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1)* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details): As i stand looking towards my teacher, i remember his words from before, thus being said; i send my chakra out infront of my body, then begining to rotate rappidly, creating another spinning dome. Although this is similar to the last technique, this one is more powerful.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: Same as before. When a large amount of rubble, or projectiles are sent in my direction.
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? Nope, i would use it as a defensive technique
* Its pros and cons: Good for defending, though week against elemental chakra of any rank :(

2)* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details): As i focus my chakra into both my right and left hand, i then begin to pull them back, and go towards a thrusting motion, releasing the chakra, blowing the tree back.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: If a clone, or my opponent comes charging at me
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? Well, maybe i can use the momentum from the push, to give me some space between my opponent, thus giving me some time to add a combination.
* Its pros and cons: Weak against elemental, and i will need to be close to the opponent. Good, to send opponent flying.

3)* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details): As i listen to my teacher, i then drop into a low stance, and begin to attack the opponents chakra points vigorously. I first start with the right, aiming at several chakra points in the arm, then i use the let to hit several in the leg and lower abdominal are. Due to locking these tenketous, my opponent is unable to mold chakra as the chakra can't flow to these areas and pass through.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: When i am very close to the opponent
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?: Well, i would use it and add a combination, with an element.
* Its pros and cons: Good for attacking in close range, also good from locking chakra points. Bad, because i will have to get close, and the opponents would most likely use nagashi.

4)/5)* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details): As the opponent is standing infront of me, i then begin to kick with the left leg, kicking thier right knee, then using the right leg to kick the left knee. I then finally use the right leg to deliver another kick, sending the opponent spiralling upwards in the air. With him lingering in the air, i then begin to go behind the opponent, and deliver three strikes tot he back.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: I would make the opponent get airborn, then strike them down with a fast technique
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? I just did O_O
* Its pros and cons: Will be fast succession. Will need to get very close and execution will be hard
 

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1)* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details): As i stand looking towards my teacher, i remember his words from before, thus being said; i send my chakra out infront of my body, then begining to rotate rappidly, creating another spinning dome. Although this is similar to the last technique, this one is more powerful.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: Same as before. When a large amount of rubble, or projectiles are sent in my direction.
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? Nope, i would use it as a defensive technique
* Its pros and cons: Good for defending, though week against elemental chakra of any rank :(

2)* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details): As i focus my chakra into both my right and left hand, i then begin to pull them back, and go towards a thrusting motion, releasing the chakra, blowing the tree back.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: If a clone, or my opponent comes charging at me
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? Well, maybe i can use the momentum from the push, to give me some space between my opponent, thus giving me some time to add a combination.
* Its pros and cons: Weak against elemental, and i will need to be close to the opponent. Good, to send opponent flying.

3)* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details): As i listen to my teacher, i then drop into a low stance, and begin to attack the opponents chakra points vigorously. I first start with the right, aiming at several chakra points in the arm, then i use the let to hit several in the leg and lower abdominal are. Due to locking these tenketous, my opponent is unable to mold chakra as the chakra can't flow to these areas and pass through.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: When i am very close to the opponent
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?: Well, i would use it and add a combination, with an element.
* Its pros and cons: Good for attacking in close range, also good from locking chakra points. Bad, because i will have to get close, and the opponents would most likely use nagashi.

4)/5)* How you'll perform them(be elaborate explaining what hand you use and which part you hit in details): As the opponent is standing infront of me, i then begin to kick with the left leg, kicking thier right knee, then using the right leg to kick the left knee. I then finally use the right leg to deliver another kick, sending the opponent spiralling upwards in the air. With him lingering in the air, i then begin to go behind the opponent, and deliver three strikes tot he back.
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them: I would make the opponent get airborn, then strike them down with a fast technique
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively? I just did O_O
* Its pros and cons: Will be fast succession. Will need to get very close and execution will be hard
Stop changing your name..

Realy, everything are poorly explained. I don't need you just to perform it, but also think outside the box and give me more ways and suggestions.
And don't use the template when aswering since posting the template over and over again makes it looks what you wrote is so bulky but its not.

For the first move, you should try and look at details, its not only used for defense therefore the reason why you add sharp edges to it.
I see lazyness only makes you want to type quickly and get it done but i want you to gain something here ^^
you don't send chakra infront of you, you are an hyuga so you should be using terms i want to hear. Tenketsus are the medium you used to release chakra.
And lastly, it c-rank so it would still cancel out d-rank element.

