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hopefully i can get into the story a bit more this time.
im pretty sure i should have done this sooner so heregoes^^


chapter 1: the story begins.

so here i am, 56 and still fighting, why am i fighting i here you wonder?
the world is besett on all sides by disease and war, every town and city has degenerated into individual nations, there is no concept of countrys, it is all about citys. before all this happened the world was on the edge of curing most diseases and solving most conflicts, so what happened is the usual quistion asked, well ill tell you.....

the year was 2018. and the war on terror was in the procces of ending. the
EU was in complete control of europe , presidents and priministers just signed over control to high commander yarris vaugn, and once again i hear quistions. why would any sensible government sign away control to an american millitary commander working for the EU? well thats a story for another time. under the control of yarris a large group of scientists were ordered to start on project zero. this is where the story gets complicated. Project zero, as it was codenamed was a secret project that started working on genes and that sort of thing, human testing. they dug up old work done by the old nazi regime, allthough rumoured never to have ever taken place the evedence was staggering, and the results even more disturbing. well im getting sidetracked here, as i was saying project zero was starting to make progress. disturbing progress, they had created the worlds first half-beast, a gene mix of a pig and a man, although only basic changes ocured it was easy to see the possibilitys were endless, yarris began to dream of the perfect super soldier, he wanted results and results he got. after 5 years of Europes best scientists working on Yarris`s super soldiers they were finnaly done, they had created the perfect killing machine.
after a few test trials in third world countrys yarris began to get nervous, the super soldiers he had dreamed of started to get minds of their own, they were starting to wonder why they were the ones fighting. thats when the trouble began. yarris ordered a virus be created that would wipe out the super soldiers that were to be later refered to as the altered. a long story short the virus didnt work as planned, it killed most of the altered but others were unaffected. and as you have probbably guesed by now, with such a powerfull virus around normal people wouldnt do to well would they? well no they didnt, half the world population died within two months of its release, while most of those that survived were turned into savage monsters, you could call them zombies if you want. and the few that didnt get mutated or deformed by the zero virus grouped together into there towns and citys. each becoming a nation on its own. the major citys either got destroyed or became fortresses. and so the world is in much need of help. under attack from mutants and altered superhumans. and still mankind attempts to thrive.

it is 7 years since the crysis of project zero and the world is attempting to recover. the mutants are getting desperate for food as the humans they feed on have lcked themselves in their towns and citys for protection, the altered have taken control of a small town in the country of england, that town is Oldcroft.






chapter 2: the ghost in the street.

so here he was. soaking wet in the middle of an empty highstreet.it had been exactly four hours since the warning klaxon that anounced curfew had sounded, people stopped doing what they were doing and rushed to cars busses and trains,everyone desperate to get home, all except one...

"fallback!!!" screamed veteran Captain Vlad Obersschreik, he wasnt sure if his six man team had heard him, or even if they were still alive to hear him. the mission was difficult enough to peform in the mealstrom of metal and noise that had started just as they arrived on the empty highstreet. the captain saw movement to his left, at least someone had heard his order, he roll`d backwards out of the cover he had been using, as he rose to his feet to retreat everything stopped. it wasnt as if it was just the noise, but it was everything, bullets had been halted in mid-air, shrapnel freezing where it would normaly shoot out and cripple all in its path. He had decided, something was very, very wronge...

it had been three months since the disaster of Oldcroft highstreet, and all was not well.


this is my first fanfic and im not realy sure what to do next so any suggestions? or ideas?
 
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Err....read some fanfics as I am not inpressed...... for ideas....and able to create a better quality of fanfic...

Title: Vendetta Repeat

edit: ya agreed with above

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once again im just scrabbling for ideas and the like... plz bear with me it will improve and it will become more like a story nce ive got the basics figgered out. if you liked something plz tell me and ill keep it in, and likewise with the stuff you didnt like
 
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hopefully i can get into the story a bit more this time.
im pretty sure i should have done this sooner so heregoes^^


chapter 2

so here i am, 56 and still fighting, why am i fighting i here you wonder?
the world is besett on all sides by disease and war, every town and city has degenerated into individual nations, there is no concept of countrys, it is all about citys. before all this happened the world was on the edge of curing most diseases and solving most conflicts, so what happened is the usual quistion asked, well ill tell you.....

