Black despair Part 8 "Deviant"

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BLACK despair

PART EIGHT
"DEVIANT"

Narrator: An explosion swallows up an area of the forest. Debris and smoke is all that remained in the aftermath with no apparent sign of life.

*cough* *cough* *cough*

Ryuuta: (Continued cough)..*coughs*

Narrator: Natsuyo committed suicide in the attempt to take the ANBU along with him. However, unbeknownst to the now deceased nuke-nin did Ryuuta invoke his Sanagi jutsu. The fallen ANBU crashes down onto the ground and he does not move.

[Setting change: Danzou’s chamber]

Narrator: Haru returns moments later with the interrogator and three of his assistants follow from behind as ordered.

Character Insight - Interrogator:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root interrogator, shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to hood)
● Eye color: Beige
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions)
● Weapons: Tantou

Character InsightInterrogator’s assistant #1:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root interrogator assistant, shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to hood)
● Eye color: Light sky blue
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions)
● Weapons: Tantou

Character InsightInterrogator’s assistant #2:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root interrogator assistant, shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to hood)
● Eye color: Lilac
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions)
● Weapons: Tantou

Character InsightInterrogator’s assistant #3:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root interrogator assistant, shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to hood)
● Eye color: Apricot
● Face: Porcelain animal mask (only in missions)
● Weapons: Tantou

Haru: The interrogator..Danzou-sama

Danzou: I have here a potential suspect

Interrogator: This child?

Danzou: Yes

Danzou: (Continued) We have enough suspicions to believe that he is the one responsible

Interrogator: Even though he was also affected?

Danzou: That is precisely why you are here among other things

Interrogator: I will commence

[Setting change: Root sub-department infirmary]

Narrator: The iryou-nin continued their analyzation over Kou as well as the reports gathered from his and the child’s diagnosis. Impetuously, the ANBU’s eyes shoot open as his entire body begins to tremor. The three iryou-nin rushed over to assess the befalling situation.

Head Root Iryou-nin: He is having a seizure

[Setting change: Konohagakure no Sato forest]

Narrator: The ANBU nearly escaped death due to his Sanagi jutsu. However, he was unable to become aware of Natsuyo’s sacrificial take down and his jutsu was activated late. Ryuuta lays fatigued as well as somewhat choked up from the particles that remained after Natsuyo suicide bombing. He also sustained several wounds on his side and abdominal sections due to the explosion.

Ryuuta: *cough* *cough* (In thought) I failed to deliver the prisoner for more intel

Ryuuta: *cough* (Continued in thought) I have to inform Danzou-sama at once about this apposing organization..*cough*…before I die

Narrator: As exhausted and wounded as he was, he knew that he had to complete his mission not matter what the cost. It was a case of life and death not only for him but for his entire village. A big target was now slapped over Konohagakure for the death of a fellow Dokueki’s fallen comrade. The ANBU knew he had little time to reach his leader before a war broke out. He began to slowly arise from the ground.

Ryuuta: (In thought) Ah..what is this?

Ryuuta: (Continued in thought) I think I am poisoned

Narrator: It was a parting gift from the nuke-nin. In case he somehow survived would the particles that remained be swallowed and or absorbed by the skin. This was his one-time only Ikigurushii Kan no Jutsu and explosive tag combo. In which he is able to commit suicide via the tags and as he explodes do the poisonous particles linger behind even after the user has passed on.

Ryuuta: *coughs* (In thought) It cannot be..*panting*

Narrator: The distressed ANBU then collapses to the ground.

[Setting change: Danzou’s chamber]

Narrator: The interrogation starts off by the interrogator initiating a seal on the child. Two hand seals are made and the child is instantly bound by ring-like objects that spread throughout his body, paralyzing him.

Jutsu InsightInterrogator:

● Jutsu Name: Fuuinjutsu Enjin Fuuin (Seal Technique Ring Seal)
● Classification: Fuuinjutsu
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: Short-range
● Hand seals: Dragon
● Description: Once activated, this seal produces bright golden colored rings that distribute throughout the target’s entire body as well as causing paralysis.

Note: Fuuinjutsu translates to seal technique.

Narrator: The three assistants made their way around the child one by one. They each encircle him and the interrogator faces the child within the formation. Every assistant stretched out their arms towards the child’s direction and closed their eyes. The interrogator formed a specific hand seal and closed his eyes. They all then began to concentrate together channeling their own chakra into the child’s brain.

Jutsu InsightInterrogator & assistants:

● Jutsu Name: ESP Sankaku Jigen (ESP Triangle Dimension)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: Short-range
● Hand seals: Monkey, Bird
● Description: A jutsu that can only be activated by the use of multiple users. After activation, a thin green colored layer of energy disperses between all parties involved in which passes through the target.