For the second one, use one hand not two. And you don't need to be close to the opponent.

thirdly, how would you add an element with it? And you missed one thing which is, it can be used to defend. Remember when a barrage of spiders are sent towards Neji or hundreds of bees towards Hinata. What do you think of that?

The last one, I believe the description is simple enough. I don't like the way you do it. Youu have to grab the opponent's hand/limb to give you the opening. Maybe you can use it that way but it may be a cause for unnecesary debate.
Anyways its good and creative.
 

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Ok, sorry, i'll redo

1) Looking towards the opponent i recognize this is the perfect time to use this new technique, I first begin by exerting my chakra out wards then i begin to do a swift rotation. This rapid spinning, creates a dome of slicing chakra that allows me to defend. Though, that's not the only part of this technique. As my rotation continues, it begins to build in size and the edges become sharper, thus giving me a good cutting ability. Die to the fast clockwise movements, i am able to deflect projectiles ans debris that are sent in my direction.

I would utilize when a large amount of rubble is heading towards me as said before. Though, if my opponent is dashing in head first, i can also use this, and the momentum that is built off the technique, i would use to aid in my next technique.

Well, if im doing a clockwise rotation, when the rotation is finished, i will still be moving in that manner, so i would take advantage of this and spew out fuuton chakra in this direction, releasing a wave of wind that will hit multiple targets.

I like the defensive standpoint of this technique. It allows me to move to the core and allows me to defend while also creating an opening to attack.

2) As i focus my chakra into my right, i begin to feel a tingle thus letting me know its almost time. Using the byakugan tracking ability, i wait till the opponent is exactly 2 feet away, and i go into a thrusting motion with my hand, thus releasing the chakra sending the opponent flying, die to the massive pressure.

I would utalize this when a large rock is sent towards me, i can send it into my opponents direction, thus obscuring their vision, giving me an oppeneing.

I was wondering if i can thrust my hand on the floor to give me enough momentum, thus forcing me into the air. But, after you said it's only one hand, the question would be futile. Though, I see a way where i can use it to pound on an opponents thigh, thus making them go off balance.

I think it would be great to use up close, due to the pressure portion of the technique and its destructive power. Though, if the opponent uses nagashi, things will go wrong. Though, i'm guessing that with he byakugan, I will be able to see the chakra build up.

3)As i listen to my teacher, i then drop into a low stance, and begin to attack the opponents chakra points vigorously. I first start with the right, aiming at several chakra points in the arm, then i use the let to hit several in the leg and lower abdominal are. Due to locking these tenketous, my opponent is unable to mold chakra as the chakra can't flow to these areas and pass through. With the way they are hit, the opponent wouldn't know at first until they try to mold chakra. Originally, they would have expected a normal finger thrust.

Well this imo is very useful. I would use it to stop the opponent chakra flow, and due to me already being so close, i can follow up with a fast technique like rasengan. This will do severe damage to the internal organs, and might even kill the opponent if they are hit in a close proximity

Ok, i meant to ask this. If i were to use this on like a summoning, will it go poof. And how would I say that the opponents chakra network is locked. Will they have to like stand as my dummy or something?

This is a great offensive technique, while also being a great defensive technique, I guess due to being able to lock chakra, you can go from defensive to offensive.

4/5) idk if you wanted me to redo this one
 

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Ok, sorry, i'll redo

1) Looking towards the opponent i recognize this is the perfect time to use this new technique, I first begin by exerting my chakra out wards then i begin to do a swift rotation. This rapid spinning, creates a dome of slicing chakra that allows me to defend. Though, that's not the only part of this technique. As my rotation continues, it begins to build in size and the edges become sharper, thus giving me a good cutting ability. Die to the fast clockwise movements, i am able to deflect projectiles ans debris that are sent in my direction.

I would utilize when a large amount of rubble is heading towards me as said before. Though, if my opponent is dashing in head first, i can also use this, and the momentum that is built off the technique, i would use to aid in my next technique.

Well, if im doing a clockwise rotation, when the rotation is finished, i will still be moving in that manner, so i would take advantage of this and spew out fuuton chakra in this direction, releasing a wave of wind that will hit multiple targets.

