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(Genjutsu: Me dakkyuu) - Illusionary Arts: Eye dislocation
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will perform two handseals (starting with boar) inducing the target in an illusion by sending their own chakra to disrupt the target's chakra system and the chakra within their brain. Right after performing the handseal, the target's senses would make them believe that the user possesses some increased speed ability and is using it to move quickly to their location, giving them few quick kicks and punches which sets them off balance. In the illusion, they won't be capable of matching their own speed with the user. They will then believe that the user has suddenly moved behind them and is pointing/touching the back of their (target's) head with their (the user's) index and middle finger as to release a projectile out of them at the back of the target's head. At that moment the target's eyes will have their eyeballs getting dislocated as if they were forcefully attracted by the user's 2 fingers, causing them to turn back 180 degrees as to stare behind themselves yet having their head facing the other side. This is all in the illusion and makes them feel great pain in the illusion causing some mental damage in reality aswell. In reality the target would be falling due to getting out of balance in the genjutsu (because of the few kicks and punches). When the genjutsu ends, the target will be capable of standing up but with some mental pain due to having had his eyes dislocated in the genjutsu. However, in reality, nothing happens to his eyes apart from being momentarily blinded while under the effects of the illusion.

Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: No genjutsu the same turn
Note: Cannot be used the following turn
Note: Must be taught by -Tsuki
Please tell me an advantage and a disadvantage to this technique. Also, when would you use it in a battle?
 

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Advantage: I can easily fool the opponent that I'm starting out with a taijutsu move by charging towards him while in fact I'm casting the illusion on him. Or I can fool him that I'm opening my 1st or 2nd inner gates by yelling out making him to believe my speed is true.

Disadvantage: If this jutsu is used after sometime in the battle, the opponent may figure out something is wrong if I start moving around suddenly at high speeds as he'll have an idea of my base speed by then.

I think the best time to use this technique is on my opening move.
Also the best time would be when I'm using it with my clone at my side as I can exploit the situation and strike my opponent with a jutsu when he is stumbling due to the kicks and punches in the illusion.
 

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Well.. well.. I did see it coming.. That Urahara pic..:mad:_@:

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Illusionary Arts: Black hole (Genjutsu: Kuroi ho-ru)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (Due to mental stress)
Description: The user performs the Dog -> Ox -> Bird hand seals and puts the opponent under an illusion where a small hole appears 2 meters behind him and the opponent will feel as if he is sucked from behind into that hole with a tremendous force not very easy to overcome. Once the opponent's body is drawn close to the hole, his body will be sucked in through the small hole thus crushing his body leaving blood everywhere on the ground while producing severe pain to the opponent as he is being sucked in through the hole. Passing through the hole takes some time, during which the enemy feels the tremendous pain and pressure.. Once through the hole, the enemy is left in an empty, hellish black void world where nothing inhabits, seeing the real world only through the small hole through which he entered. The damage is due to mental stress produced by the feeling of severe pain while the body crushes through the hole in the illusion.
Notes:
  • Can only be used 2 times per battle.
  • Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
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The core idea behind this jutsu is that making the opponent to believe that he is being sucked into an alternate dimension through the hole.
You can control the level at which the black hole appears.
Though exactly not the same, you can compare the jutsu execution like that of Kamui I mean the action of sucking the body into the hole.

Now tell me
1. How will you figure out this is an illusion?
2. Ways of breaking this illusion
3. Few ways to supplement the genjutsu by any means (by action or words, etc) to make your opponent believe it's not an illusion.
 

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1. How will you figure out this is an illusion?
The best way I can think of is our surrounding. There might be various things around us which do no seem to be sucked or even attracted by the black hole. It's actually quite difficult to realise that we're under the effect of an illusion o_O

2. Ways of breaking this illusion
- Stabbing myself in a minor muscle (with a kunai or making a Doton no Jutsu raising it up in such an angle that it would hit a minor muscle)
- Use Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar or Earth Release: Hardening Technique (both of them are S-Ranks) to make chakra flow through my entire body, cancelling the illusion.

3. Few ways to supplement the genjutsu by any means to make your opponent believe it's not an illusion.
- Actions: Using a wind release technique towards the opponent would make it more believable that his surrounding is also being affected by the black hole.
- Words: "Let's see how you'd like your entire body crushed and sucked by a black hole! *performs technique*". "Bye bye, send my regards to the other world~"


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Now that I think of it o.o you don't even need to realise that it's an illusion. One could simply use Earth Release: Hardening Technique as a mean of adding weight to themselves in order to escape the black hole. As their earth jutsu gets performed, they are released from the illusion.
 
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Any questions.?

I have a question regarding your cj.
- my speed in illusion is traceable by opponent at all times or not?
 

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Hmm I can't come up with any questions :p

As for the speed in my CJ, the speed is ALMOST non-traceable while getting closer to the enemy. The opponent, regardless if they themselves have an increasing speed ability, will not be capable of matching your speed IN the illusion. After the kicks and punches, when you're about to suddenly appear behind your opponent, the opponent would have the impression that you suddenly dissapear and suddenly feel your 2 fingers pointing at the back of their head (so after the kicks/punches, you could almost say at body flicker speed... if that makes sense xD)
 
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(Genjutsu: Me Dakkyuu) - Illusionary Arts: Eye Dislocation
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs two handseals (starting with boar) inducing the target in an illusion by sending their chakra to disrupt the target's chakra system and the chakra within their brain. After performing those handseals, the target's senses would make them believe that the user possesses some increased speed ability that could be mistaken for swift release and is using it to move quickly to the opponent's location. Depending on what the user initially planned for this illusion, the illusion will either have a prolonged or shortened duration (both cases not exceeding 1 turn) which cannot be altered after the genjutsu is cast. In the illusion, once the user would have suddenly appeared near the target, the user will give the opponent many successive quick kicks and punches which sets them off balance. In the illusion, the target won't be capable of matching their own reaction and speed with the user's false presence regardless of how quick they are in reality. The moment in which the user had planned the illusion to end, the target will believe that the false presence of the user has suddenly moved behind them and is pointing/touching the back of the target's head with the user's index and middle finger in a gun-like fashion. At that moment, the target's eyes will have their eyeballs suddenly dislocated from their sockets as if they were forcefully attracted by the user's 2 fingers, causing the eyes to turn back 180 degrees to stare behind themselves yet having their head facing the other side. This is all in the illusion and makes them experience great pain which causes some mental damage in reality. In reality the target would be falling due to getting out of balance in the genjutsu (because of the kicks and punches) and seemingly be incapable of moving because of the illusionary taijutsu's speed. When the genjutsu ends, the target will be capable of standing up but with some mental pain, particularly towards his/her eyes due to having had their eyeballs dislocated in the genjutsu. However, in reality, their eyes would remain intact apart from having their eyesight's tracking speed reduced by 3 points for the same and next two turn in which the illusion ends due to the short-lasting after effect of the mental pain which was also directed towards the eyes.

Note: Thirce per battle
Note: No genjutsu the same turn
Note: Cannot be used the following two turns


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