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Yes, I will mate.

(pa-fekuto-shi-rudo) Perfect Shield
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:While the user is in possesion of his sword he holds it with one of his hand and tranfers pure chakra in it and rotates it in a circular motion and a shield of pure chakra is formed which is capable enough of blocking all the elemental jutsu upto A rank(shield is broken completely)
and below (Shiel suffers a little damage but can take on one more attack)
~need to be taught by gitanshu~
~Can only be used 2 time~

Now as you can see it is a rather simple yet effective technique, so go on and ask any question if you have regarding it and I will answer them, It basically works by passing chakra into your blade and then swinging it to create a shield in front of you.
 

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It is simple but useful^^

So, an elemental A-Rank technique breaks the shield, but what about a non elemental technique like Tai or Nin, does it work against those two too?
And after blocking a B-Rank or lower, what is the maximum rank it can defend against, 2 B-rank,or B en C?
 

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Well it should take on an S rank attack of normal chakra but I did not know the difference b/w elemental and non-elemental chakra back when I made this technique therefor it was not designed for that purpose so only use it in out most need. [I will update this techniques as soon as I can]

As for taijutsu, I will say it will stop most of the attacks but the question is can you complete a swing action while releasing chakra from the sword before your opponent punches you? So think before you use it in such a tricky situation...

Well it will break as

A= B+B= B+ C+ C = C+C+C+C and so on

but advise you to use it against an A rank attack or at most B rank attack only as this shield is stationary and let's say you defend against a C rank than your shield is in front of you so you will have to move away from it and than attack again.
 

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Hmm, okay^^ One last short thing, under what catoregy falls this technique, nin/ken?

Now on to me teaching you then:p I will build up your training in the same way I have done mangekyo byakugan

So, before we start, tell me what you know about my style and about using a whip in general? What are they used for, what kind of whips are there etc.
 

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I meant it to be a kenjutsu........

Your style works by using whips to cast genjutsu, It can be done in multiple ways like sound of them moving or bu touching the opponent by them, whips in general are long thick threads which can cause great damage upon impact and may even result in swelling,As for different type of whips I don't have much I dea except they are made up of different materials like leather etc......
 

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Good, as for the different types of whips, there are short one's, used in horse riding, but also long one's, bull whips for example.

*hands you a normal leather bull whip*

First things first. Before we can start practising with the whip and genjutsu you need to know how to handle a whip, how to attack and how to defend with it. See those line a tans there?


*Points to a row of 20 cans, all set apart with a distance of 20 cm*

You are going to hit those, with the whip only, one by one. You hit two or more at the same time, you set them all straight and start again.
One thing, like you said, whip movements are mainly made by the use of the wrist, so try only using your wrist. In the future it will give your opponent less time to react, because by the time they can react, the whip is already heading their way.
 

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After carefully listening to the instruction's, I take the whip from you and get into striking rage of the cans*

Gray: Damn they are so close, I will need to figure something out.


As gray speaks these words to himself he starts to move the whip for the very first time and going by the instructions he uses his dominant fist to move him, the first swing goes completely off the beat and takes 4 canes at one as instead of going straight the whip went vertical and took out many canes at one

Gray than quickly run towards the cans and places them properly again and than moves back to his initial position.

Gray: It seriously is going to be hard >.>

With his second attempt gray takes into account he made the last time and instead of going in an arc pattern he moves his hands wrist in rather straight pattern and successfully hit's a can, he then slowly and gradually strikes 18 canes one after the other but and due to the excitement of completing the task, he moves his hand in rather awkward manner and strikes to canes one.

Gray: Damn me and my hyper activeness. >_>

Gray quickly places all the cans together again and this time slowly and gradually strikes all the can's one after the other.

Gray: Finally I am done with them U_U
 

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Walks over to the cans and inspects them

Hmmm, seems like you start to get the hang of it... Now, next!

I create 3 wooden dummies that standing at mid-range of you
(Mokuton: Mokujin) - Wood Style: Wooden Man
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A(+5 for any hits landed by the dummy)
Description: The user creates a training wooden dummy to help him train or to fight against an opponent.



So, next is improving your aim at the human body, you see the red dots on those dummies? Hit them all with your whip, multiple times!

Red dots are on the shin, calve, knee, thigh, hip, chest, shoulders, biceps, elbows and wrists.
 

