[Katon] burning creatures with Vision-sensei

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*thank you senpai, now I get to perform my 1st Katon jutsu*

I start gathering my chakra in my stmoach, I continue adding chakra as I start to nature manipulate my chakra turning it into Katon chakra, I then take a deep breath and continue moulding my chakra so it is ready for the jutsu, I continue turning my chakra into Katon chakra and then I exhale, releasing my Katon chakra through my mouth, releasing small flaming balls at senpais clone

ADVANTAGES

• It doesn't require handseals soit can be performed quite fast
• Because it can be performed fast, it doesn't give your opponent a lot of time to counter
• Doesn't require a lot of chakra but can be very effective if performed properly

DISADVANTAGES

• Because it is D-Rank it can be easily countered by a Suiton jutsu
• The fire balls are small so the damage won't be as bad even if you do make contact

CREATIVE USES

• Since doesn't require handseals, a Fuuton tachnique that does require handseals could be used to enhance the flames
• Once it is performed you could perform a follow up technique because you will have time while the opponent is trying to counter this jutsu

COUNTERS

• I would use a Suiton technique and follow it up with a Raiton technique
 

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"No need for the creative uses, we'll add those in later perhaps. You did alright, except your counter. Water would douse the fire, but the Lightning isn't needed. Lightning and Water is a combination, not really needed in a counter of fire. A D rank water would be able to douse this, remember the ranks and such."


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user inhales and then exhales, shooting small balls of fire at the opponent.



"That's the one you just did, and learned. Now for the next jutsu. This jutsu requires the use of ninja weapons known as shuriken, I am sure you have some of those. Now first, throw several shuriken at my clone, and as the shuriken travels through the air, gather your fire based chakra in your stomach and spew some fire onto the shuriken to set them ablaze. These shuriken will then hit my clone and burn him. Try it, and remember, as much detail as you can please, plus only advantages and disadvantages, and a question if you have any."

Dean creates another clone to serve a dummy, poor 'ol clones have to feel the heat.
 

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*thanks I will remember that and sorry for adding the creative uses and counters, I just thought you might want it*

I take out a few shuriken from my ninja pouch and hold them in my hand, I then throw them at senpais clone and start moulding my chakra in my stomach, I continue adding chakra while I start to nature manipulate my chakra, turning my chakra into Katon chakra. I continue moulding my Katon chakra and I then spew it out, onto the shuriken, setting the shuriken on fire as the shuriken hit senpais clone and he burns :snick:

ADVANTAGES

• The enemy cannot simply douse the fire because the shuriken will still go at him
• Because it doesn't need a lot of chakra, this jutsu can be done several times depending on the number of shuriken you have
• Is a good jutsu to make the enemy move further away from you

DISADVANTAGES

• It could also be a disadvantage because you number of shuriken is limited so it can't be a jutsu to rely on
• Because it is the shuriken that is on fire and not a complete Katon jutsu, a Doton wall could probably stop it
 

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"Good, nice counter, detail is alright for now since it is small techniques that don't require much effort, as we go further I expect more detailed responses. Here is the technique you just learned."

(Katon: Kaen Shuriken Ranbu ) - Fire Release: Blazing Shuriken Dance
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will throw several shuriken infused with fire at the enemy and then, through a mental command, ignites them to cause extra damage.

"Alright, for the next jutsu. Relatively easy to perform, I want you to gather your chakra in your stomach and mould it to form superheated chakra, and release it from your mouth in the form of a small fireball. Similar to your first jutsu but this one is a single fireball. Fire the fireball at my clone and burn him.

Dean creates yet another clone, who has to be burned. He laughs at the thought of clones getting the punishment of being used as dummies.
 

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I will definitely give more details in future jutsus, these 1s are a bit easy to perform and there isn't much detail I can give

I start to gather chakra in my stomach(tummy XD), I continue to add more chakra as I start to use nature manipulation to turn my chakra into Katon chakra, I continue mixing and moulding my chakra until it is suitable to perform the jutsu, I inhale and then blow out my Katon chakra, using shape manipulation I blow out a single ball of fire, that I direct at senpais clone who catches alight with the fireball XD

ADVANTAGES

• It doesn't require any hand seals so it could surprise your opponent
• This jutsu can be performed quickly by a skilled ninja

DISADVANTAGES

• It is a single fireball so you have to be very accurate if you want to catch you oppoent with it
• Since it is a single fireball, an attck that is bigger or of a wider range could extinguish the flame and still head towards you
• It isn't very powerful so if carries the risk, that if you miss, you will be open to an attack
 

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"Alright, good. This is the technique you learned."

