[CJ exchange] Axle & McRazor

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really, I don't not at all. I'll go first

(Suiton Bunshi): Water Molecules
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage : (15 damage per turn )
Description: The user puts their hands together as if they were praying but is actually releasing large amounts of water chakra into the water molecules in the air so that now all fire attacks lose -15, sand is reduced to mud, lightning used becomes instantly conducted and all water or elements containing water gain +15
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: lasts 5 turns
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: after this technique is done the user can't user any A-rank and above water jutsus for 3 turns
Note: can be used as a water source

in order to use this jutsu, you will send a massive amount of water chakra throughout the water molecules in the air, making them more dense, dense enough actually to perform water jutsus. I made this jutsu based upon the ability of the second Hokage in which he was able to use water jutsus without a required water source. I customized the technique making it even stronger than it's original counterpart.

We'll start by you learning to send out suiton chakra into the air, I want you to condense the water molecules around you enough to make yourself get wet :| no sexual reference intended
 

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really, I don't not at all. I'll go first

(Suiton Bunshi): Water Molecules
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage : (15 damage per turn )
Description: The user puts their hands together as if they were praying but is actually releasing large amounts of water chakra into the water molecules in the air so that now all fire attacks lose -15, sand is reduced to mud, lightning used becomes instantly conducted and all water or elements containing water gain +15
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: lasts 5 turns
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: after this technique is done the user can't user any A-rank and above water jutsus for 3 turns
Note: can be used as a water source

in order to use this jutsu, you will send a massive amount of water chakra throughout the water molecules in the air, making them more dense, dense enough actually to perform water jutsus. I made this jutsu based upon the ability of the second Hokage in which he was able to use water jutsus without a required water source. I customized the technique making it even stronger than it's original counterpart.

We'll start by you learning to send out suiton chakra into the air, I want you to condense the water molecules around you enough to make yourself get wet :| no sexual reference intended
Upon hearing your instructions I place my hands in a praying position and I start calming my mind and slowing my breathing, focusing and relaxing while concentrating on my chakra. As I start manipulating it, I start feeling the seamless flow of water through my chakra circulatory system and I start channeling it towards my hands and upon a reasonable and massive buildup, I release the massive chakra into the surroundings. To achieve the desired effects of the technique, I focus on the shape manipulation in order to condense the chakra into water molecules all around myself and I keep the focus until my clothes start appearing wet and until the molecules start dripping down my face.
 

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excellent water control, but I expect no less from the famous Barney Stinson ;)

alright, now, we'll pick up the pace a little bit. This time I want you to condense water molecules further away now, all the way into mid-range. enough to moisten even my own clothing

*I jump back into mid-range, waiting to see/feel your results*
 

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excellent water control, but I expect no less from the famous Barney Stinson ;)

alright, now, we'll pick up the pace a little bit. This time I want you to condense water molecules further away now, all the way into mid-range. enough to moisten even my own clothing

*I jump back into mid-range, waiting to see/feel your results*
Thank youse. :)

Using the same principle but to a greater extent I manipulate my chakra while maintaining focus and a calm state of mind. Gathering my chakra and focusing it into my hands and releasing into the atmosphere I make sure to spread it to mid range and to make sure that the technique affects you, this time, too. Using shape manipulation same as previously, I start shaping the chakra into dense water molecules that start clinging onto your clothes, your skin, your hair. The droplets are easily seen and distinguished even from this distance and this tells me that the technique was executed effectively.
 

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good, now perform a water jutsu with this technique for the finishes touches, preferably a supplementary or defensive one >_>
 

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Upon gathering chakra and condensing it all around the battlefield, I perform a quick and seamless sequence of handseals and suddenly the water molecules start spinning and merging into what appears to be a giant beast. The beast forms from above the *imaginary* opponent and it rampages down on him, crushing him with force and washing him away with the flow of a river.

