[CJ] CJ Lesson with Lili

[Negative Knight]

Yes to all of those. Stand alone, this technique cannot do damage but using swords/kunai/whatever will allow for it do that just that.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

nice, I'm sans questions xD

 

[Negative Knight]

*Revives the thread*

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Omg yu gunn teax me sumtin?!

 

[Negative Knight]

You wish :|

Raven's Purge pl0x

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Fine >_>

What is it? Post it, describe it to me, analyze it, etc

 

[Negative Knight]

( Katon: Jomei no Karasu ) Fire Style: Raven's Purge

Spoiler

Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Point: N/A
Description: After 1 handseal, allows the user create a localized fast burning ember that reduces a patch of organic materials like leaves, mushrooms, plants, to ashes in moments, releasing a large cloud of smoke. These clouds will hold a specific compound or subtance that the organic material was holding, such as toxins, venoms, poisons, etc, quickly purging them into the air. With a second handseal, the user can control the hot smoke into vanishing harmlessly or aggregate it on an opponent. Can be used on opponent's techniques up to the rank or user's own created with no rank restriction, only size.
Works on dead animals, never bigger than a human, or a small group tiny animals, never bigger than a normal insect.
*requires a 1 turn cool down*
*Can only be used 3 times to overcome opponent's techniques*

Similar to Lonesome ember except it can only be materialized on organic matter both dead and alive. The fire reduces whatever its burning to ashes within mere moments while also generating a manipulable cloud of smoke. These clouds embody whatever properties the original organic material had e.g. if it was poisonous, the cloud will be deadly to inhale. Since it can be used on animals, I'd use this on dead rays (possibly alive ones too <_>) to create a venomous mist. This would be a useful technique to employ against organic armours or clothes to disarm an opponent from a distance.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Thta's basically it yeah. The smoke is basically composed of carbon (from the organic material) and a different substance. The Carbon cloud will pick up the substance, essentially making sort of vehicle or a diffuser for the substance, allowing it to be inhaled by the target. One thing though, you are not immune to whatever substance inside the cloud (unless you were actually immune to it already, prior to using the purge), but you can easily manipulate the cloud out of your nostrils/mouth, essentially, if you focus, you could enter the poisonous cloud at will. Of course, if the cloud is holding something that could be toxic even on contact, not just inhalation, then you'd have to manipulate the cloud all around you, not just the head, but you get the drift.

Finally, against techniques, this follows the elemental strength's and weaknesses.

 

[Negative Knight]

(Suiton: Suijou Souhou) – Water Release: Aquatic Touch
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will make direct contact with an object before focusing their suiton chakra directly into their intended target. Through the use of this chakra, the user will apply a process of conversion similar to the ones employed in replacement techniques using various mediums e.g. water, sand, etc. Instead of converting one's own body into water, the user will cause the target substance to undergo the state transition in their stead. Unlike the original technique this jutsu is based on (Water Replacement), the converted object will retain both its shape and form, granting it a certain degree of solidity (Similar to Water Style: Sword of Draining) thus allowing the user to keep a hold of the newly liquefied object if they wish to. If the user wishes instead of the whole object being turned into water, only select components (e.g. hilt or blade of a weapon) can be targeted. This technique cannot be used on people/summons, Custom weapons and sentient weapons (e.g. Samehada)

Note: Lasts two turns
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
Note: Follows elemental strengths and weaknesses

The usual z.z

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Hum, would you mind explain it to me first and then I ask questions?

 

[Negative Knight]

Its pretty much a variant of Water replacement. Instead of turning yourself into water, you turn anything you touch into water. Despite turning into water, the transformed object/tool retain its form and structure so you can still hold it as if it hasn't been liquefied. Anything converted into water becomes the equivalent of an A-Rank water technique (e.g. turn a nearby wall into water to defend against an incoming S-Rank Fire). The dimensions of the transformed object/tool/feature will always be five meters in length, width and height. You can convert specific parts of the same object e.g. the blade of a weapon or its handle. Some things can't be converted :/

 

[Lili-Chwan]

So you basically turn any element into water? What about S&W? Do they lose power? What about Earth? They retain their structure, but is that obligatory? For example, imagine it suits me better to let a sword go through my liquefied sword rather than parry it, can I have that sort of intangibility?

