[Question] Bio help for role play

[SpiderRider89]

I'm looking for someone to help me fix my bio. It's apparently terrible. Any help would be great!

All I can offer you is a rep point.

It's a starter bio so it shouldn't be too complicated and it's mostly finished. However, it's just getting ignored.

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[Negative Knight]

Personally, it looks fine to me. All I see that's wrong with it, is the specialty section. Your specialty refers to what elements/abilities you can use with proficiency, not what you've studied. Remove the study of spiders and instead place N/A since you've yet to learn any elements or skills.

 

[UchihaNagashi]

Negative Knight pretty much corrected it, but if you need it more neat and beautiful, just PM me. I'll gladly help a friend in need.

And there's not much photos nor text, you need to apply more stuff probably. But if it's your first bio, they'll probably turn a blind eye to it. But moderators hate searching the pictures for the guy, if they don't know who you're talking about (custom).​

 

[Matt]

This preety much clears it all up its like my Zabuza bio i made today im not quite sure but oh well always good to try

 

[~Zonta~]

Looks good follow Negative sensei's advice and it will be fine and if u want I can help u in layout of the bio and adding images.

if u want VM me

 

[SpiderRider89]

Thanks for all of your help!