-RoseLilly-
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well i dont know what to call it or even the names of the charaters only came up with the maid mia, its a little long, any ways tell me what you think, 
CHAPTER 1:
My breath settled as I felt the soft brush of the wind across my face, the darkness hadn?t taken over, yet the night was still young. Leaving my thoughts behind me, and settling in to the rhythm of the world. It was a precious moment and I would change it for anything. Just standing letting it all take me in, letting it lead for I to follow. The maze of life seemed so simple it just over powered me, I felt good, better then I had ever thought and still I new deep down that it was never going to be like this and that life is never as it seems. My world crumbled slowly as I thought that and the precious moment was gone forever. The darkness over powered the light, the sun set and the moon rose and so my day begins.
Standing on the balcony outside my room, the soft breeze blowing throw my hair, with the darkness that enclosed and filled my mind, the one thing that wouldn?t ever leave till the light of dawn, and then with out warning it would return with the setting of the sun. The darkness reeked havoc among the once beautiful country and all that lived there, it had taken over and no one could stop it, the darkness brings out a different kind of beautiful that not many people realize or see. Just standing there in the once known world makes you realize that just living in a different way makes it beautiful all in the same.
My whole life I?ve been living in this strange world, and never seen a full day, just glances of what its like to be one of those creatures of the light, but never experience what its actually is like to be one of them. I wish that I was aloud to live a life of light, its not like it hurt us, it just weakened us, well most of us. Well by us I mean the Nobel and Royal vampires sadly the lower class can not even get near the sun or even light for that matter. I feel so sorry for them, to live away from all types of light, even there minds are full of darkness they never get the release of it even when the light of drawn shows it self. I guess that?s why there always off by them selves and never talking unless spoken to.
My mind kept babbling as I herd my maid Mia run through my room and on to the balcony, she stumbled and started to relax when she saw me, she looked like she had ran a marathon, her messy red curls were all over the place and her apron was off to one side, her checks were flushed and she was still breathing a little fast, even for her.
?What?s wrong Mia?? I asked
?Oh?oh s?sorry to interrupt my lady? she said in a rush of mumbled words ?it?s just? the king has been looking all over for you?
?The king? really?? I said a little sarcastically ?? it looks more to me like his been making you run looking for me everywhere? while he on the other hand? has been sitting on his royal hinny? she laughed at my little response and I just smiled at her and walked back into my room with her trailing behind me.
? Mia just rest here for a while? while I go see what old kingie wants now?? we both laughed as I left mia in my room to rest, she wouldn?t but at least she wasn?t running around anymore and I guess that?s better then nothing.
I made my way along the twisty corridors of the castle they were only lit by small lights along the walls, but it was still very easy to see where I was headed, when I entered one of the many main corridors, it was barely lit which means ether one of two things, the king was in the main room down the hall or we had some lower class vampires visiting or both. So walking slowly to the wooden doors that had one of the main rooms behind it, being careful to make sure no visiting vampires were around, because you can never trust them, well maybe you can but I?ve been taught that most of my life. As I open the doors they made a large creaking sound and then I entered, the king was sitting over on the east wall facing the large stained glass windows that were shimmering in the moonlight. In front of him was the head of the lower class vampires and his wife, they wearing where there summer clocks over there clothing, the wife?s clock was a light blue-ish colour while her husbands was a deep blue. As I walked towards the king he dismissed the two lower class vampires, they bowed to him and then to me and left with out a sound.
?My darling daughter you?re here, I see Mia did her job? I might reward the girl?
?Farther you can?t treat her like that you know? she?s one of us too? I told him
?Where have you been all this time?? he asked not listening to what I was saying, like usual.
?I?ve been in my room and I said don?t treat Mia like she not one of us?
?Oh so that?s where you have been? some of the lower class vampires have come to see me complaining about this and that? he raveled on still not listening.
?Farther? I yelled
?Yes? he said slyly
?Mia not some errand puppy you can make run all over the place for you and secondly those two people who you just call lower class vampires are the heads of all of the lower class vampires and you should of listened to them? I yelled at him
?Well my daughter don?t use that tone on me, I?m king and I can do what I please, and further more your only 16 what?s a 16 year old vampire going to do to stop me?
?I?m not 16? I?m 1600 years of age, father and you? you think you can rule the world well you cant and you cant rule me? I snapped back at him.
? Well my child, I don?t care what you say? in our years and our ageing time you look and acted 16 until another hundred years has past and also I?m still 5400 years older then you? so don?t be so snappy with me missy?
?I don?t care any more I?m sick of being cooped up and letting you walk all over me? I?m leaving and you can?t stop me? I growled
?What and live out where? with the lower class you got to be kidding? he chuckled
?No? no I?m not staying here at all not with the vampires? not with the undead? I?m going and I?m not coming back or coming close to coming back?
?Don?t make me laugh there?s a war going on and you expect to leave my protection all together? ha? ha well guess what forget it missy? you?re the only heir to this throne and so you stay under surveillance at all times?
?Forget it? I?m going? then I stormed out the room slamming the big wooden doors behind me as I ran down the dark and narrow corridors back to my room, I could still hear the raging voice of the king, yelling orders to have guards to have watch over my room at all times, and not to let me get even past my room door, but it was to late for that now and I was leaving if they liked it or not.
