[KG] Byakugan and Gentle Fist

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(Sorry for the late reply!)

Concentrating by closing his eyes, Souji activates his Byakugan, allowing its trademark veins to encroach around his temples. Opening them, his piercing grey irises and black pupils lighten to a grey-white hue, forming a color gradient that's somewhat visually appealing...

(Dōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All Seeing White Eye

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Byakugan is the kekkei genkai of the Hyuga clan. Bearers of this Dõjutsu have almost featureless white eyes. When the Byakugan is activated, the user's pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge as the blood flow to their eyes is increased. While having the Byakugan deactivated, Hyuga ninjas have a normal eyesight and no special addition to their vision. While low rank Hyugas will need to perform a sequence of hand seals ( Horse → Tiger with lifting just index fingers → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Snake with the right index finger lifted straight up) to activate their Byakugan, Hyuga masters will be able to do so without the need for any hand seals and even have it active passively for long periods of time. Once activated, the user gains access to all of the abilities the Byakugan bestows upon them. While, like other Dojutsu, its main ability is to see chakra and the chakra flow in sentient beings, the Byakugan adds a complete new detail and dimension to that ability. The user can not only see chakra and the chakra flow, but also the circulatory system and even the 361 tenketsu. Added to this ability, once activated the Byakugan grants the user a near perfect field of vision 360º around himself (up to long-range if he's a master). This field of vision has only one blind spot, slightly above the 3rd thoracic vertebrae and facing backwards but enables the user to actually even see his own chakra circulatory system and chakra flow, which explains why all Hyuugas are so adept and masterfull of precise chakra control. The last ability the Byakugan has is the ability to zoom in and out, focusing on specific things, piercing beyond matter and energy alike, as well as chakra. This specific ability allows the user to see pass most barriers as well as physical matter (like rock walls, ground, etc) but also energy, being able to focus beyond chakra that might be in front of them or other energies. The zooming ability is enhanced as the user becomes more adept at using his eyes and can even reach distances above 20kms away. Some Hyugas have shown a great awareness regarding agressiveness as well as killing intent, detecting such intentions and emotions from others with more ease than most.
Note: Activation spends a move from the users own move count but once the user reaches Sannin Rank and has gained mastery over Gentle Fist for 1 month, he can activate it passively without spending a move. Because of its low chakra cost to maintain, the user can keep it active throughout the whole fight as long as he has chakra and stamina to do so.
Note: Genjutsu that requires Eye Contact when used against a Byakugan user requires direct eye contact between enemy pupil and user's pupil
Note: Must be activated to use Gentle Fist (Jyuken)
Note: Cannot be blinded by matter, chakra, light or energy
Note: Its tracking abilities are similar to that of a 3 Tomoe Sharingan

Due to his extended period of time of having his Byakugan, he does not need to perform the required handseals (found in the Byakugan rules).

Scene 1:

As Sensei makes his clones and mixes with them, Souji would simply detect Priest's chakra signature. He had already deduced his distinct signature before he had created the clones, and once he kept a bead on it, finding him was as simple as reaching out to touch a sore thumb.

"I found you, sensei!"

Scene 2:

Nothing of note happens, and Souji is unaware that he's in a genjutsu. However, through his X-ray vision and ability to see chakra flow and points, he finds that his uneven chakra flow and disruption of continuity is apparent. He looks down at his hand and sees this anomaly, then applying the proper level of pain to break out of the illusion.

"Ouch! Nice one."

Scene 3:

Suddenly, Priest sensei would throw a flash bomb at him.

Note: Cannot be blinded by matter, chakra, light or energy
Noting the futility of such an attack, Souji merely watches as Priest's clone charges at him with a kunai. Taking a middle stance, slightly hunched over, Souji grabs the wrist of the clone and squeezes it, causing enough pain for the clone to drop the kunai from his outstretched hand. Souji was able to do this due to the tracking ability of his eyes.
 

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Nice one. However one or two thing to note:

for the scene 1.
Neji was not able to differentiate Naruto from his clone as they all have the same and exact chakra signature, same quantity and quality. So you did not get that right. I only did that to confuse you.
Shadow clone is a unqiue technique that fools doujutsu itself. Remember Kaguya could have known that Naruto was a clone if her doujutsu say so. I think same goes with the other doujutsus.

For the 2nd scene. I like your approach, however, byakugan gives you 360 view so apparently, you can already view your chakra network if you want to, without looking at your hand or body path. Other than that. Nice one.

Any question?
 

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Ah, excellent, I'll keep that in mind. I'll just use a large jutsu to poof away the clones. Whoever's left will probably be the original xD

But thanks for the clarifications. No questions for now :)
 

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With the two clones surrounding him, Souji would form a rotation from his stance, creating a dome of pure blue chakra that knocked both clones back slightly, stunning them. Keeping track of both of them with his Byakugan, Souji, while rotating and in a smooth, continuous motion, would apply shape manipulation to turn the dome of chakra into razor sharp chakra wisps that would be directed to one of the clones, striking and defeating it.

Then, just as the rotation was about to be complete, Souji would pull back his right palm and gather chakra through it. At the end of the rotation, he'd outstretch his hand forward towards the second clone, releasing a blast that would push the second clone away. All three moves transition seamlessly as if it were a single move.

"How was that, sensei?"

(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Giant Rotation
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Description: A rotation on a bigger scale that leaves behind a huge crater.

(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A rotation where the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to attack and defend all in one move.

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of their palm that blows away their opponent.
 

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Its superb.

Okay now.

2 of my clones burst into a full sprint towards you. Clone 1 will get to you first so as soon as he gets to you, close the distance and kick him on his knee and use that as a steping stone to do a backflip. While doing the backflip, land both your feet against him so that he is sent flying.

As you land, you are met closely with an incoming punch from the second clone, with no time to completely evade, I want you to slap the punch and while you grab his hand, pull him away so that his back is now facing you then lock onto 3 of his tenketsus and strike them.
 
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