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[Shakaku 01]

my character is not at all human or ginshuriki,my character is shakaku, shakaku the sand spirit. Shakaku the sand spirit is one of the demons or beasts(just like naruto's nine tailed fox) that were all once part of the ten tailed beast that was separated into the nine tailed beasts by sage of six paths. This spirit(demon) or beast is used by Gaara of the sand. Gaara was possessed by shakaku the sand spirit, and when he was born he killed his mother because and he didn't know how to use its power, and his dad left him and became kazikage without Gaara and his mother knowing. We see shakaku in its full form when Gaara fights Sasuke in the forest after he flees with Temari and Kankuro from the Chunnin exams after the begining of their operation. They reatreated from the opperation because Gaara started transforming into shakaku before the opperation when he was told to transform into his demon after the opperation starts, and because he was injured for the first time in his life by sasuke's chidori. Overall, you could say I have a character, and a sub-character. My character is clanless, don't know if it was even born, and it was first seen in the village hidden in the sand. My sub-character (Gaara) is clanless and it wasn't mensioned when he was born, but he was born in the village hidden in the sand. so anyway you could say my main character is Gaara of the sand (which I prefer you to.) I have lost 0 battles and won 0 battles

 

[Coyote]

You obviously didn't read the rules before posting in this thread.


That's all I have to say.

 

[Dracule]

Please read the rules in the RPG section before rushing into something.

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

faceplams harder then ever it gives me a tomer the 6th hokage says to all noobs before you make a bio READ THE F****ING RULES D***IT im tired of thses bios by noobs readf the rules you dont even have 50 posts caliburn is gonna be so pissed off he wont approve bios ever again -rep for you

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

this bio pissed me off so much more then this one did

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and this one pissed me off alot im tired of noobs like you that dont read the rules or ask questions and just are like i wanna make a bio here i go they a write one thing

CRAP like this you cant have a bijuu bio you cant have a jinchuuiki bio yet you cant have a bio yet at all you dont have 50 posts and you didnt follow the tempalte or any rules - rep for you i say after this you should be banned from makeing bios forever ok im done venting

 

[Coyote]

this bio pissed me off so much more then this one did

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and this one pissed me off alot im tired of noobs like you that dont read the rules or ask questions and just are like i wanna make a bio here i go they a write one thing

CRAP like this you cant have a bijuu bio you cant have a jinchuuiki bio yet you cant have a bio yet at all you dont have 50 posts and you didnt follow the tempalte or any rules - rep for you i say after this you should be banned from makeing bios forever ok im done venting

My fav part is how he starts as a tailed beast then ends how he is Gaara.

U.U

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

i didnt even read that i looked at his post count and that he wanted shukaku and that was enough to piss me off more then i ever have someone give me the pic to impiled facepalm

 

[Coyote]

i didnt even read that i looked at his post count and that he wanted shukaku and that was enough to piss me off more then i ever have someone give me the pic to impiled facepalm

He must have read the rules because he added his victory/losses count.

xD

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

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here it is

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

nope he didnt read s**t im tired of people like him ban him from makeing bios and all noobs like him caliburn please

 

[Coyote]

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[-Haku Yuki-]

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good one

 

[Sharingdork]

my character is not at all human or ginshuriki,my character is shakaku, shakaku the sand spirit. Shakaku the sand spirit is one of the demons or beasts(just like naruto's nine tailed fox) that were all once part of the ten tailed beast that was separated into the nine tailed beasts by sage of six paths. This spirit(demon) or beast is used by Gaara of the sand. Gaara was possessed by shakaku the sand spirit, and when he was born he killed his mother because and he didn't know how to use its power, and his dad left him and became kazikage without Gaara and his mother knowing. We see shakaku in its full form when Gaara fights Sasuke in the forest after he flees with Temari and Kankuro from the Chunnin exams after the begining of their operation. They reatreated from the opperation because Gaara started transforming into shakaku before the opperation when he was told to transform into his demon after the opperation starts, and because he was injured for the first time in his life by sasuke's chidori. Overall, you could say I have a character, and a sub-character. My character is clanless, don't know if it was even born, and it was first seen in the village hidden in the sand. My sub-character (Gaara) is clanless and it wasn't mensioned when he was born, but he was born in the village hidden in the sand. so anyway you could say my main character is Gaara of the sand (which I prefer you to.) I have lost 0 battles and won 0 battles

-_- where do I even START with this?

let's start at post count, shall we? you need 50 posts to make any bio, and even more for a jinchuriki
which brings me to my next point. you can't have a Bijuu bio; must be human. and do you want to be shikaku, or Gaara???
thrid, this isn't how you make a bio. read the rules.
you spelt 'jinchuriki' wrong.
he did not kill his mother with the spirit, his mother was the sacrifice so he could be a jinchuriki. on a simmilar topic, his father was Kazekage before Gaara was a jinchuriki, and people knew that he was Kazekage, he didn't keep it a secret, like you say.
at the beggining, you talk about the creation of the beast, and then you say that you're not sure if it was born. YOU ALREADY SAID HOW IT WAS CREATED; NO NEED TO SAY IT WASN'T BORN (because that's not how it was created)!!!!!
are you one character, or two? and are you shukaku, or gaara?
and then you end with '0 battles won, 0 battles lost'. why? you've done everything else so poorly, why even BOTHER to try and do one right thing?

Did I miss anything?
Edit: on a side note; when I deducted rep, the base thanked me. xd

 

[Caliburn]

*commits seppuku* jaaaaaaaaargghhhblarghbfallh zoötenpiper, the horror, the pain...argl X_X

Read the rules please.

PS: It's Shukaku, not Shakaku.