Black despair Part 11 "Repercussion"

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BLACK despair

PART ELEVEN
"REPERCUSSION"

[Setting change: Danzou’s chamber]

*knock*

Danzou: Come in

Akio: ..I came to report that the child is secured in the room but he asked questions

Danzou: Regarding?

Akio: Everything since before and after he awoke

Danzou: Oh..

Akio: I lied as instructed and it appeared as if he believed me

Danzou: I think he will come to accept it in time..and do I sense hostility in your tone of voice Akio?

Akio: No Danzou-sama

Danzou: That is all then

Akio: Understood Danzou-sama

[Setting change: Konohagakure no Sato forest]

Narrator: Sunlight gradually begins to break the night sky.

Insei: (In thought) One of us has to inform Danzou-sama and that person is not me..

Narrator: He was bloodied all over his body.

Gakuya: Uhh..

Narrator: One of the enemies still lived and regained consciousness whilst the other ANBU did not. With the last ounce of strength left, he painstakingly lifts his bloody arm. A few hand seals are performed and his hand strikes upward into the air. The dragonfly summoning appears next to Kaitei and as commanded places him over its back with its long slender tail.

Gakuya: (Shouts) No! you are not getting away

Narrator: Although, the massive insect vanishes leaving the atrocious shinobi without the chance to retaliate.

[Setting change: Root sub-department infirmary]

Narrator: Kaitei suddenly appears upon the summoning insect.

Head Root Iryou-nin: (In thought) Another victim..

Root Iryou-nin #2: Head-san..his vitals are stable

Root Iryou-nin #1: He only has a few scrapes and bruises but besides that there is no damage

Head Root Iryou-nin: (In thought) This is odd…Danzou-sama must be aler-

Kaitei: (Shouts) INSEI!

Narrator: The ANBU awakens still caught in the moment. Though, he calmed himself down when the realization settled in.

Kaitei: I have to….inform Danzou-sama

Head Root Iryou-nin: You are in the infirmary and we cannot let you go until we are certain tha-

Kaitei: It is crucial that I speak with our leader..I don’t care about myself

Head Root Iryou-nin: Fine..do as you wish

Narrator: The driven ANBU managed to stand up and walked out of the room.

[Setting change: Konohagakure no Sato forest]

Insei: (In thought) I wish I could have been of more use to you my leader

Gakuya: (Shouts) YOU BASTARDS!!!

Gakuya: Natsuyo and now Zushou…you will pay for this

(Unknown Shinobi #2’s identity revealed)

Character Insight - Unknown Shinobi #2:

● Classification: Nuke-nin
● Affiliation: Dokugakure, Dokueki
● Hair color: Unknown (due to mask)
● Eye color: Unknown (due to mask)
● Face: Masked (only mouth area is exposed)
● Name: Zushou
● Weapons: None (added)

Gakuya: Before you die…there is something I will be taking as a souvenir

Narrator: Kneeling next to the fallen ANBU, Gakuya opens his mouth and with shuriken in hand proceeds to slice away at his tongue. At this time the ANBU is drained of any energy and his body quivers as he goes into shock.
Gakuya: That seal on your tongue will serve as a reminder of what has happened here

Gakuya: (Continued) Know this..we will obtain what we seek….originally this jutsu is performed only for a massive killing but in your case..it is deserving

Narrator: Insei’s eyes shut close themselves as he succumbs to his fatal wounds. Five hand seals are quickly formed.

Gakuya: (Shouts) Sansei Zansatsu no Jutsu!

Jutsu InsightGakuya:

● Jutsu Name: Sansei Zansatsu no Jutsu (Acidic Slaughter Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Class: Supplementary
● Hand Seals: Rat, Rooster, Tiger, Dragon, Snake
● Description: Chakra is kneaded within the body and then changed into an acidic liquid. When ejected through the mouth it is spread at a rapid speed and can cover a vast amount of feet. Anything it touches will immediately disintegrate.

Narrator: Within a matter of seconds, the ANBU was reduced to nothing. Parting words were then stated.

Gakuya: You have not seen the last of us

Narrator: As the enemy shinobi departed, rays of light began to shine throughout the night sky as the morning sun arose.

Setting change: Danzou’s chamber

Narrator: Haru enters with an update over Kou’s condition.

Haru: I have the daily update over Kou

Danzou: No change

Haru: No change Danzou-sama

Danzou: You are to look over Ryuuta who has been brought in critical as well

Danzou: (In thought) Their recollections are crucial..

Haru: Understo-

*knock* *knock* *knock*

Danzou: Come in

Kaitei: I have information concerning Ryuuta, Insei and what we encountered *panting*

Danzou: Tell me

Kaitei: Ryuuta was under attack by two shinobi and we were able to save him but one of the enemies committed suicide..

Kaitei: (Continued) Insei risked his life by transporting me and I do not know of his current condition

Danzou: What about the enemies?

Kaitei: I saw a headband with a slashed out symbol in which one I had yet to recognize

Kaitei: (Continued) We were unable to uncover their objective

Narrator: The elder male stood up and slammed his cane onto the floor. Three masked men suddenly appeared.

Danzou: You three are to track Insei and investigate the forest area..at once!

Narrator: As commanded the ANBU trio departed.

Danzou: Haru, you are dismissed

Danzou: I have an immediate assignment for you Kaitei

Kaitei: Yes Danzou-sama?

Setting change: Root sub-department division chambers

Narrator: The ANBU enters the child’s room ready to escort him to the training sessions of the day.

Akio: Wake up

Narrator: *creek* The door opens.

Kaitei: I have a request from Danzou-sama to the child

Narrator: Akio stepped aside as the other Root shinobi commenced with the message.

Kaitei: Danzou-sama, our leader asked to see you

Child: I accept

Kaitei: Come with me and you as well Akio

Akio: …(In thought) What is this about?

Setting change: Danzou’s chamber

Danzou: You are dismissed Kaitei and Akio you are to wait outside

Kaitei: Yes Danzou-sama

Akio: Understood Danzou-sama

Danzou: I take it you have been told of the gist?

Child: Yes

Danzou: Do you believe it?

Child: I am still not certain

Danzou: Ignorance is the root of fear, fear is the kindling of anger…did you know war is the bringer of shame and salvation

Danzou: (Continued) Rage, desolation, pain and loneliness…is it not all a little alarmingly familiar?

Child: …

Danzou: (Continued) I know you will make the right decision

Child: I suppose it is all true or else why would I be here?

Danzou: I knew you would choose correctly..Akio

Akio: Yes Danzou-sama

Danzou: He is ready for training

Akio: Understood

Setting change: ANBU Root training fields

Narrator: The child spots another child in which peaks his interest. He heads over to the other child with a peculiar intention.

Setting change: Danzou’s chamber

Danzou: What was discovered?

Narrator: Each shinobi explained how Insei’s body was never located and as well as no trace of any enemies.

Danzou: (In thought) A ninja war?

Danzou: I want everybody aware that we might be under a ninja war with the opposing Dokueki organization immediately!

Twelfth part will be released next week, same day, titled Metamorphosis (Look for it!).

Part 12: Metamorphosis
 
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Finally i caught up! And just in time it seems:p

So damn insane, i don`t even know how to put it, the last 4 chapters has been pure awsomeness, looking forward to the next, and then I promise to read it once it`s out;)
 

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Finally i caught up! And just in time it seems:p

So damn insane, i don`t even know how to put it, the last 4 chapters has been pure awsomeness, looking forward to the next, and then I promise to read it once it`s out;)
Finally indeed! Well thank you for your praise as I myself do not hold high regard for my own Fanfic but it is always nice to see that my Fanfic is worthy of compliments ;) Pleased to hear that you are looking forward the following part and I will hold you onto your word of reading it on the day of its release lol​
 

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Hehehe once aqgain I am astonished especially at Danzou-sama's speech about ignorance and fear and such. It is quite reminiscent of quite another great orator:Master Yoda! :D
 
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