Black despair Part 14 "Regret"

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BLACK despair

PART FOURTEEN
"REGRET"

[ELASPED TIME]

[Several weeks ago]

Danzou: Hyou summon Fuu immediately

(Character insight revisited)

Character Insight - Hyou:

● Name: Hyou (code name Haru has been replaced with the present time name) (added)

Hyou: Understood Danzou-sama

Narrator: A few moments later.

Fuu: Yes Danzou-sama

Danzou: I have assembled you three to track down Dokueki

Danzou: (Continued) This organization’s location must be found at all cost!

Assailant #13: Understood Danzou-sama

Character Insight - Assailant #13:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to mask)
● Eye color: Unknown (due to mask)
● Face: Masked (Porcelain animal mask worn in missions only)
● Weapons: Tantou

Fuu: Understood Danzou-sama

Assailant #12: Understood Danzou-sama


Character Insight - Assailant #12:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown (due to mask)
● Eye color: Unknown (due to mask)
● Face: Masked (Porcelain animal mask worn in missions only)
● Weapons: Tantou

[ELASPED TIME ENDS]

[Setting change: A forest]

Fuu: (Radio transmitter) I can sense one of them nearby..

Assailant #12: (Radio transmitter) Roger

Assailant #13: (Radio transmitter) Roger

Narrator: As the three ANBU Root shinobi grew nearer a member out of Dokueki drew closer from the other end.

[Setting change: Root sub-department center chamber]

Danzou: Inform me

Hyou: It still appears that Sandaime Hokage has yet to find out about the Hannyashuu

Danzou: Good..you’re to report back your post

Hyou: Understood Danzou-sama

Danzou: (In thought) I am the rightful Hokage..not you Sarutobi but me…YES!

[Setting change: Hannyashuu base]

Narrator: An army of shinobi abruptly appears acting as a shield for their leader. Torune pulled back.

Torune: (In thought) It has become an all-out war.

Torune: (Radio transmitter) Everybody prepare

Hannyashuu Leader: (Shouts) Why did you stop?!

Torune: …

Hannyashuu Leader: Go and leave not a trace of them..

Narrator: The Hannyashuu group charged with katana in hand towards Torune and the wooded area behind him where the other Root ANBU lied.

[Setting change: Kirigakure outskirts]

Unknown nuke-nin: Hmm..he thinks lightning can stop me?

Chikuri: (In thought) He has to be stopped immediately..

Narrator: With the ANBU exposed, the Unknown nuke-nin began to pop in and out of the mist as a taunt.

Ukusa: (In thought) I have to try something but what…

Chikuri: (In thought) This technique is costing me a lot of chakra and I cannot keep it up much longer

Chikuri: (Continued in thought) I must take him out now!

Unknown nuke-nin: Increasing your electricity will not help you..

Narrator: By focusing all of his chakra the ANBU rapidly extended his jutsu throughout as much of the forest as he possibly could in order to catch the enemy.

[Setting change: Hannyashuu base]

Narrator: Torune draws his tantou and blocks an oncoming strike from one of the Hannyashuu. The Root ANBU army joins him with their tantou in hand as the array of shinobi collides with one another.

Torune: (In thought) There!

Narrator: He managed to infect the shinobi against him and located the opposing leader. The ANBU unleashed a barrage of kunai at the leading enemy as a ploy.

Hannyashuu Leader: (In thought) Useless..

Narrator: The enemy leader dodges.

Hannyashuu Leader: How about we end this?

Torune: …

Hannyashuu Leader: (Shouts) Doton: Ishi Kasui no Jutsu!

Jutsu InsightHannyashuu Leader:

● Jutsu Name: Doton: Ishi Kasui no Jutsu (Earth Release: Stone Spike Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Doton (Earth release)
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: All-ranges
● Hand Seals: Rat, Boar, Dog, Ram
● Description: The user begins to spin at a high rate whilst unleashing multiple stoned spikes from all over the body.

Torune: (In thought) Che..I will not be able to reach him this way

Narrator: Torune continued to dodge with little success of nearing his target. Suddenly, a bright fiery red-orange colored shaft-like object was propelled towards the Hannyashuu leader.

