Black despair Part 15 "Sorrow"

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BLACK despair

PART FIFTHTEEN
"SORROW"

[Setting change: Hannyashuu base]

Hiliosu: Caught you

Narrator: A seemingly successful hit as the Hannyashuu leader is impaled by the fiery arrow.

Hiliosu: Wha- *coughs*

Narrator: Having his back turned, the ANBU was then slashed numerous times by a Hannyashuu shinobi.

Jutsu InsightGio:

● Jutsu Name: Ooame no jutsu (Heavy Rain Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Suiton (Water release)
● Class: Offensive
● Range: Short-mid range
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: Water droplets are shot at the target. Once it is to make contact with the target their entire body’s movements will instantly become slowed.

Narrator: As the enemy shinobi lowered his katana to pierce Hiliosu, his bodily movements are slowed. A powerful and fatal blow to the enemy’s head is delivered by Gio via his tantou.

Gio: (In thought) There’s a pulse

Narrator: Hiliosu opens his eyes to view the Hannyashuu Leader turning into ground-like material as it slowly burned away into dust indicating that his clone was hit instead.

Jutsu InsightHannyashuu Leader:

● Jutsu Name: Dojou Bunshin no Jutsu (Soil Clone Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu, Bunshinjutsu
● Class: Supplementary
● Nature Type: Doton
● Description: This clone technique is made out of soil and chakra. It is much more durable than the usual clone techniques.

Hiliosu: I almost had him…*pant* you need to keep this fight alive..

Gio: But if you continue to bleed out you wi-

Hiliosu: Our missions success*panting* is all that matters *pants*

Gio: Roger

[Setting change: A forest]

Fuu: Wait!

Fuu: (Continued) It is taking a different route..we need to hurry

Narrator: From the other end of the forest a shinobi caught onto the sensing ANBU and summoned an animal to leak chakra into so it would act as a decoy. He then used a jutsu to mask his chakra.

Jutsu InsightUnknown Shinobi #4:

● Jutsu Name: Kuchiyose no jutsu (Summoning Technique)
● Species: Sparrows
● Classification: Ninjutsu, Jikuukan Ninjutsu
● Class: Offensive, Supplementary
● Rank: C-rank
● Hand seals: Unknown

Jutsu InsightUnknown Shinobi #4:

● Jutsu Name: Chakra Yokusei no Jutsu (Chakra Suppression Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Description: This jutsu allows the user to suppress their chakra until it is undetectable. This makes it impossible or at least very difficult for sensing shinobi to track them.

Character Insight - Unknown Shinobi #4:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked (only mouth area is exposed)


Narrator: Unbeknownst to the three ANBU rather than trailing the Dokueki enemy, it was instead a ninsuzume.

Note: Ninsuzume translates to Ninja Sparrow.

Unknown Shinobi #4: Everything is going as planned boss

[ELASPED TIME]

[Unknown Shinobi #4’ mission assigning]

Dokueki Leader: I have word that Root is preoccupied and this is now the perfect time to strike

Character Insight – Dokueki Leader:

● A main character
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Unmasked

Dokueki Leader: You are going to leave a trace of you else where and when the opportunity rises you are to await for Kurohou’s arrival

(Initial Character Insight revisited)

Initial Character Insight - Ukusa:

● Name: Ukusa (Kurohou was Ukusa’s name while his time spent in Dokueki) (added)

Unknown Shinobi #4: I understand Mukaku-sama

(Dokueki Leader’s identity revealed)

Character Insight - Dokueki Leader:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: Nuke-nin
● Occupation: Dokueki leader
● Affiliation: Dokugakure, Dokueki
● Hair color: Dark orchid
● Eye color: Amethyst
● Face: Unmasked
● Name: Mukaku

Mukaku: You know the rest of your mission

Unknown Shinobi #4: Yes Mukaku-sama

Mukaku: Fade away..

Unknown Shinobi #4: …


[ELASPED TIME ENDS]

[Setting change: Konohagakure outskirts]

Narrator: The sensing enemy shinobi arrives as he hides within the forest canopies.

Unknown Shinobi #4: Kurohou….your life expires today..*snickers*

Narrator: He then invokes his sensing jutsu.

[Setting change: Kirigakure outskirts]

Assailant #9: (Shouts) Ukusa! …are you alright?!

