Chronicles of a Ninja Psychotherapist

[SashaUchiha]

Hehe that was funny
Great work there +rep

xd thank you so much!!!

That was amazing xd

thanks mate!!!

Lol that was all our reaction last week..!xd
Nice one but could've increased more humor at end..!

I was too sleepy... check out the time mate... he he he

 

[The KleaNupGuy]

Trololol Drop Dead ..erm.. LOL!!!
That wuz epic thankiez for sharing that with me Guud strong meds :rofl:

 

[Rezakage]

:rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl:
High lol

 

[uzumaki antonia]

It was brilliant.

 

[SashaUchiha]

Trololol Drop Dead ..erm.. LOL!!!
That wuz epic thankiez for sharing that with me Guud strong meds :rofl:

Thanks mate!!! Strong meds? Yeah, he needs them! :shrug:

:rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl:
High lol

:rofl: thanks... I try...

It was brilliant.

Thank you so much! xd

 

[Flash]

Lol....it t was good to read something different than the regular ffs

 

[SashaUchiha]

really??? wease: thanks a lot!

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

Actually, that was fairly entertaining. If I were to provide some constructive criticism, I would say it's a little drawn out. I also would've found it more humorous if the doctor was more ignorant of the ninja world and its workings, i.e. she shouldn't know what the sharingan is. Another random detail is that your doctor seems to not know basic psych. or much about medicine. You might want to do some background research for a more grounded work.

Additionally, as I almost always say to writers of fan fics, it wouldn't hurt to have someone proofread your work to catch grammatical mistakes. You have a few.

Regardless, this is one of the better fan fics I've read. Good work.

 

[SashaUchiha]

Actually, that was fairly entertaining. If I were to provide some constructive criticism, I would say it's a little drawn out. I also would've found it more humorous if the doctor was more ignorant of the ninja world and its workings, i.e. she shouldn't know what the sharingan is. Another random detail is that your doctor seems to not know basic psych. or much about medicine. You might want to do some background research for a more grounded work.

Additionally, as I almost always say to writers of fan fics, it wouldn't hurt to have someone proofread your work to catch grammatical mistakes. You have a few.

Regardless, this is one of the better fan fics I've read. Good work.

For a non-reader thats quite a lot Thanks ^_^

Although I don't intend to write much I'd make a few notes... :y

 

[Tsuki]

Sasha! this was very unique and awesome! I really loved reading it! :scorps:

 

[kmrasengan]

ahaha, that surely was entertaining. congrats sasha

 

[~Sky~]

This was very entertaining xd

It really wasn't that long either, it seemed just right to me

+rep

 

[Legendary Broly]

LMAO xd too funny

 

[SashaUchiha]

Sasha! this was very unique and awesome! I really loved reading it! :scorps:

xd really? thanks!!! :ice:

ahaha, that surely was entertaining. congrats sasha

thank you!!!

This was very entertaining xd

It really wasn't that long either, it seemed just right to me

+rep

you think??? wease: thank you!!!

LMAO xd too funny

ha ha... I tried...

 

[Vex]

Wow I laughed at this part

Spoiler

Dr. Sasha: I mean I had a cat. He died. But after some weeks I started seeing him again. Nobody believed me. But then I got video evidence. But someone stole the tapes. I know how you feel

 

[SashaUchiha]

Wow I laughed at this part

Spoiler

Dr. Sasha: I mean I had a cat. He died. But after some weeks I started seeing him again. Nobody believed me. But then I got video evidence. But someone stole the tapes. I know how you feel

thanks... and double thanks for reading it carefully! :hug: