a simple ram handseal and manipulate your Raiton chakra and raise your hand facing the sky!. Once you do that, trigger an electrical discharge shocking the target at your desired location!. A personal favourite technique of mine to use in combo with Swamp of the underworld technique!

"Try shocking my clone please!"

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.
 

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Well I suppose that is just one of its natural weaknesses nothing we can do about that lol. Btw about the water thingy I was thinking more of the amount of water that is produced. I was thinking of that if a person uses a B rank lightning jutsu and I use an S rank water jutsu most likely the jutsu that summons a lot of water to the terrain, wouldn't that nullify the electricity? But if you meant it electrocutes you the moment you spew out the water well in that case I get it it wouldn't be a good counter.

(a) Whoa... a lighting jutsu that is used on the sword. Luckily senpai I happen to be a ken master myself *_* I share your love of swords. Anyway pretty decent jutsu to block all those attacks that people spam like the B rank red crimson wave and the same ranked wind blade jutsu. In between the three this one is the most powerful, but the problem is that it has a short range compared to the other two.

Anyway proceeding, Naori observes at the pillars that senpai has just made. She keenly looks at them to find their weak points. As she does that she molds her lightning chakra and transfers it into her blade. As she does that the frequency of lightning on her blade increases as she keeps the lightning in the shape of a sword. As soon as she founds what she believes to be the weak points of the pillars she moves very fast with also the aid of the lightning that made it look like she was fast. She slices all the pillars with one horizontal slash which leaves them in half and in two pieces.

(b) xD great jutsu which is more like and upgrade to the fang of lightning jutsu. Although they are on the same rank this one has more range to cover compared to the last one. So in truth it makes me less likely to use the previous one that its range extended up to mid range. This one is even better too because it does not require there to be clouds, although I kinda feel bad for that jutsu, it uses clouds on its steps of evolution and yet it extends only to short range while this one you just do the ram hand seal...:(

As soon as her senpai finishes her lecture she starts by concentrating on merging her spiritual and physical energies and makes her raw chakra to bloom. She performs the ram hand seal and channels her lightning chakra to her right hand as she lifts her hand into the sky. She uses nature and shape manipulation which allows her to create raging lightning bolts all around her arm. Then she focused her aim to the clone senpai created which stood some meters away. The strike was simultaneous hitting the clone in almost no time. And because of the oscillating frequencies of the lightning the damage to the clone before it disappeared where not proportional in some ares they were severe while in others were minor.

Question:
If I may ask... how would I use it in conjuction with underworld swamp?
 

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See in this case, Both the lightning and water is of same rank. So it will electrocute for sure!. if the water was of higher rank then it won't happen. And regarding the question, Make a swamp under him to trap him and restrict his movement. Then perform the lightning technique so that he will find it difficult to evade. Say even if the opponent tries to counter the swamp with the usage of Exploding colliding waves, it will be difficult for him/her to counter the super fast lightning bolt coming from the top!. It's a nice combo!.

Now, Proceeding!. this is quite an interesting technique!. I need you to first take out two large Windmill shuriken and channel your lightning chakra into it!. Now, throw them towards your target whilst maintaining a connection with the shuriken using wire cables!. You can manipulate the path of the shuriken with these wires. When the shuriken hits the target, it will paralyse them!. I will use this technique if when my opponent throws normal windmill shuriken towards me!. Lightning shuriken will not only destroy those normal shuriken but also continue towards the opponent in order to hit him.

*Creates a clone and makes it to throw two Windmill shuriken at you*

"Now, Do this technique and destroy those to shuriken and hit my clone!"

(Raiton: Shuriken Seigyo no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Shuriken Control Technique

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take out two large shuriken or Windmill Shuriken and channel their raiton chakra into them. They will then throw them at their target to pin them down and maintain a connection with the shuriken through a electrical cable that delivers a numbing shock to paralyse the target and restrict their movements.
Note: Numbing Effect lasts for one turn.