(Suiton: Ja No Kuchi) - Water Release: Water Snakes Mouth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon it then allows the user to generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a snake with a gaping jaw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a river that carries the enemy away.

As I said, I'm not particularly in love with this technique because of the VERY VERY heavy restriction on A rank and above for 3 turns, but I hope it'll come in handy. :) If everything is fine, we may continue with mine.
 

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yeah, and actually the restrictions take place after it is "done" AKA when the technique ends
Ah, how did I not notice that. >_> Well that's splendid then! This changes everything and even gives me the chance for the restriction to never even take place, if I can finish the opponent in those turns! Nice. :)

Fuuinjutsu: Mizu No Kami No Shirushi | Sealing Arts: Seal of the Water God
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The seal of the Water God is a special seal developed for the purpose to aid the user in tough situations. The seal itself is a circle of kanji surrounding the kanji for "Divine" in the middle. The user himself is the seal and can manifest it in any part of his body he wishes. The seal only works against Water techniques and is a very good defense against them. The seal activates and draws in any nearby water technique into himself, storing both the water and the chakra it contained inside of it. The seal can then serve multiple purposes:
-Reverence of God: The user will use the sealed, chakra infused, water to boost the damage of another water technique. Once he has absorbed an enemy technique, he does the handseals or rituals, needed for his own technique and, instead of its normal release, releases the technique from the seal itself (generally manifesting it in his hands). The end result is the water technique that the user performed with the addition of damage of the technique he had absorbed. The damage added is equal to the chakra points absorbed. Can be used 2 times.
-Divine Will: The user will use the sealed, chakra infused, water to combo with another elemental technique. Once he has absorbed an enemy technique he does the handseals or rituals needed for his own technique and, instead of its normal release, releases the technique from the seal itself (generally manifesting it in his hands). The end result is an elemental combo of both water and the element of the technique he performed. The rank of the combo is equal to rank of the elemental technique used although becoming a dual elemental technique. Can be used 2 times.
-Touch of Drought: The user will manifest the seal in both his hands and absorb any nearby moisture or water into the seal in a mere moment. This can be used to negate weather patterns such as clouds or mist but also to make it harder to breathe or to drain water sources. This can also be used to, upon touching an enemy, induce a temporary dehydration to the enemy, making him stumble and lose focus as well as stamina and strength, as he feels dizzy and weak. The effects last one turn. Can be used 2 times.
Note: Absorbing a technique counts as a move and can only be done 3 times. Cannot absorb more than one at a time.
Note: The seal can be combined with techniques that can logically be combined with a "water burst" from his body, as its follows logic and reasoning
Note: The seal can only be used max 3 times and the effects used depend on the user but neither can be used more than 2 times
Note: The user must wait a turn before using it again
Note: The seal has to be stated in the biography
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

Alright then, Sage of Sealing. You get the picture. This is a seal placed on your body and you can manifest it anywhere with the intention to use it as quick and easy as possible. It is more like a last resort technique that can help you pull out a miracle combination and overcome the last efforts of your opponent, for example. The seal itself can be used 3 times during a battle before it wears out, but any of the effects can only be used twice. As stated, first you absorb a water technique used by your opponent. This actually works on chakra too, so if you're able to see him channeling WATER chakra towards you, you can absorb it, as long as you have a realistic explanation why and how you know it's related to water. The chakra points from the technique will equal the added damage to your own technique and the absorption counts as a move.

After this point, you have 2 choices. You can add that absorbed water to any of your own water techniques and this allows you to perform any water technique from your hands, so it doesn't need to follow the general description. Or you can add the water to any other elemental technique creating a powerful combination. Once again the absorbed water is release from your hands.

The last choice is manifesting the seal in your hands to absorb non-chakra infused water, like mist, moisture, etc. You can basically de-moisturize the battlefield and make it arid and hard to breathe. Or you can even touch the opponent and suck him dry of water and inducing dehydration. Questions?
 

