Byakuran || 白蘭

[Zaphkiel]

Stretched pixels O^O Good bio none the less

 

[Akasha]

I love the character :3

 

[Vayne]

Lambo >> Byakuran :)

 

[Stick]

Them pics >.>

Cool bio doe

 

[Edward]

thanks everyone

and vayne, lmao pls he's so irrelevant z.z

 

[Inch]

I've got a lot of issues with this bio. The first and most obvious mistake that you made is the color scheme. The monotony of the repeated faint purple color is completely overbearing. When utilizing color, it should function to effectively highlight the colors that are going to be present as a result of the character's appearance. Replicating the colors used in those pictures does nothing to this effect.

The next big problem is with the images. One of your first images results in a text wrapping, which is both horrendous and ugly. Several of the later images in the bio look squished and distorted. Images should server to break up the text, yet you seemingly felt the need to randomly throw in poorly cropped pictures of your character's ugly mug. This is all surprising to me as I know that you've used one of Baldy's avatars before. I would have assumed that you had some sort of knowledge and instinct regarding artistic choice as a result of this.

This is only the tip of the iceberg in terms of mistakes that you made in this bio. In the name of courtesy, however, I will not call you out on them in this public forum. Expect a PM from me within the coming hours to outline your mistakes.

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This is a joke. Good bio, Ed.

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[Glad Of War]

Awesome Biography.

 

[Migualon J.J.]

Byakuran sucks

 

[Excālibur1]

Nice bio but images are stretched out.

 

[Edward]

Thanks all o^o

 

[Jokey]

You're the best Ed!

 

[Edward]

You're the best Ed!

thanks bb
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[Mathias]

The whole Nico Robin hype sure ended quickly ;p

OT: I like this character much more.

 

[Sharingdork]

"Shakujo Training"
You put the correct name of the style in there right now. :|

 

[Edward]

"Shakujo Training"
You put the correct name of the style in there right now. :|

<_< no comment about da bio? kden. U_U

The whole Nico Robin hype sure ended quickly ;p

OT: I like this character much more.

It was a phase... this one probably is one too, ahha.

 

[Souji]

Nice job nephew.

 

[Troi]

This bio is way too beautiful...

 

[Oraan]

Nice Biography

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Tsuna Awakens is meant for... Tsuna. xD Otherwise nice bio!

 

[Leathercandle]

Pshhh. I could take this bio on u___u (not)

Great bio