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Hello, this is my first Bio. I hope I did it right. Took me all day to make it. x_x
I hope I didn't miss anything. :s
Nickname: Riou
Gender:
Age: 15
Clan: None
Looks:
Also has a turtle shell anklet on his right ankle. Little turtles are carved into it as a sign of good luck.
Katana:
Riou tends to be shy and realistic. He is a quick thinker and very observant. He is the embodiment of pure modesty. He can't bear to be taken care of but rather prefers to take care of others. He has keen, good intellects, and is very discriminating about those with whom he associates with. Handles business matters with good judgment and is not easily imposed upon or deceived.
Riou is also usually materialistic in his view of life, analyzing & reasoning everything from his own way of thinking outwards. He is and attracted to only that knowledge that can be applied usefully. He will happily share his information with anyone, if he confirms their own usefulness in the world, and brings them eagerly out of their shells.
Riou can become a good literary critic, being quick to see the weak points. He is extremely fond of harmony in his surroundings, having excellent taste about his house and attire. Riou always want things that are in good taste, and elegant.
Finally, Riou is usually fastidious about his personal appearance. Has a great respect for rank and position and is a great supporter of the law and the law's decisions. He usually develops this skill to improve himself and his surroundings as he places great pride in tangible achievements. People like Riou spend part of their lives heading off on detours and then suddenly emerging as someone with a remarkable sense of direction. He can adjust easily to change once he finds a way of fitting the new situation into his routine.
Riou has a rather strange affinity to turtles. It is not known if it can be stemmed from a childhood experience he once had or just pure coincidence. But he has always carries a baby tortoise shell with him for good luck and success. For some odd reason he believes the sight of the sea can calm him and is frequently seen looking out to sea when he is near a beach.
Riou has high hopes of returning to his hometown of Kamegakure and becoming the village leader. For now he works hard to make his dream a reality. Carrying on the values of his father and mother.
Current Village: N/A
Village of Alliance: N/A
600/600 Stamina
500/500 Chakra
Specialty:
None
Elements
Would like to learn Water Element 1st
Ninjutsu:
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(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
Battles
Won: None
Lost: None
~Approved~* nice bio, though removed several things like being good in water and certainly that you're a sensor.
I hope I didn't miss anything. :s
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Name: Ryujin Kiyomizu
Nickname: Riou
Gender:
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MaleAge: 15
Clan: None
Looks:
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Also has a turtle shell anklet on his right ankle. Little turtles are carved into it as a sign of good luck.
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Katana:
Name: Raiku Raikou -"Like Lightning"
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Riou tends to be shy and realistic. He is a quick thinker and very observant. He is the embodiment of pure modesty. He can't bear to be taken care of but rather prefers to take care of others. He has keen, good intellects, and is very discriminating about those with whom he associates with. Handles business matters with good judgment and is not easily imposed upon or deceived.
Riou is also usually materialistic in his view of life, analyzing & reasoning everything from his own way of thinking outwards. He is and attracted to only that knowledge that can be applied usefully. He will happily share his information with anyone, if he confirms their own usefulness in the world, and brings them eagerly out of their shells.
Riou can become a good literary critic, being quick to see the weak points. He is extremely fond of harmony in his surroundings, having excellent taste about his house and attire. Riou always want things that are in good taste, and elegant.
Finally, Riou is usually fastidious about his personal appearance. Has a great respect for rank and position and is a great supporter of the law and the law's decisions. He usually develops this skill to improve himself and his surroundings as he places great pride in tangible achievements. People like Riou spend part of their lives heading off on detours and then suddenly emerging as someone with a remarkable sense of direction. He can adjust easily to change once he finds a way of fitting the new situation into his routine.
Riou has a rather strange affinity to turtles. It is not known if it can be stemmed from a childhood experience he once had or just pure coincidence. But he has always carries a baby tortoise shell with him for good luck and success. For some odd reason he believes the sight of the sea can calm him and is frequently seen looking out to sea when he is near a beach.
Riou has high hopes of returning to his hometown of Kamegakure and becoming the village leader. For now he works hard to make his dream a reality. Carrying on the values of his father and mother.
Village of Birth:
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KamegakureCurrent Village: N/A
Village of Alliance: N/A
Rank:
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600/600 Stamina
500/500 Chakra
Specialty:
None
Elements
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- NoneWould like to learn Water Element 1st
Ninjutsu:
E-Rank
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(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
History
Birth
Ryujin Kiyomizu was born in the autumn to Hitoshi and Manami Kiyomizu. He was born in Kamegakure, the Hidden Turtle Village. A small shinobi village in the Land of the Sea.