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negative, I guess I understood it correctly, I'm ready to get started U_U
Ok, you need to place the seal onto your body before being able to execute it. So how about we start with that. I raise my sleeve and manifest the seal to show you how it looks like so you can place it onto your own body. Here's some ink and tattooing stuff. xD
 

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:cool: I got you bro...

*tattoos my sexy body with your ink making cool tats for the ladies to enjoy and for me to use*

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Alright, now let's see if the seal works. I spit a water bullet at you. :|

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Release: Gunshot
Rank: B/A-Rank
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20/30
Damage Points: 40/60
Description: The user will do the Tiger handseal and will gather water in his mouth and then spits out either a single very large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked or a series of up to 5 smaller yet faster bullets. The power of the technique depends on how much chakra the user inputs into it.
 

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*Goku panics, he starts sweating, he looks at his left and his right for his teddy bear named "Gibson" since he isn't here, Goku decided to show off his cool tattoos, and hopefully the water will dehydrate like the girls do (cause they instantly get thirsty ;)) he holds up his right arm, covered in tattoos hoping that it works*
 

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*Goku panics, he starts sweating, he looks at his left and his right for his teddy bear named "Gibson" since he isn't here, Goku decided to show off his cool tattoos, and hopefully the water will dehydrate like the girls do (cause they instantly get thirsty ;)) he holds up his right arm, covered in tattoos hoping that it works*
LOL! Right so, since you're the sage of this stuff I don't really need to point out how seals work and how the need to be fueled with chakra that acts as a medium for the seal as well as for the activation and so on. You simply thrust your hand and absorb the water like a sponge. The water you store is momentarily stored in the seal and you have to re-use it in order to release the stored water. That's it. I think we covered this one, lol, unless you have questions.
 

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nehh, I'm good, ready to move on to the last one?

(Suiton: Inryoukuken) - Water Release: Gravitational Pull
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing the following Tiger - Dragon hand seal the user creates a powerful Water Release technique that has the ability to draw water towards the user or push it away from him. With this, the user has the ability to churn large whirlpools in the ocean and can even deflect other Water-based ninjutsu. The user can only control up to B-rank Suiton techniques.
 

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nehh, I'm good, ready to move on to the last one?

(Suiton: Inryoukuken) - Water Release: Gravitational Pull
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing the following Tiger - Dragon hand seal the user creates a powerful Water Release technique that has the ability to draw water towards the user or push it away from him. With this, the user has the ability to churn large whirlpools in the ocean and can even deflect other Water-based ninjutsu. The user can only control up to B-rank Suiton techniques.
Oh this one will be a real beauty. Can I use hand movements too, or is it only mental? I'd like to do all the unnecessary hand movements like the avatar kid. xD

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handsigns lol

when I came up with this jutsu I had avatar in mind. I told myself I would only teach it to dedicated suiton users such as yourself. Your officially the second person who knows this technique. To start it you need to be advanced in chakra and water manipulation basically the user inserts their chakra into the water being manipulated

try manipulating that rain puddle over there

*I point at a rain puddle over to your left about 15 meters away inbetween 2 trees*
 

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handsigns lol

when I came up with this jutsu I had avatar in mind. I told myself I would only teach it to dedicated suiton users such as yourself. Your officially the second person who knows this technique. To start it you need to be advanced in chakra and water manipulation basically the user inserts their chakra into the water being manipulated

try manipulating that rain puddle over there

*I point at a rain puddle over to your left about 15 meters away inbetween 2 trees*
That's quite an accomplishment then!

Once again, I focus my chakra through my body and I start releasing it through tenketsu in my hands after I perform 2 handseals. Once done, I channel the chakra into a body of water, specifically a rain puddle that you just showed me, about 15 meters away from me and to my left, exactly in between those two giant trees. Using my chakra I shape manipulate it to make it appear as if the puddle is being pushed away. This forcefully scatters the rain puddle.
 
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