CHAPTER 1:
My breath settled as I felt the soft brush of the wind across my face, the darkness hadn?t taken over, yet the night was still young. Leaving my thoughts behind me, and settling in to the rhythm of the world. It was a precious moment and I would change it for anything. Just standing letting it all take me in, letting it lead for I to follow. The maze of life seemed so simple it just over powered me, I felt good, better then I had ever thought and still I new deep down that it was never going to be like this and that life is never as it seems. My world crumbled slowly as I thought that and the precious moment was gone forever. The darkness over powered the light, the sun set and the moon rose and so my day begins.
Standing on the balcony outside my room, the soft breeze blowing throw my hair, with the darkness that enclosed and filled my mind, the one thing that wouldn?t ever leave till the light of dawn, and then with out warning it would return with the setting of the sun. The darkness reeked havoc among the once beautiful country and all that lived there, it had taken over and no one could stop it, the darkness brings out a different kind of beautiful that not many people realize or see. Just standing there in the once known world makes you realize that just living in a different way makes it beautiful all in the same.
My whole life I?ve been living in this strange world, and never seen a full day, just glances of what its like to be one of those creatures of the light, but never experience what its actually is like to be one of them. I wish that I was aloud to live a life of light, its not like it hurt us, it just weakened us, well most of us. Well by us I mean the Nobel and Royal vampires sadly the lower class can not even get near the sun or even light for that matter. I feel so sorry for them, to live away from all types of light, even there minds are full of darkness they never get the release of it even when the light of drawn shows it self. I guess that?s why there always off by them selves and never talking unless spoken to.
My mind kept babbling as I herd my maid Mia run through my room and on to the balcony, she stumbled and started to relax when she saw me, she looked like she had ran a marathon, her messy red curls were all over the place and her apron was off to one side, her checks were flushed and she was still breathing a little fast, even for her.
?What?s wrong Mia?? I asked
?Oh?oh s?sorry to interrupt my lady? she said in a rush of mumbled words ?it?s just? the king has been looking all over for you?
?The king? really?? I said a little sarcastically ?? it looks more to me like his been making you run looking for me everywhere? while he on the other hand? has been sitting on his royal hinny? she laughed at my little response and I just smiled at her and walked back into my room with her trailing behind me.
? Mia just rest here for a while? while I go see what old kingie wants now?? we both laughed as I left mia in my room to rest, she wouldn?t but at least she wasn?t running around anymore and I guess that?s better then nothing.
I made my way along the twisty corridors of the castle they were only lit by small lights along the walls, but it was still very easy to see where I was headed, when I entered one of the many main corridors, it was barely lit which means ether one of two things, the king was in the main room down the hall or we had some lower class vampires visiting or both. So walking slowly to the wooden doors that had one of the main rooms behind it, being careful to make sure no visiting vampires were around, because you can never trust them, well maybe you can but I?ve been taught that most of my life. As I open the doors they made a large creaking sound and then I entered, the king was sitting over on the east wall facing the large stained glass windows that were shimmering in the moonlight. In front of him was the head of the lower class vampires and his wife, they wearing where there summer clocks over there clothing, the wife?s clock was a light blue-ish colour while her husbands was a deep blue. As I walked towards the king he dismissed the two lower class vampires, they bowed to him and then to me and left with out a sound.
?My darling daughter you?re here, I see Mia did her job? I might reward the girl?
?Farther you can?t treat her like that you know? she?s one of us too? I told him
?Where have you been all this time?? he asked not listening to what I was saying, like usual.
?I?ve been in my room and I said don?t treat Mia like she not one of us?
?Oh so that?s where you have been? some of the lower class vampires have come to see me complaining about this and that? he raveled on still not listening.
?Farther? I yelled
?Yes? he said slyly
?Mia not some errand puppy you can make run all over the place for you and secondly those two people who you just call lower class vampires are the heads of all of the lower class vampires and you should of listened to them? I yelled at him
?Well my daughter don?t use that tone on me, I?m king and I can do what I please, and further more your only 16 what?s a 16 year old vampire going to do to stop me?
?I?m not 16? I?m 1600 years of age, father and you? you think you can rule the world well you cant and you cant rule me? I snapped back at him.
? Well my child, I don?t care what you say? in our years and our ageing time you look and acted 16 until another hundred years has past and also I?m still 5400 years older then you? so don?t be so snappy with me missy?
?I don?t care any more I?m sick of being cooped up and letting you walk all over me? I?m leaving and you can?t stop me? I growled
?What and live out where? with the lower class you got to be kidding? he chuckled
?No? no I?m not staying here at all not with the vampires? not with the undead? I?m going and I?m not coming back or coming close to coming back?
?Don?t make me laugh there?s a war going on and you expect to leave my protection all together? ha? ha well guess what forget it missy? you?re the only heir to this throne and so you stay under surveillance at all times?
?Forget it? I?m going? then I stormed out the room slamming the big wooden doors behind me as I ran down the dark and narrow corridors back to my room, I could still hear the raging voice of the king, yelling orders to have guards to have watch over my room at all times, and not to let me get even past my room door, but it was to late for that now and I was leaving if they liked it or not.