I like the defensive standpoint of this technique. It allows me to move to the core and allows me to defend while also creating an opening to attack.

2) As i focus my chakra into my right, i begin to feel a tingle thus letting me know its almost time. Using the byakugan tracking ability, i wait till the opponent is exactly 2 feet away, and i go into a thrusting motion with my hand, thus releasing the chakra sending the opponent flying, die to the massive pressure.

I would utalize this when a large rock is sent towards me, i can send it into my opponents direction, thus obscuring their vision, giving me an oppeneing.

I was wondering if i can thrust my hand on the floor to give me enough momentum, thus forcing me into the air. But, after you said it's only one hand, the question would be futile. Though, I see a way where i can use it to pound on an opponents thigh, thus making them go off balance.

I think it would be great to use up close, due to the pressure portion of the technique and its destructive power. Though, if the opponent uses nagashi, things will go wrong. Though, i'm guessing that with he byakugan, I will be able to see the chakra build up.

3)As i listen to my teacher, i then drop into a low stance, and begin to attack the opponents chakra points vigorously. I first start with the right, aiming at several chakra points in the arm, then i use the let to hit several in the leg and lower abdominal are. Due to locking these tenketous, my opponent is unable to mold chakra as the chakra can't flow to these areas and pass through. With the way they are hit, the opponent wouldn't know at first until they try to mold chakra. Originally, they would have expected a normal finger thrust.

Well this imo is very useful. I would use it to stop the opponent chakra flow, and due to me already being so close, i can follow up with a fast technique like rasengan. This will do severe damage to the internal organs, and might even kill the opponent if they are hit in a close proximity

Ok, i meant to ask this. If i were to use this on like a summoning, will it go poof. And how would I say that the opponents chakra network is locked. Will they have to like stand as my dummy or something?

This is a great offensive technique, while also being a great defensive technique, I guess due to being able to lock chakra, you can go from defensive to offensive.

4/5) idk if you wanted me to redo this one
Superb! where have you been all this while?

Now lets get to one or two things and your questions.
For the first one, Its perfect, I like you ideas on how it can be used and channeled.
And want to let you know you can see with byakugan while spining but your weak point remains the point at the back of your neck.
You can increase this into the larger one that we are still going to do when you see the attack is more than you can bear. You simple release more chakra and build it up to make the done a bigger one.

The second one was a perfect one too, although logically i think you can also use both hands but their powers would be halfed.
Ofcos there is a way you can make use of its rebouding force but unlike herricane fist your hand should be close to the ground, just like you are in a crouched position with your hands on the ground so while you pump the ground, you should be able to propel yourself but not too much of a distance. Liked the limb idea! You can use it to build up dust for distraction by shooting it on the ground too.. Many ways.
And yes, you would see the nagashi build up but the problem would be if you can quickly react to it fast enough.

Nice one too on the thirsd one and as of the summon, it is not seen where their tenketsus are being striked or maybe they have tenketsus but why go for tenketsu when you can just hit one of their organ and they poof away?
You won't stop them completely from molding chakra
as that is an A-rank move where you hit the whole 361 nodes so No they can still move and mold chakra but chakra won't pass through the closed tenketsus.
If you hit the tenketsus of the hand, that doesn't mean they can't move the hand.

And cool, i already told you what you need to do there in the last set.


Now any questions?
 

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Nah, i'll stop being lazy and reply better :p
sorry! Never knew you've replied.

Okay

While you finish training for the day, you head home. Its almost night and the light is becoming dimmer as your shadow gains weight. Unknown to you, some ninjas are hating and jealous of your new found power and they seek to eliminate you before you complete your training.

Scenerio 1: As you pass through a place with several mesh of trees which they hid, they toss a kunai to your feet to signal the bullseye and a sign for other to commence attack, then this is followed by hundreds of kunai being hurled at you, not at once but concurrently.
Your byakugan is not activate as you head home so you won't notice anything before the first kunai.
You can't use rotation.
Use what you have learnt so far in jyuken to defend yourself from the mayhem of kunais.

Scenerio 2: Instead of hurling kunai at you, they jump out and surround you, 4 of them! Disable of all them with jyuken and freeform without using rotation and 64 strikes.
You can use taijutsu if you have it.

Scenerio 3: My clone awaits you with all those invaders out in the blue, then she wants to fight you too, seems she is in a state of madness. Attack me with just 3 moves comprising of 2 jyuken moves and one any other move you think you can combine with it.