Narrator: Yet no answer from the young male. His teammate decided to check on him despite the fact that he might still be affected by what had just occurred.

Assailant #9: You’re still alive..

Assailant #9: (In thought) It is time to return..our mission is completed…

[Setting change: Hannyashuu base]

Narrator: Blood and screams filled the battlefield with Danzou’s army apparently winning the fight.

Torune: (In thought) Where is he?

Torune: (Continued in thought) Undergrou-

Narrator: Huge Roots pierce through the ground impaling the ANBU.

Jutsu InsightHannyashuu Leader:

● Jutsu Name: Doton: Ne Hyaku Shokushu no Jutsu (Earth release: Root One-Hundred Tentacle Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Doton (Earth release)
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: All-ranges
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: Chakra throughout the entire body kneads thus a metamorphosis of the body into one-hundred roots including the user themselves being the main and largest root. Once metamorphosed, the user can manipulate roots from under the ground at will as well as psychically use their own rooted body.

Hannyashuu Leader: What???

Torune: The end..

Narrator: The roots rather struck the ANBU’s Mushi Bunshin Jutsu.

Hannyashuu Leader: (Shouts) Shit!

Narrator: Torune at that point was rushing towards the enemy leader with his poisoned hand to cause a fatal infection.

Hannyashuu Shinobi: (Shouts) LEADER!!!

Character Insight - Hannyashuu Shinobi:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Hannyashuu shinobi
● Affiliation: Hayashi no Kuni, ANBU
● Hair color: Olive
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Porcelain oni-like mask
● Weapons: Katana

Jutsu InsightHannyashuu Shinobi:

● Jutsu Name: Doton: Koubutsu Bochi no Jutsu (Earth release: Mineral Cemetery Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Doton (Earth release)
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: Long-range
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: This jutsu creates minerals to lunge and cover the target from underground. If the target is caught and does not escape in time they will be smothered to death.
(Character insight revisited)

Character Insight - Hannyashuu Shinobi:

● Nature Type: Doton (Earth release)

Narrator: As a last result to buy his leader time, a Hannyashuu ANBU shinobi used a jutsu to attack Torune.

Jutsu InsightGio:

● Jutsu Name: Sukuriun obu Buruu no jutsu (Screen of Blue Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Suiton (Water release)
● Rank: B-rank
● Class: Defensive
● Range: All-range
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: This jutsu creates a water-like screen around the user or can be used to defend anyone the user wishes. It is a defensive jutsu. The jutsu can be moved around like a screen as protection from all sides. Defensive strength depends on how much chakra is used.

Narrator: Water arose with such force and successfully defended against the enemy’s jutsu.

Hannyashuu Leader: (Shouts) IMPOSSIBLE!!!......ahhhhhhh..ahhh

Hannyashuu Leader: (Continued Shouting) What have you done to me!

Torune: Poison…

Sixteenth part will be released next week, same day, titled Abyss (Look for it!).

Part 16: Abyss
 
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Sorry for not being able to read it sooner, but at least i appears to be the first one in a long time..

Anyway, great chapter! You still seem to amaze me, keep going!

So Ukusa really are from another village?!:eek: Wonder what will happend if he meet his former leader!:p

Looking forward to next time;)
 

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Sorry for not being able to read it sooner, but at least i appears to be the first one in a long time..

Anyway, great chapter! You still seem to amaze me, keep going!

So Ukusa really are from another village?!:eek: Wonder what will happend if he meet his former leader!:p

Looking forward to next time;)
Please the fact that you even read it at all is good enough for me ;) I am pleased to hear that my fanfic still appeals to readers lol Yes the main protagonist indeed is from another village ^.^ Nice concept you thought up who knows, I might just have the protagonist meet with his former boss or not ;) Thanks as always and today is the day for the next release! XD​
 

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Please the fact that you even read it at all is good enough for me ;) I am pleased to hear that my fanfic still appeals to readers lol Yes the main protagonist indeed is from another village ^.^ Nice concept you thought up who knows, I might just have the protagonist meet with his former boss or not ;) Thanks as always and today is the day for the next release! XD​
Hehe, would be cool to see that:p Oh:eek: Already? Isn`t that tomorrow(Every Saturday)? Looking forward to it then;)