Jutsu InsightHiliosu:

● Jutsu Name: Houou Ya Souru no Jutsu (Phoenix Arrow Soul Technique)
● Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Youton
● Class: Offensive
● Range: Long-range
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: The user lines themselves in the formation of an archer aiming for their target after the correct hand seals are formed. When the user is ready the arrow is shot at a high speed rate onto the target with a heat seeking capability. If the target is struck will they burn to death if nothing can be done to negate the shot.

[Setting change: Kirigakure outskirts]

Jutsu Insight - Child:

● Jutsu Name: Unknown
● Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Hiton (Light release)
● Class: Offensive, defensive
● Range: All ranges
● Hand seals: Is not initiated through this use but rather by any emotional outburst.
● Description: A secondary jutsu to the first mysterious full body illumination. This jutsu can only be unleashed through the requirement of emotional distress where light protrudes from the user’s hand and forms into a long slender sharp object. It is all done however, with the user unconscious and is the result of not yet perfecting the kekkei genkai. This jutsu can be used a weapon as well as possess a nullification ability.

Narrator: As the lighted lance-like form increased in size it made contact within the misty sphere causing it to become nullified.

Unknown nuke-nin: (In thought) I feel a disruption in my chakra..what?

Unknown nuke-nin: (Continued in thought) One of them is loose..

Narrator: Ukusa unconsciously swung the lance once on each of his sides as it released illuminated wave rings.

Jutsu Insight - Child:

● Jutsu Name: Unknown
● Classification: Hiden, Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Type: Hiton (Light release)
● Class: Offensive, defensive
● Range: All ranges
● Hand seals: Is not initiated through this use but rather by any emotional outburst.
● Description: Branched from the secondary mysterious full body illumination jutsu. By swinging the lighted lance, two bright wave rings are unleashed onto the target at the speed of light. If the target is unable to avoid this jutsu their body will be decapitated.

Narrator: The two rings increased and passed through the forest and the enemy who could not avoid it due to its speed of light was sliced into several pieces. Assailant #9’s spherical prison became nullified by the bright waves. Ukusa landed onto the ground and was able to regain his consciousness soon after wards.

Ukusa: (Shouts) CHIKURI!

Ukusa: (In thought) I was not fast enough…

Narrator: He then ran to the wounded male kneeled down and rested his head over his arm. The other ANBU soon joined them.

Assailant #9: Chikuri…

Chikuri: Why? Why…do you go so far for a team mate?

Chikuri: (Continued) *coughs out blood*

Narrator: Blood then splatters all over the young ANBU’s face.

Chikuri: How could you possess emotion?

Ukusa: Because..you are my nakama and I cannot help but to feel something for you all

Note: Nakama translates to non-related family.

Chikuri: *cough* Thank you for sparring me the finishing blow by his hands *cough*

Chikuri: (Continued) You cannot allow Danz- *coughs*

Ukusa: Don’t talk..save your strength

Chikuri: It is already too late for m- *cough* *cough* you know.I wa..s...a nuke-nin from Kumog..*coughs*a.kure before Danzou-sa...m.a took me in..

(Chikuri insight revisited)

Character Insight - Assailant #10:

● Classification: Nuke-nin (added)
● Affiliation: Kumogakure (added)

Narrator: With his last dying breath, he stated his last words.

Chikuri: (Continued) ...Just kkk..eep Danzou-sama’s objective..s above....*cough*..anyy...thing el....sse..

Ukusa: (Shouts) Chikuri!..Chikuri!!....CHIKURI!!!

Narrator: A white bright light began to shine through the adolescent. Assailant #9 backed away as fast as he possibly could and was able to outrun the light due to Ukusa fainting almost immediately after. In the world of Danzou it was illogical to feel emotion and yet just before the young ANBU passed out did a tear stream down his face with the feeling of regret at the fact that he was unable to save someone he held dear.

Assailant #9: (In thought) Ukusa...What are you?

Fifteenth part will be released next week, same day, titled Sorrow (Look for it!).

