Chigau Sekai (Different World): A NaruKarin Story (Chapter 1)

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Chapter One

Characters in this chapter:

[*]Karin (The Narrator)
[*]Naruto Uzumaki
[*]Sakura Haruno

It’s been 3 years since Sasuke left this village; and 1 month since the last time I’d seen him – The time he tried killed me. If it hadn’t been for Sakura, I’d be as good as dead…

Naruto: “Good morning Karin-chan” he said with that silly grin on his face. I liked that silly grin.

Karin: “Good morning Naruto, is something the matter?”

Naruto: “No I just came to check up on you, Sakura-chan said you were doing a lot better.”

It’s true, I was doing a lot better, and the villagers of Konoha welcomed me with opened arms. I felt like this was MY village all along. But I was only physically healed. My emotional wounds were still wide open. After all, the one I love never gave a damn about me…

Karin: “Naruto, I need to ask you something!”

Naruto: “Eh?” He replied with that dumb face of his, not the one I liked, but the annoying one.

Karin: “UGH! Don’t put your face like that BAKA!! *clears throat* Anyway, how long was Sakura and Sasuke-kun in a relationship before he left the village?”

Naruto-kun stared at me from the corner of his big, blue eyes, with a look of sadness upon his face.

Karin: “I mean, after all, she did keep going on and on about how she loved Sasuke-kun, how he’s the only one for her, how she’d do anything for hi-“

Naruto: “THEY WERE NEVER A COUPLE!”

For a second, I felt my heart beat stop. I didn't know what to do, what to say. I was completely speechless and my body froze as a result of the power in his voice.

Naruto: “THAT BASTARD NEVER EVEN TOOK A SECOND LOOK AT SAKURA-CHAN. HE NEVER LOVED HER. HE NEVER CARED. AND YET, SHE STILL…She still loved him…more than…she loved…me…”

I could sense it. His bright, warm, loving chakra began to fade into this cold chakra; not full of hatred but of loneliness- just like Sasuke’s. I’d never felt so sorry for anyone in my entire life before. I’ve cared for people, but whenever something bad happened to them, I’d ignore it because I was taught from a small child that everyone MUST have bad experiences.

But this…this I couldn’t handle…I felt like Naruto-kun didn’t deserve to be this unhappy. I felt like he didn’t deserve to be alone. He’s a nice guy. I feel strange inside, but why? Why don’t I feel sorry for myself like I always do? Why all of sudden, do I feel sorry for him? And…why AM I calling him…Naruto-kun?

Sakura: *Sakura enters* “Karin! It’s time for your medical.”

That was her, the best medical-nin in the village; Sakura Haruno.

Karin: “Why do you have to be so rough?” I immediately came to a halt.

Her eyes were planted to the floor.

The breeze blew her washed-out blossom colored hair right across her face, past her huge emerald eyes as she said under her breath…


Sakura: "That’s just how I am. Or better yet, what I’ve become…"

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Note: This is all I've got so far. I wrote this December 2011 & decided to share it on NarutoBase to get feedback. I'll work on the next chapter but don't expect it tomorrow or something (especially if this one sucks lol) :|

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I love it, the fact that she could sense emotion through chakra could create some pretty interesting situations. Lots of potential :D keep it up^^
 
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