the year was 2018. and the war on terror was in the procces of ending. the
EU was in complete control of europe , presidents and priministers just signed over control to high commander yarris vaugn, and once again i hear quistions. why would any sensible government sign away control to an american millitary commander working for the EU? well thats a story for another time. under the control of yarris a large group of scientists were ordered to start on project zero. this is where the story gets complicated. Project zero, as it was codenamed was a secret project that started working on genes and that sort of thing, human testing. they dug up old work done by the old nazi regime, allthough rumoured never to have ever taken place the evedence was staggering, and the results even more disturbing. well im getting sidetracked here, as i was saying project zero was starting to make progress. disturbing progress, they had created the worlds first half-beast, a gene mix of a pig and a man, although only basic changes ocured it was easy to see the possibilitys were endless, yarris began to dream of the perfect super soldier, he wanted results and results he got. after 5 years of Europes best scientists working on Yarris`s super soldiers they were finnaly done, they had created the perfect killing machine.
after a few test trials in third world countrys yarris began to get nervous, the super soldiers he had dreamed of started to get minds of their own, they were starting to wonder why they were the ones fighting. thats when the trouble began. yarris ordered a virus be created that would wipe out the super soldiers that were to be later refered to as the altered. a long story short the virus didnt work as planned, it killed most of the altered but others were unaffected. and as you have probbably guesed by now, with such a powerfull virus around normal people wouldnt do to well would they? well no they didnt, half the world population died within two months of its release, while most of those that survived were turned into savage monsters, you could call them zombies if you want. and the few that didnt get mutated or deformed by the zero virus grouped together into there towns and citys. each becoming a nation on its own. the major citys either got destroyed or became fortresses. and so the world is in much need of help. under attack from mutants and altered superhumans. and still mankind attempts to thrive.

it is 7 years since the crysis of project zero and the world is attempting to recover. the mutants are getting desperate for food as the humans they feed on have lcked themselves in their towns and citys for protection, the altered have taken control of a small town in the country of england, that town is Oldcroft.



once again im just scrabbling for ideas and the like... plz bear with me it will improve and it will become more like a story nce ive got the basics figgered out. if you liked something plz tell me and ill keep it in, and likewise with the stuff you didnt like
Like someone suggested it to me before, make separate treads for each chapter.
I'm gonna read it for other suggestions
 

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hopefully i can get into the story a bit more this time.
im pretty sure i should have done this sooner so heregoes^^


chapter 1: the story begins.

so here i am, 56 and still fighting, why am i fighting i here you wonder?
the world is besett on all sides by disease and war, every town and city has degenerated into individual nations, there is no concept of countrys, it is all about citys. before all this happened the world was on the edge of curing most diseases and solving most conflicts, so what happened is the usual quistion asked, well ill tell you.....

the year was 2018. and the war on terror was in the procces of ending. the
EU was in complete control of europe , presidents and priministers just signed over control to high commander yarris vaugn, and once again i hear quistions. why would any sensible government sign away control to an american millitary commander working for the EU? well thats a story for another time. under the control of yarris a large group of scientists were ordered to start on project zero. this is where the story gets complicated. Project zero, as it was codenamed was a secret project that started working on genes and that sort of thing, human testing. they dug up old work done by the old nazi regime, allthough rumoured never to have ever taken place the evedence was staggering, and the results even more disturbing. well im getting sidetracked here, as i was saying project zero was starting to make progress. disturbing progress, they had created the worlds first half-beast, a gene mix of a pig and a man, although only basic changes ocured it was easy to see the possibilitys were endless, yarris began to dream of the perfect super soldier, he wanted results and results he got. after 5 years of Europes best scientists working on Yarris`s super soldiers they were finnaly done, they had created the perfect killing machine.
after a few test trials in third world countrys yarris began to get nervous, the super soldiers he had dreamed of started to get minds of their own, they were starting to wonder why they were the ones fighting. thats when the trouble began. yarris ordered a virus be created that would wipe out the super soldiers that were to be later refered to as the altered. a long story short the virus didnt work as planned, it killed most of the altered but others were unaffected. and as you have probbably guesed by now, with such a powerfull virus around normal people wouldnt do to well would they? well no they didnt, half the world population died within two months of its release, while most of those that survived were turned into savage monsters, you could call them zombies if you want. and the few that didnt get mutated or deformed by the zero virus grouped together into there towns and citys. each becoming a nation on its own. the major citys either got destroyed or became fortresses. and so the world is in much need of help. under attack from mutants and altered superhumans. and still mankind attempts to thrive.

it is 7 years since the crysis of project zero and the world is attempting to recover. the mutants are getting desperate for food as the humans they feed on have lcked themselves in their towns and citys for protection, the altered have taken control of a small town in the country of england, that town is Oldcroft.






chapter 2: the ghost in the street.

so here he was. soaking wet in the middle of an empty highstreet.it had been exactly four hours since the warning klaxon that anounced curfew had sounded, people stopped doing what they were doing and rushed to cars busses and trains,everyone desperate to get home, all except one...

"fallback!!!" screamed veteran Captain Vlad Obersschreik, he wasnt sure if his six man team had heard him, or even if they were still alive to hear him. the mission was difficult enough to peform in the mealstrom of metal and noise that had started just as they arrived on the empty highstreet. the captain saw movement to his left, at least someone had heard his order, he roll`d backwards out of the cover he had been using, as he rose to his feet to retreat everything stopped. it wasnt as if it was just the noise, but it was everything, bullets had been halted in mid-air, shrapnel freezing where it would normaly shoot out and cripple all in its path. He had decided, something was very, very wronge...

it had been three months since the disaster of Oldcroft highstreet, and all was not well.


this is my first fanfic and im not realy sure what to do next so any suggestions? or ideas?
killer fanfic bro
 
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