Kamegakure History
Just like its nation, Kamegakure was rather poor, depending on the work of its shinobi for money to sustain itself. It is located near the sea on which it depends for food. The village was named Kame 亀 (meaning Turtle) by its founders Gorou & Hachiro, who attribute the villages existence to a turtle who helped them discover their destiny. And as payment for the turtle's help they vowed they would change their ways and teach others the path of humility and respect for nature. They would later die after appointing its first leader, Katsuo Shimizu. The village would suffer huge losses after several unconfirmed rouge shinobi from the nearby islands attacked with the pretense of "looking for food." However they're true motives were revealed by one of the villages Jounin, Hitoshi Kiyomizu. The rouge shinobi, enraged by Hitoshi's clever plan, left the village only to return at night and ransack the village and set it aflame. Despite how great the losses, the village was able to drive away its aggressors. Those remaining helped rebuild the village. However they could not replace the loss of life that had been lost. Of the confirmed dead bodies, one of those belonged to Hitoshi.
Village Life
Riou was well known in the village, especially for his peculiar interest in turtles. He loved studying turtles by the beach and looking towards the sea daydreaming about being a shinobi like his father. His mother, knowing how often he frequented the beach, made him a turtle shell anklet for good luck.
When not in school, Riou spent his afternoons training with his father. His mother, a Chuunin, was assigned to shinobi basic training (equivalent to a Konoha academy teacher). Riou was loved by both his parents and community. But the stigma added with successful parents, Riou was always pressured to be successful like his parents. But however much the hardships Riou faced, his fears and worries went away after a relaxing stroll to the beach. But how strange that his favorite pastime (much to the villages disapproval), ended up being his salvation.
Although not good at making friends, Riou was able to befriend Keiji, the second son of the the village leader. They became friends after Riou was drowning near the beach and Keiji spotted him while on a walk and rushed to save him. They both spent some evenings, when not in training, going to the docks and fishing.
Life was wonderful indeed and for the first time, Riou felt that nothing could ever go wrong. So one day he planned to spend the whole day at the beach catching shells to make his mother a necklace for her anniversary. However this time he took a different route instead of his usual one and ended up lost. It was getting dark and he was hungry. He had forgotten to take the lunch his mother had made for him. He was getting desperate and very hungry. What could he do? Just then he noticed a small turtle walking unusually fast. He was puzzled as to what made it walk like that. He decided to follow it and investigate. The more he walked the more noticeable the pillar of smoke that started rising in the evening sky became. He knew he wasn't far from it because the smell was getting more and more intense.
Eventually, the turtle reached a crossroads that was very familiar to Riou. He noticed one side was the one that led to the beach and the other led to his village. But was unusual was that as soon as he noticed the flames on the nearby trees, he looked down towards the turtle and it was gone. Suddenly worried that the flames were coming from his village, he dashed home only to find the entrance blocked by fallen debris. He found a way around by using the nearby forest while making note of the peculiar shadows of several people dashing thru its branches. To his horror, his home was aflame and on the verge of collapsing. He held his breath and swallowed his fear and rushed to the inside of his home.
There, between him and a burning log that fell from the roof, lay his mother. Riou cried, "Mother! Mother get up! We need to escape!" But no matter how loud he yelled his mother never got up. Suddenly a pice of the roof rumbles and collapses. Luckily Riou is saved by his neighbor, Hideki. He rapidly runs out of the burning builiding all the while carrying Riou yelling after his mother hoping she would appear. Hideki kneels down and grabs Riou's shoulders telling him to shut up to avoid the enemy from finding them. Riou, holding back his tears, calms down and escapes with the remaining villagers to a cave that was built for emergencies. There he learns of the events of what happened and to his horror, the death of his friend Keiji and his father Hitoshi.
The remaining days were hard for Riou as he helped bury the dead and rebuild the town. As time went by his heart grew cold and he he became very distant with everyone. The villagers understood his sadness but nonetheless they did everything they could to change Riou's mind eventually leading him to come to terms with the death of his family and friends.
Several months later a travelling merchant came to their village. While buying somethings for the village Riou noticed that the merchant carried a rather strange kunai hidden in the back of the cart. When he inquired about it the merchant nervously avoided Riou's gaze. Riou eventually got him to reveal the mystery for the kunai. He explained that it belonged to a very powerful shinobi from a village hidden in the leaves. Riou was able to squeeze more information from the merchant and discovered the village was in the land of fire. So after the merchant left and after much talk with the village elders, Riou was able to convince them to allow him to travel to the land of fire in hopes of finding the village hidden in the leaves. There he would make contact with this "powerful shinobi" and obtain knowledge on how to become stronger and one day return.
So he set out to the land of fire. Took nearly 2 years to get there (he took alot of detours not to mention all the information gathering) but he made it to Konohagakure, finally.
To be continued...
Ryujin Kiyomizu was born in the autumn to Hitoshi and Manami Kiyomizu. He was born in Kamegakure, the Hidden Turtle Village. A small shinobi village in the Land of the Sea.
