Black despair Part 17 "Stole"

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BLACK despair

PART SEVENTEEN
"STOLE"

[Setting change: A forest]

Assailant #13: We are very close I can sense it through the ninookame’s silent howls

Fuu: How far?

Assailant #13: About six meters away

Narrator: As the three ANBU continued on the trail, the ninookame gained up on the ninsuzume ploy. A few moments then pass.

*Silent howls*

Assailant #13: He has been caught

Fuu: (In thought) This mission was successful..Danzou-sama

[Setting change: Root underground sub-department]

Unknown Shinobi #4: They will never suspect me..

Jutsu Insight - Unknown Shinobi #4:

● Jutsu Name: Kesshou Iou Funtai Manto (Crystal Sulfur Powder Mantle)
● Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Shouton (Crystal release)
● Class: Defensive, supplementary
● Range: Short-range
● Description: This kekkei genkai allows the user to knead chakra within their body to transform their psychical self into an invisible to the naked eye powdery substance. While in this form, it poses difficulty for a sensor to sense. The user is able to transform anybody that is to come in contact with this kekkei genkai and will be imprisoned within the cloak until the user wishes to release the target.

Character Insight - Unknown Shinobi #4:

(Unknown Shinobi #4 insight revisited)

● Kekkei Genkai: Shouton (Crystal release) (added)
● Nature Type: Shouton (Crystal release), Doton, unspecified secondary nature (added)

Narrator: In his form, the enemy shinobi glided towards Ukusa’s location as he sensed for his chakra.

[Setting change: Hannyashuu base]

Gio: You are finished

Narrator: By the looks of the lifeless enemy shinobi’s body, the ANBU ends his jutsu.

Hannyashuu Leader: (Shouts) IT CANNOT END LIKE THI-

Narrator: Taking the last bit of breath, the enemy leader screamed out a few words as he died and his body then reverted back.

Gio: He is dead

Torune: (In thought) Danzou-sama…the mission was successful

Gio: I barley feel a pulse but he is still alive

Torune: Gio reach on my side and pull out the scroll to perform the summoning

Gio: Roger

Narrator: Abiding by his leader’s order, Gio opened out the scroll and slapped his hand against the appropriate marking with the blood wiped against Torune’s wound.

Gio: Kuchiyose no jutsu!

Jutsu Insight

● Species name: Hogyosa
● Jutsu Name: Kuchiyose no jutsu
● Species: Flying reptile
● Classification: Summon

Narrator: A large reptile-like winged creature appeared as it lowered its body.

Torune: Gather all survivors

Gio: Roger

[Setting change: Root sub-department infirmary]

Root Iryou-nin #2: This one did not necessarily die from the injuries but rather due to chakra exhaustion

Assailant #9: What about Ukusa..could his rage have been what subjected him to this?

Root Iryou-nin #1: He i-

Head Root Iryou-nin: You need to report to Danzou-sama at once!

Assailant #9: I will bu-

Head Root Iryou-nin: Danzou-sama must be informed immediately!

Assailant #9: …Yes

Assailant #9: (Continued) I will return..

Head Root Iryou-nin: You may place him in the mortuary and as for the other..place him in one of the rooms

Root Iryou-nin #2: Understood Head-san

Root Iryou-nin #1: Understood Head-san

Narrator: Whilst the two iryou-nin followed orders, the Head iryou-nin turned and faced another shinobi towards the end of the infirmary lying in the shadows.

Head Root Iryou-nin: You are to report Ukusa’s case as stated

[Setting change: A forest]

Narrator: When the three ANBU arrive to the scene what they view is the ninookame with what seemed to be a ninja bird firmly grasped in its mouth.

Fuu: What..

Assailant #13: He is this clever to have fooled us

Assailant #12: What is his true objective?

Fuu: He must have wanted to derail us in order to infiltrate Root..I suppose

Assailant #12: That may be correct

Fuu: However..I did not sense their presence in any other location then the one we trailed

Assailant #13: Which could only mean that he somehow-

Fuu: Masked his chakra..

Fuu: (In thought) Danzou-sama was correct in trying to stop these types of shinobi

Fuu: We head back immediately!

Assailant #13: Roger

Assailant #12: Roger

[Setting change: Root sub-department center chamber]

Assailant #9: I have news about our mission

Danzou: Continue

Narrator: Moments later the young ANBU finishes informing his leader.

Danzou: I see..

Danzou: (Continued) Konohagakure is one more enemy safer..you are dismissed

Assailant #9: Yes Danzou-sama

Narrator: As the kneeled ANBU arose and exited, another abruptly appears.

Danzou: What is it..

Assailant #14: I have confidential information regarding the one called Ukusa..

Character Insight - Assailant #14:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked (Porcelain animal mask worn in missions only)
● Weapons: Tantou

Narrator: An eye somewhat widened.

Danzou: Begin

Assailant #14: Head iryou-nin explains that Ukusa having suffered another one of those occurrences did not fall into a coma..

Assailant #14: Yet rather fell unconscious and is not certain when he will awaken

Danzou: If that is all you are dismissed..

Assailant #14: Yes Danzou-sama

Danzou: (In thought) Is he beginning to recover faster than usual???

