Black despair part 3

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Black despair Part 3 "Imprisonment"

BLACK despair

PART THREE
"IMPRISONMENT"

Narrator: An unfortunate orphan child with no parents or siblings has been forcefully drafted into an underground organization of secrecy with its ANBU Root members whom all conduct missions in the dark opposite to that of their own village’s ANBU force. Danzou finished informing the child in detail with what was to be expected of him and everything else needed to prepare him for his new life. Kou did as asked escorting the dramatized child to a single, small and silent room.

[Setting change: Root sub-department division chambers]

Narrator: The door to the room was pushed open and Kou had to literally help the child inside. He even had to go as far as to place him on a bed-shaped of stone with a tatami over the surface.

Note: Tatami roughly translates to folded and piled and is a type of mat mainly made of rice straw.

Kou: (In thought) Danzou-sama, are you sure you did the right thing by taking in this child?

Note:
Sama is a prefix the Japanese use when addressing someone with the up most respect.

Kou: I will be back shortly with a meal

Narrator: As Danzou’s subordinate exited the room, a tear streamed down the child’s face. Moments later, Kou enters having an apathetic expression plastered upon his face. In his hands was a small tray containing a bowl of rice, a bowl of soba, a cup of tea and a pair of chopsticks. He places it onto the floor next to the bed.

Kou: If you do not eat then it will weigh on you tomorrow as it is the first day of training for you

Narrator: With the meal delivered and word of advice, he turned around and exited the room. Leaving the broken child to fend and deal with all that had occurred to him thus far. The child’s eyes gradually rolled down in the direction of the food but giving in to no avail. He then curled himself in a ball and desperately attempted to force himself to sleep. Although, he somehow was able to fall asleep for a little while before waking up after having these nightmares of dying and the elder who blackmailed him into a life of slavery. Morning broke in and as scheduled Kou enters the dim-lighted room to collect the child for training. His eyes averted to the food tray although it was splattered all over the side wall and the child was not present. An arm reached overhead and lowered towards his back for a weapon. The child used stood above the doorway on the wall via the use of chakra. He previously released chakra through his fingertips and toes which enabled him to remain firm on any surface. As his hand curled around the small blade he then quickly proceeded to pull it out of the holster *slip* All of a sudden his arm is grabbed and he is thrown violently onto the ground. The child’s plan almost worked had the sweat drop that slit down his forehead not land on the assailant’s face.

Kou: You are a spy!

Kou: (Continued) Danzou-sama will be informed

Narrator: He turned around exiting the room; the child jumped to his feet and launched himself forwards but had the door shut in his face.

Child: Shit!

[Setting: Danzou’s chamber]

Narrator: Kou arrives and enters Danzou’s room.

Danzou: For you not to knock must mean that it is urgent

Kou: Yes Danzou-sama, the newly recruited child attempted to attack me

Danzou: Oh

Kou: He is skilled and I think that he is a spy

Danzou: Based solely on this incident?

Kou: Is it not sufficient enough, Danzou-sama?

Danzou: I will take this into consideration and so I would like for you to trail him from now on until further notice

Danzou: (Continued) Should he continue to act out will only result in his annihilation

Danzou: You may carry on with today’s schedule

Kou: Understood

Narrator: The assailant would carry out his leader’s latest assignment and returned to the child’s room. Standing right before the door way, Kou ponders quietly to himself.

[Setting: Root sub-department division chambers]

Kou: (In thought) Danzou-sama must see something useful in this child to have him sparred time after time…however I think I too am beginning to see what makes the child special as I saw it first hand

Kou: (Continued in thought) I could not even sense him whatsoever, so silent almost as if he had not been in the room at all..just who is he?

Narrator: He then enters the room and views what appears to be the child sleeping. Walking over to his resting body, he reaches below and shakes the shoulder area. A hand abruptly thrusts upwards and clutches the assailant’s wrist. Kou then yanks his wrist away from the child’s grip with his eyes somewhat widened.

Kou: (In thought) Confirmed….this child truly has an edge in which Danzou can use to sharpen his purpose

Kou: (Continued) Change your raggedy clothing

Narrator: Looking down at his clothes, the child sees just how tethered and dirty they really were. Redirecting his eyes at the auburn haired man revealed what appeared to be pieces of clothing draped over his arm. The man’s eyes connected with the child’s and he then tossed the clothes as well as a pair of sandals atop his bed.