( Katon: Komakai Kaki ) - Fire Release: Small Fire
Rank: D
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user spews a small fireball.

"Okay, so for your next jutsu you will have to do your first handseals! So first perform the Snake → Ram → Monkey → Tiger handseals, then gather up some of your Fire based chakra in your stomach and release it from your mouth in the form of a pale gas, that is highly flammable and can be lit with a fire based jutsu or a spark, so it's mostly used in conjuction with a technique.

After spewing the flammable gas, I want you to focus your fire chakra in your stomach and mould it, then release it from your mouth in the form of a stream. You must keep concentrating to keep the stream active.This is two techniques, one is spewing the flammable gas and one spewing the fire stream.

So, spew the gas onto my clone and then ignite it with the stream, as much detail as possible, and advantages and disadvantages for BOTH the jutsu's. Let's see how you fare with two jutsu's."


Dean creates another clone, and sends it forward to stand and act as a dummy for his student.
 
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1st Jutsu

I 1st perform the Snake->Ram->Monkey->Tiger handseals, I then start gathering chakra in my stomach(tum tum XD), I then use nature manipulation to turn my chakra into Katon chakra, I continue moulding my chakra and then suddenly release my it from my mouth onto senpais clone, but in a form of gas that is highly flammable to set up my next attack

ADVANTAGES

• It is highly flammable, so if you use a high ranked Katon jutsu, this will enhance its power a lot
• It could be used to set multiple targets up for the next jutsu
• Could be used as a distraction

DISADVANTAGES

• It takes 4 handseals to perform, so the user has time to react
• This jutsu isn't goin gto cause any harm without a follow up jutsu
• If someone uses a Fuuton jutsu that is powerful, they could blow it back at you XD

2nd Jutsu

I quickly start gathering chakra in my stomach, I continue gathering my chakra as I start to use nature manipution to turn my chakra into Katon chakra, I continue moulding my chakra as I take a deep breath, I then release my Katon chakra from my mouth by breathing it out in the form of a stream, I continue moulding my chakra while blowing out my Katon chakra until senpais clone is burnt completely, so sad for senpais clone XD

ADVANTAGES

• It doesn't require any handseals, so it is a great follow up jutsu to the 1st
• It is a stream of Katon chakra, so it can burn multiple things by just moving your head a bit
• Because of the 1st jutsu, this jutsus power will increase even further

DISADVANTAGES

• Because you have to concentrate on the stream, you leave yourself open to an attack
• The stream of Katon may block your vision to see what is happening in front of you
• Without the 1st jutsu, it isn't very powerful
 

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"Ok, your descriptions are good, let me just fix one thing."

• If someone uses a Fuuton jutsu that is powerful, they could blow it back at you XD
"That is wrong, let me quickly take you through the Elemental Strengths and Weaknesses. There are five elements, Fire, Water, Earth, Wind and Lightning.

Water: Is strong to Fire because it douses it, and it is weak against Earth because it stops the force of Water, and does not allow it to pass through it's sturdy nature.

Fire: Is strong against Wind, because it fuels the fire, making it more powerful and it's weak against Water, because the water douses it.

Earth: Is strong against Water because of it's properties and it's weak against Lightning, because the Lightning rips it's apart, destroying it.

Wind: Is strong against Lightning as it insulates it and it is weak against Fire because it feeds the flame.

These are the basic elemental interactions. Know these by heart, and always remember them for as long as you RP. Have any questions or can we proceed?"
 

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"Good, okay, these are the jutsu you learned. Now onto the C ranks!"


Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Tiger, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.




Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will release a small but powerful flame of fire at their opponent from either their limbs (through movement) or exhaling it. It can produce fire balls or fire streams or simply aid in taijutsu.



Dean takes out another bottle of Whiskey from his pouch. A shiny bottle, still relatively full and it can be seen, it was expensive. Dean looks over at his student, who stands there, a bit lost.

"Allow me...to quickly finish this."

Dean then quickly drinks a huge quantity of the alcohol, and quickly puts back the bottle.

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"Now, for your next jutsu, I want you to gather your Fire based chakra in your stomach and release it from your mouth in the form of a stream that you have to keep active for it to continue. This stream of fire is able to make an opponent collapse under it's heat and also, severely burn an opponent. Remember though, one can't use another jutsu while you are feeding this stream of fire, many people make these mistakes in the beginning of the RP. It's a useful technique because it doesn't require any handseals, and it can travel up to Mid range. Use the stream on my clone and burn him."

Dean creates a clone to act as a dummy for his student.
 

