Black despair Part 13 "Outbreak"

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BLACK despair

PART THIRTEEN
"OUTBREAK"

[Setting change: Hayashi no Kuni wooded outskirts]

Assailant #11: (Radio transmitter) The ninsasori have sensed movement in the air and has exposed their hideout

Note: Radio transmitter is a tiny device the Root ANBU use to communicate with fellow team members. The piece is located in the ear.

Note: Ninsasori translates to Ninja Scorpion.

Jutsu Insight – Assailant #11

● Jutsu Name: Kuchiyose no jutsu (Summoning Technique)
● Species: Scorpions
● Classification: Ninjutsu, Jikuukan Ninjutsu
● Class: Offensive, Supplementary
● Rank: C-rank
● Hand seals: Unknown

Character Insight - Assailant #11:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: ANBU Root shinobi
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked (Porcelain animal mask worn in missions only) (added)
● Weapons: Tantou

Assailant #11: (Continued) It is no more than half a mile radius from our position

Note: Radio transmitter is a tiny device the Root ANBU use to communicate with fellow team members. The piece is located in the ear.

[Setting change: Hannyashuu base]

Setting Insight – Hannyashuu base:

● Hannyashuu headquarters
● Founder: Unknown
● Description: Shrouded by profound lengthy trees in a heavily dense forest

Narrator: Each and every Root ANBU arrived and stationed themselves in the commanded area awaiting the chance of ambush just several feet away. Someone suddenly exits the hideout.

Hannyashuu Leader: (Shouts) Your presence is known..you are not the only ones with a sensor on your side

Character Insight - Hannyashuu Leader:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: Hannyashuu Leader
● Affiliation: Hayashi no Kuni, ANBU
● Hair color: Brass
● Eye color: Ceil
● Face: Porcelain oni-like mask
● Weapons: Katana

Note: Oni translates to either ogre or demon. Katana translates to a type of sword commonly referred to the samurai sword.

Hannyashuu Leader: (Continued shouting) Why is Danzou not present?

Torune: We have come in his place

Hannyashuu Leader: Hmm…of course

Narrator: Right from under the Hannyashuu Leader’s feet, a whirlpool abruptly appears as it increases in size.

Jutsu Insight – Gio:

● Jutsu Name: Sazanami Dai Uzumaki no jutsu (Rippling Great Whirlpool Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Suiton (Water release)
● Class: Offensive
● Range: Short-midway range
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: This technique creates a large and powerful vortex-like whirlpool from under the target that increases depending on the amount of chakra used. Once successful, chakra is infused within the swirls to trap the target. The whirlpool then swallows and drowns the target.

(Character insight revisited)

Character Insight - Gio:

● Nature Type: Suiton (added)

Torune: (Radio transmitter) Gio..you were not commanded to

Gio: (Radio transmitter) I know but I thought I could use the opportunity

Hannyashuu Leader: (Shouts) Is this all?

Hannyashuu Leader: (Continued shouting) Doton: Ne Dojou Seichou no Justu!

Jutsu Insight – Hannyashuu Leader:

● Jutsu Name: Doton: Ne Dojou Seichou (Earth Release: Rooted Soil Growth)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Class: Supplementary
● Hand Seals: Two hand slap
● Description: This jutsu develops roots from underground banded with soil. The jutsu can be used to manipulate the battlefield into the user’s favor.

(Character insight revisited)

Character Insight - Hannyashuu Leader:

● Nature Type: Doton (added)

Narrator: Roots protruded from the whirlpool through the ground as it began to clog up.

Torune: (Radio transmitter) Cover me Hiliosu

(Character insight revealed)

Character Insight - Hiliosu:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Classification: ANBU
● Occupation: Hannyashuu Leader
● Affiliation: Konohagakure, Root
● Hair color: Dirty blonde
● Eye color: Chestnut
● Face: Masked (Porcelain animal mask worn in missions only)
● Name: Hiliosu (a code name given to one of the Root shinobi members in present time)
● Weapons: Tantou

Hiliosu: (Radio transmitter) Roger

Hiliosu: (Shouts) Youton: Atsukurushii Maguma Ame no Jutsu!

Jutsu Insight – Hiliosu:

● Jutsu Name: Atsukurushii Maguma Ame no Jutsu (Sweltering Magma Rain Technique)
● Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Youton (Lava release)
● Class: Offensive
● Range: Long-range
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: This jutsu creates big heated magma droplets to fall overhead the target.

(Character insight revisited)

Character Insight - Hiliosu:

● Kekkei Genkai: Youton (Lava release) (added)
● Nature type: You (Lava), Ka (Fire), Do (Earth) (added)

Narrator: Something quickly incases the Hannyashuu Leader before the hot drops were to touch him.

Jutsu Insight – Hannyashuu Leader:

● Jutsu Name: Doton: Jari Ori no Jutsu (Earth release: Gravel Cage Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Doton (Earth release)
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: Short-range
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: This jutsu gathers stones, pebbles and sand from within the earth to form a sturdy defensive cage around the user.

Narrator: Steam ensues the area around the enemy leader with blobs of magma over the ground as well as atop the rocky caged jutsu. The magma was hot enough to melt through. As the enemy’s cover began to disintegrate, the ANBU leader took the chance.