Kamegakure History
Just like its nation, Kamegakure was rather poor, depending on the work of its shinobi for money to sustain itself. It is located near the sea on which it depends for food. The village was named Kame 亀 (meaning Turtle) by its founders Gorou & Hachiro, who attribute the villages existence to a turtle who helped them discover their destiny. And as payment for the turtle's help they vowed they would change their ways and teach others the path of humility and respect for nature. They would later die after appointing its first leader, Katsuo Shimizu. The village would suffer huge losses after several unconfirmed rouge shinobi from the nearby islands attacked with the pretense of "looking for food." However they're true motives were revealed by one of the villages Jounin, Hitoshi Kiyomizu. The rouge shinobi, enraged by Hitoshi's clever plan, left the village only to return at night and ransack the village and set it aflame. Despite how great the losses, the village was able to drive away its aggressors. Those remaining helped rebuild the village. However they could not replace the loss of life that had been lost. Of the confirmed dead bodies, one of those belonged to Hitoshi.
Village Life
Riou was well known in the village, especially for his peculiar interest in turtles. He loved studying turtles by the beach and looking towards the sea daydreaming about being a shinobi like his father. His mother, knowing how often he frequented the beach, made him a turtle shell anklet for good luck.
When not in school, Riou spent his afternoons training with his father. His mother, a Chuunin, was assigned to shinobi basic training (equivalent to a Konoha academy teacher). Riou was loved by both his parents and community. But the stigma added with successful parents, Riou was always pressured to be successful like his parents. But however much the hardships Riou faced, his fears and worries went away after a relaxing stroll to the beach. But how strange that his favorite pastime (much to the villages disapproval), ended up being his salvation.
Although not good at making friends, Riou was able to befriend Keiji, the second son of the the village leader. They became friends after Riou was drowning near the beach and Keiji spotted him while on a walk and rushed to save him. They both spent some evenings, when not in training, going to the docks and fishing.
Life was wonderful indeed and for the first time, Riou felt that nothing could ever go wrong. So one day he planned to spend the whole day at the beach catching shells to make his mother a necklace for her anniversary. However this time he took a different route instead of his usual one and ended up lost. It was getting dark and he was hungry. He had forgotten to take the lunch his mother had made for him. He was getting desperate and very hungry. What could he do? Just then he noticed a small turtle walking unusually fast. He was puzzled as to what made it walk like that. He decided to follow it and investigate. The more he walked the more noticeable the pillar of smoke that started rising in the evening sky became. He knew he wasn't far from it because the smell was getting more and more intense.
Eventually, the turtle reached a crossroads that was very familiar to Riou. He noticed one side was the one that led to the beach and the other led to his village. But was unusual was that as soon as he noticed the flames on the nearby trees, he looked down towards the turtle and it was gone. Suddenly worried that the flames were coming from his village, he dashed home only to find the entrance blocked by fallen debris. He found a way around by using the nearby forest while making note of the peculiar shadows of several people dashing thru its branches. To his horror, his home was aflame and on the verge of collapsing. He held his breath and swallowed his fear and rushed to the inside of his home.
There, between him and a burning log that fell from the roof, lay his mother. Riou cried, "Mother! Mother get up! We need to escape!" But no matter how loud he yelled his mother never got up. Suddenly a pice of the roof rumbles and collapses. Luckily Riou is saved by his neighbor, Hideki. He rapidly runs out of the burning builiding all the while carrying Riou yelling after his mother hoping she would appear. Hideki kneels down and grabs Riou's shoulders telling him to shut up to avoid the enemy from finding them. Riou, holding back his tears, calms down and escapes with the remaining villagers to a cave that was built for emergencies. There he learns of the events of what happened and to his horror, the death of his friend Keiji and his father Hitoshi.
The remaining days were hard for Riou as he helped bury the dead and rebuild the town. As time went by his heart grew cold and he he became very distant with everyone. The villagers understood his sadness but nonetheless they did everything they could to change Riou's mind eventually leading him to come to terms with the death of his family and friends.
Several months later a travelling merchant came to their village. While buying somethings for the village Riou noticed that the merchant carried a rather strange kunai hidden in the back of the cart. When he inquired about it the merchant nervously avoided Riou's gaze. Riou eventually got him to reveal the mystery for the kunai. He explained that it belonged to a very powerful shinobi from a village hidden in the leaves. Riou was able to squeeze more information from the merchant and discovered the village was in the land of fire. So after the merchant left and after much talk with the village elders, Riou was able to convince them to allow him to travel to the land of fire in hopes of finding the village hidden in the leaves. There he would make contact with this "powerful shinobi" and obtain knowledge on how to become stronger and one day return.
So he set out to the land of fire. Took nearly 2 years to get there (he took alot of detours not to mention all the information gathering) but he made it to Konohagakure, finally.
To be continued...
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Battles
Won: None
Lost: None
~Approved~* nice bio, though removed several things like being good in water and certainly that you're a sensor.
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I like it a lot. Very good for your first, I wish my 1st was that good