Lets see how you fair?
 

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Scenario 1:

Walking home, Luigi suddenly notices a kunai that suddenly fell right beside him. Being suspicious, and knowing his byakugn is not active, he sends chakra into his legs and does a double back flip, sending him 7 meters from his original position. He performs a quick string of handseals activating him byakugan. He then notes his opponents. He then notes several kunai heading his way. Remembering from his training, he sends his chakra into his palms, thrusting outward, releasing a blast of chakra, the air palm that sends the kunai flying.

-Inserts Air palm-

Scenario 2:

As the opponents come hurling towards him, Luigi recollects from his training and uses his byakugan to look for openings. As the first opponent heads out, Luigi drops his right leg low, then delivers a powerful kick to the knee of his opponent sending him flying. As the second opponent comes flying, Luigi continues and delivers a powerful kick to the face, sending the second opponent flying. As the third opponent comes flying, Luigi rotates his leg, using the left to deliver a powerful kick tot he chin. As the Last opponent comes, Luigi grabs his right hand, sending him flying with a powerful throw then strikes the opponent in the back three times with his palms.

-Byakugan three kicks, and three strikes.-

Scenario 3:

As Nel clone comes dashing towards me, i then drop into a low stance, and begin to attack the chakra points vigorously. I first start with the right, aiming at several chakra points in the arm, then i use the let to hit several in the leg and lower abdominal are. Due to locking these tenketous, you are unable to mold chakra. I then do a quick low sweep, making you fall of your feet into the ground. As you're falling, i send my fuuton chakra into my fist, pushing it into your chest releasing a gusting whirlwind, pushing me into the air, as i send chakra into my palm, and send it towards your injured clone on the floor.

-64 strikes, Hurricane fist, Air palm-
 

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Scenario 1:

Walking home, Luigi suddenly notices a kunai that suddenly fell right beside him. Being suspicious, and knowing his byakugn is not active, he sends chakra into his legs and does a double back flip, sending him 7 meters from his original position. He performs a quick string of handseals activating him byakugan. He then notes his opponents. He then notes several kunai heading his way. Remembering from his training, he sends his chakra into his palms, thrusting outward, releasing a blast of chakra, the air palm that sends the kunai flying.

-Inserts Air palm-

Scenario 2:

As the opponents come hurling towards him, Luigi recollects from his training and uses his byakugan to look for openings. As the first opponent heads out, Luigi drops his right leg low, then delivers a powerful kick to the knee of his opponent sending him flying. As the second opponent comes flying, Luigi continues and delivers a powerful kick to the face, sending the second opponent flying. As the third opponent comes flying, Luigi rotates his leg, using the left to deliver a powerful kick tot he chin. As the Last opponent comes, Luigi grabs his right hand, sending him flying with a powerful throw then strikes the opponent in the back three times with his palms.

-Byakugan three kicks, and three strikes.-

Scenario 3:

As Nel clone comes dashing towards me, i then drop into a low stance, and begin to attack the chakra points vigorously. I first start with the right, aiming at several chakra points in the arm, then i use the let to hit several in the leg and lower abdominal are. Due to locking these tenketous, you are unable to mold chakra. I then do a quick low sweep, making you fall of your feet into the ground. As you're falling, i send my fuuton chakra into my fist, pushing it into your chest releasing a gusting whirlwind, pushing me into the air, as i send chakra into my palm, and send it towards your injured clone on the floor.

-64 strikes, Hurricane fist, Air palm-
1. Nice reduction and a good way to react, good defense however i was thinking you'll use 64 strikes like neji used against the spiders and Hinata against the swarm of bees. Remember if the projectiles covers a wide range, that jutsu can't be efective and since you can't use rotation, you have to use palm strikes.

2. I like you idea but i wonder how you are going to pull that off. If you kick the knee, how would that send someone flying.
Kicking first the knee only gives you a platform to be able to do the remaining kicks so trying to use one move on 3 of them won't work.
A smarter move would be as two aproaches you with their hands stretched to punch you you simply grab their hand and flip it letting it slide by your sides and as the pass by you you turn around swiftly and their back would be facing you doing three strikes on each of them. Then as third one slide towards you from below, you simply flip upwards while spining allowing the back of your foot to slam against the rear of his head and as you land, you catch a glimpse of the fouth one and you send him flying with chakra blast. Mission accomplished. You can polish this more but make it reasonable, as in apply it real life and reason as if you are doing it yourself. Look for possibilities that you won't be at a disadvantage so your move must compliment the other.