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After listening to your instruction gray starts to use his whip and starts to aim for the respective places and start's from the top most portion of the body of the dummy which is his Shoulders, Gray starts by holding his whip in a way that it goes perfectly straight so as to be precise with his attacks, Gray starts to swing the whip but misses on the first occasion and instead strikes the neck of the dummy.

Gray: Oye sensei, I think striking at the neck will be more effective O-O

Severus Snape- *Kick's gray in the butt* Get your ass back there and do as I told you.

Gray: :|

Gray again starts to swing his whip but this time around he focuses just on the red dot he want's to strike and hit's it perfectly this time around.

Gray: Did you see that. ^x^

Severus Snape: You are such a child, you have only struck a single dot *sigh*

Gray :| :|

Upon hearing his sensei's comments gray get's all so worked up and quickly starts to strike one dot after the other although he keeps his cool all this time and concentrates on each dot so as to not miss the target and eventually after a minute or two he hits all the dot in a series.

Gray: I did it, now give me a cookie.

Severus Snape: This was just the qualifying drill.

Gray: :| :| :|
 

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After listening to your instruction gray starts to use his whip and starts to aim for the respective places and start's from the top most portion of the body of the dummy which is his Shoulders, Gray starts by holding his whip in a way that it goes perfectly straight so as to be precise with his attacks, Gray starts to swing the whip but misses on the first occasion and instead strikes the neck of the dummy.

Gray: Oye sensei, I think striking at the neck will be more effective O-O

Severus Snape- *Kick's gray in the butt* Get your ass back there and do as I told you.

Gray: :|

Gray again starts to swing his whip but this time around he focuses just on the red dot he want's to strike and hit's it perfectly this time around.

Gray: Did you see that. ^x^

Severus Snape: You are such a child, you have only struck a single dot *sigh*

Gray :| :|

Upon hearing his sensei's comments gray get's all so worked up and quickly starts to strike one dot after the other although he keeps his cool all this time and concentrates on each dot so as to not miss the target and eventually after a minute or two he hits all the dot in a series.

Gray: I did it, now give me a cookie.

Severus Snape: This was just the qualifying drill.

Gray: :| :| :|
Hmmm, that looks fine to me, you just need more practise. Of course, no opponent just stands still and waits for your attack, so now it's moving targets!

Creates 3 wooden man that move around and mimics your movements
(Mokuton: Mokujin soujutsu) - Wood Style: Wooden Men Manipulation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a Wooden Men (similar to the (Mokuton: Mokujin) - Wood Style: Wooden Man technique) that mimics his opponents moves. While it can be created from existing wood, earth or water, its major ability is that if used with Wood Men Coffin it can drain way Chakra from the enemy.



Same drill as before!
 

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Gray: This is easy.

Gray quickly picks up his whip and starts to swing it for the red dot's but what he notices is that none of moved a single inch from there position and are just moving there hands as if mimicking me. I just to make it confirm I start to do a crazy dance........

Gray *thinking to him self* : Meh sensei is playing tricks with me...............

Gray than uses this rather small mistake of yours and easily strikes 2 of the 3 clones rather easily but leaves the third clone unharmed, Gray than start's to run in rather unorthodox manner and so does your wooden clone and than putting all his knowledge and prior training to practice Gray starts to aim for his vital point's after missing for the first 2 three times and on certain rare occasions gray is able to strike all the point's for one time each, than he give it a rather final touch by striking all the points one after the other in one go.
 

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Seems you've figured out hew there guys work:), but how will you do it with shadowclones?

Creates 5 shadow clones.

Same as before, but al the shadow clones will move independently, and coming from different angles, what would you do against that, seeing that you have to attack and defend at the same time.
 

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Gray: *Sigh* Now I will have to deal with them also.....

Gray quickly picks up his whip and start to run behind your shadow clone as he approaches clone 1 he quickly moves his right hand aim to strike at his shoulder, the practice that Gray have had with the last Wooden clone comes into play now and within 2 attempts he is able to strike the point and slowly continues the task, Gray now aims for his chest and other important organs, Gray after a few mis hit is able to strike him all the places one time each and than he to give it the final touch goes on to strike him in one single streak at all the points, Gray now approaches the remaining 5 clone 1 after the another and using his whip and concentration power and most importantly his awesomeness, he is able to strike all the clone one after the other and thus successfully complete the task.
 

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Gray: *Sigh* Now I will have to deal with them also.....