Next one is waay too basic technique! But a versatile technique at short range. Gather up you lightning chakra and release a current of purplish ( purely Cosmetic ) lightning from your hands forward, damaging and knocking away my clone that is sprinting towards you to attack!. The major disadvantage of the technique is the range of the technique!.

*Creates a clone*

"Take out my clone please!"

( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.
 

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Wow that is amazing, I will try it one day Senpai. Although the way you explained it I just saw a possible way to evade it. You simply do not use water and use a wind jutsu that would make you float upwards diagonally back making you able to go to long range which would evade the jutsu if it was up to mid range. But since user would have used that swamp jutsu then he would be long range from you meaning blowing yourself back would help you get out of range of the jutsu. Tell me if I'm wrong though.

Jutsu One
One of those jutsus that when I use I really feel like now I am ninja! Ninja! Yes Ninja because I just used a windmill shuriken and some Ninja wires. Now here is the thing about this jutsu though, it makes you vulnerable to water jutsus and kinda attacks from behind if you are fighting more than one opponent. But the fact that it destroys normal weapons and its direction can be propelled is kinda amazing although at some case it might be a disadvantage to use on plain sight.

Naori molds her chakra and transforms it into lightning chakra. After that she takes out two big shurikens which have wire cables attached to them. He channels the lightning chakra to the shurikens and uses shape manipulation to keep the lightning in shape with the shurikens. She does all this as the clone senpai created was attacking with his windmill shurikens. Naori launches her wind mill shurikens and aims them at the shurikens the clone aimed. As her shurikens clash with the clone's the one the clone threw broke because of that they are coated with lighting. They break them through and I propel them to go towards the clone because the clash with the clone's shurikens slightly changed their trajectory. The shurikens caught the clone off guard and they pierce and paralyze it before it disappears.

Jutsu Two
Whoa nothing more that impresses me with this jutsu besides that it produces lightning that has the color which is my favorite :hooray:. Anyway Besides the short coming of this jutsu of that it extends only to short range, I think it can be useful when fending off those rarely coming taijutsu attacks.

Naori in close combat with the clone, she waits for the clone to attack, as the clone attacks with its right trying to land a punch on her left chick hand Naori slightly moves to the right making the punch slide through above her shoulder. She channels her lightning chakra on both her hands and grabs the clone's right hand with her left which sends a little shock to him. Then she pulls him towards her and thrusts the clone on the chest and sends a more intense electrical palm discharge which sends the clone backwards a few meters before it disappears.

Question:
Erm I suppose I can do teh jutsu on both hands making it C rank each shock or maybe its not right to do it so like I did when I grabbed the clones hand?
 

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Yes, Blowing yourself out will be safe, but you have to be careful about it! only a strong enough wind can take you out of the swamp.! And regarding your question, Yes, you can. It's all upto your creativity.

*Creates a clone*

Alright the next technique is a pretty nice one!. My clone there will send a barrage of B ranked rocks towards you!. All I need you to do is create a protective plasma barrier made up of lightning around you and charge towards the opponent!. As the Clone releases the earth projectiles, It will simply be destroyed by the barrier and you can easily attack the clone with it! .

"Go go go! Give it a try! and remember, Ya can only do Lightning technique and Taijutsu techniques whilst sustaining the barrier!."

( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball

Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active and use it to ram against them. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.


Next technique is also a Double edged sword!.

I need you to manipulate your lightning chakra and condense it into an orb of chakra and then release it into the air!. This orb will remain in the air for several seconds and release a continuous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack!.

"Perform this technique! and there is a serious disadvantage for this technique! can you guess what it is?"

( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into the air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.
Note: Lasts only the turn in which its used.
 

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That's is awesome senpai, I will do that gladly...Btw senpai these B ranks are too much <_< I hope we finish them soon.

Plasma Ball:
One word I can use to describe this jutsu is "annoying" well I am not saying its a bad jutsu just that it has everything I hate to be in a jutsu. The damage that it inflicts to the user, its short range and restricts me from using only lightning jutsus. That's annoying because that might place you at a disadvantage if opponent uses wind jutsus. Well no matter the jutsu does have its good points like that it defends up to A rank earth jutsu. Which makes it at the very least worth it to use it. But on my view I wouldn't use unless I have no choice.

