[Predictions] Chapter 669-" the evening elephant "

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CHAPTER 669-" THE EVENING ELEPHANT "


madara- ??? (his speed has increased from before...) [moves back simultaneously with respect to guy's reaction ]

kakashi- he is .....

lee- so..

minato- FAST...only this speed can be comparable to sunshin jutsu.(but that madara.....!!!)

guy- evening elephent......[dust mixed with red chakra steam started to make shape of whirlwinds and starts revolving around him . ]

madara- ..!!!..(such power..??) its time to test my abilities..[started rushing towards guy]

minato-is this natures chakra...??? his own chakra is so dense that it is influencing nature chakra by its own

kakashi- after all he is my rival. i had acknowledged you long before my friend.such level of chakra mastery can only be

performed by guy now a days other than lady tsunade.

guy-[ summons his ninchuk stuff and started rushing towards madara.
a big wide crack on earth is shown as guy moved. clash between the two begins.]

madara- you dance well. i am enjoying it even more.but i will make your so called youth disappear soon .

guy- yaaahhh ....[like not in sense attacking madara with his stuff .madara blocking his attacks with his black spheres]don't angry me...

*flash back*

die- get out of here....you three

zabuza-what is the hurry black beast of konoha. lets have fun for some time.[all sword men blocked every way of escaping for the kids]

die-just stay calm u three. let me show you my power of my youth son.

die -[opening his gates one after other and attacking the opponents.

scene shows die at his 7th gate open and only 4 swordmen fighting with him. ]

raiga appears behinds guy and threatens die to stop his atacks or be ready to see the kids dead.

guy- [shocked face is shown] dad dont let me die please...

die - [stops moving and the other two slashes die several times on body.his body parts were teared appart. ]

fuguki-it was a worthy fight black beast but i am afraid these kids will be alive to tell the story.

die-[exhausting and lying on ground ] dont you dare to hurt these kids.

zabuza- what can you do .after you are an alive corpse at this condition.your youth is rotten.

guy-daa..d.. i am sorry....

die- don't underestimate the power of youth. i may be rotten at this point but i will become the nourishment for the new fresh leaves!

die-[opens eighth gate and a strong black chakra starts enveloping him.his body appear behind raiga and raiga is shown dead at the instant.die attacked other one with heavy kick and he is dead too]

fuguki-such power..... so this is the power of so called black beast...impressive...

zabuza-we must retreat at this point. we underestimated you "DIE of konoha "... [hidden mist jutsu dense mist .they retreated ]

die-[started spinning rapidly and the mist were blown]

guy-daaad........i am scared........[suddenly die stopped and fell down]

die- promise me son you will always admire your youth and pass it to the next generation. don't let your youth to be rotten. always be might like the tiger and strong like an elephant.remember PROTECT THE ONES YOU CARE FOR AND ONLY THEN YOU WILL OPEN HACHIMON TONKOU NO JIN .fare well son.
*flash back end*

guy- i will not let my youth being a waste.[clash between madara and guy is shown]

[scene shows madara's body is half blown away and regenerating by its own AND guy stabbed with black rods to the ground ]

madara- i will say you were quite impressive then the fooders to push me to this level.

[shocked faces of everyone is shown]

madara- BUT I AM GOD NOW AND I WILL ELIMINATE EACH AND EVERYONE WHO STANDS IN MY WAY[starts floating upwards to air]

hii friends ignore the grammar mistakes. the sentence " DONT ANGRY ME " i used was for those peoples who had watched the movie " rawody rathore " of bollywood.

enjoy reading and let me know how you liked it
 
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I'm hoping Gai's next move is called Midnight Squirrel.

Also Zabuza wasn't there, look again.

In all honesty he would be around the same age as Gai at that time.
 

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Gai can't use chakra though. His attacks are pretty much air pressure
SORRY DUDE YOU ARE WRONG AT THIS.

remember that time when guy summoned the turtle. AND AS PER THE SUMMONING RULE A PERSON USES LARGE AMOUNT OF CHAKRA TO PERFORM SUMMONING JUTSU.
so guy can use chakra and by the way he is an elite ninja of konoha
 

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I liked the whole prediction.. Especially the flashbacks for the most awesome... I think
kishi should take ideas from this prediction..

Liked this prediction in all respects... =D
 
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Gai can't use chakra though. His attacks are pretty much air pressure
^^ this! if you read back to when Gai was fighting Kisame on the ocean surrounding the giant turtle island, you'll remember he explained it isn't chakra, but sweat surrounding him and the attacks are indeed just air pressure and friction

ok i was a bit too quick at first, because he can indeed USE chakra, it's just the eight gates technique doesn't use chakra, which explains why even Lee can use it.
 
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I liked the whole prediction.. Especially the flashbacks for the most awesome... I think
kishi should take ideas from this prediction..

Liked this prediction in all respects... =D
thank you bro...but i admire kishi and his writing style is amazing.....yaah it took me 45min approx to complete this one.
 

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Gai can't use chakra though. His attacks are pretty much air pressure
Gai can use Kuchiyose and Kai, so you're way wrong.

The Gai that couldn't use ninjutsu had only 5 years old, but after enough hard work he was able to reach mastery over some ninjutsus.
 
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its not zabuza.And gai's father is dai.but madara saying 'you dance well',is a good usage from his slang.but i think you could give gai more time.but this is a very good prediction,except the ending because i think you think rushed there.overall i give 4/5.
 
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