Part 15: Sorrow
 
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Awwweesssommmmeeee man I'm really liking this Ukusa guy and overally (if thats a word) the entire fanfic! Keep it up as always!
 

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I knew it! I just knew it! Exactly what i predicted! Ukusa took out the nuke nin with his light release! Damn I`m good:p

Awsome chapter, it`s getting better and better, maybe we`re closing to an end soon?:eek:

Speaking of which, how many chapters have you planned for you FF anyway? I`m guessing 20-25 or perhaps even longer?O.O

So much are going on at the same time and you`re doing it in a perfect way!

Looking forward to the next one;)
 

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I knew it! I just knew it! Exactly what i predicted! Ukusa took out the nuke nin with his light release! Damn I`m good:p

Awsome chapter, it`s getting better and better, maybe we`re closing to an end soon?:eek:

Speaking of which, how many chapters have you planned for you FF anyway? I`m guessing 20-25 or perhaps even longer?O.O

So much are going on at the same time and you`re doing it in a perfect way!

Looking forward to the next one;)
You definitely are good actually apparently better than me in reading fanfics (joke) ;) Oh? You are thinking that my fanfic is reaching its end I wonder on what basis? I actually originally planned for a bit over six parts however, it turned into over double that amount lol However, you will have to continue with my work to see how much longer I extend it ^.^ Well, thank you for your support and compliments. I have been thinking about entering the contest but I still am unsure…​
 
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You definitely are good actually apparently better than me in reading fanfics (joke) ;) Oh? You are thinking that my fanfic is reaching its end I wonder on what basis? I actually originally planned for a bit over six parts however, it turned into double that amount lol However, you will have to continue with my work to see how much loner I extend it ^.^ Well, thank you for your support and compliments. I have been thinking about entering the contest but I still am unsure…​
(xd) Well considering the fact that we haven`t heard of Ukusa in the Anime/Manga because he is non cannon character, I`m guessing that he will either die, leave, or something else when your FF closes to its end.

So since he was able to use it(his light release) against an enemy now, he will probably master it later on, and perhaps get his memory back, and then... Baam! Something big happend, like a finally or something.

So I`m guessing from 20-30 chapter if you`re not planning on jumping to the future later on?:p

Yeah, as long as you write, you will have my support;)
A little late reply perhaps, but i guess your family took all the time on the pc from you?:p

Anyway, my goal is to be able to enter next month`s contest, so maybe i will meet you then?:eek::D
 

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(xd) Well considering the fact that we haven`t heard of Ukusa in the Anime/Manga because he is non cannon character, I`m guessing that he will either die, leave, or something else when your FF closes to its end.

So since he was able to use it(his light release) against an enemy now, he will probably master it later on, and perhaps get his memory back, and then... Baam! Something big happend, like a finally or something.

So I`m guessing from 20-30 chapter if you`re not planning on jumping to the future later on?:p

Yeah, as long as you write, you will have my support;)
A little late reply perhaps, but i guess your family took all the time on the pc from you?:p

Anyway, my goal is to be able to enter next month`s contest, so maybe i will meet you then?:eek::D
WOW!!! You have this fanfic practically figured out even though I will not admit to any of it lol ;) However, I love your theories I think that they are all epically grand and if you think this of my fanfic I can only imagine what story lines you will come up for yours. Thanks again and who knows I might just join in that contest ^.^​
 

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WOW!!! You have this fanfic practically figured out even though I will not admit to any of it lol ;) However, I love your theories I think that they are all epically grand and if you think this of my fanfic I can only imagine what story lines you will come up for yours. Thanks again and who knows I might just join in that contest ^.^​
Hehe:) If you do then it will be an honor to face you if our FFs are even picked thenxd:D
 

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:p We`ll see. Not for certain that both of us or any of us for that matter will be picked for the actuall Pollxd

Anyhow, I`ll need to release 3 chapters before then;)
I know but I think you would overall have a better chance than me and you know call me naïve but I am not sure how you even enter the fanfic contest. Like is it your very first three chapters/parts or could you pick from any completed?​
 
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