Naori prepares herself as she is about to do a jutsu that needs a lot of concentration and preservation. She sees the clone launching a barrage of rocks towards her, so after listening to her senpai she channels her lightning chakra out of her body and creates an orb of lightning around her body. Which the orb is about 2m away from him at the center of it. The orb is used to protect herself from the rocks which were sent towards her. As soon as the rocks are all crushed by her shiled she channels even more lightning chakra and she concentrates chakra on both here hands. Then leans forward and slams the ground thus creating an electrocution of the ground aimed at your clone's location. When it reaches it, it makes the ground crumble while also it makes the clone get paralyzed and your body partially submerged to the ground. Which leads to the conclusion of your clone going #poof

Question 1:
I have a few questions about this jutsu which were unclear to me.
  • For starters since the jutsu says nothing about how you release the jutsu form you. It just says you form the orb. So my question is can I perform this jutsu without the need of moving any part of my body the slightest?
  • Since I am creating this orb and its helping me to separate from my opponent, why would there be a need for me to use taijutsu?
  • Last one is about that note that it lasts for 3 turns. What does this mean? Does this mean I cannot cancel the jutsu if I want to and it will stay there for three turns beside despite if I am willing to stop it?
Lightning Shock Rain

Another jutsu I am not very fond of because of the big disadvantage you just wanted me to guess. Lol I will tell you its obviously the fact that the jutsu itself says that it would stay up there as an orb several seconds before it activates. Meaning if an opponent is in mid range they can avoid it by moving away to long range because of the time it takes to charge. Basically this jutsu would be useful after you have caused an opponent to be trapped or them unable to move. Another one would be that you cannot use this jutsu in close range because there is possibility that you might get shocked. How about senpai am I right?

Btw now since that is out of the way, Naori is at a hazardous predicament as she is facing two of senpai's clones who refuse to get closer then mid range. And they keep on throwing kunais as if their suppliers will not get exhausted. Naori is this situation reacts by first throwing a smoke bomb below her which masks her presence. After that she jumps up the smoke and throws two kunais with explosive tags. She gets the other one, but second one dodges the kunai and the explosion. But because of that Naori takes the advantage of the smoke and channels her lightning chakra which form it she creates an orb of lightning that she sends towards the range of the clone. After a few seconds as the smoke clears the banquet of lightning begins and the clone is electrocuted to dust.
 

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Lol. There is one more B rank, But you need to know one parent technique before learning that!. I ll teach it to you next!. And regarding your questions.

1. It creates a more like Semi circular Plasma barrier just around you!. Say like a inverted lid around you.
2. Lol, It's said so because, You can run, sprint, jump towards the opponent whilst sustaining this technique. hence, When you try to perform any tai moves, the barrier will not dissipate.
3. Initial chakra cost of the technique is 20. With one time creation, the technique will last for three turns after which the plasma barrier will go off. But if you keep feeding it with chakra, you can keep the technique active unless you stop feeding with chakra.

And regarding the the "Big" disadvantage of the second technique. Once you release the Orb, it will simple start to emit lightning bolt around it. It's doesn't know whether an enemy is there or an ally is there. So you have to careful while using it, otherwise you ll end up damaging either your clone or ally or yourself if you are within the range of the orb.

Moving on! ^^

Now, the next technique is one of the most important and the base technique for various A ranked and S ranked Raition technique. I believe you ll be familiar with this technique!. The Chidori!. All I need you to do is with utmost concentration and visualizing the Lightning chakra, Perform the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey hand seal and focus your lightning chakra into your hand to create a massive lightning energy in your hands!. You will know that the energy has reached it's peak when you hear the chirping sound of the birds from your hand!. Very useful techniques which turns your normal hands into a deadly weapon!. But, It is pretty difficult for a non lightning master to execute in a battle!.

*Creates a clone!*

"Now, Create a chidori in your hand and then dash towards my clone and pierce him in the heart, Dispersing him off! Also give me some nice advantages and disadvantages for this technique!"

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds

Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals
 
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