Gray quickly picks up his whip and start to run behind your shadow clone as he approaches clone 1 he quickly moves his right hand aim to strike at his shoulder, the practice that Gray have had with the last Wooden clone comes into play now and within 2 attempts he is able to strike the point and slowly continues the task, Gray now aims for his chest and other important organs, Gray after a few mis hit is able to strike him all the places one time each and than he to give it the final touch goes on to strike him in one single streak at all the points, Gray now approaches the remaining 5 clone 1 after the another and using his whip and concentration power and most importantly his awesomeness, he is able to strike all the clone one after the other and thus successfully complete the task.

Neat, but the only thing you forgot about is that the clones were coming at the same time, from different angles. The idea of using the whip in this case is circling it around your body in a protective barrier so that the opponent can not come close to you.
So, now you have the basics down we'll be starting with the first (and for now only) technique.


*Creates 3 shadowclones*

I don't fell like getting hurt myself today, so practise on these guys. You will start by moving the whip around you, creating a slight defence from advancing opponents, and channel your chakra into the whip. The you will flick the whip forwards, and hit one of the clones at any point on his body, besides his head, disrupting his chakra flow slightly and putting him under a genjutsu.
While the clones is in the genjutsu, he will feel his muscle start to hurt, where he is hit, which will increase over time (2 turns) until the muscles are too painful to move any more.
Try it out at different area's on the body, but it works the best on the limbs.

Oh, and don't let me hear you complain again, you wanted to learn this mister>.<
 

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I start by moving my whip in circular pattern so as to create a defense around me and while doing so I stat to pass my chalra into the whip, I them make the whip charge towards one of your clone and strike him on his knee area and put him under a genjtsu in that slight moment, the moment he is under my genjutsu he starts to feel a great muscle pain which slowly and gradually increases with time making it rather impossible for him to move, I then again start to rotate my whip while charging it with my chakra and strike your second clone on his shoulder area and cast him under the same genjutsu, I than directly charge my whip towards the last clone while passing my chakra into the whip and as soon as whip makes contact with your clone he is casted under the same genjutsu and thus all your 3 clones are immobilized with in a certain interval of time.

Sorry, I was just playing my character Gray [I like him to be lazy but sorry again]
 

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Good, good! You have learned
(Hoippu Geijutsu: Akuma no ikari) | Whip Arts: Devils Rage
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will move the whip around his body while channelling his chakra trough the whip. As the whip hits the opponent, a small amount of chakra of the users chakra will disrupt the opponent’s chakra flow, putting him under a subtle genjutsu B-Rank jutsu where he will feel a burning pain coming from the muscle's that are near the hit point. This pain will increase over the next 2 turns, if not broken out from the Genjutsu, until the opponent has the feeling that pain is too much, and can't use the hit limb any more, until broken out of the genjutsu.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-


Since this is at the moment the only approved technique, I can't teach you more (obviously) but hopefully I will have one (maybe two) newly approved technique's soon. I'll let you know when it is time youngling. Btw, Grey will need a whip;)

Hoippu Geijutsu | Whip Arts
Type: Gentaijutsu
Background: While travelling trough the ninja world, -Severus Snape- came across a lot of different fighting styles, but one of them made the biggest impact on him, a Sannin from the leaf who used his hair as a whip. This inspired him to start fighting using a self-made whip. In the beginning this didn’t help him in his battles, it even caused him almost to die. Starting to combine his whip attacks with genjutsu, he realised that this was an really effective fighting style and started to use it.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
This type of genjutsu uses the whip the user carries with him to disturb the enemy’s chakra flow, by inserting a bit of the users chakra trough a whip into the opponents chakra flow. This disruption of the flow of chakra makes the enemy perceives illusions, which puts enemy under a genjutsu. The damage done by the Whip Arts is Physical (if hit by the whip) but can also be Mental (the genjutsu the enemy is put under).
Whip Arts techniques are usually fast but gracefully, relying on the short ‘whipping’ movements of the whip to hurt the enemy (If they did too much physical damage, the enemy they would automatically be released from the genjutsu) and then disturbing the enemy’s chakra flow to put them under a Genjutsu. The speed of the movements can be compared with the speed of an attacking snake, short but powerful.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must be of at least Sannin Rank to learn
- Must have mastered Genjutsu
-The user biography must carry a (Custom) whip
-This style can only be taught by a Hoippu geijutsu Master.
 
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