Torune: (In thought) Now!

Torune: (Continued in thought) Che..

[Setting change: Kirigakure outskirts]

Assailant #9: (Radio transmitter) I see him

Character Insight - Unknown Nuke-nin:

● A side character
● Gender: Male
● Hair color: Unknown
● Eye color: Unknown
● Face: Masked

Assailant #10: (Radio transmitter) Prepare for an ambush

Assailant 9: (Radio transmitter) Roger

Ukusa: (Radio transmitter) Roger

Assailant #10: (Radio transmitter) I will test him

Narrator: In an instant the nuke-nin fades away into the mist that suddenly enveloped the area.

Assailant #10: (In thought) Kirigakure no Jutsu?

Jutsu Insight – Unknown Nuke-nin:

● Jutsu Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Suiton (Water release)
● Rank: D-rank
● Class: Supplementary
● Description: This displacement technique is a specialty of the Ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan-user will see the mist colored by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the doujutsu.

(Character insight revisited)

Character Insight - Unknown Nuke-nin:

● Nature Type: Suiton (Water release) (added)

Assailant #10: (Radio transmitter) He is already aware of us

Assailant 9: (Radio transmitter) What! I’ve been caught

Assailant #10: (Radio transmitter) Ukusa be alert

Ukusa: (Radio transmitter) Rog-

Narrator: Before he could finish the word, he too was captured by the nuke-nin’s jutsu.

Jutsu Insight – Unknown Nuke-nin:

● Jutsu Name: Jouki Taiiki no Jutsu (Vapor Zone Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Suiton (Water release)
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: All-ranges
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: This jutsu is used to trap the target within an inescapable and almost indestructible sphere of vapor. It is meant to be a death trap of sorts granting the user a chance to do away with the target.

Assailant #10: (In thought) If I am caught..that will be the end

Unknown Nuke-nin: (In thought) This one seems to be more skilled than the other two..

Narrator: A jutsu was performed via the Unknown nuke-nin slapping his hands together.

Jutsu Insight – Unknown Nuke-nin:

● Jutsu Name: Kasumi Jigen no Jutsu (Mist Dimension Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Suiton (Water release)
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: All-ranges
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: This jutsu encases the target and once inside the misty square will the mist within begin to penetrate the targets body drowning them from the inside out.

Ukusa: (Radio transmitter) Chikuri!

Assailant #10: (Shouts) Indenki Bakuhatsu no Jutsu!

Jutsu Insight – Assailant #10:

● Jutsu Name: Indenki Bakuhatsu no Jutsu (Negative Electricity Explosion Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Raiton (Lightning release)
● Class: Offensive and defensive
● Range: All-ranges
● Hand Seals: Unknown
● Description: The user releases an electrical discharge from the user's entire body allowing him to affect multiple targets. When this jutsu touches the target(s) they will suffer damage as well as instant paralyzation. It also acts as a sturdy defensive maneuver as the body is completely shielded by electricity. This jutsu has a vast reach.

(Character insight revealed)

Character Insight - Assailant #10:

● Hair color: Pine green (added)
● Eye color: Vanilla (added)
● Face: Masked (Porcelain animal mask worn in missions only) (added)
● Name: Chikuri (a code name given to one of the Root shinobi members in present time) (added)
● Nature Type: Raiton (added)

Narrator: As a last resort, Chikuri relied heavily upon his defensive tactic in order to bypass the potentially fatal mist jutsu.

Fourteenth part will be released next week, same day, titled Regret (Look for it!).

Part 14: Regret
 
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Nice as always, love the extensive use of jutsu and the descriptions really help to understand the battle and overall create an ambience of the true tenseness of battle. Keep it goin! -Haka-san-
 

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Nice one! Keep it up ;) I cant wait for another one
Thanks ^.^

Thank you for checking out my fanfic :)

Nice as always, love the extensive use of jutsu and the descriptions really help to understand the battle and overall create an ambience of the true tenseness of battle. Keep it goin! -Haka-san-
Well, I do indeed love the jutsu part the most I think and I do try to be as clear as I possibly can be. Thank you for taking my work so seriously/enjoyably! ;)
 

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Finally caught up... again.. Something big is happening soon, i can just feel it. The child wil take out all the nuke-nins or something:D

Anyway, you haven`t been online for some time so I`m guessing the next chapter won`t be out tomorrow, or? As you said, it is the same day next week 2mos. Hope you will be online once again soon.

Looking forward to the next chapter indeed;):D
 

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Finally caught up... again.. Something big is happening soon, i can just feel it. The child wil take out all the nuke-nins or something:D

Anyway, you haven`t been online for some time so I`m guessing the next chapter won`t be out tomorrow, or? As you said, it is the same day next week 2mos. Hope you will be online once again soon.

Looking forward to the next chapter indeed;):D
Whoa! wishful thinking for the main character lol Who knows it might just happen ^.^ I know I am so busy and with siblings who go on as well my time is usually limited
-_- Yes, I am going to post the new part now! Thanks for your support as I always look forward to your insight ;)
 
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