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senpai stop being so mean, you are drinking and not giving me some :nuts:

oi C rank, hahaha awesome

I start gathering my chakra in my stomach, I continue adding chakra as I start to use nature manipulation to turn my chakra into Katon chakra, I continue mixing and moulding my chakra as this technique requires a continuous chakra stream to be useful, I inhale and then release my chakra through my mouth but I continue to focus on exhaling my chakra as this technique requires me to focus or it will disperse, I release my Katon chakra and burn senpais clone

ADVANTAGES

• It can cover a wider range by moving your head in the desired direction
• Because it is a stream of chakra, even if you miss your target, you can alter your position to hit your target
• You can hit multiple targets

DISADVANTAGES

• Because you have to focus on the stream, you may be open to an attack from the sides or behind
• By continuously blowing out fire in front of your face, it blocks your vision because the flame is in your line of vision
 
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"Okay, don't rush the descriptions though but it's alright. That specific jutsu you just performed can also make the opponent collapse, due to it's heat. You learned this jutsu."


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.



"Now, for this jutsu, listen carefully. First, you will perform the Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger handseals, then you will inhale and mould a large amount of Fire chakra inside your stomach. Then, before releasing it, you will form a ring, made by your thumb and index finger, and blow through it. This can create either one of two things: It can be blown out like a stream of fire and sustained as it creates a huge blast short range from you or it can be released as a small ball of fire which travels up to mid range. Now I want you to use the stream to burn my clone that is close range to you. Don't rush the descriptions please."



Dean creates a clone that stands close range to the student.
 

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I stand at short range from senpais clone, with my hands at my sides as I get ready to perform my next technique. I form the hand seals Snake->Ram->Monkey->Boar->Horse->Tiger, I then take in a deep breath as I start to gather a large amount of my chakra, I begin to change my raw chakra into super heated Katon chakra by using nature manipulation. I then make the tips of my index finger and thumb touch to form a circle, I then put it on my lips as I start to exhale my Katon chakra from my mouth in the form of a stream of fire, as I release my Katon chakra I continue moulding Katon chakra in my stomach so I can continue exhaling a stream of fire. Because senpais clone is at a short range, I hit him with my stream of fire, as he takes the full damage of the attack, he gets burned and disappears

ADVANTAGES

• Because it is a stream of fire, the chances of your opponent just jumping to the side are limited because you are able to adjust your position
• At short range your opponent doesn't have a lot of time to react to this technique
• You could burn multiple targets and you could also evaporate a small water source that your opponent may be using

DISADVANTAGES

• This technique requires 6 hand seals and also you have to form a ring with your hands, it gives your opponent a lot of time to react before you perform the technique
• It is more useful at short range, so against some1 who is mid-long range, you would have a problem hitting them with this technique
 

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"Very good, these are the type of replies I expect. This is the jutsu you just learned."


Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally. The fire ball can present itself in 2 forms: it can either be created by a stream of fire and sustained as a gigantic ball of flames in front of the user spanning up to short range or be released as a slightly smaller ball of fire which will travel towards the enemy up to mid range.



"Now for the next jutsu. Fairly easy to perform, I want you to take this lighter I have, you owe me money for this >.>. Then throw this lighter, whilst it's active, into an open flame. Then by manipulating this flame, using shape manipulation, create a wall of fire before you to create a protective wall of flames that can be used as a defense or to burn small objects. If you have learned Hurricane Fist in Wind training, you can use it with this jutsu to create a combo."

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Dean creates a small flame and orders his clone to throw a small object at the student.

"Quickly, create the wall of flames to protect yourself!"
 

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sorry about my previous replies senpai, I was so eager to learn that I wasn't showing you what I can really bring to my training, I was giving you half baked answers, I realize now that its not about finishing fast but about understanding the technique because your description is as important as the performance of the jutsu

As I stand upright in front of senpais clone with my hands at my side. I notice senpai creats a clone, I then notice senpai talking to his clone. Soon after this, senpais clone proceeds to through a small object at me, as I see this, I quickly take out the lighter that senpai gave to me earlier, I then switch the lighter on, activating its flame(I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY), I throw it in front of me and as it is in the air, I imagine a wall to protect me but not just any wall, a wall made of fire. I use my chakra to manipulate the shape of the flames (shape manipulation) to create this wall of flames,I continue imagining the wall of flames so I have an idea of how the wall should be made, I create the wall of flames by mixing my chakra with the flame from the lighter, thus protecting myself from the object as the flames burn the object

ADVANTAGES

• Because you are using an already made flame, you won't need much time to perform this technique
• You don't use a lot of chakra and it protects you from onjects
• Can be used with the Fuuton jutsu(I haven't learned it yet)

DISADVANTAGES

• It won't protect you from larger objects like shuriken, if anything it might set the shuriken on fire and then you have another problem
• Won't last long as the gas in the lighter is limited
 
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"No problem, it's a mistake we all make in the beginning, as long as you are having fun. Okay, this is the jutsu you just learned."


