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Bell Cranel

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Name: Bell Cranel
Nickname: Bell-kun, Rabbit boy
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Clan:

Looks: Bell Cranel is a young teenager with white hair and crimson eyes; often compared to a rabbit. He prefers wearing light armor and often has his preferred weapon, a dagger, with him.

Personality: Bell is a kind yet shy boy and is easily intimidated when facing a stronger opponent. He cares deeply for the people around him especially his god Hestia since she is his only family after his grandfather's death. Though it is a good trait, he is often scolded by people around him for his trusting nature. Bell's goals didn't start out pure, as he wanted to be a adventurer to meet and pick up girls, even thinking of starting a harem. But, after failing to impress Aizu, Bell set out to become stronger just to better fit her standing and to become a better hero.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Orario
Village of Alliance: N/A

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty:
Elements: Fuuton
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History: Bell was raised by his grandfather in a rural village near the labyrinth city Orario as a farmer. He heard and read many stories about heroes from his grandfather, making him aspire to become one.

In the past, Bell was almost killed by a ninja and was saved by his grandfather.

After his grandfather's death, he left the village they lived in and went to Orario to fulfill his dreams that were cultivated by his grandfather. Upon arriving in the city, Bell tried to enter numerous familias but was rejected. Hestia, a priestess that is somewhat in the same situation as him, asked him if he wants to become the first member of her familia where he gladly accepted the offer of the priestess.

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A few things here:
1.) The Village of Birth should have something within that category, just putting in Oratio should do. For the Village of Alliance, putting in n/a should work, the same thing's applicable for the specialty category, just put n/a there as well
2.) For the elements though, given that you are currently a genin, just pick one of the basic five (katon, suiton, raiton, doton, or fuuton) and place that within that category, and then put "needs training" next to it afterwards.
3.) This one's a bit more interesting though, the mods tend to have issues with bio histories and the such that contradict what is known of the NarutoVerse. It's a form of them keeping some consistency within this RP with the cannon NarutoVerse. There's one major issue I see here, and it's that you have your character being met by a goddess so casually, something that took extraordinary circumstances to have occur in the NarutoVerse proper. I can see mods having a slight issue with this, thus making a simple change, such as calling Hestia a priestess or something of the sort instead of a goddess may work out better.

Sorry about the brick of text, but I don't want to see this declined, especially because you're new to the RP. Nice bio nonetheless, and welcome to the RP :).
 

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A few things here:
1.) The Village of Birth should have something within that category, just putting in Oratio should do. For the Village of Alliance, putting in n/a should work, the same thing's applicable for the specialty category, just put n/a there as well
2.) For the elements though, given that you are currently a genin, just pick one of the basic five (katon, suiton, raiton, doton, or fuuton) and place that within that category, and then put "needs training" next to it afterwards.
3.) This one's a bit more interesting though, the mods tend to have issues with bio histories and the such that contradict what is known of the NarutoVerse. It's a form of them keeping some consistency within this RP with the cannon NarutoVerse. There's one major issue I see here, and it's that you have your character being met by a goddess so casually, something that took extraordinary circumstances to have occur in the NarutoVerse proper. I can see mods having a slight issue with this, thus making a simple change, such as calling Hestia a priestess or something of the sort instead of a goddess may work out better.

Sorry about the brick of text, but I don't want to see this declined, especially because you're new to the RP. Nice bio nonetheless, and welcome to the RP :).
thank you so much! i changed all the stuff, i cant wait to learn something!!
 
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