Danzou: (Continued In thought) If this abnormality of his is indeed evolving..will I not be able to control him?

[Setting change: Root sub-department infirmary]

Unknown Shinobi #4: (Sadistic tone) I’ve f..ou…nd you..

Narrator: Ukusa’s chakra was finally detected and the enemy entered thinking of how to seclude the unconscious young ANBU just shortly before Assailant #9 entered.

Assailant #9: Danzou-sama has been informed and I would like to know Ukusa’s condition

Head Root Iryou-nin: He is still unconscious and I do not know when he will come to but I will be here monitoring him

Assailant #9: I’ll be back tomorrow..

Head Root Iryou-nin: …

Unknown Shinobi #4: He is occupied…I suppose I will have to resort to my tactics..

Narrator: A brief period of time passes.

*screams*

Head Root Iryou-nin: What!

Narrator: Head iryou-nin rushes towards the loud screech.

Head Root Iryou-nin: Who would..do this?

Narrator: Both iryou-nin assistants lied on the floor with their heads and several parts of their bodies dissolving.

Jutsu InsightUnknown Shinobi #4:

● Jutsu Name: Dokusei Kesshou Hahen no jutsu (Toxic Crystal Shard Technique)
● Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Shouton
● Class: Offensive
● Range: All ranges
● Description: The user creates many tiny crystalized poisonous fragments that are launched onto the target. If the fragments pierce the target’s skin it will only take minutes to affect the impaled bodily parts resulting in disintegration of the infected areas.

Head Root Iryou-nin: The one responsible must still be around..

Unknown Shinobi #4: Your mine..*snickers*

Narrator: Within seconds the enemy shinobi covers Ukusa and snatches him.

[Setting change: Root sub-department division chambers]

Assailant #9: You can survive this...Ukusa..

Narrator: Lying on his bed, the ANBU then pulls out a small book and what appeared to begin writing in it.

Eighteenth part will be released next week, same day, titled Distort (Look for it!).

Part 18: Distort
 
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It`s getting hot in the Anbu Root section:p Ukusa kidnapped!:eek:

I also noticed how both Torune and Fuu are loyal to Danzou giving him cred for completing the mission, and A. 9 writing a book? Wonder about what.

So the leader died? Sorry if i don`t remember, but is there another leader who`s Ukusa`s former boss or was it him?

I mean, if the boss died, then what cause will this secret capturing mission do?:p

Anyway, looking forward to next time;)
 

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It`s getting hot in the Anbu Root section:p Ukusa kidnapped!:eek:

I also noticed how both Torune and Fuu are loyal to Danzou giving him cred for completing the mission, and A. 9 writing a book? Wonder about what.

So the leader died? Sorry if i don`t remember, but is there another leader who`s Ukusa`s former boss or was it him?

I mean, if the boss died, then what cause will this secret capturing mission do?:p

Anyway, looking forward to next time;)
Yes-Ukusa has been kidnapped! These two ANBU partners are that loyal to Danzou. Oh, I see…the spotlight being pointed at Assailant #9 with a book seems weird, ne? lol Yes the Hannyashuu leader did indeed die and no Ukusa’s former leader is from the Dokueki(Venom) organization who has yet to die XD Oh-another note I would like to add is that the Hannyashuu are cannon as they have been shown in the manga.

Remember when Danzou, Torune and Fuu were traveling to the Kage summit and they were interrupted by a small army of ANBU from the Hayashi no Kuni(Land of Wood)? Well, they went by the name of Hannyashuu and they attacked him due to extracting revenge for a still unknown reason. So I decided to write them into my ff and if you think about it future wise, they did in fact have a reason for revenge seeing as their former leader/rest of members were all murdered by Danzou’s ANBU when you look at it from my Fanfic’s point of view lol I hope that clarified your little confusion ;)
 

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Yes-Ukusa has been kidnapped! These two ANBU partners are that loyal to Danzou. Oh, I see…the spotlight being pointed at Assailant #9 with a book seems weird, ne? lol Yes the Hannyashuu leader did indeed die and no Ukusa’s former leader is from the Dokueki(Venom) organization who has yet to die XD Oh-another note I would like to add is that the Hannyashuu are cannon as they have been shown in the manga.

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Remember when Danzou, Torune and Fuu were traveling to the Kage summit and they were interrupted by a small army of ANBU from the Hayashi no Kuni(Land of Wood)? Well, they went by the name of Hannyashuu and they attacked him due to extracting revenge for a still unknown reason. So I decided to write them into my ff and if you think about it future wise, they did in fact have a reason for revenge seeing as their former leader/rest of members were all murdered by Danzou’s ANBU when you look at it from my Fanfic’s point of view lol I hope that clarified your little confusion ;)
Yeah i remeber them, but didn`t think your story went that deep into the manga:p Completely forgot that fact.
Well it both seem plausible and possible, good job researching and taking actual stuff into your ff;):)

Keep going;)
 

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Yeah i remeber them, but didn`t think your story went that deep into the manga:p Completely forgot that fact.
Well it both seem plausible and possible, good job researching and taking actual stuff into your ff;):)

Keep going;)
Yes-I did in fact decide to include actual cannon relevance to my ff and I loved every minute of it! XD Thanks for the compliment ;)
 
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