Chriss is teached by mugen how to bring the lighting to its knees

[Christyan]

What you did wrong:
1.Dont close your eyes
2.Dont mix chakra

Next:
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.

Ok sempai im sorry i mistaken with those 2 things *hitting my head to the ground twice* , it wont happen again


*i rise up my arm and try to channel a perfect amout of electrical chakra into the skies , imbueding ( grammar? ) them with my chakra then i try to make the clouds create lightning strikes on a random tree *

 

[-Mugen-]

Ok sempai im sorry i mistaken with those 2 things *hitting my head to the ground twice* , it wont happen again


*i rise up my arm and try to channel a perfect amout of electrical chakra into the skies , imbueding ( grammar? ) them with my chakra then i try to make the clouds create lightning strikes on a random tree *

-dont raise your hand

Next:
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

 

[Christyan]

-dont raise your hand

Next:
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

sorry again sempai ... *i bring my hands toghether and i start to gather chakra to them until electrical energy will beging crackling around them, then i slam them to the ground and i try to send a fast electric current from my hands , racing through the earth , and tryes to split the current when its close to the tress to attack several trees at once *

 

[-Mugen-]

sorry again sempai ... *i bring my hands toghether and i start to gather chakra to them until electrical energy will beging crackling around them, then i slam them to the ground and i try to send a fast electric current from my hands , racing through the earth , and tryes to split the current when its close to the tress to attack several trees at once *

You dont have to apologize for making mistakes.This is training,not a test.Everyone makes mistakes.Thats what I as a sempai do.I fix the mistakes you do.

See I told you.Now you do a good job in describing.Next:

(Raiton: Rai Ryouken) - Lightning Release: Lightning Hound
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: TThe user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.

 

[Christyan]

You dont have to apologize for making mistakes.This is training,not a test.Everyone makes mistakes.Thats what I as a sempai do.I fix the mistakes you do.

See I told you.Now you do a good job in describing.Next:

(Raiton: Rai Ryouken) - Lightning Release: Lightning Hound
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: TThe user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.

ok sempai i understand and 10x for wasting you time with me .... so *i raise my right hand and i gather lighting chakra to it , creating in my head an image of a hound , then i try to recreate that image in a physical form of an hound of lighting , directing it to some random trees *

 

[-Mugen-]

ok sempai i understand and 10x for wasting you time with me .... so *i raise my right hand and i gather lighting chakra to it , creating in my head an image of a hound , then i try to recreate that image in a physical form of an hound of lighting , directing it to some random trees *

You arent wasting my time.I am a sempai.Its my job to teach

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

try it

 

[Christyan]

You arent wasting my time.I am a sempai.Its my job to teach

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

try it

*i concentrate chakra in my mouth , trying to for a compressed pile of lighting , then when i open my mouth i try to shape the compressed pile into a spear , shooting it at some tree , and then when the spear is close enough , i try to manipulate it with my chakra to split in apart so it can hit several trees*

 

[-Mugen-]

*i concentrate chakra in my mouth , trying to for a compressed pile of lighting , then when i open my mouth i try to shape the compressed pile into a spear , shooting it at some tree , and then when the spear is close enough , i try to manipulate it with my chakra to split in apart so it can hit several trees*

Good.Th last B-rank one

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.

 

[Christyan]

Good.Th last B-rank one

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.

hehe YUUUUPIIIII soooo * i concentrate my lighting chakra in front of me and i try to create a clone of me that has physical substance , entirely out of pure lighting chakra *

 

[-Mugen-]

hehe YUUUUPIIIII soooo * i concentrate my lighting chakra in front of me and i try to create a clone of me that has physical substance , entirely out of pure lighting chakra *

good enough

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.

You know the jutsu too well for me to explainxd

 

[Christyan]

good enough

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.

You know the jutsu too well for me to explainxd

yep i knoe it so *exited i concentrate chakra in my right palm and i try to create a piercing form of lighting very sharp , that engulfs my palm and sounds like birds chirping*

 

[-Mugen-]

yep i knoe it so *exited i concentrate chakra in my right palm and i try to create a piercing form of lighting very sharp , that engulfs my palm and sounds like birds chirping*

NO:flaw: Concentraite chakra to your palm.Than add your lightning chakra.Than use your chakra to manipulae the lightning so it has range.After that use the thrusting I taught you eairlier to hit that tree.*points to a tree*
*sigh* you disappointed me U_U

 

[Christyan]

NO:flaw: Concentraite chakra to your palm.Than add your lightning chakra.Than use your chakra to manipulae the lightning so it has range.After that use the thrusting I taught you eairlier to hit that tree.*points to a tree*
*sigh* you disappointed me U_U

sorry sempai *attempts to commit suicide-> failed* , i cant even kill myself properly ...