I feel a little bad that not anyone else has made a post on this part.
Hope that won`t break you down your spirit to continue;) And i do hope that the reason for it has nothing to do with my FFU_U

Looking forward to 16 then:D
 
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Hehe, would be cool to see that:p Oh:eek: Already? Isn`t that tomorrow(Every Saturday)? Looking forward to it then;)

I feel a little bad that not anyone else has made a post. Hope that won`t break you down and continue;) And i do hope that the reason for it has anything to do with my FFU_U

Looking forward to 16 then:D
No silly it is every Friday lol Though I thank you for your enthusiasm ;) I know-it is a downer as I will not lie but I will continue something that I started even if the readers have declined -_- Well, your fanfic is might popular among the forum I must say and congratulations for that as you deserve it ;) I also have a lot of haters as if you remember I a Sasuke fan/supporter and have debated with many members over that subject so I could understand the lack of readers lol​
 

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No silly it is every Friday lol Though I thank you for your enthusiasm ;) I know-it is a downer as I will not lie but I will continue something that I started even if the readers have declined -_- Well, your fanfic is might popular among the forum I must say and congratulations for that as you deserve it ;) I also have a lot of haters as if you remember I a Sasuke fan/supporter and have debated with many members over that subject so I could understand the lack of readers lol​
Oh:p Maybe it`s because you`re 4 hours later than me and when you releases your next part it`s 21.00 pm were you live and 01.00 am were i live meaning Saturday to mexd

Anyway, don`t let that break you down. I`ll continue reading untill the end my friend;)


Best Fanfiction of this section. Keep up the good job.
Agreed:D
 

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Best Fanfiction of this section. Keep up the good job.
Thank you very much however, I do not know about that as Ruler's is on a level all its own ^.^

Oh:p Maybe it`s because you`re 4 hours later than me and when you releases your next part it`s 21.00 pm were you live and 01.00 am were i live meaning Saturday to mexd

Anyway, don`t let that break you down. I`ll continue reading untill the end my friend;)
Exactly! I could not have put it better in U.S. standards it is posted on Friday but for you it is on Saturday due to the different time gaps lol Thanks as always!
 

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Thank you very much however, I do not know about that as Ruler's is on a level all its own ^.^
Highly doubt that my friend. I`m way behind you yet as i think you are closing in at Joao`s level, don`t you think Dante=:p
And i think you just can call me Michael btw, looks wird when you call me "Ruler"xd

Exactly! I could not have put it better in U.S. standards it is posted on Friday but for you it is on Saturday due to the different time gaps lol Thanks as always!
I guess that has to be it:p No problem;)
 

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Highly doubt that my friend. I`m way behind you yet as i think you are closing in at Joao`s level, don`t you think Dante=:p
And i think you just can call me Michael btw, looks wird when you call me "Ruler"xd
I actually do not doubt that for a minute. My friend you are talented ;) I do not think that and I should know seeing as I read your fanfic ^.^ I will call you whatever you wish ;)
 

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I actually do not doubt that for a minute. My friend you are talented ;) I do not think that and I should know seeing as I read your fanfic ^.^ I will call you whatever you wish ;)
Well either way, I`m not better than you. If not bader then we`re at the same level(even thought i doubt that), you can agree to that i guess?;):p:)

Yeah Michael sounds better knowing that`s my name in real life too;)xd
 

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Well either way, I`m not better than you. If not bader then we`re at the same level(even thought i doubt that), you can agree to that i guess?;):p:)

Yeah Michael sounds better knowing that`s my name in real life too;)xd
I think we could be on par with each other is that better? Lol Okay, your wish is my desire lol I would like to be called Kuroi though as I like being called by my user name somewhat ;)
 

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I think we could be on par with each other is that better? Lol Okay, your wish is my desire lol I would like to be called Kuroi though as I like being called by my user name somewhat ;)
Okay, agree;) I`ll do that:p

Anyway, at least you got some posts before you release your next part it seems. That`s a good thing;) Looking forward to it;)
 

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Okay, agree;) I`ll do that:p

Anyway, at least you got some posts before you release your next part it seems. That`s a good thing;) Looking forward to it;)
Yes my fanfic has definitely gotten some reviews hasn't it ;) Thanks and I suppose I will log in later for a minute to post my newest fanfic but I know that you and I are busy so it will be read later much lol​
 
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