Black despair Part 16 "Abyss"

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BLACK despair

PART SIXTEEN
"ABYSS"

[ELASPED TIME]

[Set before Ukusa unleashed his unknown kekkei genkai]

Chikuri: (In thought) This technique is costing me a lot of chakra and I cannot keep it up much longer

Chikuri: (Continued in thought) I must take him out now!

Unknown Nuke-nin: Increasing your electricity will not help you..

Narrator: By focusing all of his chakra the ANBU rapidly extended his jutsu throughout as much of the forest as he possibly could in order to catch the enemy.

Chikuri: Will this be enough?

Unknown Nuke-nin: (Shouts) Take this!

Jutsu InsightUnknown Nuke-nin:

● Jutsu Name: Vauyu Shouheki no Jutsu (The Wind Barrier Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Fuuton (Wind release)
● Class: Defensive, Offensive
● Rank: B-rank
● Range: Short-range
● Description: This jutsu creates winds at great speeds that encircles the user. It acts as a powerful defense and offense as the winds that circle are in a rapid rotation.

(Unknown Nuke-nin’s identity revealed)

Character Insight - Unknown Nuke-nin:

● Hair color: Azure (added)
● Eye color: Turquoise (added)
● Name: Iqura (added)
● Nature Type: Fuuton (Wind release) (added)
● Weapons: Naginata (added)

Note: Naginata is a type of pole weapon with a single curved blade on one end. It can have a reach length of up to five to eight feet long.

Narrator: His wind jutsu allowed him to maneuver easily through what had become a lightning based battlefield.

Chikuri: (In thought) What…how can he bypass my most impenetrable raiton jutsu…*panting*

Iqura: (In thought) You’re mine..

Narrator: Falling to his knees, Chikuri’s jutsu grew weak as the last of his chakra drained out.

Iqura: (Shouts) Become the blood on my blade!

Jutsu InsightIqura:

● Jutsu Name: Ten'ousei Yuki no Hana Naginata (Uranus Snow Flower Naginata)
● Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Hyouton (Ice release)
● Class: Offensive
● Range: Short-range
● Description: Multiple ices in the shape of flowers are created as it quickly covers the Naginata. They are razor sharp to the touch.

Note: Chakra Nagashi translates to Chakra flow and refers to any technique that increases the potency of a weapon by flowing chakra through it.

Character Insight - Unknown nuke-nin:

(Iqura insight revisited)

● Kekkei Genkai: Hyouton (Ice release) (added)

Narrator: Multiple slashes are stroked violently onto the exerted ANBU.

Chikuri: (Screams) Gyaaa!!!

Iqura: Ah..your blood..

Narrator: Blood is splattered all over as Chikuri’s tethered body falls onto the ground.


[ELASPED TIME ENDS]

[Setting change: Konohagakure outskirts]

Unknown Shinobi #4: (In thought) Airborne he comes..* snickers*

Narrator: Assailant #9 along with Ukusa and Chikuri’s corpse enters Konoha from real high above on a winged beast.

Unknown Shinobi #4: (Continued in thought) Something wicked comes Kurohou’s way…*snickers*..

[Setting change: Root sub-department infirmary]

Head Root Iryou-nin: What do we have?

Root Iryou-nin #1: Three ANBU with one dead the other seems injured

Head Root Iryou-nin: (In thought) Ukusa yet again…

Root Iryou-nin #2: I will take care of the one who died

Assailant #9: I’m fine just attend to Ukusa

Root Iryou-nin #1: Can you tell me what may have brought this on?

Assailant #9: We were all under attack..me and Ukusa were trapped then freed by Ukusa and his strange jutsu

Assailant #9: (Continued) When Chikuri died Ukusa lost control as an overwhelming light projected out at such a speed that I thought I would get sucked into it but he fainted and it protruded back within him

Root Iryou-nin #1: I see..

[Setting change: A forest]

Fuu: If this continues he will escape us

Assailant #12: What do you suppose we should do Fuu?

Assailant #13: Fuu can you leave this to me?

Fuu: Understood

Assailant 13: Kuchiyose no Jutsu

Jutsu InsightAssailant #13

● Jutsu Name: Kuchiyose no jutsu (Summoning Technique)
● Species: Wolf
● Classification: Ninjutsu, Jikuukan Ninjutsu
● Class: Offensive, Supplementary
● Rank: C-rank

Assailant #13: Go!

