Brisk Winter Air

[Nimmy]

So, a few people wanted to see this, so I'm posting it. Critique is more than welcome.

Brisk Winter Air
The brisk winter air was taking its leave;
Snow on the concrete fading away.
The world was coming alive I believe,
Thinking of you on that ominous day.
Trees that were bare, just beginning to flower,
Painting the world into nature’s symphony.
Winter’s frost replaced by spring’s showers,
Trying to placate the season swiftly.
Beauty and grace filled the air,
Hinting towards the warmth for which we yearn.
The day was so rich, the mood was so fair;
Not once did I think it would take such a turn.

That one call of my life; I was so ill prepared,
For that damage-
That mountain-
That colossal despair.
My fragile world that had always been so tightly bound,
Perched on its spool, it quickly unwound,
When that brisk winter air took you in its leave,
Like smoke in a breeze; leaving me to grieve.
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[Naruto6Axis]

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[Οdin]

Very good, Nimmy! =DD

 

[Nimmy]

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Honestly, I don't care whether you read it or not. So why click on a thread, not read, and then make a comment about not reading the thread? Seems like a waste to me. But however you get your thrills in life is your own business I suppose.

 

[Mandy]

Wow sissy! It's amazing! =DD
I wish I could write like that, very nice :3

 

[I Just Died]

Damn you're good.

 

[Killer Vision]

your awesome nim.. thank you for sharing.+rep

and to the bozo clown on this thread, grim -rep for you funny man

 

[Nimmy]

Very good, Nimmy! =DD

Thanks Diny! <3

Wow sissy! It's amazing! =DD
I wish I could write like that, very nice :3

I want to see your writing sometime sissy! I bet it's great! <3

Damn you're good.

Thanks IJD :hug: <3

your awesome nim.. thank you for sharing.+rep

and to the bozo clown on this thread, grim -rep for you funny man

Thank you And you can thank Panda for me sharing, she asked me to show her :X But thanks again <3

 

[Tsuki]

Nimmy san that was a very nice poem ^^ ...and as I said always update me whenever you write a new poem


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[Nimmy]

Nimmy san that was a very nice poem ^^ ...and as I said always update me whenever you write a new poem


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Thanks Tsuki :3 I'll be sure to keep you updated
And that meme is awesome by the way ^_^ :hug:

 

[uzumaki antonia]

Wow that's amazing.

 

[Nimmy]

Wow that's amazing.

Thanks

 

[The Scion of Hentai]

Very nice, very nice indeed. Keep 'em coming Nimmy-chwan!!!

 

[0neCrazyAngel]

this is really good! keep it u :ice:

 

[Nimmy]

Very nice, very nice indeed. Keep 'em coming Nimmy-chwan!!!

Thanks so much! ^_^

this is really good! keep it u :ice:

Thank you! <3

 

[Ldude]

Ooh.. nice poem. <3 Thanks for posting it.

 

[Nimmy]

Ooh.. nice poem. <3 Thanks for posting it.

Thanks for the nice comment :3

 

[SasukeXbam]

Wow I didn't know you could write like tht very impressive noodles!! Just Wow

 

[Nimmy]

Wow I didn't know you could write like tht very impressive noodles!! Just Wow

Thank you Justin :hug: I tend to describe my feelings better when I write them :/

 

[Rorasa]

this is so sad and beautiful wease: its a masterpiece. omg i so look up to you in poetry