Note: ESP stands for extrasensory perception.

Narrator: Stern expressions plastered on the men’s visages start to change as it proved almost impossible to penetrate through the memories.

Interrogator: (Shouts) Everybody focus!

Narrator: Danzou somewhat widened his eyes to the strange event as it was the first time that his highly rated Root interrogator posed difficulty in accomplishing his specialty.

Danzou: (In thought) Unlike the interrogator to raise his voice..

Narrator: Sweat formed upon the men’s faces as they endured the jutsu. Interrogator’s assistant #2 dropped to one knee as the jutsu placed too much force upon him. Assistant #1 fell to his feet. The assistant #3 held his own as his will was the strongest between the three.

Interrogator: (Shout) Do not falter your positions!

[Setting change: Root sub-department infirmary]

Narrator: The three iryou-nin struggled to stabilize the violently convulsing Kou.

Head Root Iryou-nin: We have not the choice..

Narrator: Head iryou-nin formed a single hand seal and invoked several words.

Head Root Iryou-nin: (Shouts) Yuuhatsu Konsui Shitsunen! (Induce Coma Oblivion)

Jutsu InsightHead Root Iryou-nin:

● Jutsu Name: Yuuhatsu Konsui Shitsunen! (Induce Coma Oblivion)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: Short-range
● Hand seals: Hare
● Description: A bright aura-like light blue chakra surrounds the user’s hand. Once this energy makes contact with the skin will the target quickly fall into a coma-like state. This jutsu is intended for the target to never again wake. However, if the target possesses a strong will can they overcome their comatose. The jutsu also when applied cancels any and all ails that the body inhabited at that time as its use it to place the target into a coma.

Narrator: Eyes close, bruised body settles and Kou is forcefully placed back into a coma. This time seemingly for the rest of his remaining life.

Head Root Iryou-nin: Success…but..

Head Root Iryou-nin: (Continued) He might never again awaken

[Setting change: Danzou’s chamber]

Narrator: Assistant #3 finally began to weaken barley able to stand.

Interrogator: Almost there..*pants*

Narrator: A mental wall then cracks and crumbles within the child’s mind. What awaits is another wall bigger and with chains wrapped all over with a huge lock in the center.

Interrogator: (In thought) A Lie…

Narrator: The man cannot believe his eyes. He then extended his arm out and touched the chain with his hand. As a result, he is pulled out of the child’s subconscious and is blasted away as well as his assistants from their grounded stances. All three psychically drained assistants land onto the floor but the interrogator broke his fall via the chakra emitted through his feet.

Interrogator: ..This child’s psyche is abnormal…

[Setting change: Konohagakure no Sato forest]

Narrator: Hours and hours pass with a blacked out Ryuuta. Powerful chilled winds blow and howl through the forest and slam through the ANBU’s still body. His eyes steadily open. It sends a chill down his spine and as he looks up into the sky he knows he was unsuccessful.

Ryuuta: Night sky…

Ryuuta: (In thought) No..I still might have a chance…I have to make it not matter what

Narrator: With the ANBU’s will he exceled himself beyond his own reached limits and begins to stand up to his feet.

Ryuuta: Hmm..I am miles from Konoha..

Narrator: He leaped onto a tree. Upon landing, he slipped and fell back onto the ground.

Ryuuta: (In thought) I cannot even balance myself

Narrator: As the fastest way back to his village was to no avail, he mentally prepared himself for the long walk ahead. Each step caused serve pain through his body but he did not stop.

Ryuuta: Ahh…*winces*

Narrator: Two shadowy figures hide themselves and spied on Ryuuta in an area somewhere behind the ANBU. Roars could be heard as a humongous winged creature soared through the sky and dove itself aiming for Ryuuta.

Ninth part will be released next week, same day, titled Storm (Look for it!).

Part 9: Storm
 
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Aha! finally I get the first post :p. Once again great chapter and I am truly looking forward to the next. Ryuuta's strong will and the incredible psyche of the kid are the real hooks in this current chapter. Just thought id throw that in there. Well, peace out Kuroi-kun
 

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Aha! finally I get the first post :p. Once again great chapter and I am truly looking forward to the next. Ryuuta's strong will and the incredible psyche of the kid are the real hooks in this current chapter. Just thought id throw that in there. Well, peace out Kuroi-kun
Yes you did lol Wow! very observant are we ;) Arigatou ^.^

Great job this will make a great manga :)
WHOA!!! That was an unexpected compliment but I do thank you for it. I am pleased to see that my work could be so highly praised, arigatou for your support.

Sumimasen (excuse me) for the late replies! -_-​
 
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