 

[Negative Knight]

So you basically turn any element into water? What about S&W? Do they lose power? What about Earth? They retain their structure, but is that obligatory? For example, imagine it suits me better to let a sword go through my liquefied sword rather than parry it, can I have that sort of intangibility?

Yes, any element that can be touched. S/W applies if its the opponent's technique. Depends really, since it becomes an A-Rank Water in power. Earth can be turned into water according to S/W if its the opponent's technique. Nope, that can't be done but that it is a good idea o-o. Perhaps I'll add that to the Wind variant I may or may not make.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Yes, any element that can be touched. S/W applies if its the opponent's technique. Depends really, since it becomes an A-Rank Water in power. Earth can be turned into water according to S/W if its the opponent's technique. Nope, that can't be done but that it is a good idea o-o. Perhaps I'll add that to the Wind variant I may or may not make.

So, if the water cannot become flexible and intangible, then the sole purpose of this technique is to make any object have Water's chakra elemental S&W?

 

[Negative Knight]

So, if the water cannot become flexible and intangible, then the sole purpose of this technique is to make any object have Water's chakra elemental S&W?

When you put it like that, maybe I didn't invest enough time into it D:

I'll probably update it in future

 

[Lili-Chwan]

When you put it like that, maybe I didn't invest enough time into it D:

I'll probably update it in future

Lol, this is why I asked you to explain it, because I had a lot of doubts about it...

Okay so, imagine a B rank Wall of Earth appears in front of me and I use this jutsu. What happens? What if I was the one who created the earth, what if my opponent did?

Can I make any size of object into water? Can I make trees, or do those count for the Animal/People restriction, being living organisms and whatnot?

After making something into water, could I manipulate said water with a Water jutsu, like a water source.

UH! Even better, if I can do that, can I then make the thing revert back to what it originally was, but now into the shape I made it take? That would make your technique EXTREMELY useful O_O Imagine bringing diamonds into the field and then start molding them into objects with a combination of Water techs and this technique O_O

 

[Negative Knight]

It will be converted into water if you made it (regardless of rank) and if the opponent made it (as long as its B-Rank or below in power) it will become an A-Rank wall of water.

Size-wise, I'd say anything within reasonable dimensions. I'd stick to five meter by five meter structures but converting a tree into water is reasonable. Tress don't fall under this technique's rule.

Yes, the water can be manipulated for other jutsus. Reshaping the construct ? No idea if that's possible but I'll add it to the list of updates xD.

Any more questions or suggestions ?

 

[Lili-Chwan]

It will be converted into water if you made it (regardless of rank) and if the opponent made it (as long as its B-Rank or below in power) it will become an A-Rank wall of water.

Size-wise, I'd say anything within reasonable dimensions. I'd stick to five meter by five meter structures but converting a tree into water is reasonable. Tress don't fall under this technique's rule.

Yes, the water can be manipulated for other jutsus. Reshaping the construct ? No idea if that's possible but I'll add it to the list of updates xD.

Any more questions or suggestions ?

Well, if, for example, you take a wall of metal, turn it into water, and then manipulate the water into a dragon, when you drop the initial technique, you'll get a metal dragon. You won't be able to control it, but if you had already set it in motion, it will pretty much attack your opponent as normal. Who says a dragon says needles, jets, waves, etc, you throw them towards your opponent and then revert them back to their original material, by then reshaped. Imagine you used this on something strong against water's weakness, then you suddenly revert back something that was supposedly water into something that's strong against what was thrown at you. Of course, the basic weakness of water's weakness is lightning, so it would be hard to find a lightning structure tangible enough to be turned into water, but who knows...

Imagine I turn tags, paper, etc into water, would they be ruined (soaked, for example) or would they revert back to their dry form?

 

[Negative Knight]

Your first idea would work brilliantly with Coal. Yep, definitely making these changes.

The tags wouldn't be soaked or ruined. Using Water Replacement and reforming doesn't leave the user or his/her clothes wet. Same with the Hozuki Transformation.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Your first idea would work brilliantly with Coal. Yep, definitely making these changes.

The tags wouldn't be soaked or ruined. Using Water Replacement and reforming doesn't leave the user or his/her clothes wet. Same with the Hozuki Transformation.

Well, I think you might have hit a gold mine

Anywho, I believe you wanted something of mine! Post it here and analyze it, please