Bonds of Shinobi XII

[Train]

The moment Tsubaki stepped into the scene, I just knew she'd die. I'm glad of what she did for Shisui though, there's hope for him yet. But, the way you say "Team Miyagi has lost it's second member", I'm guessing he will die too...?
I think the flashback of Tsubaki and Kagami was done well, especially since your making Kagami = Sasuke...I could get the whole, annoying, "I'm all alone" Sasuke-ish vibe from him -__- ...eh, not that I'm a huge hater (or fan) of Sasuke...
Also, Tsubaki moping/remembering that scene in the rain brought good imagery to my mind...
Man, imaging a ton of dead, eyeless Uchihas with blank sockets made me cringe. *shiver*
And Love had one in his tongue...ew. >___> "
The Ame-no-Uzume was really cool. xd
I felt it was sorta awesome, for Love to take on so many shinobi. >.<
Good chapter, will read final one soon. I won't be able to resist the pull of what seems to be an epic conclusion.

 

[Reborn]

The moment Tsubaki stepped into the scene, I just knew she'd die. I'm glad of what she did for Shisui though, there's hope for him yet. But, the way you say "Team Miyagi has lost it's second member", I'm guessing he will die too...?
I think the flashback of Tsubaki and Kagami was done well, especially since your making Kagami = Sasuke...I could get the whole, annoying, "I'm all alone" Sasuke-ish vibe from him -__- ...eh, not that I'm a huge hater (or fan) of Sasuke...
Also, Tsubaki moping/remembering that scene in the rain brought good imagery to my mind...
Man, imaging a ton of dead, eyeless Uchihas with blank sockets made me cringe. *shiver*
And Love had one in his tongue...ew. >___> "
The Ame-no-Uzume was really cool. xd
I felt it was sorta awesome, for Love to take on so many shinobi. >.<
Good chapter, will read final one soon. I won't be able to resist the pull of what seems to be an epic conclusion.

Yeah, I'm not trying to make it a secret of who's going to die

Spoiler: You guessed right.

Thank you, I actually intended to show that scene in the same chapter as when he left, but I was lazy and I see now that this was a better way to convey it.

Kagami=Sasuke 100%, sadly it wasn't my innitial intention, I wanted some individuality in it but alas it's how it worked.

Love is a sociopath, and even blinded himself (ironically lol) into believing that he was helping Konoha. I made him to be that character who lost his way and had fallen so far that he was lower then trash but in his mind he believed he was helping Konoha but deeper in his heart he only wanted power. That conflict was what I wanted to show for his character and I hoped I showed it in a way that people understood.

I wanted Love to take down a hell of a lot, but to make it realistic I didn't want him to take down every shinobi. Although Kage was just introduced recently, replacing Tenzou, I hated having to kill him, more then I did Tsubaki. He was Shukaku/Shikamaru in a sense to me and I love both of those characters. I wanted them to die for the sake of the plot but it hurt to do it (I know you didn't mention that but I just wanted to say that)

Final chapter...I hope you feel it's a good ending.

 

[Colour]

Awesome chapter bro.

 

[Reborn]

Awesome chapter bro.

Thank you.