Chiryoku teachs me lightning

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Be a lot more descriptive from now on, for every action.


Raiton: Raijingu Sanda (Lightning Style: Raging Thunder)

Type: Attack
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

Done. O_O it's a fail description in the jutsu list .-.

Charge your lightning chakra again, creating an electrical field. Make this electrical field explode. Make sure the explosion is enough to blow back my clone.

*Creates a clone* o-o
 

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Good job~

Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu (Lightning Style: Thunder Saber)
Type: Attack
Rank: D
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Done.
Now use your chakra to create a small lightning shock.
Then, make a powerful stream of lightning that is capable of destroying rock.
 

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Dude, be a LOT more descriptive. =\
What you just said could've been two long and clear sentences, but you made it one, short and undescriptive one. =\

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Done anyway :|

Gather lightning chakra in your hands and shape it into a ball. Then fire the ball of lightning to that tree there. o-o
 

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(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

Done.

Now charge your lightning chakra and release it over your whole body, creating an armour made out of lightning. Make sure it can electrocute everyone who touches it.
 

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(starting to charge a large amount of lightning charka from my body)

(then i release it over my body in the form of a full bady armor)

(then i increase the flow of the lightning chakra, then steady the flow)



p.s- dont think i spelled armor right
 

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lol ok my bady lol

(starting to charge a large amount of lightning charka from my body)

(releaseing it over my body in the form of a full bady armour)

(then i increase the flow of the lightning chakra, the steadly start to intensify it)
 
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