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.



"Now for your next justu. For this one, I want you to perform the Tiger handseal and then gather your Fire chakra in your stomach and release it from your mouth in the form of a circle through shape manipulation. This circle of fire will fly through the air until it strikes the opponent. This jutsu can also be used differently, where one will stomp the ground to release the stream of fire to run along the ground towards the enemy. I want you to create the ring of fire though, so it can hit my clone a few meters away. It can also be combined with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno."

Dean creates a clone that stands about ten meters away from his student
 

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I'm really enjoying myself, I think this is going great

I take my position 10 meters away from senpais clone, I stand still with my hands at my side. I then raise my hand to my chest and perform the Tiger hand seal, after performing the hand seal, I start to gather chakra in my stomach, as I gather my chakra I start to turn my raw chakra into super heated Katon chakra by nature namipulation my chakra. As I breath in, I continue moulding my chakra until it is hot enough. I imagine a circle as I begin to release my Katon chakra from my mouth, I use shape manipulation to mould my Katon chakra into a circle, I release my Katon chakra that's shaped in a circle towards senpais clone, it floats towards senpais clone until it hits him, burning him

ADVANTAGES

• If used with the Fuuton combinations, it enhances the flame and it becomes more destructive
• Doesn't require a huge amount of chakra or a fire source, it could be done at any time as long as you have enough chakra
• As it flies towards your opponent, you can prepare your next technique

DISADVANTAGES

• It would only be useful in close range combat as it flying through the air allows your opponent time to prepare himself
• Without the Fuuton combination, it wouldn't be very dangerous as a normal Suiton attack would douse the fire
• Isn't a fast technique
 

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"Nicely done, this is the jutsu you just learned. Good that you are enjoying it."


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames, or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno. The stream of fire can be created by stomping the ground (running across the ground in this case) or by spewing the flames (which will form an airborne ring of flames that will travel towards the enemy).



"Okay, for the next jutsu, it's fairly simple. Grab some ninja wire from your pouch and wrap it around my clone from a distance, then form the Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger handseals, and build up your Fire chakra and release it along the ninja wire. The fire would run along the wire and set my clone ablaze as it reaches him. Not very useful, never used it myself, but if the opportunity presents itself, then it's good. Burn my clone."

Dean creates another clone, who stands ready to wrapped with some ninja wire >.>
 

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thanks but I hope you are also enjoying teaching me because if you aren't, I must be doing something wrong so tell me what I need to improve

I walk to my spot about 6-10 meters away from senpais clone, I turn around to face senpais clone. I put my right hand into my ninja pouch. I remove my hand from my pouch and in my hand I have ninja wire. I start swinging around the wire like a rope, I swing it around till it has enough speed to catch senpais clone off guard. I swing it towards senpais clone, catching him by surprise, I wrap the wire around him. I put the piece of wire in between my teeth as I perform the Snake->Dragon->Rabbit->Tiger hand seals, I then hold the wire with my hand again as I start to mould my raw chakra, I continue adding raw chakra as I start to turn my raw chakra into Katon chakra by nature manipulating my chakra. I then take a breath as I continue moulding my chakra, I then exhale my Katon chakra along the wire as a flame, my Katon chakra moves on the wire all the way to senpais clone, burning him

ADVANTAGES

• If able to complete this technique, your opponent is as good as dead
• Very useful against an opponent who is exhausted
• Doesn't require a lot of chakra

DISADVANTAGES

• Takes so long to perform that your opponent could escape
• Would be useless against some1 who has a lot of chakra left
• While performing this technique, your hands are always doing something XD, so you can't defend against an attack from some1 else
 

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"It's nice being able to teach, so yes I am enjoying it xD"


Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.



"Great, now for the next one. I want you to perform the Tiger handseal, and then mold you Fire chakra inside your stomach. Then release it in the form of a flame. Now this jutsu is mostly used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet, creating a pseudo lava that is fired towards the opponent. Now since you don't have that jutsu, I'll create an Earth clone to help you out. I will let him fire the mud projectiles then you will fire the flame onto it, to create a flaming type of mud that would hit my normal clone and burn him."

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Dean creates a normal shadow clone to stand around 8 meters from them, then he creates an Earth based clone who quickly performs the necessary handseals to fire the mud bullets.

"Quickly fire the flame towards the mud bullets!"
 
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