Kou: Put them on and meet me outside the door, you have a couple of minutes to do so

Child: (In thought) What am I going to do?

Narrator: Moments later, the child steps out of the room changed displaying an apprehensive visage. He felt like screaming and crying out loud though he literally held himself back. The child possessed detestation for his dangerous and complex situation.

Kou: You need to remember these divisions, passageways, corridors, etc. as you will be heading through them in the near future without any help…now follow me

Child: …

Narrator: The child’s heart dropped at the realization that this would be his future. Although, he did as asked and stood close behind cringing at the fact that what lied for him was only more despair. They both continued on the vast corridors and divisions that made up this underground subsidiary.

Kou: (In thought) He is naturally fast for he is almost matching my own speed….does he possess some sort of hidden potential?

[Setting: Root sub-department division session chambers]

Narrator: The two eventually arrive at a doorway. Upon entering, the child witnesses other children that seemed not so much older than he all sitting down on a smaller sized tatami. He was astonished at the awareness that he apparently was not the only one. His lips began to crack a small smile as though a glimpse of light shinned through the dark lonely hole he occupied. Besides them all was a notebook and writing utensil.

Kou: Take a seat

Narrator: He took a seat on an empty tatami. Kou who seemed to carry a stern expression backed up against the wall and kept an eye on the child’s progress. Shocked by the sudden sight of children did the child become sidetracked and did not even notice Kou standing off in the far end. A man stood in front center of the children and began his lessons.

Assailant #3: Pick your pencils up and let’s begin

Character InsightAssailant #3:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Unmasked

Note: Sensei translates to teacher or doctor and shinobi is of course male ninja.

[Setting change: Danzou’s chamber]

Narrator: Ryuuta arrives at the entrance of his leader’s doorway. *knock*

Danzou: Come In

Narrator: Danzou’s trusted subordinate comes in to pass on information concerning the mission he and Kou had earlier.

Ryuuta: Danzou-sama, sections a b and c are covered and cleared

Danzou: Good…I recruited that child you chose to send my way

Ryuuta: I am sure he will serve you well

Danzou: I think so as well and now I need you to complete another mission for me….

Ryuuta: Yes?

Danzou: I would like you to discover that child’s origin as he has peaked my interest

Ryuuta: Understood

Narrator: Ryuuta exits the room towards his newly appointed assignment.

Fourth part will be released next week, same day, titled Hope (Look for it!).


















 
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Nice job kuroi...if thats your real name...
the story is slowly moving and its interesting..

when are you gonna reveal this kids name,
or maybe just give him an anbu name...

and i cant wait untill he gets his first misson
cause root missions are supposed to be hectic
even if the kid is still lower class.

ahhh...we'll just have to wait and see in the future
how talented and what potential this kid may have install for us....

btw what language is that you use whn you sign off..italian.??
 
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Nice job kuroi...if thats your real name...
the story is slowly moving and its interesting..

when are you gonna reveal this kids name,
or maybe just give him an anbu name...

and i cant wait untill he gets his first misson
cause root missions are supposed to be hectic
even if the kid is still lower class.

ahhh...we'll just have to wait and see in the future
how talented and what potential this kid may have install for us....

btw what language is that you use whn you sign off..italian.??
Arigatou and that is not my real name lol It is actually a trait of Sasuke as he is my favorite character if you have not noticed yet : ) Kuroi Honoo translates to black flame which is what Amaterasu is of course. So our names are fairly similar respectively. The name whether it be birth or ANBU given is yet to be seen as it could be next week or the following however, I will say that it will not be too long now, yakusoku (promise). Thanks again so much for the compliments as I myself do not believe that I am that talented. I?m not sure which sign off you meant as I am random. I sometimes say sayonara or ja ne which of course are both Japanese and mean either goodbye or see you. I might also use aidue which might be the one you are referring to and it is actually French for farewell.

Nice job! Excellent so far can wait for next weeks addition :D
Thanks again for the support ^.^​
 
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