*concentrates my chakra to my palm , then i carefully mix up lighting chakra to a precise amount , then i try to manipulate the lighting to give it a little range , after all of this , i gathe some chakra in my legs and creates so chakra pressure there , after a few seconds i release it , granting me speed and i run to a tree to hit it with the chakra i gathered in my hand *

 

[-Mugen-]

sorry sempai *attempts to commit suicide-> failed* , i cant even kill myself properly ...


*concentrates my chakra to my palm , then i carefully mix up lighting chakra to a precise amount , then i try to manipulate the lighting to give it a little range , after all of this , i gathe some chakra in my legs and creates so chakra pressure there , after a few seconds i release it , granting me speed and i run to a tree to hit it with the chakra i gathered in my hand *

Both of this are easy.So here:


(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it�s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

 

[Christyan]

Both of this are easy.So here:


(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it�s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

1st one : *i concentrate chakra in my hand and i create a normal chidori , then i try to use form manipulation to reshape the chidori into an countless senbon that can probably cut through anything and numb parts of the body*

2nd one: * focusing my chakra in my hand i create a normal chidori , then using the form manipulation i am trying to extend it up to 10 meters in lenght , i compress chakra in my feet and i release it to grant me more speed then i run to near to a tree and when the lighting is close to it i try to split in into additional blades that creates additional wounds in the bark *

 

[-Mugen-]

1st one : *i concentrate chakra in my hand and i create a normal chidori , then i try to use form manipulation to reshape the chidori into an countless senbon that can probably cut through anything and numb parts of the body*

2nd one: * focusing my chakra in my hand i create a normal chidori , then using the form manipulation i am trying to extend it up to 10 meters in lenght , i compress chakra in my feet and i release it to grant me more speed then i run to near to a tree and when the lighting is close to it i try to split in into additional blades that creates additional wounds in the bark *

You dont have to run when you do the second.lol Thats why its ten meters

Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon�s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

 

[Christyan]

You dont have to run when you do the second.lol Thats why its ten meters

Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon�s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

ok sensei
1st * i draw out my sword * (and yes i have a sword , a custom one see it at my custom jutsus thread ) *then i concentrate my chakra , channeling it through the sword , and i carefully keep an eye at the amount of chakra i use to make sure that i use non-focused electrically charged chakra , then i pressure chakra in my feet and releasing to to give me speed while i sprint towards you to just touch you with my sword testing if the jutsu paralyzes you *

2nd this one is a little bit tough .... *concentrating my wind chakra i firstly form a vortex of wind around myself then i carefully add to the mix lighting chakra and using shape manipulation i try to shape it into the form of a dragon and send it to a nearby tree. Once the jutsu is close enough to a tree i try to make the lighting jump to the tree in the opposite place of the tree i originally intended to target *

 

[-Mugen-]

ok sensei
1st * i draw out my sword * (and yes i have a sword , a custom one see it at my custom jutsus thread ) *then i concentrate my chakra , channeling it through the sword , and i carefully keep an eye at the amount of chakra i use to make sure that i use non-focused electrically charged chakra , then i pressure chakra in my feet and releasing to to give me speed while i sprint towards you to just touch you with my sword testing if the jutsu paralyzes you *

2nd this one is a little bit tough .... *concentrating my wind chakra i firstly form a vortex of wind around myself then i carefully add to the mix lighting chakra and using shape manipulation i try to shape it into the form of a dragon and send it to a nearby tree. Once the jutsu is close enough to a tree i try to make the lighting jump to the tree in the opposite place of the tree i originally intended to target *

Both are wrong.I lower my training.From now on only 1 jutsu at a time.

1st. wtf What sword.you dont need a sword
2nd. This is lightning not wind.You dont need to use wind chakra

 

[Christyan]

Both are wrong.I lower my training.From now on only 1 jutsu at a time.

1st. wtf What sword.you dont need a sword
2nd. This is lightning not wind.You dont need to use wind chakra

1 was trying to channel it
2 its a combo , it needs wind

 

[-Mugen-]

1 was trying to channel it
2 its a combo , it needs wind

1.you can do that in a battle
2.You cant combine wind and lightning.(do not tell a sempai he is wrong)

Re do them