Assailant #13: (Continued) The Ninookame will track and attack him that way he is slowed down..

Note: Ninookame translates Ninja wolf.

[Setting change: Hannyashuu base]

Hannyashuu Leader: (Shouts) POISON!!!

Hannyashuu Leader: (Continued Shouting) DIE!

Torune: Che..

Narrator: Ninety-nine roots are assembled along with the enemy leader as he shoots them all himself included in a high speed aimed for the ANBU.

Torune: (Shouts) Sanagi!

Narrator: Two arms are raised to protect the ANBU as he receives the powerful blow.

Hannyashuu Leader: (Shouts) What! *pants*

Narrator: Torune is slammed onto the ground with enough force to break his most defensible jutsu.

Torune: (Screams) Gya!

Torune: (In thought) …Even poisoned he was still able to this much damage

Narrator: Such an impact caused Torune’s chrysalis state to shatter in some parts of his body which negated a little less than half of the absorption that the jutsu was mainly used for.

Hannyashuu Leader: (In thought) The poison is spreading..

Hannyashuu Leader: (Shouts) DAMN YOU DANZOU!!!

Hannyashuu Leader: (In thought) I will die however I will take you with me...

Torune: Wher-

Narrator: Water is raised from the ground and barricades the ANBU from within inches of striking his face.

Torune: (In thought) Gio..

Narrator: Several slashes strike Gio from behind.

Hannyashuu Shinobi: Never turn your back on an opponent..

*water splashes*

Jutsu InsightGio:

● Jutsu Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu, Bunshinjutsu
● Nature Type: Suiton
● Class: Supplementary
● Rank: C-rank
● Hand seals: Tiger
● Description: The range of the clone is limited however; it cannot travel very far from the original body without losing control. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water.

Gio: I am better than that

Gio: (Continued) Taifuu no Jutsu!

Jutsu InsightGio:

● Jutsu Name: Taifuu no Jutsu (Typhoon Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Suiton
● Class: Offensive
● Range: Short-long range
● Hand Seals: Hare
● Description: A water cyclone is created from underneath the target as it shoots upwards at a high velocity entrapping the target. The chakra kneaded into the water also acts as a barrier therefore the target cannot escape from a watery grave.

[Setting change: Root underground sub-department]

Unknown Shinobi #4: (In thought) Infiltration?...complete boss ♥

Seventeenth part will be released next week, same day, titled Stole (Look for it!).

Part 17: Stole
 
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BLACK despair

PART SIXTEEN
"ABYSS"


(Unknown Nuke-nin insight revisited)

● Kekkei Genkai: Hyouton (Ice release) (added)

Seventeenth part will be released next week, same day, titled Stole (Look for it!).
Loved it!:D Yet again you manage to keep the whole thing exciting, inspiering, and going with such a high rate that it almost feels like a real Kishi story:);) Keep going my friend!

And about the quote:

1: You did perfect! I knew you could do it! Instead of adding the whole info all over again you did exactly as i would hope for and i love it:D

2: About next part. You`re naming it "Stole" as in stolen?
Sorry, but i could have checked it out on google, but oh well:p
 

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Loved it!:D Yet again you manage to keep the whole thing exciting, inspiering, and going with such a high rate that it almost feels like a real Kishi story:);) Keep going my friend!

And about the quote:

1: You did perfect! I knew you could do it! Instead of adding the whole info all over again you did exactly as i would hope for and i love it:D

2: About next part. You`re naming it "Stole" as in stolen?
Sorry, but i could have checked it out on google, but oh well:p
Thanks so much! I am pleased to hear that my work is similar to that of Kishi ^.^ I just knew what you meant and modified it to appeal to you and anyone else who might have had some difficulty reading my ff ;) Yes you are correct it is as in "stolen" lol

Its an Astonishing FanFiction! Love it ;)
Thank you, friend ;)
 

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I hadn't read your fanfic for a few weeks but now that I did I can only congratulate you on the nice job :) You have made a great battle and there is yet the need for Ukusa to learn/remember about his past.
 

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I hadn't read your fanfic for a few weeks but now that I did I can only congratulate you on the nice job :) You have made a great battle and there is yet the need for Ukusa to learn/remember about his past.
I know, it has been awhile my friend ;) Thank you so much! Ah…Ukusa and his past, yes that is something yet to be revealed whether I chose to him to relive his past or not ^.^​
 
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