3. i like this move however, i can block the first one making the others useless. Try and make me open first that i won't be able to block or have less time to react.


Okay, you have proved enough to move to the next rank


(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4
Heavenly empty palm
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close-MId
Damage Points: 40(+8 if opponent hits an
object)
Description: A burst fire of empty palms that do more damage.

A larger version of the palm thrust blast, but this is fast and multiple can be done with both hands. Each hand is weaker but the potency is the blasts combined.
 

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Focusing my chakra into my hand, I make sure that the chakra is evenly spread and i begin to do 4 rapid palm thrust in each hand. I then release chakra form both he hands that combine, adding to its reach and power.

I would utilize this when i may be out of creative ideas.

This is great for close combat, and also when i want to keep some distance between my opponent and myself. When i'm falling out of mid - air, can i use this to like push me up due to the blunt force of the technique?

Well, i guess because if i thrust, wouldn't there be a limit on my thrusting? And this is strong to stop projectiles.
 

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Nice and note that it will also add to the damage if the opponent is pushed against an obstacle. Dunno but a total amount of 4thrust(2 for each hand) is reasonable.

Now to the next.

(Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou) - 8 Trigrams 128
Strikes
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Attack that closes 128 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for three turns after
the opponent is hit by it.

You simply increase your number of strikes compared to the 64 strikes you did before.
Also describe how you will creatively do this and its effect on your opponent.
 
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As i focus my chakra into my palms i then go to transferring it into my fingers, the middle and index in both hands. I then proceed to hit the tenketouses. I quickly begin to rotate, striking several parts of the opponent, then i go into a quick thrust. I continue to strike the areas, in entirety, 128 times.

Would be great to use when i want to stop the opponents chakra flow for a little.

This would be cool to use totally when my opponent goes to do a powerful technique, i will be able to disrupt them. Can i like attack the feet also?

Also, good for close up and rendering chakra useless. Must be really close
 

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As i focus my chakra into my palms i then go to transferring it into my fingers, the middle and index in both hands. I then proceed to hit the tenketouses. I quickly begin to rotate, striking several parts of the opponent, then i go into a quick thrust. I continue to strike the areas, in entirety, 128 times.

Would be great to use when i want to stop the opponents chakra flow for a little.

This would be cool to use totally when my opponent goes to do a powerful technique, i will be able to disrupt them. Can i like attack the feet also?

Also, good for close up and rendering chakra useless. Must be really close
you wont stop chakra flow but will limit the chakra flow to half for 3 turns. Logically i think this would make him not be able to use jutsus above A-rank for 3 good turns.

No you can't use leg though i've submitted a fighting style that does something like that and much more ^^

Now for the next three, you will be dealing powerful strikes that is able to damage tenketsus and organs at the same time.

(Jūkenpō: Shiroikiton) - Gentle Fist Style:
White Spirit Release
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs a series of high- speed strikes before charging they chakra into
their hands and releasing it in a burst.
You will do two forms of Jyuken here, precision and blast. Strike continously the chakra points of the opponent then at the end charge blunt chakra into one of your hand and blast him to oblivion damaging his entrails.

(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) – Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user runs at the enemy at full speed before jumping and hitting one of the
foe’s vital organs. Alternatively the user may
jump from a high distance and palm the foe
continually until all chakra points blast.
You will run at full speed towards your opponent(when he is open) then jump and as you land, jab one of his vital organ severing it completely with one hit, otherwise after you run(compulsory), jump and jab continously the tenketsus until they burst.
Quiz: What is the reason behind the bursting of the tenketsus?

(Hakke Seirei Hirate) – Eight Trigrams Spirit
Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs the enemy on the chest and sends them flying. Then they strike
with a powerful hit with their palm.
Grab you enemy on the chest with one hand while charging chakra into the other, then sink the chakra into him to damage his internals and send him flying.
 

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Being that i'm making my Valentine bio, i will be dropping my Hyuga. That being said, there is no reason to continue the training beyond this point. Though, i WILL remake my Hyuga and this training will not be a waste. Thanks for your time man.

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