Bringing you back

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Bringing You Back

As a clone dispersed, Naruto suddenly veered off to the left. ?Naruto, what are you doing!?? Sakura yelled. He didn?t reply. Instead he increased the amount of chakra in his feet, jumping farther with every leap. Soon clones where dispersing left, and right. Naruto gained invaluable info about the opponent he had longed to bring home for so long. Soon he came to the clearing where his old rival Sasuke stood.

He was surrounded by a group of 3 people. ?Long time no see, Naruto.? He said looking over at him. Naruto clenched his fist, thinking how many times he?d been through this. ?Karin, take the others, and find the rest of his pathetic teammates.? Karin nodded, and the group started to take off. ?Oh, and don?t leave any survivors? He smiled. ?Not much to say, hm? ? Sasuke asked, looking at Naruto. Suddenly he was at Naruto?s side, his katana out of its sheath. His other hand was glued to Naruto?s shoulder, holding him still ?We?ll then, let?s get this started!?

He lowered his sword, the cool metal piercing his pale skin. Naruto was replaced by a log, littered with bomb tags. Sasuke quickly jumped in the air to avoid the blast. Smoke filled the clearing, and as he landed his face was greeted with a barrage of punches. Sasuke noticed a frog in the background, and wondered if it was the one Naruto summoned during his fight with Gaara.

Sasuke avoided the punch with ease, but suddenly his face scrunched up. He was sent flying back, and he landed on the floor. ?Seems as though you?ve gotten stronger than before, Naruto!? He chuckled. He wiped the blood off of his mouth, and smiled. ?Sasuke, your coming with ME!? Naruto screamed.

Next Chapter: Karin, Juugo, and Suigetsu track down Naruto?s comrades!
Please review, and tell me if it?s good or bad. Btw, this is only the beginning? I plan for at least 15 chapters.
 

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Thx guys, it means alot.

I'll probably post the next one on Tuesday, or in two days time depending on where you live.
 

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Nice;), next time just give a small description of the terrain and if u want, make paragraphes in the dialogues but i like reading it, keep it up:D
 

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Awesome cool! I really like this because I'v really wanted to know if Naruto will bring Sasuke back.....also may want to add in the next chapter where they are and such...:naruto::sasuke:

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